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Undercross by Chez Marquis

Note: I made small edits to punctuation. And I deleted one conjunction simply to start another sentence. I also broke up long paragraphs into shorter ones.

We begin by crucifying the victim. She struggles and squirms, of course, as we lay her down on the cross. She is young and very frightened. She is surprised when she sees that we approach her not with nails but with rope. With nails, there would be blood loss and shock. We tie her wrists to the cross because we want her to last. This is to be an endurance torture.

Next, we tie a strip of wet rawhide very tightly around her throat. This will grow tighter still as it dries until finally it begins to strangle her. This is one of the three asphyxiations that awaits our victim. She is eighteen years old and quite innocent; she has done nothing to deserve any of this. Because she is innocent, we must be supremely cruel to her.

Now we stand the cross upright, and she whimpers as her weight comes down onto her tightly bound wrists. (It would be far worse if we had nailed her to the cross, of course. But don't worry; she will soon be suffering tremendously.) The bottom of the cross's main pole fits into a hole in the floor of the empty swimming pool. The cross slides into place with a satisfying THUNK. Now our voluptuous beauty is crucified, and her torture can begin.

She is wearing a translucent blue tank top and an opaque blue g-string. We spray ice water onto her breasts from a plastic bottle for purely stylistic reasons. She moans softly, for she understands that we are transforming her into an object.

The wet blue fabric clings hungrily to her prominent round breasts. They press against the fabric and through it, rising and falling with each anxious breath. They are firm and braless, with large red nipples which have been rendered quite stiff by the icy spray.

Yes, her breasts are ample, even extravagant. But below them, she is all skin and bones. Her ribs jut out through tight fabric and tighter skin, and her belly is sunken. She knows the secret which all young beauties know, but which none will ever speak of: how to keep her breasts large and round and pleasing, while simultaneously starving her lower body to perfection.

She squirms invitingly on the cross, her bikinied crotch rubbing seductively against the sedulum. Her long, muscular legs strain towards the floor of the pool. But there is no chance that they will ever reach it. She is quite securely crucified, and will remain so for the brief duration of her life.

We leave her like this all day, and gradually she learns what pain is. Nothing in her young life has prepared her for it, and it overwhelms her. She breaks easily, as these tender teens always do.

Within hours she is sobbing and crying like a little girl, as the pain spreads from her wrists into her arms and shoulders, and then into her magnificent chest. She's not yet having much respiratory difficulty--at least not from the crucifixion. But the day is hot, and the sun beats down on her pale sweating flesh.

The rawhide strap tightens around her throat as it dries, squeezing gently, like a lover, like a serial killer. She chokes and gurgles. The sounds are far more erotic than the pathetic cries of pleasure which were the previous limit of her sexual vocabulary.

The leather at her throat teaches her the true meaning of concepts such as Sex and Woman. She is not strong--really, she is little more than a young adult. And so, she cannot even begin to resist this new truth.

We wait until the throat strap is dangerously tight. We let her get a real feel for the strangulation. Then we employ the spray bottle again, moistening the strap, loosening it. Her pale, teary blue eyes are full of gratitude, and we laugh; really she has nothing to be grateful for.

She soon learns this as she works her way through the sublimely sexual up-and-down motion of the crucifixion. Breathing is a constant struggle for her. As her muscles grow weary, she becomes aware that this is a fight she cannot win.

She endures a night of endless agony. We sleep soundly and return to her in the morning.

She is hungry, thirsty and barely able to breathe. Every muscle in her delicious torso is screaming at her. We decide that she has had enough foreplay. She's ready for the main event.

We step out of the pool and encourage it to fill with water. This takes several hours, during which time our lovely victim continues to suffer on her cross. Her soft, innocent blue eyes now fill with terror as she watches the water level rise.

The throat strap may strangle her, or she may asphyxiate on the cross, or she may drown. But no matter what happens, she will certainly die: in tremendous pain, alone and afraid, as beautiful bitches should die.

Her massive breasts quiver as she struggles on the cross. Her entire body is taut with pain. The torture is excruciating, a true success.

The water licks at her ankles and caresses her shapely calves. It rises past her knees to her firm, slender thighs. We wet her throat strap once more, determined that she not die too quickly. This time there is no gratitude in her eyes, for she understands now that it is a gesture of extreme cruelty.

The water finds her bikini-clad crotch, and she manages to gasp as the cold liquid touches her hot sex. She thrashes about in the water, splashing wildly, kicking her long legs. It is a futile fight, but she fights nonetheless, for she is young and desperate and foolish.

The water soaks into her tanktop, and the thin translucent fabric sucks up against her pale skin. The water buoys her up as it rises, easing the tension in her arms and chest, making it easier for her to breathe on the cross. The water reaches her monumental breasts, lifting them up, caressing them, touching her proud red nipples and continuing on.

There are prayers on her lips. They will go unanswered, of course. We pause as the water reaches her shoulders.

