A Last Breath On The Cross

[Pia]

A line of pink fades on the horizon
Warmth rises from moist brown earth
Embraces arms crying tears of red
Salt eyes gaze blank as dry lips part​

 

[Barbaria1]

A line of pink fades on the horizon
Warmth rises from moist brown earth
Embraces arms crying tears of red
Salt eyes gaze blank as dry lips part​

Golgotha's deathly vapors rise
silvery in the dusky gloom
harbingers of suffering's end
enveloping shrouds of doom
​

 

[Cordelia Ross]

Golgotha's deathly vapors rise
silvery in the dusky gloom
harbingers of suffering's end
enveloping shrouds of doom
​

Wow! hopefully I can write that good soon! My own attempt is amaturish and pretty well sloppy to be honest.

 

[Fox-on-Cross]

Low breath for creaming endless pain
The arms like no more to sustain
I drive in air with light-wave flesh
as soon as poss direction trash.

My fate is suff and suff again
I wished it now what really I am:
A worthless fox without respect
with cross for first and last his act!
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