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Bijou in Malhaven

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Shocked would be nice… So to say… :)
Spoiler: Not so much in this story, sorry. There's a throwaway paragraph in Chapter 5, and another short reference in Chapter 10, but no real detail. Maybe after this I'll have to finish up Jaycee in Malhaven, which is so far even longer, and includes an entire chapter you would likely enjoy.
 
A very interesting and, I would say... totalitarian, all-encompassing scenario.

I must confess the themes here are not really to my taste (kidnapping, rapes, pointless abuses, ...) but overall I find it interesting anyway, probably because it is so well written.

For some reason I fail to fully like Bijou as a character: there's something off with her on how she adapts to her life in this hellish community... or, at least, something that doesn't click with me specifically.

Still, I look forward to see other chapters of this ordeal.

Thanks for sharing with us.
 
Think of this place, Malhaven, as sort of a library, and you’re like a book that can be checked out and used by a member. When he’s done with you, you’re returned. I’m sort of like one of the library techs who does any repairs that are needed before putting you back on the shelf.
Where do I get a library card? ;-)
 
... probably because it is so well written.
Thanks so much for saying that!

I fail to fully like Bijou as a character: there's something off with her on how she adapts to her life in this hellish community...

Yeah, I'm going to be the first to admit that I have no talent for plotting or character development. The only writing skill I really have is the ability to write scenes like these in excessive detail (almost literally "gory detail"). (Actually, gore doesn't turn me on, so my victims appear much more attractive and less damaged than would ever be possible if they suffered anything near what they do in my fiction.)

To be honest, the story wasn't written as any great literature (although I have a few small techniques I find I like in it in the chapters ahead; including the next one), but more as a self-indulgent fantasy about a young woman over whom I obsessed and fantasized for a short period. Whatever plot there is is admittedly just a long thread on which to hang the torture scenes like ornaments.

As I mentioned in the preface, David's character did (much to my surprise!) seem to develop a bit, and you'll see some of that in Chapter 36 and the epilogue; but at the same time, I'll admit that those are perhaps the least interesting sections for those reading for the nasty bits. Oh, and I guess Bijou and Piper's relationship gets a little attention in Chapters 30-31; but still, nothing really exceptional in the character development department.

I do have a draft of an even-longer sequel that is a little bit better in both plot and character development, but not to kid myself: it's not that much better.
 
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Yeah, I'm going to be the first to admit that I have no talent for plotting or character development. The only writing skill I really have is the ability to write scenes like these in excessive detail (almost literally "gory detail"). (Actually, gore doesn't turn me on, so my victims appear much more attractive and less damaged than would ever be possible if they suffered anything near what they do in my fiction.)

To be honest, the story wasn't written as any great literature (although I have a few small techniques I find I like in it in the chapters ahead; including the next one), but more as a self-indulgent fantasy about a young woman over whom I obsessed and fantasized for a short period. Whatever plot there is is admittedly just a long thread on which to hang the torture scenes like ornaments.

As I mentioned in the preface, David's character did (much to my surprise!) seem to develop a bit, and you'll see some of that in Chapter 36 and the epilogue; but at the same time, I'll admit that those are perhaps the least interesting sections for those reading for the nasty bits. Oh, and I guess Bijou and Piper's relationship gets a little attention in Chapters 30-31; but still, nothing really exceptional in the character development department.

I do have a draft of an even-longer sequel that is a little bit better in both plot and character development, but not to kid myself: it's not that much better.
Don't be too modest: probably it is just that your characters do not resonate with me and... the problem might just be mine, not yours.

I'm very attached to a very specific kind of... suffering victim ( = reluctant victims that eventually somewhat embrace their own torment ), I could say I'm rather picky about that, so overall probably I fail to see the perks and complexities of other kind of characters, like these of your story, for instance.

Still, I'm looking forward to read more from you!
And thanks again for this... literary exchange of opinions.

Cheers.


PS: ah, and also I have this thing that I tend to like comedic elements in every situation, even the most tragic ones.
I tend to do this in real-life too (a rather faux pas in certain environments, I assure you), so basically everything I like or say or I do has always a certain level of self-irony.
This even occurs in my nightmares: I had a nightmare years ago with Satan offering me some beverage to sigil me becoming his servant or something like that (a scene that I probably elaborated from Frank Miller's "Elektra: Assassin" graphic novel...), but I refused him saying that usually I don't drink anything but water between meals (it is true, I'm a rather boring person); Satan was rather upset by this answer of mine, and before waking up I remember replied to him that I do not serve masters that have little humor and react badly to my jokes...
So, overall, I struggle a bit appreciating 100% fully tragic characters in 100% fully tragic predicaments.
But, as I said, this is probably mine own shortcoming as a person.
 
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Chapter IV: John​

John savagely slammed his fist into Bijou’s abdomen, and she doubled over, gagging. She had only a moment to gasp for breath before the other man, holding her arms behind her, grasped her hair and pulled her upright again. John’s next punch was a left hook, hard to her face, snapping her head to the side. She howled in pain and slid to the floor.

He had not wanted only sex.

It had started innocuously enough. John had led her out of the small apartment to his waiting car. Outside the building for the first time, Bijou marveled. It looked almost like a college town, with neat low-rise apartments that evidently served as the women’s dormitories, set back from the streets on neatly-trimmed green lawns. Bijou could see a few women strolling down the walk to a park-like green not far away.

