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If I sleep tonight
It will be something

I will not perceive

I drift and slip between it all

The tearing and the tears

The burning in my loins

What is this

I have nothing left

I know you are there

Always

My angel will save me

Hold me

Bring me back from all of this burning and yearning

Why is the fire burning

It is not right to be this hot

I feel it blistering in my thighs

Why? Why? Why?

What is truly happening

I know, and cannot see the dawn without the night

My joints, my skin, my soul

Without and knowing

I suffer

Alone, together and so involved

My cuts

My tears

Open yourself

Place me as you wish

I will drift between the blisters

With only your caress.

No clouds in my sky

Without you

I shall ...



LittleSiss - July 17, 2014
 
LOVE CRUX


If I sleep tonight
It will be something

I will not perceive

I drift and slip between it all

The tearing and the tears

The burning in my loins

What is this

I have nothing left


So many evocative words....drifting, slipping,
I know you are there

Always

My angel will save me

Hold me

Bring me back from all of this burning and yearning

Why is the fire burning

It is not right to be this hot

I feel it blistering in my thighs

Why? Why? Why?

What is truly happening

I know, and cannot see the dawn without the night

My joints, my skin, my soul

Without and knowing

I suffer

Alone, together and so involved

My cuts

My tears

Open yourself

Place me as you wish

I will drift between the blisters

With only your caress.

No clouds in my sky

Without you

I shall ...


LittleSiss - July 17, 2014

Oh Siss...so many evocative words...drifting, slipping, burning, knowing, opening....one can just feel the yearning, aching, heartache in these verses. Powerful writing once again.

Love it :bdsm-heart::bdsm-heart::bdsm-heart:
 
LOVE CRUX


If I sleep tonight
It will be something

I will not perceive

I drift and slip between it all

The tearing and the tears

The burning in my loins

What is this

I have nothing left

I know you are there

Always

My angel will save me

Hold me

Bring me back from all of this burning and yearning

Why is the fire burning

It is not right to be this hot

I feel it blistering in my thighs

Why? Why? Why?

What is truly happening

I know, and cannot see the dawn without the night

My joints, my skin, my soul

Without and knowing

I suffer

Alone, together and so involved

My cuts

My tears

Open yourself

Place me as you wish

I will drift between the blisters

With only your caress.

No clouds in my sky

Without you

I shall ...



LittleSiss - July 17, 2014
Really nice writing my Bestie :)

I can feel ur pains :(
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LOVE CRUX
LittleSiss - July 17, 2014

17th? Is is now 16 and in US 6-9- hours later.

The poem is good, the continuing interrogation by herself what happens, without understanding. Of course that is the earth politic, unreal for a normal being. Than all love in the world is in vain. Entered in the angel world she had fulfilled her duty but does while suffering not comprehend this on her cross .
 
Feelings and words from a past not forgotten but simply left behind.

;)
 

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