I spend the afternoon toying with her. With most of her gorgeous body submerged, she is almost weightless. The action of the crucifix is greatly lessened. Now her attention returns to her throat strap, which continues to strangle her slowly.

I admire her twitching breasts, and the look of unbearable pain on her sweet young face. After about an hour of this, I wet down her throat strap once again and allow the level of water in the pool to fall. It drops below her breasts--cold water rolling off those firm, proud, hard-nippled tits.

I let the water fall down to her waist. Now a sizable fraction of her body weight is resting on her crucified wrists once again. I let her explore that pain for a while, squirming and struggling on the cross as she tries to breathe. Then I let the water rise once more, and allow the throat strap to take over.

She is in constant agony. But the precise nature of her pain varies. This prevents her from growing too accustomed to any single torture.

I keep her going like this for long hours; torturing her into the evening; letting the water rise and fall; letting the throat strap dry out and then wetting it down; letting her be strangled, then crucified, then strangled again, keeping her always on the very brink of terminal asphyxiation.

I decide to finish her only when I see that she has learned the central lesson of this exercise: that I could keep her going indefinitely like this, that I could give her a life of constant and endless pain.

Finally I allow the water to reach her neck, her chin. At last, it draws near her thin, red lips. She takes one last breath through her nose and then she is under. She is drowning, and all is right with the world.

It takes her long minutes to die. Her lungs are full and strong. She fights to the last, struggling, resisting, making a show of it.

She is splendid in her pain: slender, full breasted, submerged, crucified beneath the sparkling, glittering water. She is flawless and pristine; her agony has made her a goddess.

She arches her back on the cross, thrusting her proud magnificent breasts out, raising them up, asserting for the last time that she is a living (though not a breathing) creature, a vibrant, powerful organism. Then her lungs buckle at last, rebelling against their putative mistress, demanding air which is simply not present.

She inhales sharply. Her lungs fill with water. She is wracked with spasms; dying, doomed, desperate, she gives in to the inevitable at last. Her limp, crucified corpse floats lazily beneath the water, her vacant eyes staring up into the world she has just left.
 
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Dancing on the Cross

Note: The usual caveat applies. I made small edits to punctuation, and I broke up long paragraphs into shorter ones. I made a couple of other cosmetic changes. I assume this is a senior class (ages 18+).

"Well, class, I know you all learned a lot from last week's lesson about slow hanging (a previous Marquis story I have not posted). This week we'll be studying the effects of another type of torture, namely crucifixion. Kelli, do you have your permission slip?"

"Yes, Miss Hutchinson."

Kelli was shy and quiet, but she was also very beautiful. She had straight, shoulder-length blonde hair and dark eyes. Her breasts hadn't quite come in yet, but she didn't really mind.

Her passion was ballet, and large breasts would only get in the way. Kelli went to ballet class after school four days a week. Today, like most days, she had her tights and leotard on under her school clothes.

Kelli always felt beautiful when she was dancing. Unfortunately, the boys all spent more time looking at big-breasted cheerleaders, girls like Jenny. Kelli smiled to herself as she remembered that she no longer had to worry about competing with that particular girl. Come to think of it, she didn't really have to worry about anything at all anymore...

Kelli walked up to the teacher's desk and handed her the permission slip. "Miss Hutchinson, I was reading the pages you assigned from our history text, about Roman crucifixion..."

"Good for you, Kelli! Remember, class, even if you volunteer for a demonstration of lethal torture, you're still responsible for all of your regular assignments. I'm afraid Jenny's parents may be a bit disappointed with her final grade. But it looks like Kelli will go out with flying colors! So, what did you learn from the reading, Kelli?"

"Um, just that it was common for them to whip the crucified prisoners. Women prisoners often had their breasts and bellies flogged."

"Yes, that's right. I was planning to whip you, as part of the demonstration. Would that be all right with you?"

"Oh, sure! It's no problem at all. When I read that, I asked my big sister to whip me. See, I had never been whipped before, and I wanted to be sure that I could take it," Kelli explained timidly.

"I see you've really done your homework, Kelli. So what did you learn about being whipped?" the teacher asked gently.

"Well, my sister worked on me for about two hours with a stiff, leather crop. She did my breasts, my belly, my thighs, my back and my butt. It really hurt. I kind of liked it." A few of the boys in the class chuckled.

"It's very normal for you to enjoy being whipped, Kelli," the teacher said firmly, glaring at the boys. "After all, you're a woman, and our bodies respond well to pain. Many women in our society do enjoy suffering. It's nothing for you to be ashamed of. It's all just part of growing up."

"Miss Hutchinson..." the girl said nervously.

"Yes?"

"The book also said that the Romans never, ever crucified virgins," Kelli said quickly. Her face was bright red.

The boys' laughter grew louder. "Oh. I see. Are you a virgin, Kelli?" Miss Hutchinson asked.

