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VULTURING VIGNETTE [short crux story][semi-cons.][Roman setting][completed!]

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I've checked: I'be been a user of this forum since like... 15 years? That's somethin'!
I remember a couple of great stories from the 'old days', including Jeddak's monumental "Serpent's Eyes" saga.
And yet, somehow my snuff fetishes drifted away from crucifixions and long sagas.
What really brought me back here, with a vengeance so-to-speak, where @DjEtla's delicious short, self contained crucifixion stories. That was like the end of 2021 (when I casually noticed his great works here).
One of these stories by DjEtla is about a girl named Melita ("Melita on the cross", you can find it also on pixiv in a slightly expanded version), sentenced to be crucified due to her father's stern resolution, and she's very, very afraid of crows feasting on her body as she hangs crucified (she's very good reason to be so scared by that, indeed).
DjEtla is a rather delicate, refined author, capable of perfectly depicting certain scenes with minimal details: I envy him for that, in fact. I heartily recommend all his snuff/bondage stories.
Alas, I'm not delicate, on the contrary I enjoy mixing dark humor with graphic rawness: I find this contrast 'thrillingly unsettling', in a way more scary than utter horror (what scares you most, a brutal murderer with an hockey mask that calls you names, or some polite and cheerful executioners very determined to inflict you agony and death no matter what?).
So, in my story I wanted to maintain the theme of birds feasting on crucified girls, but scaling the sex and the graphicness up a couple of notches: for that I decided that a single crucifee was not enough, so I opted for two pretty gals, their wrists nailed to the same patibulum.
Hope you like it.
It's a short story born out of a rather simple fantasy.


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VULTURING VIGNETTE


The cart creaks as it trundles through the dense, sun-dappled Whispering Woods. The towering trees form a canopy that shrouds the forest path in shadows, the dappled light dancing over the two slave girls seated on the rough wooden planks of the cart. Zenovia and Camilla, bound but otherwise free to move their hands, giggle nervously, their cheeks flushed with a mixture of fear and a strange, illicit thrill. The two Roman soldiers sitting at the front exchange knowing glances, amused by their prisoners’ peculiar behavior.

Zenovia’s slender fingers brush against Camilla’s bare thigh. “This is insane,” she whispers, her voice trembling as much from terror as excitement. “We’re going to be crucified, naked, in the middle of nowhere.”

Camilla smirks, her dark curls bouncing as the cart jolts over a stone. “Together, though!” she chirps, squeezing Zenovia’s hand. “At least we’ll have company. Better than snuffing it alone, don’t you think?”

Behind them, one of the soldiers, Marcus, chuckles and leans back on the cart rail. “Oh, you two are something else,” he says. “Most slaves we take to the cross are weeping or begging. Not you two—you’re giggling like you’re headed to a festival!”

“We’re terrified, thank you very much!”
Camilla snaps, though her grin betrays her. “But you have to admit, there’s something…” She hesitates, looking to Zenovia for backup.

Zenovia blushes furiously but nods. “…Something exciting about it,” she admits. “The thought of being seen, naked, exposed, and helpless… it’s awful but…”

Camilla finishes the thought, her voice dropping to a teasing whisper. “…but also kind of hot.”

The other soldier, Gaius, nearly drops the reins laughing. “By the gods, Marcus, did you hear that? They’re excited to die on the cross!”

Marcus grins, his broad face ruddy from the midday heat. “Excited might be a stretch, but they’re clearly enjoying the attention. You girls should’ve been performers in the arena.”

Camilla rolls her eyes dramatically. “Oh sure, Gaius, Marcus, rub it in. We’re slaves! Not much career choice. And now? We’ll be nailed up for all the forest vultures to see. My ‘career’ ends with them pecking my…” She pauses, biting her lip and gesturing vaguely downward. “…you know… my most precious parts.”

The soldiers burst into laughter. “Your precious parts, eh?” Gaius mocks, wiping a tear from his eye. “Don’t worry, sweetheart. Those vultures’ll appreciate the delicacy.”

Zenovia shudders, the imagery vivid in her mind. She clutches at Camilla’s arm. “Do you think they’ll… really go for our…?”

“Pussies?”
Camilla supplies cheerfully, then immediately wrinkles her nose. “Ugh, Zenovia, don’t make me picture that! But yeah, I suppose. They’re vultures, aren’t they? They don’t care about modesty.”

Zenovia groans, her hands covering her face. “Oh gods, I can’t stop thinking about it now. Them tearing into me while I’m still alive…” Her voice quivers, but her thighs press together instinctively.

