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The Contest (a whipping story)

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The story is set in GRRM's fantasy world, in Yunkai before the Valyrian conquest.

Part 1/10:

Malia

Malia was hearing the roars from her cell and was terrified. She thought she would be prepared but the fear started accumulating within her as a weed ever since she was transported to the arena’s underground the previous evening, as the darkness crept from the eastern wastelands. The prospect of a new life of calm, luxury and never ending joy seemed but a distant desert mirage, a dream that she might never live on to experience. It was that dream that kept her alive in the long year of never ending training and torture. She dreamt of the strong freeborn sons she would bear, while the whips tore up her flesh, she dreamt of the beautiful freeborn daughters she would raise while she was hanging from chains in the dungeon, she dreamt of the sunny villa she would have, while she was running to her last breath in the courtyard, while she was pulling the heavy millstone, while she was lifting heavy loads.

Captured from her native Naath by Ghiscari slavers as a baby, she had been a slave in Yunkai throughout her conscious life. She had become her training as a bed slave early on and had grown a tight, vigorous and strong girl, despite being delicately built and slim. Her toned muscles gave strength unexpected for such a small-bodied woman. Such strength was a valuable asset, as resilience and endurance were usually not found in delicate sex slaves like her, and she was well-kept with the prospect of bringing a huge profit for her master. When her master Tizdaur zo Kurak had told her that he would select her for the next year’s whipping contest, she fainted in terror, earning a vicious flogging, “just the beginning of your training,” as she was told.

Malia had never seen it, but she knew that the whipping contest was the culmination of the Harpy Festivities in Yunkai, a highly expected event throughout the whole Ghiscari Empire, graced at times by the Emperor himself. Held on the last day of the week-long festivities in the Great Arena, it was the only paid spectacle, yet the 50,000-thousand structure was always full to the brim, she knew. Fortunes were gained and lost among nobility, citizenry, traders, slavers and artisans. Malia was well aware that the winner was given her freedom, a villa on the Isle of Cedars, hefty yearly allowance, the chance to marry at will and her children to join the ranks of the Empire’s petty nobility. The losers would die at the whipping posts, scourged to death. The five contestants would be flogged until only one remained alive.

The training for the contest lasted a year, an arduous and painful period for the selected girls, and expensive and at times anxious period for the masters. Malia’s endurance had to be trained to perfection with physical activities all day long, every day, and vicious whippings once a week. She had been whipped with a 14-foot dragonwhip, multi-thronged scourges, leather bullwhips, heavy knouts. She had been lashed on the back, the bottom, the legs, the breasts, the belly, the pussy. She had been knocked to unconsciousness, in the first months she thought she would die under the lash then and there, and – more than once – wished she would. But her overseers were experienced and always knew her limits. During her first flogging with a mere leather bullwhip, she had fainted at the 36th lash. At the end of her training, she could endure in full consciousness almost 50 strokes of the dragonwhip – an instrument so vicious that it was not actually used in the contest in order slow down the deaths and squeeze every bit of suffering. She hoped it would be enough but she had heard that in the past decade all contests had been won by the slave girls of Xiro mo Dunghar.

After each flogging, she had been treated with an ointment from Asshai, known as the Healer. The obnoxious dark substance burned the body like hot irons and had to be applied with Malia chained so that she would not remove the burning liquid from her skin, but in four to six days all open wounds would fully heal without any scars, restoring the skin as smooth as a newborn’s. Concocted from ingredients found in the Shadow Lands, the Healer could only be obtained at great cost and in small quantities, making the training process extremely expensive for the masters and limiting the possibility to organize similar events more frequently, or with more girls.

And now she stood in the cell under the Great Arena, terrified and wondering if she would ever leave this accursed place alive.
 
Part 2/10:

Zorak

Zorak was gleeful. He had heard so much of the whipping contest of Yunkai and now he had finally made it. He was there. Just the thought of the spectacle, the twisting naked bodies, the way they would slowly cover with bloody stripes made him hard as a rock, his mouth filled with saliva. It cost him a small fortune to come here from the capital, and to buy two places – for himself and for his slave girl Marada. The richest spectators usually bought a place for their slaves and would fuck them or have them swallow their cocks while the five contestants were whipped in full view. Slaves were often chosen, as the wives or lovers would prefer to enjoy the spectacle below, and would buy their own places if they could, but the slave girls had no option but to satisfy their masters’ whims.

