Girls Night Out at Crux Park

[ledoux]

Girls Night Out at Crux Park
Starring:

Eulalia


Kathy


Jackie 1111


and introducing: LoinClothSlave


An Illustrated Crux Park story by @ledoux


On a Flight from Australia:

The elderly lady sitting next to LoinClothSlave put down her Bible. “Excuse me, Miss, you’ve been reading that tiny magazine over and over since we left over nine hours ago. It must be very interesting.”

The center seat between them was vacant – a welcome thing when one is flying steerage.

LoinCloth smiled. “Oh, it is interesting. But it’s not a magazine, it’s a brochure. Would you like to see it?”

The lady smiled back. “If you don’t mind.”

LoinCloth passed it over.


“Oh my!” The lady tried to pass it back.

“Oh no, look on page one. It’s all perfectly safe. I’m going to Crux Park to be crucified.”

“Crucified?” She glanced at the cover again. “With nails? This is something you want to do?”

“Oh yes! Look at the next two pages. See it’s all very safe.”



After reading, the lady looked around as if for an exit – hard to find at thirty six thousand feet. “That’s very um … um … nice, well I have to—”

“My friends are being crucified with me. We're all going to hang on crosses for ten hours!”

“Your friends? Um … look … I … um”

LoinCloth held up a picture.


"This is Eulalia. She’s very nice. She likes it when she’s a slave. I bet she’s a very good one, don’t you?”

“Well, um …”

"This is Jackie 1111"



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[ledoux]

Girls Night Out cont'd

"1111, that's a strange last name."

“So is Jackie. I think she’s just being crucified with us so she can show off her legs, tits, and pussy while hanging nailed to a cross pretending to be ‘suffering.’ Remember the pain levels on the brochure? I bet she picked ‘discomfort.’ Can’t blame her though, she is gorgeous and a REALLY good dancer. She has a favorite outfit that she wears a LOT.” LoinCloth opened her laptop and quickly pulled up a video. “Here, I’ll show you the outfit.”


Oh Dear.” The lady opened up her Bible.

“But I picked the red level pain – worst there is. I bet I’m going to be doing a lot of screaming.”

The lady’s voice was like a squeak, “Screaming?”

LoinCloth handed over another picture. “This is the other cross rider. Her name is Kathy.”


The lady looked at it out of the corner of her eye. “Um … has she already been … um …”

“Crucified? Oh yes. This will be her third time. The others have been crucified before too, but this will be my first time. Crux Park takes souvenir pictures like this one, then charges an arm and a leg for them. They won’t let your non-crucified friends take them though.”

“Your friends? They can watch?” With trembling hands, the lady struggled to take a sip of water.

“Oh yes. But they have to stand pretty far away. That is, unless you can afford to pay for a 24 hours or more crucifixion. Then, they can come up and touch, fondle, lick, put their fingers up your pussy while they lick, you know what I’m talking about, right? I mean, if your hands are nailed to a cross you can’t reach it yourself, now can you?”

“Reach what?”

“Your pussy, of course.”

The lady blew a water geyser on the seat in front of her.

LoinCloth said, “Twenty-four hour stays are super expensive though, so I’m just going to have to ‘mind fuck’ myself with fantasies. Would you like to hear them?

The lady shook her head no with great vigor.

Which did nothing to deter LoinCloth from pulling up another video. “See, I have this video that’s just like one of my fantasies. Here, I’ve been captured by my enemies and, as you can see, they’re NOT very nice people.”
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The lady reached over and closed the laptop cover.

“I don't blame you. Like I said, not nice at all. Anyway, Mind fucking worked okay for @Barbaria1 and @messaline at their first crucifixion until Barb extended their stays to twenty-four hours –”

“At Barbaria One, At Messaline. Your friends have very unusual names.”

“That’s not the only thing unusual about them – you have no idea.”

“I’m sure you’re right about that.”

“Anyway, then, the fun really began! Lots of Forums folks were in the crowd. I got to do some licking! Both of them! I’m a pretty fast runner. Only @Wragg and @thehangingtree beat me to them. So, thank goodness, I was early in the queue. I’m sure I wouldn’t have to tell you how sloppy a woman’s pussy can get after twenty or thirty lickings, right?” LoinCloth winked at her.

“Um … well, actually, you would, but … Please don’t!”

LoinCloth opened the laptop and moved the mouse around for a couple of seconds. Here, let me show you, they made a documentary of it, see?”