Kelli looked at her shoes. "Yeah."

"Kelli, would you like to be deflowered before we crucify you?" the teacher asked softly.

"Yes, please."

"Would one of you young gentlemen like to volunteer to help Kelli?" Every boy in the class raised his hand eagerly. "Who would you like to have, Kelli?" Miss Hutchinson inquired.

"Paul," Kelli said quickly.

Paul's face lit up. He had never imagined she would pick him! He was a skinny computer nerd.

He wore thick glasses. He liked Kelli a lot, but he hardly ever managed to work up the courage to talk to her. And now she wanted him to take her virginity! He had never been with a girl! It would be his first time, too.

"Kelli, why don't you get undressed," the teacher suggested. "Come on up to the front, Paul."

Kelli pulled off her t-shirt. Beneath, she had only her leotard, no bra. Her hard nipples were clearly visible through the thin fabric.

She unbuttoned her jeans, pulling them down to reveal her tights. She unsnapped the crotch of her leotard--that was handy when she had to go to the bathroom during dance class. Then she pulled down her tights and tossed them aside.

Kelli stood nervously in front of the class, keenly aware that every eye in the room was on her. The flap of her leotard hung down in front of her pussy. Nobody could really see her. But she still felt naked standing in front of the class like that.

Glancing down, she noticed that she could kind of see the outline of her pussy lips through the leotard. She felt her blush grow darker still. "Paul, are you ready?" Miss Hutchinson asked.

"Uh, not exactly, Miss H..."

"Kelli, why don't you give Paul a kiss?" the teacher suggested.

"All right."

She smiled at him. He was so shy, just like her. Cute, too.

She took off his glasses and set them down carefully on the teacher's desk. Then she turned her head, closed her eyes, and pressed her lips against his. She kissed him long and hard, grinding her lips against his.

Her sister had told her how to do it. She felt him respond. She opened her mouth a little, tentatively.

He got the hint and opened his. Their tongues met, and Kelli felt something warm grow in her belly and move downwards.

At last they broke apart, gasping. "Are you ready now, Paul?" the teacher asked with a smile.

"Um, yeah! Sure am, Miss H."

"Good. Take out your penis, please. Kelli, face my desk. Spread your legs wide. That's good. Now bend down low and offer yourself up to your lover."

"Yes, Ma'am."

As she bent down over the desk, Kelli felt Paul pull her leotard up over her ass. Now everyone could see her naked pussy! "I notice you don't have any pubic hair, Kelli," the teacher commented.

"I shaved it off," she explained timidly. "My big sister says most men like bald pussies."

"Quite right," the teacher agreed.

"I'm a woman, though," Kelli added quickly. "I’ve been having my period for a while now."

"That's fine. Paul, I can see you're ready to proceed. Kelli has a lovely ass and pussy, doesn't she?"

"Yes, ma'am!" Paul agreed.

"Go ahead and take her."

Kelli felt something hard press against the lips of her pussy, demanding entrance. Paul began to work the tip of his cock into her. She gasped. He was so big, and she was so dry! She should have played with herself first. That always made her really wet.

She felt her hymen stretch as Paul forced his way into her. She whimpered softly. Then she went blind with pain as her maidenhood suddenly ruptured.

He was inside her! He grunted and began to thrust in and out of her. She howled. It hurt so much, but it felt good too.

Paul came after a couple of minutes. Kelli wished he could have lasted longer. But after all, it was his first time. She was just glad to have been fucked. Now she wouldn't die a virgin.

"Thank you, Paul. Now, Kelli, please stand up and remove your leotard."

Kelli found that she was no longer nervous about being naked in front of the class. She pulled the leotard up over her head, revealing her small, hard breasts.

"All right, everyone. Please follow me out to the cross."

Broken up due to length. Part 2 coming soon.
 
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Marquis is one of the two "gateway authors" for me to enter the snuff-fiction world, many many years ago.
The other one for me was Dolcett, for the comics/visual stories.

But I remember I had very very primitive snuff/torture fantasies already when I was just in my early teens.
 
I backed them all up one time because I liked many of them. It's hard to know how many the archive saved and may have lost. Anyway, this one was too big to post in one go. So here's the rest of it.

Miss Hutchinson led them out of the room and down the hall. As they stepped through the school's outer doors, the heat hit them in the face like a brick. It was an August afternoon in New Mexico, which meant that the weather would add considerably to Kelli's suffering.

The cross lay waiting for her. Her heartbeat quickened as they approached. She was really going to do it! She had dreamed of being crucified since puberty. And now it was really going to happen!

"Please lay down on the cross, Kelli," the teacher instructed. Kelli did so eagerly.

"I'm going to bind Kelli's wrists to the crossbeam," Miss Hutchinson explained. "That will give her extra support in case the nails start to tear through her flesh." She produced two short ropes, and tied them tightly around Kelli's wrists.

