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The Dark Amazon

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ralmcg

ralmcg

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The whole town was at the town arena to see a captured warrior, chains on both wrists and attached to another set of chains on both ankles. This warrior was not like any others they saw. This warrior is not only an Amazon but a dark-skinned one. Some say she came from a land called Ethiopia, where there were many dark-skinned people. This one was very dark, like a chunk of coal. She was also very muscular, even with the clothes still being on her.

After showing her to the townfolks the soldiers took her to the edge of town, to a field where the tiny bugs, mosquitoes, and other pesky pests assembled. There the soldiers first took off her boots, revealing her feet. Then they took off, forcefully as like the boots, her shirt and pants. Then they placed the nude woman onto a horizontal stick and struck nails in each wrist, causing her to shriek in pain. The soldiers also placed nails onto a board, going through her big feet, the woman shrieking. Then they raised the contraption, which consisted of a broad board on the bottom, which connected to two angled sticks, which held up the horizontal stick. It, unlike a regular cross, was meant to allow people to see the victim's whole body, front and back.

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And that warrior's body was an amazing site to behold. Starting with the short, crinkly hair on the top of her head, her head was roundish with dark green eyes, a big, broad nose, and lips that were big and pouty, unlike the townspeoples', all supported by a short neck. The shoulders were broad and the strain of being nailed to the wood was made clear by the muscles moving from all the limbs and both back and front. Unusual was that her chest were very flat, which made some confuse her for a man. That confusion was put to rest when everybody saw her crotch, although she did have a fairly large clit, which from a distance looked like a small dick. But the most amazing part of her body was the magnificent ass. It was quite round shaped, but as a result of her muscular development it was also so hard that a silver coin could bounce right off it, which was proved when a bunch of old men through the coins onto her ass. Her body became shiny because of all the sweat she produced while doing her "dance" on the wood.

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The towns folk were gawking at the dark-skinned woman warrior. The town council members gave their permission for people to play with her. There was a list of prices for this. She can be touched for two copper coins, four copper coins for penetrating her asshole with fingers, eight for penetrating her crotch hole with fingers.
"What if we want to fuck her.",asked one of the young farmers from out of town.
"Five silver coins for fucking her ass, ten for her cunt.", was the crude reply from the head of town council.
Two of the young men were ready to have anal sex. "I hear that Amazons don't let out farts.", was one of their observations. A long, stinky blast from her ass dispelled that notion.
She had to have the men's milk go through her as she was penetrated, mostly by young men. There was even an attempt to put some in her mouth which, because she was shouting in pain, succeeded. After the sex was over, for the time being, she took a long piss, along with taking a shit at the same time. Because of the heat, the smell of her waste made her throw up. All the puke, along with the sweat, the piss, and the shit, attracted many a bug. She couldn't resist these little pests crawling on her, especially the crotch and ass. She remembered her past so as to forget her present.

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The flat wooded area close to a swamp. That was the home of the warrior, who was called Banyi at birth. She was just an ordinary farmer's daughter. She helped in the fields when necessary but like most girls she helped with the cooking and cleaning, although as the youngest child, she was the one looked after by the older siblings. When she was ten her life changed. A group of raiders came to the village and killed all the men, taking the women and children along to be sold as slaves. For five weeks Banyi, along with the others, walked through swamps and desert to the slave market in Alexandria, Egypt. Banyi had to witness her mom and some of her siblings being sold separately, tearing the family apart. She was eventually sold to a woman not from Alexandria. When she first met her the girl was scared to tears, not knowing her fate. She felt comforted by the woman however. Banyi didn't understand what she said but it sounded like she wanted to train her as a warrior like her, an Amazon. From now on Banyi would be known as Seluca.

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Seluca was the main attraction for miles around. The town officials knew that she needed to keep her alive so she was fed and watered. The people liked her nude sweaty body. They even took hair from her hairy body. Besides her head they picked her hairy armpits, the bush on top of her crotch and the crotch itself, the hairy thighs and legs, and even her ass crack. Men still came to penetrate her, the man milk kept coming into her. They wore shoes so as not to have their feet dirtied by her shit. And Seluca still had to deal with the small pests, whether it was the mosquitoes biting her or the flies crawling to eat the sweat, blood, and filth that was on her skin. Sometimes there would be a stand with two corni attached to it, one to penetrate her crotch hole and the other for her asshole. To relieve the pressure of hanging and lifting herself she would sit on both. The crowd liked that part.
"She must like being fucked if she enjoys sitting on them.", commented one of the menfolk.
"Hey darkie, nice ass.", said another as he slapped it.
Although she didn't know their language she felt that they were abusing her. She had to cry.

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The woman who bought Seluca did not reveal her true self until they were out of Roman territory. Then she told the girl that she is an Amazon, after teaching Seluca some basic words on the way. The woman's reason for buying her, as Seluca found out later, was that she saw an inkling of spirit that would help make a good warrior. In the Amazon village Maroca, as the woman was known, was a high-ranking commander of troops who had the instinct to train new recruits. For ten years she trained the young novice how to shoot an arrow from a bow, how to ride a horse, how to stay underwater for a long time without breathing, and how to handle the many weapons she needed to use. Maroca also saw leadership potential in Seluca so she made her her assistant, handling administrative details and learning the fine points of tactics and strategy. On Seluca's twentieth birthday she was made a commander over ten warriors. Her first mission was to capture a caravan laden with expensive spices and silk going to Roman aristocrats. Leading from the front, as it would be her trademark, her forces, on horseback, caught the caravan by surprise, forcing it to surrender. The Amazons could sell the spices and silk, but what to do with the captives. The Amazon High Council debated this. Some members wanted to kill them. But the majority decided to sell them to the slave market. With the money from the slave sale, the council rewarded Seluca with ten pieces of gold. She would be leader of many missions to come. That is, until one fateful day when she was twenty-three.