Zorak had always enjoyed the whipping and suffering of beautiful women but despite being a rather well-off merchant, he could not afford to have his three slave girls whipped as often, and even less – as viciously – as he wanted. A slight whipping without permanent marks was all he could do. Buying a new beautiful slave girl to replace a permanently damaged one was expensive and the fabled Healer was out of question for the likes of him. He would often go to the local square, or to the Great Plaza of Ghis, to watch public whippings but his dream was to attend the famous Yunkai contest.

It was common wisdom in the Empire that the Yunkaii were the masters of the whip. Whipping was widespread throughout the whole Ghiscari Empire, but it was the Yunkaii that had perfected it as an art. Training high-quality bed slaves was a long and delicate process, where balance was of key importance. The slavers of Yunkai had to navigate between the need to command obedience, strike fear, obtain performance and keep the slaves healthy. There were many widely different qualities they sought to obtain from their human commodity – shy or willful, strong or obedient, gentle or ride, innocent or perverse – there was market for every taste. Whipping was the preferred method of torture during the training, as other means could often be harmful, inefficient or too damaging. There were even some relatively affordable ointments for slightly bloody whippings without major wounds that could be very painful for the victim and leave no permanent marks in the end. It was no wonder that the harpy city’s emblem was holding a whip and chains.

Zorak had been in Yunkai for a fortnight and even the ordinary public whippings on the city squares seemed better. Today was the long awaited culmination. He marveled at the arena, smaller than the one in the capital, but still impressive, built of yellow stones and bricks. A wooden platform was raised in the middle with five pairs of thin ebony columns neatly arranged in a row, which chains at the top and the bottom awaiting the contestants. The top of each pair was painted in red, green, yellow, blue and white, representing the contest colours of the slaves’ owners.

The arena was slowly filling with spectators since the early morning. Petty merchants were roaming the passages between the aisles offering refreshing drinks, food and even cushions. Zorak’s place was almost in front of the column pair and he would be seeing the girls’ fronts. The Emperor was not attending this year’s festivities, so the contest began with the arrival of the city’s governing council in the late morning.
 
Part 3/10:

Malia

Malia shuddered under the white silk garment when she heard the mighty sound of bronze trumpets, heralding the arrival of the highest ranked attendants. The moment of her ordeal was inevitably approaching, the gruesome finale of a year of pain and suffering. Forever, either in life or in death. The roaring of the public was so prevalent that she did not hear the steps of the guards coming to bring her to her doom. She heard the key entering the lock and stood up while four guards entered the cell. Malia had no choice but to follow the first two of them, with the last pair walking right behind her. As the buzzing noise consistently grew, they stopped at a heavy wooden door with light penetrating dimly through its frames. Shortly, the trumpets blew again, the door slowly opened, the guards moved forward and so did Malia. The uproar from the arena was deafening as she made her way through the entrance into the light.

The light hurt at first, after the night and morning spent in the gloom of the underground cell, blinding her for a moment. Her eyes widened at the sight. She had never seen so many people in one place. Row and after row, the structure loomed enormous around her, higher than she thought was possible. Apart from the ten feet high yellowish lower layer of bricks, Malia could barely see any stone, brick or wood. So full was the arena, that it resembled a circular wave of people ready to crush down upon the sandy floor below. Men and women dressed in all colours imaginable were all on their feet cheering enthusiastically, as Malia was making her first steps in the open. Amidst the monstrous grandeur of the arena, at her front, stood a wooden platform over ten feet high rising a little over the lower brick level of the arena. The five black columns pairs gave her shivers. The last one from her right was topped in white, her colour. Malia knew she could die on the chains hanging from the top of these very pillars. What was certain was that she would suffer horrifically, win or lose.

She turned her head to her left and took a quick glimpse of the other four contestants but only noticed their garments in red, blue, yellow and green. They too were surrounded by four guards and were heading to their ordeal by the slow pace of the wardens. In what seemed like an eternity, Malia reached the stairs of the platform and followed the first guard pair, as they climbed up. Once there, she saw low on the platform five braziers placed behind each column with glowing embers inside and several thin iron rods buried within. She was aware of their purpose – to bring the contestants back to consciousness, or to certify if they were dead.