"Now, there are two schools of thought as to where the nails should go," Miss Hutchinson said, holding up two large spikes and a mallet. "Kelli?"

"It's more painful to nail through the hand," Kelli said, "Since there are more nerves there. But the hand tears easily. So some people like to go through the wrist."

"Quite right. I thought we'd do one of each, for demonstration purposes."

Kelli noticed that Miss Hutchinson no longer waited for consent. She had a permission slip, and Kelli was now helpless and bound. It was much too late for the girl to change her mind. But that was fine. Kelli had no desire to back out now.

The teacher positioned a spike carefully over Kelli's left palm. Kelli held her breath as the teacher raised the mallet. Suddenly there was an explosion of pain in her hand, and she began to scream.

"Tying the victim to the cross also makes it easier to get the second nail in," the teacher pointed out.

Indeed, Kelli's naked body was squirming about quite a bit. The one part of her that wasn't moving was her wrists. The teacher had no trouble fitting the second spike against Kelli's arm and driving it home. Kelli howled wildly.

"Please hold your ankles still while I bind them," the teacher said firmly.

Kelli did her best to comply. But it was hard to hold still. She was in so much pain!

"I should have done this before I nailed you," Miss Hutchinson admitted. But she managed to get Kelli's ankles bound to the main beam of the cross, one on each side.

"I'm putting the ankle nails through the sides, for greater stability," the teacher explained. The class watched in fascination. Kelli was beginning to calm down, to master her pain.

She cried out as the ankle spikes went in. But she didn't scream nearly as hard as she had when the teacher had nailed her hands.

Two football players came forward to lift the cross. Kelli's breath caught in her throat as the cross rose from the ground. She had to fight to remain conscious.

Most of her weight was now on the nails which ran through her wrist, her hand and her ankles. The pain was tremendous. The rope at her wrists bore some of the weight, though, and that helped.

The two boys planted her cross in its hole. Kelli was beautifully crucified, ready to experience a slow death.

"Now, at this point, most of Kelli's pain is being caused by the nails in her body," the teacher remarked. "Kelli, how do you feel?"

Her young face was wet with tears. "It hurts. Oh, God, Miss H, it hurts so much!"

"Can you take it?" the teacher asked sharply.

Kelli swallowed hard. She had to be strong. "Yes," she said firmly.

"Good girl. All right, class, let's go back inside. We'll check on her again after school."

When the class returned, Kelli was bright pink. She was very fair skinned, and her naked body had been under the merciless New Mexico sun for hours. Her slender frame was drenched with sweat. She was terribly thirsty.

"May I have some water, please?" she croaked.

"Of course not. As you can see, class, exposure is a key component of crucifixion. It's not uncommon for victims to die of thirst, which is an extremely unpleasant way to go. Kelli, how are your arms holding up?"

"They hurt...right one's OK, pretty stable. Left one's torn some..." The hole in her palm was indeed much larger than it had been.

"So remember to tie your victim to the cross if you plan to nail her palms," Miss Hutchinson said. "Are there any questions?"

Paul raised his hand. "How long will she last?"

"In this heat? I doubt she'll make it to sunset tomorrow," Miss Hutchinson replied. "But don't worry, we'll check on her again in the morning. Good night, Kelli."

Kelli was barely conscious when they returned. The teacher slapped her across the face, hard, to wake her up. "Good morning, Kelli. How are you doing today?"

"Can't...breathe..." Kelli gasped

"Very good. Class, Kelli has now started to asphyxiate. To breathe on the cross, a woman constantly has to pull her torso up. Eventually her muscles become exhausted, and she simply can't do it any longer. So you see, crucifixion really incorporates a number of tortures."

She ticked them off on her fingers as she named them. "The nails. Sunburn. Dehydration. Slow suffocation. These different agonies work together to ensure maximum suffering for the victim. Are you in a great deal of pain now, Kelli?"

"Yes," she whimpered. The affirmation seemed woefully inadequate.

"Would you like me to take you down? If we get you to a hospital soon, you'll probably live."

Kelli thought of Jenny, who had demeaned herself by begging for mercy, only to have Miss Hutchinson refuse it. "No, I'll stay," she decided.

"I'm very proud of you, Kelli," the teacher beamed. "You get an A+ for the term. I know you're having trouble breathing right now. But it's still only first stage asphyxia. I think you'll be fine until after school, and I'd like you to spend another day under the sun. We'll come back this afternoon and finish you off, all right?"

After the second day, Kelli was too parched to speak. Her tongue was thick and dry, her lips cracked and bleeding. Her flesh was lobster-red from head to toe. Kelli's tortured skin had been burnt to a crisp for the second straight day. Her small, naked breasts quivered as she tried to breathe. Respiration was, by now, quite difficult for her.

"Kelli is now very near terminal asphyxia," the teacher pointed out. "She is also nearly dead from dehydration. Although we could leave her to strangle, I thought we'd be merciful and whip her to death, since she has done such an excellent job for us today."