John held the vehicle door open, and Bijou slid into the passenger seat. He started the car and began to drive.

“Where are we going?” she asked in trepidation. The question she really had was Are we going to a torture center? – but she dared not even give it voice.

“To my home,” responded John. “I thought we could have a little dinner.” He made it sound like a date. Bijou relaxed a bit, but remained wary.

The ride was short, perhaps only five or ten minutes, and they arrived at a large but not ostentatious home in what looked like a nice neighborhood. It was big, like a home you’d find in a somewhat wealthy neighborhood, but by no means a mansion. John parked the car in the garage. “Come in,” he said.

Once inside, he gestured to the couch in the living room. “Have a seat. I’ll be right back.” He walked toward the kitchen, and a few moments later returned with two glasses of red wine. “I thought you’d like a little wine before dinner. I imagine you may be a bit tense.”

That’s an understatement, thought Bijou. Warily, she accepted the proffered glass, and took a tentative sip. She wasn’t much of a drinker, having had only a few beers on occasion, but decided she enjoyed what she was tasting. “What is this?” she inquired.

“It’s a Shiraz. Nothing special. But it goes nicely with our dinner.”

He returned to the kitchen. She followed, and watched as he quickly sautéed a variety of fresh vegetables and sliced sausage, and distributed them over plates of polenta. “Take these to the table, would you, please?” he asked. She did.

He followed a moment later, with the wineglasses, now topped off. They sat at the table, and began their dinner.

“What is this?” asked Bijou, poking tentatively at a piece of red in her dish.

“Sun-dried tomato,” answered John. “Try it, it’s good.” She warily put a bit on the edge of her fork and took a taste. It was good. In fact, the whole dish was pretty tasty.

“I haven’t had anything like this before. It’s really good!” She took another sip of the wine. John had been right; the wine perfectly complemented the slight spice of the sausage and sharp tastes of the vegetables.

John smiled. “I’m going to take a wild guess that your idea of a great meal has been something like a really good burger, or maybe pizza. That’s not so uncommon with the younger ladies here.”

Bijou laughed, despite herself. “Yeah, I guess so.” Her mood was beginning to lighten. John seemed to be treating her well, so far, and the food and drink were pretty good.

Gradually, the conversation began to come more easily, and they finished their dinner. Afterward, they carried their dishes to the kitchen. John moved to her, lightly brushed her hair from her face, then slowly leaned in to kiss her. She responded, as she knew she was expected to.

“Come with me,” he whispered, and led her by the hand to the bedroom. There, they shed their clothes and got into the bed. John made love to her gently, slowly bringing her to climax again and again. Afterward, she drifted off to sleep, thinking this might just be okay…

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Chapter IV: John (cont'd)​


She awoke.

She was alone in the bed, nude. She got up and looked around for her clothing from the night before. It was nowhere to be found. A feminine-looking robe of blue and white cotton hung on a hook near the door, and she put it on. It fitted her nicely, the lower hem coming down to her upper thigh, barely covering her ass. She could hear sounds from the kitchen, and followed them. John was at the sink, rinsing the last of the dishes from the night before. He was dressed casually, in khaki shorts, a white T-shirt and sneakers.

“Good morning! Did you sleep well? There’s coffee,” he said, gesturing to counter. A fresh pot of coffee was there, next to a white mug. John was already drinking from his.

“Thanks,” she said, and poured a cup. “Can I help?”

“No, just relax, thanks,” called John. There were a couple of stools near the counter, and she sat on one, watching as he completed the cleanup. “That looks good on you,” he said, indicating the robe. “Your clothes are in the laundry.” At last he finished. “Follow me,” he called. He walked out of the kitchen, and opened a door, taking a stair down. Bijou followed.

They came out into a spacious finished basement. The floor was of polished concrete. The immediate area included a small bar, with a pool table not far from it. A large mirror covered most of one of the walls. The ceiling was unfinished, exposing the plumbing, but in an artfully decorative way; the piping was cleanly painted in bright enamel colors, and looked more like what one would see in a trendy restaurant than a basement. It seemed very comfortable.

She’d finished her coffee. “Here, I’ll take that,” offered John. He took the mug and placed it on the top of the bar. He returned and gently caressed her right cheek with the back of his right hand; she smiled shyly at him. Then he abruptly twisted and, with a sudden ferocity, struck her hard in the face with the back of his hand.

Bijou cried out in surprise and horror as her head snapped to the left. What had she done to deserve that?

John reached for her, and in one swift motion, pulled the thin robe from her shoulders, and slid it down her arms. It fell from her wrists and he kicked it away. She now stood naked before him.

John abruptly looked aside to the stairway. “Robert!” he called. “Thanks for coming; I really appreciate it.” Bijou followed John’s glance and saw another man, somewhat taller than John, coming down the stairs. “Give me a hand here, would you?”

“Sure,” answered Robert.

“Hold her for me, okay?” asked John. Robert nodded and walked behind the nude brunette. She felt his strong hands grasping her upper arms in an iron grip.

John pulled a pair of light cloth gloves with rubber grips over his hands; something one might wear for some light gardening or handyman work. “You see, Bijou, I know you’ve seen a branding, and been on the rack. But I’ve never been one for tortures that need so much… equipment. I’m a simple guy. Old-fashioned, even. Today, you’re going to be subjected to the oldest and simplest form of torture there is.”

He paused. “I’m going to beat the living shit out of you.”