The lady reached over and closed the laptop again.

“Oh, okay, well anyway I can’t believe Barb could afford twenty-four hours. She must do her boss, don’t you think?”

“Do?”

LoinCloth put her thumb in her mouth, closed her lips around it, then moved the thumb in and out.”

“Um … well … um.”

“And the amazing thing is, she doesn’t even swallow! What do you think about that?”

“Um … well … um.”

LoinCloth extended her hand. The lady took it gingerly.

LoinCloth said, “By the way, my name is LoinClothSlave.”

“LoinCloth … um? …”

“Slave.”

The lady bowed her head, rubbed her forehead. “Of course.”

The captain’s voice came on announcing final approach.

The lady picked up her Bible with both hands, raised it over her head, looked up. “THANK YOU, GOD!”

***
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Late the next afternoon, LoinCloth was at Crux Park with her friends. Jackie had arrived first and was the first to have her crucifixion completed.












... TO BE CONTINUED ...


Thanks to @Eulalia @Kathy @Jackie1111 and @Loinclothslave1 for their help, encouragement and for being such great sports.

And thanks to @mariuszebo who's art inspired the story. In addition to granting me permission to use some of his non-public artwork, he sent me some unpublished ones. He has thousands of pictures and a lot of stories at:

Products | Crux-Comics

crux-comics.eu

Being someone with no visual artistic talent who writes illustrated stories, I rely on others. Thanks to @SeD @Bartnel and @hornet1ba for posting such great images and GIFs to the forums.

 

[Apostate]

This thread is unfolding quite nicely, ledoux.

 

[messaline]

... "1111, that's a strange last name." ...

Perhaps that she's the 1111th girl having this last name in her family ?

Yes ? No ?

... Hum ... ...

... “Oh yes. But they have to stand pretty far away. That is, unless you can afford to pay for a 24 hours or more crucifixion...

I can, with my Premium French Crucifixion Wood ; the park buys all its crosses in it ...
... and Barb is a great writter : she sells so much books !

... a woman’s pussy can get after twenty or thirty lickings, right?” ...

It depends : I love to be licked even thirty times ; it makes a so much wonderful orgasm !

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[Loinclothslave]

Perhaps that she's the 1111th girl having this last name in her family ?

Yes ? No ?

... Hum ... View attachment 1028579 ...

Blonde moments now a speciality from me in this story. It appears to be true that us blondes have more fun!

I can, with my Premium French Crucifixion Wood ; the park buys all its crosses in it ...
... and Barb is a great writter : she sells so much books !

Well dayum, I could only afford 12 hours, any chance you can help a girl out?

It depends : I love to be licked even thirty times ; it makes a so much wonderful orgasm !

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No no, you misunderstood, that’s 30 times licked to orgasm! Don’t you remember?

 

[ledoux]

and Barb is a great writter : she sells so much books !

That's Barb's story and she's sticky ... um ... sticking to it!

 

[ledoux]

This thread is unfolding quite nicely, ledoux.

Unlike @Jackie1111's clothes which are nowhere to be found.

Thanks.

 

[ledoux]

I love to be licked even thirty times

Is this a lesson I would learn in Messaline's College of the Erotic Arts? Still waiting for the scholarship you promised me.
Remember, I diligently perform all my lessons*, and I am a fast learner.

*References available upon request.

 

[ledoux]

Girls Night Out at Crux Park

Part Two






Jackie continued, “Puffy's on the approved list. The Forums has banned the “T” word because of egregious overuse by you-know-who. Eulalia, you’re a moderator, what do you think about how many times @Barbaria1 says ‘tumescent’?”

"Well, being a just and fair moderator, I find the evidence points to several guilty parties, who persist in alleging tumescence on Barb's part (or parts), whether or not she is, or may be, in that (not unpleasant, nor illegal) condition. She is also represented in court by a certain attorney who usually appears incapable of pronouncing the word, by reason of an alcohol-induced speech impediment. I therefore rule that there is no case to answer."

Jackie said, "Wow, Eul, I'm really impressed by your sharp legal analysis."

"I didn't binge-watch all twenty-two seasons of 'Law and Order' for nothing."

Kathy said, "This discussion is all fascinating but, let's remember, we're naked and nailed to crosses. Our erotic dreams have come true. My pussy is telling me we could be making much better use of our time, if you know what I mean. It's also telling me in no uncertain terms that all I need right now is just a little quiet time.