The teacher produced a heavy, weighted flail. "Paul, would you care to do the honors?" Kelli closed her eyes. She was glad it would be him.

Paul stepped forward and took the flail. "I've dreamed about this for so long," he whispered to Kelli. She could only nod.

She closed her eyes and tried to scream as the flail came down across her burnt belly. But her throat was too dry. Nothing came out.

Paul lashed into her ruthlessly, punishing her tender, red flesh. She had no tears to cry. She could only accept the abuse.

Paul's enthusiasm was incredible. He really wanted to hurt her, as much as he had wanted to fuck her. More.

His desire, his need, made the pain good for her. It was so intimate. It was just like making love with him a second time, except that this time it was better, because it hurt more, and because it lasted longer.

As Paul rained an especially brutal series of strokes onto her sunburnt nipples, Kelli came violently. He moved down, whipping her belly. He was whipping her so fast, and she was already almost strangled that she couldn't catch her breath!

Was she dying? She glanced at her teacher, who nodded. Yes. It was time.

She closed her eyes, threw her head back, and let her lips twist in a silent scream. The weighted flail was turning her firm, young belly to jelly. She felt something rupture inside.

She tried to breathe, but couldn't. She prayed that Paul would move back to her breasts. She needed to die with his whip across her nipples.

He read her mind. The flail found both nipples simultaneously. They ruptured, squirting blood like milk.

Kelli's head rolled forward onto her chest. She had stopped breathing. "Thank you, Paul," Miss Hutchinson said softly. "That's all for today, class."
 
I backed them all up one time because I liked many of them. It's hard to know how many the archive saved and may have lost. Anyway, this one was too big to post in one go. So here's the rest of it.
Did you also back up the images? The Internet Archive didn't, and its kind of nice to see whom / what picture he had in mind when writing...
 
I saved the story from the original site, not thewaybackmachine, like more than ten years ago.

The accompanying picture was this one.

I also report where exactly it was inserted.
 

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Turns out I had this one, and, funny enough, viewed in browser it is flawless, however viewed in some windows image viewer or gimp, there seem to be small errors along the lower end of the image: old JPG format... ;)

Edit: No, the browser just truncates the error...

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Good old artefacts from modem data transfer times ;)
 
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Thanks Zephirantes
Turns out I had this one, and, funny enough, viewed in browser it is flawless, however viewed in some windows image viewer or gimp, there seem to be small errors along the lower end of the image: old JPG format... ;)

Edit: No, the browser just truncates the error...

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Good old artefacts from modem data transfer times ;)

I've corrected the image, but I had the same issue with the original.
 
I backed them all up one time because I liked many of them. It's hard to know how many the archive saved and may have lost. Anyway, this one was too big to post in one go. So here's the rest of it.

Miss Hutchinson led them out of the room and down the hall. As they stepped through the school's outer doors, the heat hit them in the face like a brick. It was an August afternoon in New Mexico, which meant that the weather would add considerably to Kelli's suffering.

The cross lay waiting for her. Her heartbeat quickened as they approached. She was really going to do it! She had dreamed of being crucified since puberty. And now it was really going to happen!

"Please lay down on the cross, Kelli," the teacher instructed. Kelli did so eagerly.

"I'm going to bind Kelli's wrists to the crossbeam," Miss Hutchinson explained. "That will give her extra support in case the nails start to tear through her flesh." She produced two short ropes, and tied them tightly around Kelli's wrists.

"Now, there are two schools of thought as to where the nails should go," Miss Hutchinson said, holding up two large spikes and a mallet. "Kelli?"

"It's more painful to nail through the hand," Kelli said, "Since there are more nerves there. But the hand tears easily. So some people like to go through the wrist."

"Quite right. I thought we'd do one of each, for demonstration purposes."

Kelli noticed that Miss Hutchinson no longer waited for consent. She had a permission slip, and Kelli was now helpless and bound. It was much too late for the girl to change her mind. But that was fine. Kelli had no desire to back out now.

The teacher positioned a spike carefully over Kelli's left palm. Kelli held her breath as the teacher raised the mallet. Suddenly there was an explosion of pain in her hand, and she began to scream.

"Tying the victim to the cross also makes it easier to get the second nail in," the teacher pointed out.

Indeed, Kelli's naked body was squirming about quite a bit. The one part of her that wasn't moving was her wrists. The teacher had no trouble fitting the second spike against Kelli's arm and driving it home. Kelli howled wildly.

"Please hold your ankles still while I bind them," the teacher said firmly.

Kelli did her best to comply. But it was hard to hold still. She was in so much pain!

"I should have done this before I nailed you," Miss Hutchinson admitted. But she managed to get Kelli's ankles bound to the main beam of the cross, one on each side.