Malia followed the guards to the white-topped pillars at the platform’s right side and stopped. Her stomach clenched as each of the guards took one of her limbs and stretched them to the shackles at the top and the bottom. She felt the tight iron locks close around the flat of her hands almost simultaneously with the cold grip of the chains around her ankles below, leaving her in an X position, with the hands and legs tightly spread diagonally, but leaving enough space for the body to wriggle under the lash. The cheering grew louder and louder as Malia was strapped in her defenseless position. She could see the large tribune for the highest dignitaries straight in front of her, with the highest nobility and the richest slavers from Yunkai and all over the Ghiscari Empire in their richly decorated tokars sitting with their slave girls surrounded by the colourful crowds at the sides.

Another wave of deafening cheers and the muted creaking coming from the wooden steps behind could only mean that the hangmen were climbing on the platform. Before long, an enormous man emerged from her left and stood at her front, facing the crowd. Malia had never seen a back as muscled or as hairy as the one that monster of a man had. She looked in fear and her stomach clenched even stronger as amidst the uproar of thousands of throats he rose his right arm, wide as a small log, holding a large leather whip. When he finally faced Malia, she could see his gaze, measuring her with a mixture of malice, professional inquiry and perverse satisfaction. He then moved to her right, his arm reached out to the top of her white gown and with a single strong pull tore it off, exposing her naked body, now covered only with a minute silk loincloth, hanging barely above her sex. The roar reached its climax, as she stood exposed for everyone to see, naked, vulnerable and glistening to the relentless sun. Her tormentor was already behind and Malia prayed to have the strength to survive her ordeal.
 
Part 4/10:

Zorak

Zorak cheered when the heralds blew the bronze trumpets and the members of the council of Yunkai, the temple graces, the priests and distinguished dignitaries from all over the Empire made their solemn entry accompanied by a myriad of slave girls. In moments like this even he, who feared war and battle, was ready to answer the call to arms, if one should even come, to defend Ghiscar and its glorious ways. With the dignitaries having taken their seats in the purpose-built tribune, the entire crowd now gazed expectantly at the five wooden gates behind the platform, where the contestants would make their entry to the arena. The trumpets sounded again and the doors opened.

Zorak saw five women emerge from the darkness behind, each surrounded by four guards and wearing dresses in the five colours of the pillars. The contestants were at the distant side from Zorak’s place and the platform slightly obscured the view, but he knew he had the perfect position to marvel at their bodies, once they climbed on the scaffold. Keeping with the pace of the guards, the slave girls slowly approached the platform and gradually disappeared, for a time, from Zorak’s gaze. Amidst the mighty noise around, he soon saw them reemerge, as they were climbing upstairs from behind and then headed to the ebony pillars. Each of the guards grabbed a limb, chained the women on the shackles in an X position, and then left the platform, leaving the five contestants tightly secured, still in their garments.

Zorak then joined the cheers, as the five hangmen climbed up, stood in front of their soon-to-be victims, and raised their whips with one hand. They were all muscled men, with years of experience in inflicting pain and suffering, all of them merciless and tireless, shirtless above and with black pants below. Zorak took a professional look at the whips – he knew that they were not going to use the most vicious ones, but also knew that this was not out of mercy. These were seven-foot leather single-thong whips of hardened ox skin, designed to cause tremendous pain, while slowly bruising the skin deeper and deeper. He looked at his slave girl Marada, who appeared both mesmerized and terrified, aware that there was always a chance she would meet a similarly gruesome doom. “Perhaps, she will,” he thought with a slight smirk.

After taking the spectators’ ovations, each hangman moved to the right of his future canvass and simultaneously tore off the girls’ gowns with a single abrupt pull, leaving them with a tiny loincloth amidst the enthusiastic roar coming from all directions. Zorak’s cock swelled as he took an eager look of each displayed woman and the heralds began announcing their origin. “In white, representing the most noble house of Kurak, is a slave from the island of Naath,” Zorak heard while gazing with satisfaction the beauty strapped between the first pair of columns. With a skin of light brown, an innocent slightly elongated face with big crystal clear green eyes and silky black hair with gentle long curls, the slave in white was small, delicate and thin, almost like a child. Yet, she was a grown woman, with an elastic and slightly muscled body, shapely middle sized breasts with dark chestnut-coloured areolas and juicy looking nipples. She had a thin waist, which Zorak was impatient to see dancing under the lash, long legs for her height and slightly elongated torso, where he could see the ribs moving as she was breathing. There was some determination that Zorak could feel hidden under the petite frame of this contestant.