John savagely slammed his fist into Bijou’s abdomen, and she doubled over, gagging. She had only a moment to gasp for breath before the other man, holding her arms behind her, grasped her hair and pulled her upright again. John’s next punch was a left hook, hard to her face, snapping her head to the side. She howled in pain and slid to the floor.

She was barely able to rise to her hands and knees when John pulled back his foot and kicked her, catching her under the chin. Her head flew back and she collapsed to the floor. She struggled to roll to her knees and failed, and now lay nearly face down, with her right arm and leg outstretched, her left arm and leg bent in a pathetic attempt to crawl away. John aimed another kick, landing this one in the girl’s rib cage, spinning her again onto her back, where she lay groaning and unable to move.

John nodded to Robert, and the other man pulled the Korean girl from the floor, again gripping her arms and pulling her elbows together behind her back. John rained blow after blow on Bijou’s small frame: on her breasts, on her belly, and on her face. Bijou cried out with each impact.

John paused to catch his breath and to take in his handiwork. The wretched girl was unable to stand on her own, and would have slid to the floor but for Robert’s firm grip. Her breaths came in ragged gasps, punctuating her moans of pain. John smiled and drove his knee up into her groin, sending a lightning bolt of pain through the girl and extracting another anguished cry.

Robert shoved Bijou at John, and it was all she could do to stagger to him, desperately throwing her arms around him to keep from falling to the hard floor. John caught her, and held her to him. Her arms were now around his neck; his were around her back. In this pose, they could almost have been mistaken for lovers in embrace.

But it was for only an instant; then Robert slammed his fist into her back, directly in line with her right kidney, as John held her fast. Over and over Robert pummeled the girl with his fists: on her ribs, back, kidneys and ass. Her vision had begun to go red from the pain when he ended the series of blows by driving his knee up hard into her ass, directly to the base of her spine.

Now John released the girl, and she fell to the floor. The two men continued their abuse, kicking her everywhere: her breasts, belly, ribs, back, legs, arms and head. Bijou desperately wished for unconsciousness, but it would not come. She ineffectually struggled to protect herself, but to no avail. From time to time, one of the men would pull the girl to her feet, and hold her immobile as the other continued to beat her. Occasionally, through a red haze, she caught a glimpse of her reflection in the mirror that adorned one wall, and was shocked at what she saw. Her battered body was covered in abrasions and bruises. Blood ran from her nose and from lacerations on her face and body. One of her eyes was beginning to swell. She was pretty sure that some of her ribs were broken, and probably her left cheekbone, too.

Eventually, the beating stopped. John bent over and scooped up Bijou’s inert body, carrying her to the pool table. He dropped her onto her back onto the table’s surface, with her hips at the edge and her legs listlessly dangling over. Robert walked to the opposite end, and pulled her arms above her head, pinning them to the green felt surface. The effort was unnecessary; Bijou was long past the point where she was capable of resistance.

John stepped out of his shorts and began raping her. It was cliché, he realized, to rape a girl on a pool table, but, hell, he’d said it himself: he was an old-fashioned kind of guy. Occasionally, Bijou made sounds of protest – or maybe just of pain, it was hard to tell – and would receive another punch in the face.

Finally, he finished, and switched places with Robert, who attacked Bijou’s bruised pussy with the same enthusiasm John had applied to the task. After what seemed like hours, he, too, finished his rape.

John threw the battered girl over his shoulder in a fireman’s carry, and hauled her up the stairs and into the bedroom, where he unceremoniously dumped her on the bed. She lay there, inert and in pain, until unconsciousness finally came.

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Chapter IV: John (conclusion)

She awoke.

She was nude, in John’s bed. It was morning. She was pain-free again, and, she presumed, now healed of her injuries. Abruptly, she sat up, swung her legs around and off the bed, and padded to the bathroom. The mirror showed no signs that she had been subjected to a brutal beating just (she assumed) the day before. She realized, with mixed emotions, that the restoration men had been at work while she was unconscious. After such a savage beating, she was elated that she would not be in pain for several weeks of recovery. On the other hand, she knew that it was not a matter of benevolence. She was just being recycled and readied for whatever the next round of abuse would be.

She spent several weeks on assignment to John. He was inconsistent and unpredictable. She would sometimes go days without punishment, and their lovemaking was often the epitome of tenderness. At other times, after a pleasant uneventful day, they would retire for the night, and he would surprise her by savagely beating her while they fucked.

And many times, the days were full of full-blown beatings. Sometimes Robert or another friend would assist. Other times, John would beat her solo. Always, when she awoke between beatings, she was fully recovered from the injuries and prepared for the next round of abuse.

After the first beating, John no longer limited himself to his fists. His favorite implement was a short wooden club about the thickness of a broom handle. In the cases where he used the club, it was mostly to strike her breasts and other soft tissues; generally, but not always, he used only his fists on her face.

Sometimes, she was bound to a stool with her arms tied tightly behind her, as John worked her over, using the wooden club and his fists. On other occasions, she was hung by her wrists, chained to the brightly enameled pipes in the ceiling, her toes just a few inches above the polished cement floor. Although that configuration had allowed her to kick out in an attempt at defense, Bijou quickly found the tactic to be ineffective, and in any event, a few cracks of the wood to her knees dissuaded her from even the attempt. In more than one such session, Bijou knew, bones had been broken.