Kathy got her quiet time, and it did really only take a little.


Like a stray atom in a nuclear pile, it helped ignite a chain reaction among the other two up on crosses.




After her raising, LoinCloth was not far behind.



Even before the raising, LoinCloth was way ahead in the “Big O” derby.

“Holy crap Miss LoinCloth, in all the time I’ve worked here, I’ve only had one other person have an orgasm while being nailed. She was that crazy French broad we talked about earlier. Ah, now I remember, her name was @messaline . Never could figure out what that @ was all about. Any way, you had TWO!”


While Crux Park’s analgesic / pain monitor made sure each cruxxee had quite a bit of the pain level they had chosen, the park had learned that periodic pain reductions allowed for more orgasms, a chance to occasionally relax and/or talk with friends, and, therefore, more return customers. It turned out no one REALLY wanted hours upon hours of unrelenting agony.

Thus, the four friends settled into a strange routine. Except for LoinCloth, they had all picked “severe pain.” This insured frequent bouts of agony interspersed with orgasms and occasional conversations. LoinCloth’s choice involved more frequent and more severe pain, but still some respites.


For Eulalia, It was familiar now, the feeling after being raised.

Completely exposed. No shred of clothing or dignity allowed. She wouldn’t have it any other way.

Utterly helpless. She and the others had agreed to let Crux Park’s restorative abilities serve the same function as a safe word. Thus, they would remain nailed to their crosses for the full term of their ten-hour contract.

And the Pain. The Oh. So. Delicious. Pain.
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Kathy sometimes used pain respites to work on her next story.

I think I’ll call it, “Kathy and Friends at Crux Park.”

Okay, my wrists and feet are ON FIRE, my shoulders, arms, legs, and back are KILLING me, but the story is definitely missing something.

Oh shit, I know what’s missing. But how the hell do I work it in? Dammit, I should have opted for the sedile and cornu package!

Time for some imagination. Okay, I've been crucified next to a stream sitting on a sedile and very wicked cornu ...



... TO BE CONTINUED ...

 

[Apostate]

Girls Night Out at Crux Park

Part Two

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Jackie continued, “Puffy's on the approved list. The Forums has banned the “T” word because of egregious overuse by you-know-who. Eulalia, you’re a moderator, what do you think about how many times @Barbaria1 says ‘tumescent’?”

"Well, being a just and fair moderator, I find the evidence points to several guilty parties, who persist in alleging tumescence on Barb's part (or parts), whether or not she is, or may be, in that (not unpleasant, nor illegal) condition. She is also represented in court by a certain attorney who usually appears incapable of pronouncing the word, by reason of an alcohol-induced speech impediment. I therefore rule that there is no case to answer."

Jackie said, "Wow, Eul, I'm really impressed by your sharp legal analysis."

"I didn't binge-watch all twenty-two seasons of 'Law and Order' for nothing."

Kathy said, "This discussion is all fascinating but, let's remember, we're naked and nailed to crosses. Our erotic dreams have come true. My pussy is telling me we could be making much better use of our time, if you know what I mean. It's also telling me in no uncertain terms that all I need right now is just a little quiet time.

Kathy got her quiet time, and it did really only take a little.
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Like a stray atom in a nuclear pile, it helped ignite a chain reaction among the other two up on crosses.
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After her raising, LoinCloth was not far behind.
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Even before the raising, LoinCloth was way ahead in the “Big O” derby.

“Holy crap Miss LoinCloth, in all the time I’ve worked here, I’ve only had one other person have an orgasm while being nailed. She was that crazy French broad we talked about earlier. Ah, now I remember, her name was @messaline . Never could figure out what that @ was all about. Any way, you had TWO!”
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While Crux Park’s analgesic / pain monitor made sure each cruxxee had quite a bit of the pain level they had chosen, the park had learned that periodic pain reductions allowed for more orgasms, a chance to occasionally relax and/or talk with friends, and, therefore, more return customers. It turned out no one REALLY wanted hours upon hours of unrelenting agony.

Thus, the four friends settled into a strange routine. Except for LoinCloth, they had all picked “severe pain.” This insured frequent bouts of agony interspersed with orgasms and occasional conversations. LoinCloth’s choice involved more frequent and more severe pain, but still some respites.


For Eulalia, It was familiar now, the feeling after being raised.