“In green, representing the most noble house of Yoznag, is a slave from the barbarian lands to the west of the Narrow Sea,” the heralds declared and Zorak’s eyes turned to the right to take a careful look to the magnificent blonde with the green loincloth. Much taller than the Naathy slave, the proudly looking Westerosi was blue-eyed with magnificent shiny golden hair and light skin complexion. “It probably reached her waist before,” Zorak thought, “What a pity to cut such a magnificent hair.” He was aware that the hair of all the girls had been carefully cut just above the shoulders, so that it would not soften the impact of the whip. The blonde’s body, while still slender, was visibly more robust than the one of the White slave. She had large round-shaped breasts protruding forwards, with big inviting rosy areolas, crowning her large chest. Her body narrowed at the waist and widened again at her shapely hips. While she had no visible abs, Zorak could see strength in her smooth body.

Zorak now turned to the next girl in the row, while the herald announced the contestant in yellow, a splendid example of the fabled beauties from the Summer Isles. With a skin of cocoa brown, she had a smooth oval face, slightly wide nose, big eyes in saturated orange that he had never seen. Her face was crowned in dense and strong ebony hair. She was the only contestant, where he could see curly black hair protruding over the tiny loincloth and covering the armpits in a dense bush. She was almost as tall as the Westerosi woman and had even larger breasts, slightly bouncing up and down in the rhythm of her breathing, with large dark brown areolas and long nipples in matching colour. Strongly-built, Zorak marveled at her muscled arms and legs, spread securely by the chains. He could see her muscled ribs and the abs further down, with her pubescent hair slightly reaching up the lowermost two abs.

“In red, representing the most noble house of Dunghar, is a slave from Rhoynar.” Zorak gazed with inquiring curiosity at the contestant trained by the winner of every competition in the last decade. A stunning beauty, her face was surrounded with silky black hair; she had determined large eyes of deepest black, crowed by willful eyebrows from above. A delicate nose and full red lips complemented the grace of her face. Olive-skinned, she was tall and slender, though seemingly a little shorter that the slave girls in green and yellow. Her breasts were a bit smallish, slightly protruding from her flexible body, with long and already erected nipples. Zorak could count every rib on her body and could see more resilience and plasticity than muscles, although it appeared she did not lack physical training either. Abs were barely visible, yet she was lean and strong in the belly. Although a bit elongated, her body was as feminine as anyone’s dream, with a narrow waist and gently protruding hips below.

With his cock swollen and already moist at the tip, Zorak studied the final woman, whose origins would be unmistakable even without the announcement. In blue stood a slave from Valyria, a volcanic peninsula to the west of Ghiscar that was home to modest communities of shepherds. With a gentle face, that contestant had the silver hair and deep purple eyes of many of her countrymen. Naturally strong and willful, the Valyrians were not a common commodity in the bed slave market, as even for the skillful Yunkaii slavers it was very difficult to break them without causing permanent damage. While admiring the perfectly balanced beauty of the Blue slave, with smooth white skin, middle-sized slightly pointy breast with erotic rosy tips, arousing ribbed chest, gentle curves and inviting hips, Zorak wondered how much of her strength and will had been peeled off her until she was made tame enough to be considered viable for the contest.

With the girls in full display for everyone to marvel and study, the gambling began. The arena dealers moved along the aisles to write down the bets. “A hundred honors to the Red slave! Ten thousand to the Red slave! Five thousand to the Blue slave!” Betting shouts and heated discussions surrounded Zorak from every direction. “No way Dunghar will win another one,” he heard a man talking from above, “I will bet on the Yellow, just look at her physique.” “Physique is rarely a leading factor here,” someone replied, “Dunghar knows what he’s doing.” The man to the left of Zorak bet ninety honors to the Red slave, as the dealer was approaching. Zorak wanted to bet a small amount of money for the thrill, and not on the Red – the returns there were less than one honor for every hundred betted.