For a few sessions, he did not restrain her at all, leaving her unshackled, but nude and vulnerable as he assailed her, relying on his ability to overpower her as she tried to protect herself. It seemed to Bijou that he took particular delight in overcoming her attempts to muster a defense, using one fist to grip her long hair, close to her head, and beating her with the other, as she vainly tried to fend off the blows.

Her final beating was the worst. This one was a solo performance. John first chained her, nude, between two poles in the basement, with her arms outstretched, just above shoulder level and nearly horizontal. Then, once she was secured, he spent hours hitting her, pacing himself and savoring each strike. He used his fists everywhere, but also employed the wooden club on her breasts, and a length of garden hose on her back and between her legs. Bijou pleaded for mercy, but it was as if he didn’t even hear her. Eventually, she could no longer stand. Her legs buckled beneath her, and she hung from her wrists in a cruciform position, head bowed, too battered and weak to stand, but still conscious; still he continued the beating.

She didn’t know when it ended; when she eventually lost consciousness, hours into the session, her last sensation was of John driving his knee into her groin, sending a searing bolt of pain upward through her body; then darkness.
 
reluctant victims that eventually somewhat embrace their own torment

Ah, that's interesting. My own preferences goes quite the other way: the treatment of the victim must be clearly non-consensual.

Although I've thought it might be interesting to try one that is somewhat in the middle ground: a woman who fights and resists every step of the way, and is eventually broken and becomes compliant; but that still falls short of anything that is like embracing their own torment and is at best a hopeless acceptance of it.

also I have this thing that I tend to like comedic elements in every situation, even the most tragic ones.

I love comedy, but haven't found many good ways to work it into these types of stories. The only one I can think of in this story is the comparison of Henry to someone who collects Nixon memorabilia. That just popped into my mind when I wrote the very first cut of that passage and always makes me chuckle. And maybe Carl's reaction to David's rant in Chapter 36 (we haven't met Carl just yet).

And thanks again for this... literary exchange of opinions.

And you as well. I would like to read some of your stories, if they are posted here and you can point me to them.

And, going off-topic for a moment...

if the many-worlds interpretation of QM is correct

I hope the many-worlds interpretation is not correct, but I suspect and fear that it is. If it's correct, then all the terrible things that never actually happened in my life have happened after all.

I recall my daughter, probably about four or five at the time, running through a park and tripping over a curb as she moved from the grassy portion to the pavement. I was about thirty feet away, and there was nothing I could do; my heart stopped as I imagined her falling face-first onto the pavement, her broken teeth skittering around like chiclets.

In this world, she caught herself, and didn't fall. But in many-worlds, she also fell, fracturing her skull and facial bones, requiring surgeries that scarred her for life.

Obviously, there are many many even more severe branches, but this is the clear near-miss I always think of when I contemplate that interpretation. So I hope Dr. Everett was wrong; but fear that he was not.
 
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Chapter V: Bijou in Malhaven

She awoke.

She had been restored, and was in her bed in her dormitory; but again it was only a short time before another member borrowed her and abused her. This was her life now.

Henry proved to be correct: she was very much in demand. David’s status in Malhaven, coupled with his special interest in her, had made Bijou very popular among the members. It became routine: she would awaken, healed, if necessary, from her most recent assignment, only to be immediately assigned to another member. For the first couple of years, it was rare for her to go to bed for the night in her own apartment, although she awoke there countless times, restored from the most recent assignment. More often than not, she was selected for a fresh assignment immediately upon recovery from the prior one. Only occasionally did she have a day – or, on rare occasions, two – to spend off assignment. On those days, she either remained alone in her apartment, or sought out the company of some of the other women in the dormitory complex.

It was well-known throughout Malhaven, both by the male members and by the female residents, that Bijou was one of David’s favorites; he periodically continued to select her. The other men took special relish in singling her out, whether for sex or for torture. Some of them, and even some of the other women, jokingly referred to her as Malhaven’s “princess”; with the men, the epithet was used mockingly, as they tortured her.

And although the assignments varied, nearly all of them involved her torture. The variety of abuse was dizzying. With David she had seen a branding and been stretched on the rack, and with John she had been mercilessly beaten, but she discovered that there was a seemingly endless variety of ways for a woman to be tortured.

Whipping was by far the most popular. Bijou had lost count of the many types of implements that had been used on her. She had been whipped with riding crops, horsewhips and bullwhips, some with knotted ends, some with ends that hung loose. One member had used a lash with small leaden balls in the tips, which caused deep bruises where they landed on her flesh. Another, rather whimsically, had fitted the whip with small ornamental jingle bells at the tips of the lashes. Many of the strokes from that whip snagged her flesh when they hit, pulling away small bits of skin as the whip was pulled back. As an added terror, the bells made a distinctive whistle as the tip of the lash flew through the air, so that the terror of impact commenced a second before the impact itself.

And there were other implements besides whips. She had been struck with wooden dowels and lengths of bamboo, and with lengths of rubber hose and electrical cords. One member had lashed her with a long length of coaxial cable. He had removed the insulation from the end and deliberately frayed the fine-woven wire, so that the stiff tips of the thin wires incised fine lacerations along with the welts it left on her body with each stroke.

She was usually tortured alone, but not always; sometimes she was part of a set of two or more women. In such cases, more often than not, she was paired with Piper. Her initial session, where both of the women had been stretched on the rack, was infamous. It had been the first torture for both of them, and the two had become inextricably linked. Much to the dismay of both of the women, it was common for members who had heard of that session to decide to torture the two of them together. Each of the girls was aware that she was often added to a torture session as an extra, a bonus. A member was often attracted to one of the women, either Bijou or Piper, who was the real object of the session. The other girl would often be included as a mere enhancement to that main event.