"I'm putting the ankle nails through the sides, for greater stability," the teacher explained. The class watched in fascination. Kelli was beginning to calm down, to master her pain.

She cried out as the ankle spikes went in. But she didn't scream nearly as hard as she had when the teacher had nailed her hands.

Two football players came forward to lift the cross. Kelli's breath caught in her throat as the cross rose from the ground. She had to fight to remain conscious.

Most of her weight was now on the nails which ran through her wrist, her hand and her ankles. The pain was tremendous. The rope at her wrists bore some of the weight, though, and that helped.

The two boys planted her cross in its hole. Kelli was beautifully crucified, ready to experience a slow death.

"Now, at this point, most of Kelli's pain is being caused by the nails in her body," the teacher remarked. "Kelli, how do you feel?"

Her young face was wet with tears. "It hurts. Oh, God, Miss H, it hurts so much!"

"Can you take it?" the teacher asked sharply.

Kelli swallowed hard. She had to be strong. "Yes," she said firmly.

"Good girl. All right, class, let's go back inside. We'll check on her again after school."

When the class returned, Kelli was bright pink. She was very fair skinned, and her naked body had been under the merciless New Mexico sun for hours. Her slender frame was drenched with sweat. She was terribly thirsty.

"May I have some water, please?" she croaked.

"Of course not. As you can see, class, exposure is a key component of crucifixion. It's not uncommon for victims to die of thirst, which is an extremely unpleasant way to go. Kelli, how are your arms holding up?"

"They hurt...right one's OK, pretty stable. Left one's torn some..." The hole in her palm was indeed much larger than it had been.

"So remember to tie your victim to the cross if you plan to nail her palms," Miss Hutchinson said. "Are there any questions?"

Paul raised his hand. "How long will she last?"

"In this heat? I doubt she'll make it to sunset tomorrow," Miss Hutchinson replied. "But don't worry, we'll check on her again in the morning. Good night, Kelli."

Kelli was barely conscious when they returned. The teacher slapped her across the face, hard, to wake her up. "Good morning, Kelli. How are you doing today?"

"Can't...breathe..." Kelli gasped

"Very good. Class, Kelli has now started to asphyxiate. To breathe on the cross, a woman constantly has to pull her torso up. Eventually her muscles become exhausted, and she simply can't do it any longer. So you see, crucifixion really incorporates a number of tortures."

She ticked them off on her fingers as she named them. "The nails. Sunburn. Dehydration. Slow suffocation. These different agonies work together to ensure maximum suffering for the victim. Are you in a great deal of pain now, Kelli?"

"Yes," she whimpered. The affirmation seemed woefully inadequate.

"Would you like me to take you down? If we get you to a hospital soon, you'll probably live."

Kelli thought of Jenny, who had demeaned herself by begging for mercy, only to have Miss Hutchinson refuse it. "No, I'll stay," she decided.

"I'm very proud of you, Kelli," the teacher beamed. "You get an A+ for the term. I know you're having trouble breathing right now. But it's still only first stage asphyxia. I think you'll be fine until after school, and I'd like you to spend another day under the sun. We'll come back this afternoon and finish you off, all right?"

After the second day, Kelli was too parched to speak. Her tongue was thick and dry, her lips cracked and bleeding. Her flesh was lobster-red from head to toe. Kelli's tortured skin had been burnt to a crisp for the second straight day. Her small, naked breasts quivered as she tried to breathe. Respiration was, by now, quite difficult for her.

"Kelli is now very near terminal asphyxia," the teacher pointed out. "She is also nearly dead from dehydration. Although we could leave her to strangle, I thought we'd be merciful and whip her to death, since she has done such an excellent job for us today."

The teacher produced a heavy, weighted flail. "Paul, would you care to do the honors?" Kelli closed her eyes. She was glad it would be him.

Paul stepped forward and took the flail. "I've dreamed about this for so long," he whispered to Kelli. She could only nod.

She closed her eyes and tried to scream as the flail came down across her burnt belly. But her throat was too dry. Nothing came out.

Paul lashed into her ruthlessly, punishing her tender, red flesh. She had no tears to cry. She could only accept the abuse.

Paul's enthusiasm was incredible. He really wanted to hurt her, as much as he had wanted to fuck her. More.

His desire, his need, made the pain good for her. It was so intimate. It was just like making love with him a second time, except that this time it was better, because it hurt more, and because it lasted longer.

As Paul rained an especially brutal series of strokes onto her sunburnt nipples, Kelli came violently. He moved down, whipping her belly. He was whipping her so fast, and she was already almost strangled that she couldn't catch her breath!

Was she dying? She glanced at her teacher, who nodded. Yes. It was time.

She closed her eyes, threw her head back, and let her lips twist in a silent scream. The weighted flail was turning her firm, young belly to jelly. She felt something rupture inside.

She tried to breathe, but couldn't. She prayed that Paul would move back to her breasts. She needed to die with his whip across her nipples.