The determination he felt in the Naathy slave had captivated his mind at the very first glance and had not left him while he was measuring up the other women. When he heard that the White slave would offer the highest return of all – over a double and a half for every honor – he knew that if betting boldly he could walk out from the arena a rich man, and could even afford to have one of his slave girls – say Marada – whipped to death and replaced with three more. “Ten thousand honors on the White slave” Zorak heard himself announcing his bet. The overexcitement made him forget his initial thoughts of a symbolic bet. “And if I lose, I will either have to sell all of my slave girls and the house, or have my entire business ruined.” Zorak quickly discarded the unwanted thought.
 
Part 5/10:

Malia

Chained and exposed, Malia could almost feel the hangman behind her and thought that the sooner the ordeal would begin the better. The expectation turned a torture by itself, as the noise from the crowds lessened somehow. Malia could see that the spectators were eagerly looking at the platform, some gorging their eyes at the naked slaves girls, some looking intently, as if studying ancient papers, others chatting and pointing at them. As if after eternity, the heralds loudly announced the betting odds. Of course, that was an inevitable part of the entertainment and would prolong the beginning even more. She shivered and cold waves ran down her spine when she heard that the White slave, herself, was given the slimmest chance of winning by the dealers. Malia was certain that Xiro mo Dunghar’s slave girl would be the favourite, but was not prepared that her chances would be evaluated so low. What could possibly have they seen in the other women that she did not have? Was she not trained enough? She took a quick glance to the blonde at her left, standing tall and lean, her large breasts protruding forward from her shapely body. Malia could not see well the girls beyond but the Green slave next to her looked big and vigorous. The arena now sounded like beehive, men and women talking, discussing, shouting bets, dealers moving through the aisles among freemen and pleasure slaves. She could hear some louder bets amidst the indistinguishable chattering but few were on her.

Slowly, the buzzing sound of tens of thousands of voices died out, the dealers exited the aisles and made for their seats. An intense silence fell over the arena, the first time Malia could not hear anything since she woke up early in the morning. All stares were fully focused on the bound women. Somewhere far away from behind, Malia heard the muffled and yet loud blow on a drumhead, as if a giant was beating a huge drum. She sensed the man behind her move, heard the whistling sound of the whip and in a moment it landed on her shoulders with incredible strength, leaving a fiery sensation on her bare skin. The blow was vicious and strong, but did not surprise her. She had had worse, much worse. “One!” she heard a loud announcement. She clenched her teeth, her lips contorted in pain, but did not cry out. Nor did any of the other girls. The distant drum blew again and the whip fell again over her shoulders, crisscrossing the reddening stripe, adding a new trace of fire high on her back. “Two!” The next lash landed further down, the tip of the whip licking her ribs, followed by a blow at waist , making her body arch forward, as the heralds announced the “four”. She heard the whistling of the rod, followed by a string of fire that connected with the last two stripes in the middle section of her back.

The pain was horrible, leaving an uncontrollable facet of pain on her beautiful face after each cruel blow, but from the inside she could bare it without a hitch. The months of training clicked in and Malia did not feel as doomed as she did during the long hours of anticipation. As the next three lashes landed with tremendous strength on her bare strong back, she felt somehow in control of her body. She really had had worse indeed. The ninth and the tenth blow added new crisscrossing stripes and Malia was wondering how the canvas of her backside looked at the thousands gazes. She noted that many slave girls on the aisles had already knelt in front of their masters, satisfying them with their mouths. Another lash slashed across her shoulders and with the next one the tip of the whip hit her right breast, reaching the nipple, forcing a slight moan of pain and surprise. The twelfth one almost mirrored the previous, hitting the other breast, drawing small droplets of blood and another louder moan, her lips opening as if taking a lover inside. As her body slowly heated by the glowing sun and the merciless beating, she felt the waves of warmth fill in her breasts, hardening her nipples that now tipped like bulky needles from her magnificent bosom. She took the next couple of hits almost with craving, as her body danced under the lash. “Fifteen!” Slash. “Sixteen!” Slash. The seventeenth stroke landed with incredible strength low under her waist and tore the delicate fabric of the tiny loincloth, leaving her glistening and already moist pussy fully exposed for everyone to see. Now standing completely naked, without the slightest cover of decency, Malia felt a sudden uninvited sense of vulnerability but the sensation disappeared with the very next lash, which landed on the buttocks. She heard at least one girl scream to her left. Which one, or how many, she did not know.