Initially, Bijou and Piper resented one another, each knowing that she was being tortured only as a result of her association with the other. Eventually, however, they became kindred spirits, then friends, united in their misery and their predicament. And Bijou had to admit, given that she had been David’s focus, there were far more times that Piper had been pulled into one of her tortures than Bijou had been pulled into one of Piper’s. But still, Bijou sometimes mused, if only Piper had kept her mouth shut! Then the blonde would have spared herself being put on the rack that day, and the association between the two of them would never have been made.

David’s prediction about the rack had also proved to be correct: Bijou’s session with him had been her first time on the rack, but was not her last. Maybe because this was the torture she had first been put to by David with his celebrity status, racking her had become a popular pastime among the other members. He had also been correct that later rackings would be more involved than her first simple session. As he had predicted, she had suffered a wide variety of ancillary tortures while being stretched. David had mentioned whipping and branding, and of course, she had been subjected to those tortures while on the rack; but there were other secondary torments as well.

One member had used a sharp hook to pierce Bijou’s flesh as she lay helplessly stretched, and then pulled the hook the length of her body, tearing harrows along her petite frame. He inserted the hook first in the tender spots under her arms, ripping her skin down to her hips, then also from breast to pelvis.

Another stretched her and then circled the rack carrying a cattle prod. He would shock her prone body at unpredictable intervals, in the most tender spots he could find: under the arms, on her breasts, and even inserting the prod into her mouth and vagina for some jolts.

And almost every time she had been racked she had also been raped. David’s rape of her, which had struck her at the time as extreme, had actually been typical.

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Most of Bijou’s tortures were not specific to her gender; however, some members took delight in torturing her in ways that were uniquely tailored to the female anatomy. Her breasts, while not large, were attractive, and had been the target of torture on several occasions. In one variation, she had been forced to kneel, arms tied tightly behind her and neck collared to a post, as a T-shaped wooden structure was positioned under her breasts. An additional piece of wood was added above each breast, held in place by posts with vise-like screw mechanisms. Slowly, the torturer turned a screw handle, crushing Bijou’s petite breasts, first one, then the other. As with the rack, the breast-crushing torture also facilitated other ancillary tortures. One member burned her nipples with an open flame or cigarette at various stages. Another had used a vise with serrated surfaces. He tightened it until Bijou’s breasts were not only cruelly crushed, but so firmly secured that she had no way of pulling loose. He then removed the post to which she was bound, so that she was held in place solely by the serrated grips on her breasts. Securing her wrists to the device in front of her, he then proceeded to whip her across the back.

Twice, Bijou had been hung suspended by her breasts; although small, they were not small enough to escape that torment. Her arms were tied behind her back and a length of rope with a noose on each end was brought, and the nooses tightened around each breast. That severe compression brought pain enough, but then the rope was placed across a hook lowered from the ceiling and she was raised, kicking and screaming, as all her weight was borne by her breasts, encircled by the ever-tightening ropes.

But Bijou's petite breasts were not the only targets of female-specific cruelty.
 

Chapter VI: Paul & Andrew​

There was one particularly hideous torture that Bijou would never forget. She had been taken to a wooded area by two members, Paul and Andrew. Together, they escorted the girl to a clearing, where she could see the remains of a young tree. Based on what Bijou could see of it, it must have sprouted only within the last couple of years. The sapling had been shorn of nearly all of its branches, and chopped off to a yard or so above the ground. What remained was essentially a vertical wooden shaft. Bijou could see that the exposed end had been crudely sharpened.

There were only two small vestiges of branches projecting from the inch-thick stump that rose from the ground. One was only three or so inches long; it curved upward, terminating in a raggedly cut end that looked like it had been roughly chopped nearly through with a hatchet, with the last bits ripped off to complete the job. The other remaining branch was directly opposite the first, and an inch or so higher. It extended about six inches in length from the small trunk, rising diagonally away from the stump in a more or less straight line.

Bijou was stripped. Paul pushed her, face-down, onto a canvas tarp that covered the ground, pinning her there, his knee pressed hard into the small of her back. Andrew pulled up her legs, and, taking several feet of rope, tied her crossed ankles together. Once her legs were secured, he released them, and nodded to Paul, who took his knee from Bijou’s back and grasped her arms. He held them out to Andrew, who efficiently tied her wrists together. A long stretch of rope was left extending from her bound wrists. Andrew took the excess rope and passed it around the lashing that bound her legs, then pulled it, drawing Bijou’s ankles tightly to her wrists. With a grunt of satisfaction, he knotted the cord tightly, leaving the girl secured in a hog-tied position. He nodded to Paul, who fastened a dog collar around the girl’s neck.

Bijou lay on the ground, too frightened to think about what they would do to her next. Then, abruptly, the two men each took an arm and lifted her small body from the ground. Bijou saw to her horror that they were carrying her to the stump, and realizing their intentions, began to thrash wildly, but to no avail. The men were strong, and Bijou was light, and she could offer no resistance as they raised her over the remains of the tree.

