Story of Sophia

[THW]

There are at least four stories on my site which are attempts at alternate versions of the Story of - yeah, me and a thousand other fanfic authors.

Two of them are part of a whole set of stores centred on a Roissy-a-like club called the Castle (I put links to those stories in this thread).

About ten years ago, I made a couple of 'sketch' stories to see if I could make a story where the girl did almost all the work herself - where there was no institution, only a loose group of abusers who passed girls around and kept them 'up to scratch'. The sketches were OK, one of them among the more popular stories on the site, but I never found a way to continue onward.

Until now.

In the past 24 hours I've published two new episodes, the second of which I am rather pleased with, so I thought I would share.
(I know some ppl would rather I post whole stories here, but I've over 200, and my site is free, with no tracking, no ads, no signup, so I hope you'll let me off).

Story of S - (older sketch) - Part 1
Story of S - (older sketch) - Part 2
Story of Sophia - new episode - Part 3
Story of Sophia - new episode - Part 4

Here's a few pictures, too:

 

[THW]

 

[SirMGBZ]

the past 24 hours I've published two new episodes, the second of which I am rather pleased with, so I thought I would share.

I can’t wait to read them!

 

[THW]

I can’t wait to read them!

I'm very pleased with the way this story is going. Already a thousand words into the next episode (although not sure i'll have much time to finish it for a while now - don't hold your breath!).

I think I may have my girl who will, without being or becoming any sort of slut, offer herself beautifully into cruelty and degradation, at the same time with the minimum of baggage. Just a girl and some abusers. No guarantees, no relationships, just extreme experiences, and her dealing with the consequences, with no-one to care for her, no-one to rely upon.

DeSade, minus the (pretence of?) innocence.
Réage, minus the obsession with lurv.

Of course, not making any claims as to quality of literature. Just that i'm getting to the essence of what i want to write, perhaps.

Did you ever read Lea Anderson? Bikers girl? Has something of the same flavour.

 

[SirMGBZ]

Okay, I’ve just caught up with parts one and two, and about to begin part three.

Outsourcing work, as always, mon frere!

 

[SirMGBZ]

Quick note w.r.t. part three. You have a paragraph beginning with “In any case, something moved inside her, something determined and powerful and determined”

Is she so determined she has to think it twice? ;-)

 

[THW]

Quick note w.r.t. part three. You have a paragraph beginning with “In any case, something moved inside her, something determined and powerful and determined”

Is she so determined she has to think it twice? ;-)

Thanks for the catch! One of the reasons I like having my stories on my own site is that I can continually edit and improve - I'll deal with that!

More importantly, thanks for reading, and for the appreciation! I'm assuming the spillchucker 'corrected' outsourcing from some more appropriate word! Possibly even outstanding? - which would be high praise indeed.

 

[SirMGBZ]

Okay, just finished parts three and four. Your writing continues to be excellent, my good sir!

I am definitely hooked, and waiting with eager anticipation for the next chapter!

And yes, the never to be sufficiently damned autocorrect took outstanding and made it outsourcing.

 

[THW]

Okay, just finished parts three and four. Your writing continues to be excellent, my good sir!

I am definitely hooked, and waiting with eager anticipation for the next chapter!

And yes, the never to be sufficiently damned autocorrect took outstanding and made it outsourcing.

You're very kind, and of course I am so glad to hear you're looking forward to the next chapter.

Working on it!