She craved for the whip, she loved the whip. Was it not her best friend? Was it not the means of her freedom? Has she ever had a closer connection with anything else throughout her short life? It was not the whip that was cruel; it was the men who wielded it. The whip could not cause suffering on its own, it needed a hand. Could the whip lie to you? Could the whip cheat you? Could the whip enslave you? Four more strokes followed on the gently rounded bottom, bringing the red pattern of crisscrossing stripes further down her slim body. Malia felt these almost as a relief, moving the focus of fiery pain that had started to accumulate on her back to the fleshier cheeks of her arse. She felt her labia swallow and a sense of arousal building up in her clitoris. The twenty-second lash struck her middle back, the tip licking the ribs again, renewing the sense of agony at her back. The next one hit her above through the lower shoulders, into her left breast and the tip cut through the lower part of her brown areola. Malia screamed in pain under the cruelty of the stroke. “Twenty-three!” Another four vicious blows landed on her bare back, adding fiery agony that slowly moved sideways to her ribs, drawing stronger cries from her mouth.

A hit on her waist was then followed by another pair of lashes on her buttocks, and then three more even lower on the upper part of her legs, again diluting the overall pain, while creating new focal points of misery. Her screams had been replaced by moaning at these strokes but the thirtieth again landed high on her bruised back, extracting a loud cry, followed by two more on the exposed back and more wails. Her torment was growing, the ache mounting especially on upper part of her backside, unbearable. “Not unbearable!” Malia told herself. She had withstood this number of lashes with the dragonwhip that could tear up muscles. Yes, it hurt, but could have been much, much worse. “And it will be,” an uninvited thought came and went in her mind. Yet, the almost hidden sensation of pleasure inside her had not left. Amidst the endless suffering and throat-wrenching screams of her countless whippings, Malia had more than once found that pleasure lurking within her soul. Now, she felt it slowly mounting in her despite the agony. When the thirty-third blow slashed again through her shoulders, reached up her right breast and licked the hardened nipple proudly erecting forward, Malia yelled her loudest scream yet and she felt the arousal that was building up in her clitoris explode amidst pain and pleasure she had never had before. So strong was that sensation, that she almost did not feel the three strong hits that brought further havoc on her back.

Then again, the tormentor turned his attention down, trashing her gently protruding bottom with a series of five strokes, slowly turning her buttocks into another focal point of pain. The forty-second lash once again found her back, landing through the web of red stripes, extracting a loud cry of anguish. Four more followed at the top of her legs, under the butt cheeks, which Malia took as a blessing. The set of two lashes across her arse next added to rising tension there. One more was applied at her aching waist amidst her screams. The fiftieth blow struck diagonally across her arched back and Malia felt it almost like a dragonwhip, crying out a loud shriek.
 
Nothing so good as a bit of whip worship!

She craved for the whip, she loved the whip.
Mmmmmm, oh yes, this slave understands this desire, nay, this deep seated need of the divine lash!

Was it not her best friend?
Her lover
Was it not the means of her freedom?
And her doom, hence it’s overwhelming power!
Has she ever had a closer connection with anything else throughout her short life?
No, in fact the whip is her true master.
It was not the whip that was cruel; it was the men who wielded it. The whip could not cause suffering on its own, it needed a hand. Could the whip lie to you? Could the whip cheat you?

The whip never lies or cheats, there is comfort in its unyielding strength!

Could the whip enslave you?

Oh yes, the holy whip definitely can enslave this one to it’s latent power… There is no choice but to obey it - this slave’s flesh will yield it’s suffering and it’s blood to the whip whenever such is demanded… it offers total surrender in exchange for the lash. Even it’s worthless life!
 