Completely exposed. No shred of clothing or dignity allowed. She wouldn’t have it any other way.

Utterly helpless. She and the others had agreed to let Crux Park’s restorative abilities serve the same function as a safe word. Thus, they would remain nailed to their crosses for the full term of their ten-hour contract.

And the Pain. The Oh. So. Delicious. Pain.
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Kathy sometimes used pain respites to work on her next story.

I think I’ll call it, “Kathy and Friends at Crux Park.”

Okay, my wrists and feet are ON FIRE, my shoulders, arms, legs, and back are KILLING me, but the story is definitely missing something.

Oh shit, I know what’s missing. But how the hell do I work it in? Dammit, I should have opted for the sedile and cornu package!

Time for some imagination. Okay, I've been crucified next to a stream sitting on a sedile and very wicked cornu ...
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... TO BE CONTINUED ...

This is why I laugh.

It's meta.

 

[ledoux]

Girls Night Out

Part Three

Jackie used a pain respite to bust a move.





After the applause died down, Jackie said, "So, Eul, heard you have a new job. How do you like it?"

"Absolutely love it."

"So, what do you do?"

"Grind coffee."

""Um ... okay ... well, glad you like it."

Eul took a deep breath and thought, It's all I've ever dreamed of ...
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"It's kind of physically taxing - but I've lost some weight and we do get frequent breaks."
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"Well, we're happy for you," Kathy said.

"You know what they say," Eulalia said, "If you can support yourself doing things you love, you'll never work another day in your life."


"Wow, there goes LoinCloth again," Kathy said, "How many orgasms has she had!?"

"I can't count that high," Eulalia said, "Looks like we have @messaline Part Deux over there."

"Well, it’s about time someone challenges Messa for “Forum’s Pain Slut of the Year” award. I
think LoinCloth’s a real contender."

"You know what Messaline will do to you if she finds out you’re backing a contender to her title, don’t you?"

Kathy smiled. I know exactly what Messa will do if I file the nomination.
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"So, what are you gonna do?"

Kathy smiled again. "Well, I'd file it today, but," She looked up at one of her nailed hands and shrugged, "well, you know." "So, I'll file it tomorrow ASAP!"


Eulalia looked over at Kathy and smiled. “Oh, by the way, Kathy, I saw those pics @SeD did of you riding the Judas Cradle. They were HOT!”


“I know. Just thinking about them makes me wetter than Lake Erie!”

“Better not try it in real life though, it might screw up your writing.”

“Huh? My writing? I don’t write with that part of my bod—”

“--I’ve read your stories, they’re great. I’d give ‘um a 9.7 out of 10 on the “M” scale.”

“’M’ scale?”

“Starts with ‘M’, rhymes with bait.”

“Oh, I see.” Kathy laughed. “Well, that’s good, right?”

“Absolutely, but most of your stories have the same star, hell – a superstar.”

“Superstar?”

“Your PUSSY! Go reread some of your stories, it’s obvious. Your pussy is a FUCKING SUPERSTAR (no pun … um … well, maybe some pun intended). The way you talk about your pussy makes mine tingle, and sometimes a lot more than tingle. We can’t risk damaging the superstar, can we? So, just say NO to the Cradle!”

Kathy laughed, but thought, maybe if I call Amazon first thing tomorrow, I still have time to cancel.


... TO BE CONTINUED ...
Big two part finale coming soon

 

[Kodos the Executioner]

Great story so far ledoux. I really liked the part of the plane.

But I am looking forward to the two part finale when you are able to post it!

 

[messaline]

... "Well, it’s about time someone challenges Messa for “Forum’s Pain Slut of the Year” award. I
think LoinCloth’s a real contender."

"You know what Messaline will do to you if she finds out you’re backing a contender to her title, don’t you?" ...

Oh, I'm not afraid by that ; in fact, I've a pussy that we can call " machine à orgasmes " ( orgasms'engine ) ...
It's programmed to deliver orgasm with the less solicitation !

... "You know what Messaline will do to you if she finds out you’re backing a contender to her title, don’t you?"

Kathy smiled. I know exactly what Messa will do if I file the nomination...

Hum, I'm not sure that you can imagine, Kathy ; this is the less than you can wait here ...
In fact, I dont conceive any pain without crucifixion ; we perhaps can reach the most like that ? What do you think Kathy ? ...