Carefully, they lowered the hog-tied woman onto the tree shaft, guiding the sharpened trunk into her pussy. She shrieked in agony as the rough wood entered her, and she slid helplessly inches down the post with the rough wooden shaft inside her. Her thrashing only amplified the pain, and it was with only the greatest of concentration that she could will herself to stop squirming. Now Paul had released his grip on her, and Andrew stood in front of her, holding her under both arms, continuing to guide her slim body down, the stump tearing ever more deeply into her. Through the pain she could see the longer of the two branches on the stump below, projecting in front of her, turned slightly toward her left leg. Paul saw it too, and, frowning at the imperfect alignment, gave her body a savage twist, so that the short branch was centered. Bijou howled in pain at this surge of agony, but Paul just nodded. Now satisfied with her alignment on the stake, he guided her the last excruciating inch, oblivious to her continued screams of pain. The small branch now nestled in the Korean girl’s soft brown pubic hair, preventing her from sliding any further, and supported substantially all of the girl’s weight. The other branch pressed painfully on her anus, but did not penetrate.

As Paul had been making his final adjustments, Andrew took a long metal post and slid it into a hole in the ground that had been prepared for it. They had measured and planned perfectly, so the top of the post came up level with Bijou’s neck. Andrew ran short length of chain from the post to Bijou’s collar. He pulled it just tautly enough that it forced Bijou to remain upright.

And now all that was left was for Bijou to suffer, and for the men to watch and enjoy the show. She was a sight, she knew. Her body was supported only by the small branch jutting out between her legs, and held upright by the collar. Through the incredible pain, she could feel blood dripping down her thighs. The men watched in silent appreciation as Bijou tried in vain to stifle her cries. Even the tiny movement required to cry out brought intense waves of pain; it hurt so much that she forced herself to suppress her screams, and she was now limited to small whimpers that belied the incredible amount of pain she was suffering.

Andrew brought out two camping chairs and a couple of beers, and the men sat down. This was going to take a while.

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Chapter VI: Paul & Andrew (conclusion)

It had been late morning when Bijou had been placed upon the stake. She had no idea how long she’d been there, but the sun was now high above her. Certainly it had been an hour or two. She had never lost consciousness, but had caught herself drifting into occasional states of delirium, which she noticed most when some inadvertent movement would result in a fresh spasm of excruciating pain, and she was yanked back to reality. That wasn’t an accident, she realized. She’d been tortured enough to know that the members here knew how to keep her fully alert when they wanted to; the slide into delirium and the abrupt pull back from it was part of the men’s plan.

The ordeal continued. It must have been hours; the sun was now low in the sky. She no longer had the option of remaining still. No doubt due to her tightly tied limbs, she had begun to experience involuntary spasms, and no amount of effort to control them worked. No matter how she tried to remain still, an involuntary twitch in her arms or legs would shift her on the sharpened stake and send a fresh bolt of pain through her body. She would involuntarily cry out, which in turn only brought more pain.

Finally, Andrew stood and approached Bijou’s helpless form. She looked up into his face. “Please…” she begged. “Take me down.”

He smiled. “You want to get down?”

She gave the smallest of nods, even that slight gesture generating fresh spasms of pain.

“Okay, Bijou,” Andrew said, “you’re coming down.” He raised his foot to her abdomen, resting the sole of his boot on the top of the branch that jutted out from the tree, still nestled in her pubic hair and supporting her. Abruptly, he shifted all of his weight to the boot on the branch, snapping it off at its base. Bijou shrieked as her body dropped another inch down the post, sending the shaft of the tree an inch more deeply into her. The short stubby branch that had been pressing on the rim of her anus now entered her, forcing its way through her sphincter. She came to rest again, supported now, not by the branch that had been at her vagina, but by the smaller one whose jagged end had been abruptly thrust into her anus by the sudden drop, and by the chain attached to her collar.

Bijou howled in pain. Andrew returned to his seat, and opened another beer.

They left her there for only another hour or so. The sun would be down soon, and it would be easiest to take her down when they still had the light. Besides, too long, and the girl would die, and nobody wanted that. The men conferred, and agreed it was time to take her down.

Together, the men approached Bijou’s agonized body. Paul looked at her, taking in the sight and filing it away in his memory. He’d be thinking about this for a long time. “Well, princess, I guess all good things must come to an end sooner or later,” he said. He looked to Andrew, who nodded. The men walked to either side of the helpless girl, and each put one hand under one of her armpits, using the other hand to grasp an arm and steady the girl. Their eyes met, and Andrew gave a barely perceptible nod to Paul. In unison, the men lifted Bijou up, sliding her off the sharpened sapling.

Bijou shrieked as the rough tree’s withdrawal scraped her anus and pussy, ripping her inside in one final surge of agony. Fresh blood streamed down the Korean girl’s thighs, no longer impeded by the wood that had filled her.

Andrew winced at the sound. He had enjoyed Bijou’s screams when he had been a few yards away, but enduring a scream like that when his ears were adjacent to her face was annoying. Together the men carried her squirming body the few feet to the tarp they had spread at the onset of the torture, and dumped her onto it. Blood continued to slowly seep onto the canvas.

They left her hogtied, and, lifting the corners of the tarp, carried her to the back of the waiting pickup truck. Andrew checked her vital signs, and, satisfied, the men got into the truck and began to drive back to the compound. Bijou moaned with every bump the vehicle took. Eventually, she lost consciousness.
 

Chapter VII: David

Because Bijou was so much in demand, her few respites from torment were when she was taken as a consort, or the rare case when she was taken on assignment where the member opted not to torture her.