Part 6/10:

Zorak

As the dealers retreated, the contest itself was about to begin, the greatest, most expected spectacle of his life. The buzzing noise that had continuously engulfed the arena until then slowly died out, as Zorak’s gaze was moving from girl to girl, feasting on their naked beauty. Finally, he heard the muffled blow of a drum from the distant side of the structure and the hangmen behind the bound slaves swung their whips and brought them forward on the exposed backs of the five women. He heard the slashing sound of heavy leather landing on soft flesh, as the contestants arched forward, lips tightened, eyes closed or wide open in pain. Zorak took his first focus on his betting favourite, the White slave, and as he saw her magnificent torso invitingly move forward, breasts upwards, ribs growing even more prominent in the flexible brown body, he felt confident in his choice. With cock fully erect for minutes, he gestured to Marada with his fingers. She knelt to his left, lifted the bottom of his tokar and started licking his penis with her experienced tongue.

The drum echoes again, the whips rushed forward and the cracking sound on the impacts rang through the arena. Zorak viewed with satisfaction the sculptured body of the Westerosi savage next to his favourite arch, her big breasts bouncing, the green loincloth moving, revealing a momentous glimpse of her rosy vulva. For the third blow, he looked at the hairy black slave in the middle, with the thick black bush overgrowing the tiny yellow silk in front, as she took the lash with shiny white teeth gnashing in a grimace of suffering, her huge tits shaking in almost perverse invitation. Zorak then marveled at the dance of the Red slave, nipples fully erect on the delicate breasts, the pronounced ribs already slightly reddened on both sides, as she took the forth lash. Zorak noticed that the torturers were indeed craftsmen in their art. Although, regrettably, he could not see the backsides of the contestants he had noticed that all the hangmen could direct with ease their whips to land at different angles, thus crisscrossing the stripes, increasing the suffering. “I bet two pieces of silver that the Red bitch will be the first to lose the loincloth,” said the man next to him. Zorak took a careful look at the Valyrian in blue, as her perfectly balanced body moved forward under the sting of the cruel lash. “I will take it,” he said without looking to the man, “I bet on the White.”

Several more exchanges followed among a few men around, but Zorak’s attention was fully on the platform, where the gorgeous bodies writhed under the whips, tits bouncing, ribcages expanding, abs moving under the soft skin, loincloths waving back and forth. At the eight lash the sounds of leather cracking over exposed gentle skin was mixed with muffled moans from the blonde Westerosi, whose eyes, Zorak noticed, were now wide open at the blows, revealing depths of blue. Marada engulfed the tip of his penis in her warm mouth and slowly swallowed deeper and deeper, as the heralds announced the ninth lash. She was carefully moving her head up and down his manhood, when the tenth strike hit the hips of the Red slave, tearing down the loincloth, exposing her fully naked. She had some of the biggest outer lips he had even seen, in a slightly darker olive tone compared to her body complexion, juicy, soft, glistening and aroused. Before Zorak could hold Marada, his cum exploded in her mouth, taking her by surprise, almost choking her. “I will have you whipped for this early finish,” he hissed at her, taking satisfaction with the fear and helplessness in Marada’s eyes. The loss of two pieces of silver meant nothing to him. The sight of the Red slave was worth every piece of silver in the world.

The very next lash saw the blue loincloth of the Valirian slave fall down, revealing an exquisite womanhood, tender and with slightly visible inner lips. Zorak saw no arousal in that beautiful pubis. The twelfth stroke extracted an audible cry from the blond Westerosi, as the whip hit her full left breast and also a moan of mounting pain from the muscular slave from the Summer Isles in the middle. The movement of the five magnificent bodies under the cruel flogging was spectacular, all Zorak had ever wanted and all he had hoped he would witness during the festivities. The bothersome journey from the capital, the small fortune for the seats, it was all worth it, and this was only the beginning. He felt blood filling in his cock again, as hit number fourteen uncovered the Yellow slave in full nakedness. Dense black bush covered a generous portion of her pubic mound but the full labia bellow with visibly protruding inner lips was clean shaven – Zorak supposed that otherwise it could have been counted as an advantage, when the whip would begin to land there later.