 

[ledoux]

Girls Night Out At Crux Park
Part Four

For a while, just the thrill of actually being nailed to crosses, coupled with the pain, was enough to get them over the edge multiple times. But, when things slowed down, they called up their fantasies.

Eul always believed a job best done by a strong man would be even better done by two.
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Kathy continued to plan her dream wedding (using Crux Park's facilities to surprise her bridesmaids).





Jackie dreamed of dancing the night away while nailed to a cross.
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But, there was a problem, the cross obstructed a tiny part of the view of her bod, so, midway in each dance, an adjustment was made.
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LoinCloth's fantasies often involved a specific form of transportation.
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Just as Barb and Messaline had discovered, and as they had discovered in previous short-term crucifixions, some physical stimulation in the right places was sometimes sorely missed.

“God, if only I could get my hand to my pussy for just a moment or two,” Kathy lamented.

“I know what you mean,” Jackie said, “wish we could afford 24 hour stays. I could probably double my “O”’s per hour.”

Eulalia said, “Not to worry. It’s almost 8 pm, the park will be closing soon.”

“So what,” Jackie said, “it just means most of our time will be in the dark. By the way, why did you schedule it that way? We usually hang in the daytime.”

“You’ll see,” Eulalia said.

Shortly after eight pm, the night water attendant walked up to Eulalia.


“Okay folks listen to me. Uh, LoinCloth, do you think you can stop cumming long enough to hear this?”

“I’ll try real hard.”

“Thank you, hate to interrupt. This is Marion, a long-time friend of mine. She just started working at the park a couple of weeks ago. She’s sneaked four of her friends in to be spectators – our personal spectators. So, for a few hours, they’re going to be our friends too.”


... continued a couple of posts down ...

 

[Loinclothslave]

View attachment 1029237 Oh, I'm not afraid by that ; in fact, I've a pussy that we can call " machine à orgasmes " ( orgasms'engine ) ...
It's programmed to deliver orgasm with the less solicitation !

Well according to this, apparently so do I!

Hum, I'm not sure that you can imagine, Kathy ; this is the less than you can wait here ...
In fact, I dont conceive any pain without crucifixion ; we perhaps can reach the most like that ? What do you think Kathy ? ...
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Well, if you want company, I’m judiciously saving for my next trip to crux park, no more 12 hour teases for this blonde!

 

[Kathy]

we perhaps can reach the most like that ? What do you think Kathy ? ..

I agree messaline

 

[ledoux]

... continued from above ...

As usual, Eul was on the receiving end, but this time not of whips and chains.


Kathy was working on her social skills


LoinCloth was having health concerns.


Meanwhile, Kathy's concern was doing what was best for her readers.



During a visitor "change of partners," LoinCloth reflected.


And there were still some hours left, she would be able to-

-When the alarm rang, LoinCloth woke with a start. Wiping sleep from his eyes, he stumbled into the bathroom. A quick glance in the mirror told him he really needed a shave. He stood for a moment taking deep breaths.

Finally, he said, “Wow! – longest and best wet dream ever!”

“But FUCK! I still had four hours to go!” He took the alarm clock and hurled it into the wall where it burst into pieces.

Oh well, nothing he could do about that now.

He had to call Kathy.

“Kathy! You’re not gonna believe the dream I had!”

“Dream? Uh, LoinCloth, you do know the Earth is a round ball, right? That I live in Canada, right?”

“Sure, but—”

“And that Australia is clear on the other fucking side of that ball! Do you know what time it is here?”

He glanced at the shattered clock. “I … um … I don’t even know what time it is here. Please, you must hear this. I was in my female persona the whole time and, and, and …”

“Yes?” Kathy said.

“I HAD A REAL PUSSY!”

“Real pussies do have their advantages, I of all people should know.”

"AND IT WAS A REALLY GOOD ONE!"

"Calm down, LoinCloth, listen--"

"IT WAS EVEN BETTER THAN @messaline 's! You said so."

"Take some breaths, then tell me about the dream."

He took some breaths and then started describing the dream.

A few minutes later, he’d still only scratched the surface of the story. “… and I even knew what all of you were thinking.”

Kathy sighed. “Well, it does sound interesting. Gimme a minute to set up a caffeine IV drip and you can … wait a minute, I have a better idea. Send it to me in a PM.”

“I can do that.”

“Great, now I can crawl back into … oh, another idea. Find some pictures to include.”

“Pictures?”