He read her mind. The flail found both nipples simultaneously. They ruptured, squirting blood like milk.

Kelli's head rolled forward onto her chest. She had stopped breathing. "Thank you, Paul," Miss Hutchinson said softly. "That's all for today, class."
Just curious: Is there any chance of a continuation? Like another student? Loved what you did.
 
Just curious: Is there any chance of a continuation? Like another student? Loved what you did.
It was written by Marquis, not me. He did a little series on this class and the teacher Miss Hutchinson. I would be hesitant to add to his creation, being as how I'm not sure I could do it justice. But I can look through the other crux stories he wrote and see what else I could post here in the next few days if you like.
 
Susie's Choice

"It's time, Susie. Put your hands up against the crossbeam, please."

The young blonde began to sob softly. Her rosy cheeks glistened with tears. "No, please...I'm so scared..."

"I know, Susie. You have every right to be scared. You face a very difficult choice, probably the hardest choice you've confronted in your eighteen years of life. There's no easy way out for you. So take a few moments and think it over. To help you reach your decision, let me just remind you of what's at stake."

In front of the cross was a large television monitor, which I now switched on. The screen showed a stunning blonde who looked very much like an older version of Susie. She had the same pert little nose, the same pouting lips, the same warm, chocolate eyes.

But whereas Susie's torso sported only the barest hints of breasts, the breathtaking blonde on the screen was endowed with two generous spheres of firm mammary meat. The older woman wore a skimpy, powder-blue string bikini, matching stiletto heels, and a very tight noose. Her wrists were bound tightly behind her back.

"Oh, God, Kristy!" Susie whimpered.

"Yes, Kristy's in a good deal of trouble, isn't she?" I agreed. "But you can help her, Susie. All you have to do is let me crucify you. Now, I want to give you plenty of time to think this over. I don't want to rush you. So let's do it like this…”

“We'll wait twenty minutes. If during that time, you can find the courage to save your sister, simply raise your hands up against the crossbeam. I'll drive the nails through your palms. Then I'll go into the other room and release your sister.”

“If after twenty minutes your hands are still resting at your sides, then I will have no choice but to push this button,"--here I showed her my remote control--"which will open the trapdoor beneath Kristy's feet. Then we can both watch her hang. I imagine I'll enjoy it somewhat more than you will. Do you know much about nooses? What I've tied for Kristy is a very slow noose. It'll probably take her about half an hour to die. And she'll be in agony the whole time."

"If I let you crucify me," Susie whispered. "What happens after the nails go in?"

"Well, you can expect to live for about three days. On the first day, I'll just let you experience the cross by letting you feel the nails in your hands. On the second day, I'll probably run some electric current through the nails to add to your suffering. On the third day, I think I'd like to gut you. Oh, and I'll probably rape you several times during the torture."

"I can't," Susie sobbed. "Oh, God, I just can't..."

"I understand, Susie. And I'm sure Kristy understands, too. Look at her, wondering if she's going to hang. Does she look scared to you? She looks pretty brave to me. But you know her better than I do. Maybe we should tell her that she's going to hang; give her some time to get used to the idea. Do you want to tell her, or should I?"

"No, wait!" Susie cried. "I...I haven't decided yet."

"Of course. Take your time."

For the next fifteen minutes I simply relaxed and enjoyed the young woman's psychic torment. She looked at me. She looked at the screen, at her sister who sweated and squirmed and waited to be hanged. She looked down at her own hands, trying to imagine what it would feel like as the steel spikes entered her tender young flesh. And so on.

"Time's up, Susie," I said at last. "Don't worry, I'm sure Kristy will forgive you."

I lifted the remote control. "NO!" Susie screamed. "No, please. I...I'll do it," she sobbed, raising her quivering hands up towards the crossbeam.

"I'm proud of you, Susie," I said, putting down the remote and picking up a mallet. "That took a lot of courage. You've made a brave sacrifice. But then, that's what being crucified is all about it, isn't it?"

I placed the first nail in the center of Susie's trembling palm and raised the mallet. "Will it hurt much?" Susie whispered.

"Of course it will, Susie. I'm about to drive a steel spike through your palm," I reminded her.

I drove the nail deep into her flesh. One stroke put the nail through her hand. But it required several more to embed the spike in the wood of the cross.

Susie screamed wildly the whole time. Her cries were the high-pitched, satisfying sounds of a tortured teenager. Her screams didn't change much as I nailed her other palm, though I suspect that her pain did increase.

"Good girl, Susie. You're almost there. I just have to remove the stool, and then you'll be fully crucified."

I had supplied young Susie with a footstool, since that was the only way she could reach the crossbeam of the crucifix. Now I pulled the stool out from under her feet. And suddenly, Susie's full weight came down on the nails in her hands.

This time, her screams did change. Her first cries had spoken of shock and dismay. These were howls of pure pain, the blinding shrieks of an agony far deeper than anything she had ever experienced.