Zorak often stared at the lightly brown-skinned girl he bet on, who appeared to be dancing under the rhythm of the whip, like the Red slave, moaning as if in pleasure as much as in pain, as the leather landed on her vulnerable backside. He noticed how her nipples gradually erected like two full pillars crowning the magnificent breasts, unaffected by the mirrored lashes she received that cut at her vibrant areolas. The seventeenth stroke finally revealed her in full, her womanhood so soft, smooth and gentle that Zorak thought that not a single hair had ever grown there. As the next blow hit her buttocks, the girl’s pelvis budged forward, displaying an even better view of her cunt, which Zorak could see was moist and wet, as he was. Marada had already bent again, licking his testicles and rubbing his cock with one hand. He could hear muffled sounds of similar activities around, but his gaze was fixed at the flagellated contestants on the platform.

The seventeenth stroke had also drawn a cry of pain from the muscled full-titted woman in the center. The twentieth tore off the green loincloth of the Westerosi slave, exposing her pink vulva, crowned to Zorak’s surprise with a carefully trimmed gentle bush of saturated golden hairs, small enough to had been concealed by the tiny rug. That one had started to scream at every lash by now. It was a pity he could not see how the backsides of the contestants covered with an ever denser web of red stripes but on the other hand, he would enjoy that same process on their fronts. The twenty-third lash hit the Naathi slave’s left breast, the tip licking the areola, and Zorak heard her first scream. She was the third to cry out loudly. The only sounds coming from the two girls between the red and blue column pairs to the right end of the platform was the slashing impact of the heavy leather of the whips over the moistened defenseless flesh of their lean backsides.

Zorak watched in awe the restrained wriggling motions of the Red slave, the way her well-trained flexible body moved back and forth under the relentless blows, nipples and cunt erected, sweaty skin moving over the ribs, droplets of sweet wetness dripping from her cleft. The occasional moan from her full red lips resembled in Zorak’s ear more one of a bed slave in action than a woman under torture. He could see she was in pain, and yet the pleasure was clearly dominant. Was he wrong to throw so much money on the White slave in the face of such a competitor? Yet, the White slave was doing well. After a few strokes endured in silence, number thirty again extracted a cry, but Zorak also felt that like the Red slave, she too appeared to draw pleasure from her dire predicament. When the thirty-third blow landed on her back and the tip of the whip crashed on her right breast licking the hardened nipple, she yelled with mouth widely open and Zorak saw her squirt, her fluids ejected forward from the aroused womanhood, causing him to again empty himself in Marada’s throat.

The spectacle was gaining heat and Zorak enjoyed every bit of it. He heard the first scream of pain from the Red slave a moment before the count “Thirty-six!” resounded around the arena, indicating the amount of pure agony that was mounting within contestants’ tormented bodies, as the whips kept adding fresh bruises on the bare skin. On both sides of every girl methodically appeared more and more red protrusions from the stripes that covered their backsides from the shoulders almost to the knees, droplets of blood occasionally oozing from the whip marks. By now, loud yells followed most of the strikes that fell on them with seemingly unrelenting strength, gradually wearing off their endurance. The Valyrian was the last one to cry out at lash forty-two. Zorak noticed that she remained the only woman whose cunt had not moistened. Even the savages from Westeros and the Summer Isles had their vulvas wet, though both appeared overcome by the pain, even more so than the three other slaves. With the fiftieth lash applied, the torturers threw down the whips and went on to fasten the five contestants even more for the next stage of the ordeal.
 
OMG! I am absolutely enchanted by this well written story. I love the detailed descriptions of the womens bodies and the effects of the whips on the lovely bodies. I wish I was one tied to the posts although I doubt anyone would bet that I would win.
 
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OMG! I am absolutely enchanted by this well written story. I love the detailed descriptions of the womens bodies and the effects of the whips on the lovely bodies. I wish I was one tied to the posts although I doubt anyone would bet that I would win.
I’m up there alongside you, lovely slave lady! We are to be whipped to death! Unless one of us outlasts the others! Just imagine, trained under the harshest whips for an entire year. At last the final test!

Safe to say @batak_b ’s detailed story has been living rent free in my kinkbrain all week! I already made up an alternative ending, lol!
 
I’m up there alongside you, lovely slave lady! We are to be whipped to death! Unless one of us outlasts the others! Just imagine, trained under the harshest whips for an entire year. At last the final test!

Safe to say @batak_b ’s detailed story has been living rent free in my kinkbrain all week! I already made up an alternative ending, lol!
What an erotic story that would be Loincloth ! In the meantime I will have to be patient until the next chapter of this one is posted.
 
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