To Bijou’s surprise, despite ceding her as his consort, David continued to take her on assignment. Although she fervently hoped to satisfy him without torture, it was not to be. The days when David had treated her well, as a consort, were in the past. Now, it seemed, Bijou was just another girl to be tortured.

It was David who, during one of these sessions, introduced Bijou to the ancient torture of strappado. She had been presented to David in a filmy white negligee, in the same center where she had witnessed Tracy’s branding and where Bijou herself had first been racked. She stood obediently as David, holding a length of rope, slowly circled her. Abruptly, he seized her arms and pulled them behind her, crossing her wrists. With a skill born of experience, he laced the rope around her wrists, binding them together, still crossed, in a compact transom knot.

He stepped back for a moment and regarded his former consort. She stood straight, the tension from her arms being pulled behind her forcing her into that position. David reached out and snapped the shoulder straps that held the thin lingerie. The negligee slid down her slim body, to the level of her waist. It lingered there for an instant, then gracefully slid over her hips and fluttered to the concrete floor at her toes. Now Bijou looked perfect, standing nude, with her bound wrists forcing her petite breasts forward. She looked at him, pleading with her eyes, but not saying a word. Words, she knew, had never helped her at Malhaven.

David reached for a length of rope that hung from an overhead pulley. Pulling it to him, he spun the Korean girl around and tied one end of the rope to her bound wrists. Now it could begin.

Ever so gradually, David retracted the rope, pulling the girl’s delicate wrists up behind her. Bijou pitched forward, trying to minimize the severity of the angle of her arms, but knowing that her efforts were only forestalling the inevitable. She involuntarily cried out in fear and pain. Slowly and deliberately, David increased the tension until the girl was bent almost double, her lovely ass pushed out and her long hair falling over her face as she struggled to maintain her position.

David paused. He wanted to give her a few moments like that, before proceeding to the most painful part. He studied the struggling girl. How beautiful she was, as she worked to maintain her balance, striving unsuccessfully to find some position that provided some relief for the ache that had begun to creep into her shoulders. He watched her small chest heave as her breaths started to come more irregularly.

Enough. David pulled the line further. Bijou shrieked as the pain tore into her shoulders. She was now on tiptoe, struggling to remain upright, as the pull on her shoulders persisted, morphing from an ache to a more intense pain, akin to what she had felt in the early stages of her racking.

David left her in that position, painfully dancing on tiptoe, and sat, watching her silently. Bijou strained, the quiet of the chamber punctuated only by the sound of her labored breathing and occasional moan of pain.

After about thirty minutes, David rose and returned to the line that ran to the pulley. Bijou, now at her breaking point, and fearing the worst, burst into desperate tears and began to beg.

“Please,” she pleaded, “David, you know how well I can satisfy you. Take me down from here and take me to your bed. Please, please – aaah!” Her begging broke off into a scream as David pulled the rope again, now lifting her body completely from the floor. Her shoulders exploded with pain, and her legs squirmed helplessly, her toes straining to touch the floor that was now a full twelve inches out of reach.
 

Chapter VII: David (conclusion)

David looked on, enjoying the Korean girl’s excruciating struggles. Her shrieking quickly subsided to gasps and groans. For another hour, he left her dangling; watching her, and listening to the piteous sounds she emitted. Bijou was in agony. Over the time, her shoulders became so distended that her toes, once a foot from the floor, were now within only a few inches.

Finally, David began to lower her; but only by a few inches, just enough that her toes barely grazed the concrete surface of the floor. Bijou screamed in pain and frustration, desperately seeking purchase for her feet, but denied it. It was a full thirty minutes longer before David lowered her again, another two inches, allowing just a bit of support from her legs.

David stepped back once again and admired the delicate Asian. The balls of her feet were now on the floor, but the weight of her small body still pulled cruelly at her shoulders as the rope continued to hold her wrists above and behind her. She cried out from the pain, but David ignored her. He was enjoying the effect the positioning had upon her legs. Only her toes and the balls of the feet were in contact with the floor; her heels were still a few inches off the ground. Her legs, extended and stressed, quivered uncontrollably, as she stretched to take some of the tension from her shoulders. The effect was as if the completely naked girl was wearing exquisite but unseen high-heeled shoes.

Bijou held the position, standing on tiptoe, for as long as she could. Her shapely legs quivered in uncontrollable spasms from the tension. After several minutes, she could no longer endure the strain that maintaining the position imposed on her calves and lower back. With cramps shooting through her twitching limbs, her exhausted legs collapsed under her. The agony instantly returned to her shoulders, now taking the full brunt of the strain as she hung helplessly by her wrists behind her, unable to stand. After only a moment’s rest for her legs, she struggled back into a tiptoe position. For a full hour David left her to this excruciating dance, alternating between the pain and exhaustion in her legs and back and the excruciating agony in her shoulders.

Only an hour; but it felt much longer. David finally lowered her completely to the ground. Bijou was now unable to stand at all, and completely collapsed as David removed the pulley rope from the moaning girl. Some time later, she was picked up and transported to recover.

Bijou was to be subjected to strappado many more times in the months and years ahead. Often it was much more vicious than as had been administered by David. Some members attached heavy weights to her feet, to increase the tension and to draw her shoulders even more excruciatingly tight. One, not satisfied with tying her wrists behind her back, tied her elbows together as well; that was painful even before the suspension began. Several members combined the strappado with additional punishment, whipping or beating her as she hung helplessly.