"Stay right there, Susie," I said with a smile. "I'm going to turn Kristy loose."

"You're really gonna let her go?" Susie gasped.

I looked at her reproachfully. "Of course I am. I always keep my word, Susie."

Moments later, Susie watched on the video screen as I entered the gallows chamber. I removed Kristy's noose, unbound her wrists and showed her to the exit. She wasted no time departing.

Had we been living a decade earlier, Kristy would now have gone running to the police. But I had committed no crime. I had simply kidnapped her, bound her, and tied a noose around her neck.

Even what I was about to do to young Susie was no more than a misdemeanor: "inappropriate use of sexual resources." In legal jargon, this meant that I was about to snuff out a young woman's life.

I returned to Susie. She was sobbing softly to herself. She was clearly in tremendous agony. "I won't add to your torture until tomorrow," I assured her.

I sat back to enjoy the show. She was so young, so perfect. Her bare, budding breasts glistened with sweat.

Her sleek, supple form twisted erotically on the cross. She had stopped screaming. Now she treated me to a series of sweet, helpless whimpering sounds. Her palms were sticky with blood.

Over the course of that first day, the pain gradually spread from her hands up her arms, into her shoulders and torso. I watched it happen. With a practiced eye, one can tell exactly where a woman is suffering.

Her body tells all, by the tightness of its tendons and muscles. She wasn't having any trouble breathing yet. But she was obviously suffering greatly as she fought for air. It is a constant struggle for a crucified woman to pull herself up, as she must if she wants to keep breathing.

Watching the show made me tremendously hard. I availed myself of Susie three times that first day. The first time was the best, for I discovered to my delight that she was a virgin. Popping her cherry allowed me to torture her in a new way.

She screamed as I penetrated her hymen and entered her dry, unready cunt. Good. I had managed to hurt her with my cock, even beyond her extant pain. It didn't take long for me to come inside her tremendously tight twat.

I lasted much longer the second and third times, though. I had the feeling that these repeat performances didn't hurt Susie nearly as much as the first fuck had. Indeed, on the third occasion, she wrapped her strong, young legs around my waist, as if in response to some deep sex instinct which told her body that any man inside her must be her lover.

I left Susie crucified for the night. When I returned in the morning, I could tell that she had not slept at all. "Please..." she whispered. “Just kill me..."

I laughed as I attached the electrical cables to her nails. Running the juice straight through her hands really spiced things up for the second day.

Usually by the second day of crucifixion, the girl starts to wear out. But any girl, no matter how exhausted she is, will get moving if you send a nice, strong jolt of current through her palms.

Susie kept screaming all through her second day of torture. Her movements were tremendously exciting. She spent the day twitching and convulsing, her body wracked with incredible spasms of electric agony. The shocks made her pink nipples stand straight up.

I had to turn down the juice to fuck her. Even then, I could still feel it a little. But of course, it was much, much worse for her.

Her cunt was a fairly good conductor. But by the time the current reached my cock, it was too weak to give me more than a small fraction of her pain. Frankly, I liked the fact that I was getting a little taste of the agony she was feeling. It gave me a better sense of the hell she must be going through. I raped her three times the second day as well.

I left the current on all night, despite or perhaps because of her repeated pleas for mercy. I left the amperage fairly low, because I didn't want to take a chance that she might die before morning. Still, even the low current brought her tremendous agony, particularly since she was now in the advanced stages of crucifixion.

As I left her for the evening, I could see pain all the way down her torso, in her belly, in her thighs. It was getting harder and harder for her to breathe, too. She was beginning to strangle under her own weight.

She was still alive the next morning, much to my delight. I assumed, however, that her time was short. And so I took a large, curved blade and began to gut her, slicing her abdomen open below her ribcage, drawing the cut down to just above her cunt.

Working quickly and efficiently, I pulled her skin back and began to remove her guts. I found that I had to turn the current off during this operation because the shocks made her twitch too much. Once her intestines and stomach had been removed, I sewed her up and switched the juice back on.

She began to convulse again, partly from the electricity, but also because she was now beginning to go into shock. I noted with approval that I had made her waist much more narrow by removing her guts. Her tiny, girlish breasts now appeared quite large.

The sight of her crucified, gutted body was too much for me. I entered her again for the last time. Her cunt spasms told me that she was dying.

I fucked her deeply and hard, desperate to come into her as she died. I reached over to turn up the current. It hurt, but it would be worth it if I could get her to die as I came.

Susie opened her mouth in a wordless scream. I saw that she was unable to breathe. Good. She was strangling to death.

I massaged her gutless belly, feeling the electric current as it coursed through her. I listened to the sounds of a tortured girl trying to breathe. And I came into her one last time as her body quivered and expired.
 
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Again a very sadistic story, you know how you pick (and write as well yourself) the greatest stories Riwa.
 
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