“Here, write down the Forums and internet search term you should use – Naked woman crucified with nails brunette.”

“Got it, but why?”

“The pictures will make the story more … um … ‘useful.’” Kathy cleared her throat. “Know what I mean?”

He thought for only a second. “Of course. So, the superstar’s going see some more action soon, huh?”

“Superstar?”

“You’ll understand when you get the write-up.”


“Whatever. Thanks for calling. Get a clock. G’night, mate. Did I say that right?”

LoinCloth rolled his eyes. “Close enough.”

Soon after he started working on the dream story, he realized he should send copies to Eulalia and Jackie too. Then another realization. He knew them well – for sure, they would want “useful” versions too; so, to the picture search term he added, “red-head.”

Then, he found a picture that looked promising. After all, he was telling a story about four friends out for an afternoon of fun and relaxation by being nailed to crosses.


Only a few more words into writing down the story, yet another realization. He went back to the picture search term and added –

“blonde.”


THE END

Epilogue

 

[Kathy]

... continued from previous post ...

As usual, Eul was on the receiving end, but this time not of whips and chains.
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Kathy was working on her social skills
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LoinCloth was having health concerns.
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Meanwhile, Kathy's concern was doing what was best for her readers.
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During a visitor "change of partners," LoinCloth reflected.
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And there were still some hours left, she would be able to-

-When the alarm rang, LoinCloth woke with a start. Wiping sleep from his eyes, he stumbled into the bathroom. A quick glance in the mirror told him he really needed a shave. He stood for a moment taking deep breaths.

Finally, he said, “Wow! – longest and best wet dream ever!”

“But FUCK! I still had four hours to go!” He took the alarm clock and hurled it into the wall where it burst into pieces.

Oh well, nothing he could do about that now.

He had to call Kathy.

“Kathy! You’re not gonna believe the dream I had!”

“Dream? Uh, LoinCloth, you do know the Earth is a round ball, right? That I live in Canada, right?”

“Sure, but—”

“And that Australia is clear on the other fucking side of that ball! Do you know what time it is here?”

He glanced at the shattered clock. “I … um … I don’t even know what time it is here. Please, you must hear this. I was in my female persona the whole time and, and, and …”

“Yes?” Kathy said.

“I HAD A REAL PUSSY!”

“Real pussies do have their advantages, I of all people should know.”

"AND IT WAS A REALLY GOOD ONE!"

"Calm down, LoinCloth, listen--"

"IT WAS BETTER THAN @messaline 's! You even said so."

"Take some breaths, then tell me about the dream."

He took some breaths and then started describing the dream.

A few minutes later, he’d still only scratched the surface of the story. “… and I even knew what all of you were thinking.”

Kathy sighed. “Well, it does sound interesting. Gimme a minute to set up a caffeine IV drip and you can … wait a minute, I have a better idea. Send it to me in a PM.”

“I can do that.”

“Great, now I can crawl back into … oh, another idea. Find some pictures to include.”

“Pictures?”

“Here, write down the Forums and internet search term you should use – Naked woman crucified with nails brunette.”

“Got it, but why?”

“The pictures will make the story more … um … ‘useful.’” Kathy cleared her throat. “Know what I mean?”

He thought for only a second. “Of course. So, the superstar’s going see some more action soon, huh?”

“Superstar?”

“You’ll understand when you get the write-up.”
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“Whatever. Thanks for calling. Get a clock. G’night, mate. Did I say that right?”

LoinCloth rolled his eyes. “Close enough.”

Soon after he started working on the dream story, he realized he should send copies to Eulalia and Jackie too. Then another realization. He knew them well – for sure, they would want “useful” versions too; so, to the picture search term he added, “red-head.”

Then, he found a picture that looked promising. After all, he was telling a story about four friends out for an afternoon of fun and relaxation by being nailed to crosses.
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Only a few more words into writing down the story, yet another realization. He went back to the picture search term and added –

“blonde.”


THE END

Epilogue
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Well done , thanks for including me

 

[Loinclothslave]

Yes, thank you for my debut, @ledoux , you made a wonderfully entertaining and funny story… the Epilogue was a nice touch!

Damn alarm clock!

 

[ledoux]

I dont conceive any pain without crucifixion ; we perhaps can reach the most like that

I agree messaline

Okay! I know folks at the Park. I can get you guys a really good package deal. With the right incentive, maybe even a "twofer."