Twice, Bijou was subjected to an excruciating variation that she learned was called squassation. In this torture, she was bound and hoisted as in a typical strappado session, but that was only the beginning. In these sessions, she was lifted several feet above the floor; and then, after a period of suffering, her body was dropped, almost to the floor. Just before she reached the floor, however, the rope would the reach its limit and arrest her fall. She would scream as her arms were wrenched from their sockets, leaving her swaying, still inches above the floor, supported solely by the ligaments and muscles of her shoulders.

Yet, although her later strappado sessions were often were more brutal and painful, somehow, none of them approached the exquisite torment that David had imposed, where she had been forced to stand on her toes and feel the terrifying frustration of being almost, but not quite, able to provide herself slight relief from the pain.
 
loving it so far. especially the hot irons, rack, and impalement scenes.
the rack descriptions remind me a little of the stories of Kirsten Smart, who's written a lot of rack centered stories. https://ralphus.net/special/stories/kirstensmart/
Thank you!

Yes, indeed, I loved Kirsten Smart's work. I'm actually embarrassed, because one of her stories, Gomez, includes this line:
Shards of glass seem to burst from the broken joint all along my leg, up my pelvis, through my lower back.

I didn't realize that until long after I'd released the Bijou story, when I re-read her works years afterwards. Although I didn't intend to copy, I must have had that metaphor in the back of my mind when, in my rack scene, I included the line:
Her elbows and knees felt like they were packed with shards of broken glass.

Shards of glass in the joints seemed to me to be the perfect metaphor I was looking for to describe someone slowly being taken apart by the rack's tension. I doubt that I hit upon it coincidentally. It had to be in the back of my mind as a result of Kirsten's story.

So, call it an homage, I guess, but this is as good a place as any to give credit where it's due!
 

Chapter VIII: Edward

One member, Edward, was different from the rest. Every several months, he would take Bijou on assignment, and keep her for a week or so. What made Edward different from the rest is that he never tortured her, or treated her badly at all. He used her for sex, for a week or two, and then returned her, unscathed. There were others who did this on occasion, but only Edward was consistent in this regard.

Once she cautiously asked him about it. She knew that there was some risk that, in some Hawthorne-effect way, merely bringing the topic up might make him reconsider and torture her, but her curiosity could no longer be contained. “Edward, why do you treat me so well, all the time?” she asked. She could not quite bring herself to overtly mention torture; even now, she hedged.

“That’s been bugging you, has it?” smiled Edward. “It’s a lot simpler than you’d think. You’re the type of girl I like to fuck. But, for whatever reason, I don’t really get a charge out of torturing Asians, or brunettes of any variety, really. When it comes to torture, my favorite is a pretty blonde girl. Ask your friends Piper and Tracy about that some time; they can tell you stories about our times together. There’s been many an evening where I’ve spent the day torturing the hell out of some little blonde cheerleader-type like Piper, then come home horny as hell, and fuck you all night to recover from it. Yeah, I don’t know why I’m wired that way, but I just am. Simple, huh?”

From then on, Bijou felt safe when assigned to Edward. He became the one person she could ask questions about Malhaven of, without fear of reprisal.

On one such occasion, she’d asked about a torture she’d expected to undergo, but never had. “What about waterboarding?” Bijou asked. “It was in the news a lot before I got pulled in to Malhaven. Don’t get me wrong, I’m not asking for it, but I’ve been subjected to some near-drowning tortures, and since this one torture has been in the press so much, even on the outside, I’d frankly expected to be subjected to it sooner or later.”

“That’s an easy answer, too,” responded Edward. “It’s been done once or twice, but it’s really not that much fun to put a girl to. See, in waterboarding, the girl is tied to some surface, a bench, a table, a ladder, whatever, right? So far, so good: pretty girl, arms tied to her sides, helpless. What’s not to like? Then you put a cloth over her face and pour water over it continuously, until she can’t help but inhale some of it.” He paused. “Well, where’s the fun in that? What fun is a torture where the girl’s face is covered, and you can’t even watch as she suffers? Tell me, what was your drowning torture like?”

Bijou didn’t like bringing up memories like this, but with an effort, she recalled. “I had my hands tied behind my back. I was forced to kneel at the end of a filled bathtub. And then the guy grabbed my hair and forced my head under water.” She remembered more than she said. How she’d held her breath for as long as she could, and her torturer had pulled her back up just before she would have had to inhale the liquid. He had done that over and over, dozens of times, bringing her back up just as she felt her lungs would explode. And then… he stopped pulling her up in time. She remembered. The burning sensation when she could no longer hold her breath; how she had involuntarily exhaled, then breathed in a mouthful of water. He’d pulled her back then, allowing her to choke and cough and gasp, and then pushed her head under again, just before she could fully recover. Over and over he had done this, until she had finally inhaled enough water to lose consciousness.

She was surprised how horrible the drowning session had been. After all, it didn’t hurt. It wasn’t like being whipped, or burnt. But it was horrible. The primal fear of being unable to breathe, of inhaling a mass of water and being unable to expel it. It was horrible. But she pushed down the details, and didn’t repeat them to Edward.

“See?” exulted Edward. “That’s what I’m talking about! Making a girl suffer, pushing her below the surface with your own hands, pulling her out and watching her reaction! That’s what makes a torture worth doing!” He was so enthusiastic that for a moment, Bijou feared he would break his longstanding practice of not abusing her.
 
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