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ralmcg said:
I'm trying to figure out what to tell in the story. Besides, I'm trying to keep the audience wanting more.
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It's just my insignificant opinion.
Maybe my best visual angle is a bit self-serving. Longer articles are better for creating eBooks. From so small snippets to create an e-book, is too cumbersome.
It would be nice if the posts were longer.
 
Seluca was assigned a dangerous task by the Amazon Council. She, along with her ten troops she commanded, were to march to a designated spot in the thick forest in Roman territory. There, they were to wait for a column of soldiers to gather there. Then, the Amazons were to capture the soldiers and sell them in the slave market, leaving the equipment for the Amazons. In the dark the troops made their journey. They did not march very far, for the Romans deliberately gave out misinformation to the Amazon spies, and it was the Romans who did the surprising. The Amazons fought desperately, with Seluca battling the forward soldiers. When the battle was finished six of the Amazons laid dead. The other four, including Seluca, were captured. The Amazons were surely going to be sold at a slave market. Except for Seluca, that what happened to them. The commander of the Romans, however, looked at Seluca and thought that she might get a higher price from a town, since dark-skinned captives are a rare sight. So off to the town of Baisum the Romans, and the captive Seluca, went. Baisum's officials, while she was locked up in a cell beneath the town forum, bought her for 10,000 silver coins. That was when she was lead to the arena.

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Seluca, in her time with the Amazons, was rarely uncomfortable with being nude. She swam nude, she ran nude, and sometimes practiced fighting nude. Also, with her friends, they compared their bodies, such as who had the biggest clit, the largest tits, and the roundest ass. The Amazons were a culture that extolled the nude body, even when they fought clothed. This time, on the wood, she was uncomfortable. There she was, a piece of prime meat on display for all to see and touch. The little bugs were always on her skin, licking the sweat, piss, shit, blood, and other filth from her, if not biting her for a little sip of her blood. And now, days later, the birds are pressing their claws on her body, eating the bugs on her. Will they eat her skin next was one of her thoughts. The biggest irritants, though, were the people. If not poking hairs from her they pinched, poked, rubbed, and penetrated her. The food and water she was now forced to consume, first of all, made her so gassy that her farts are longer, louder, and occur more often. One time a group of young men wanted to know if her farts made the fire bigger. It did and resulted in burned hair on the guys. And second, and far worse, on one of the days she had the big shits, which was watery and occurred five times on that day, whereas she shat once a day previously. At least her piss was regular and normal. And to add insult to injury, for ten copper coins, the folks can collect her piss and shit, probably for magical uses.

Seluca has been on the wood for a lot longer than some people. It was a week and a quarter since she was nailed and she, and other people, wondered what's next for the nude warrior.

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ralmcg said:
I'm trying to figure out what to tell in the story. Besides, I'm trying to keep the audience wanting more.
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yes, I rather like your short posts ralmcg :) -
it will be good if you're keeping the whole story in a WordDoc,
when it's finished (or when there's enough to call a 'part' or a 'chapter')
you can upload it and it can be converted to a pdf, even an e-book,
for members who prefer a longer read.
 
Eulalia said:
yes, I rather like your short posts ralmcg :) -
it will be good if you're keeping the whole story in a WordDoc,
when it's finished (or when there's enough to call a 'part' or a 'chapter')
you can upload it and it can be converted to a pdf, even an e-book,
for members who prefer a longer read.
Click to expand...
Thanks for liking my short posts, Eulalia. However, I am not keeping this story in any format other than in this forum. Besides, this story is quite short. I'm almost at the finish.
 
What Seluca didn't know that her fate was already decided. The town council noticed that fewer and fewer people were coming to see her. To the council it was a sign of boredom. So they decided to kill her immediately since they knew that other towns would not want to buy her in her condition. Besides, the town already profited from her to the tune of 15,000 silver coins.

The food server came to Seluca, who now recovered from the runny shits but otherwise didn't look well. The filth already covered her shiny black body. The muscles are still noticeable but now labored under intense pain. The stench made her puke even more than usual. Another person opened her mouth while he shoved vegetable soup in her. They didn't know that it was poisoned. The breathing became heavy and painful, like she was choking. In a space of five minutes she puked her last puke, her heart beated its last beat, her lungs breathed its last breathe, pissed her last piss, farted her last fart, and, in a sure sign of death, shat her last shit. The council then decided to take the body to a hill for the birds to feed on her. So ended the story of Seluca (nee Banyi), the Dark Amazon.

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Well, as I said, the story was short. Many others on this forum could have written it better I will admit. I would like to see the story, or at least Seluca, in art or in animation. Also if there are images of nude dark-skinned women crucified it would be appreciated if they are seen here.
 
Everywhere, Amazons are outcast ..... and ..... crucified !​

But, perhaps they like ....

image.jpg :devil:​

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being crucified's an occupational hazard if you're an Amazon :D
(or maybe a perk of the job, if you've a taste for it :p)​
 
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