Gaius, clearly enjoying the girls’ morbid fascination, leans over the back of the cart. “You’ll be too busy screaming from the nails to worry about the birds right away. Trust me, I’ve seen it. The cross does a fine job of tormenting you before they even show up.”

“Thank you for that comforting thought,”
Camilla snaps sarcastically, though there’s a twinkle of humor in her eye. She nudges Zenovia. “See? We’ll be in agony long before they start nibbling on us.”

Zenovia shoots her a glare but can’t help a nervous laugh. “Oh great. That’s supposed to make me feel better?”

Marcus nudges Gaius with his elbow. “They’re funny, these two. Almost makes me feel bad we have to nail them up.”

“Almost,”
Gaius replies, smirking. “Don’t get soft on me, Marcus. Orders are orders. Besides, they wanted to share a crossbeam. Makes our job easier.”

Camilla grins at Zenovia, ignoring the soldiers. “See? We’re helping! They should be grateful.”

Zenovia giggles despite herself, her fear momentarily forgotten. “Oh yes, let’s make sure our executioners have an easy time killing us. We’re such considerate little sluts.”

The cart jolts to a stop. The clearing ahead is bathed in golden light, the trees around it forming a natural amphitheater. A single, prepared upright stands in the center, its shadow long and ominous. The soldiers hop down, stretching and cracking their knuckles.

Gaius turns to the girls, grinning wickedly. “End of the line, ladies. Time to bare it all—for real this time.”

Camilla takes a deep breath, her fingers intertwining with Zenovia’s. “Well,” she whispers, her voice trembling. “I guess this is it.”

Zenovia squeezes her hand tightly, her other hand nervously brushing over her exposed thighs. “Together,” she says softly. “We’ll do this together.”

Gaius laughs, gesturing to the crossbeam laid on the ground beside the upright. “Hope you two are ready to snuggle. You’ll be nice and close when we nail you.”

Marcus smirks as he pulls a bag of nails from the cart. “Close enough to feel each other squirm.”

Camilla raises an eyebrow, a wry smile playing on her lips. “Oh, don’t worry, soldier boy. We’ve squirmed together plenty before.”

Zenovia gasps, swatting at her friend’s shoulder. “Camilla!”

Camilla giggles, leaning her head against Zenovia’s. “Hey, if we’re going out, I’m going out with a smile.”

As the cart comes to a gentle stop, Marcus and Gaius busy themselves with the unenviable task of preparing the cross, the patibulum laid out on the grassy earth, nails glistening in the sun beside a heavy mallet. The air, thick with the musk of the forest, carries the whispers of leaves and the distant calls of unseen birds. Yet, the atmosphere around the cart thrums with a different energy, palpable and charged, as Zenovia and Camilla begin to undress each other with shaky but determined hands.

"Well, if this is our last dance, let's make it a show," Camilla murmurs as she slips Zenovia’s tunic over her head, her fingers lingering on the soft skin beneath. Zenovia, in turn, tugs at Camilla’s clothes, her movements hesitant but driven by a wild, despairing courage.

Bare and unabashed, they press their bodies close, skin slick with sweat from the heat and their fear. With a fragile bravery, they begin to mirror each other’s movements, thighs sliding against each other, their wetness mingling. The scent of their arousal mingles with the earthy air, a raw, primal perfume.

"Look at them, the little death-sluts," Gaius chuckles, not unkindly, as he watches them from the corner of his eye while he measures the patibulum. "They’re putting on a hell of a pre-death show."

"Makes you wish we were just spectators, huh?"
Marcus replies, his voice a mix of amusement and a pang of unexpected regret. "It’s a damn shame to nail such spirited girls."

The girls, lost in their own world of desperate pleasure, cling to each other. Zenovia’s lips find Camilla’s neck, her breath hot against her skin. Camilla responds by grinding harder, their clits brushing with each pass, sending jolts of pleasure through their writhing bodies.

"Do you think the gods watch this kind of show?" Zenovia gasps out, half-laughing, half-crying.

"If they do, they're damn lucky," Camilla answers, her voice breaking with a mix of climax and sobbing. "Oh gods, Zenovia, I can feel you everywhere..."

Marcus and Gaius exchange a look, a mix of professional detachment and human empathy coloring their features.

"They’re braver than most men I've nailed to the cross," Marcus remarks quietly, his hands idly playing with a nail.

"Brave or just mad with fear. Either way, they're magnificent," Gaius admits, his eyes not leaving the intertwined pair. "To die as they live, I suppose, in each other's arms."

As their bodies move in a rhythmic dance of desperation and fleeting ecstasy, Camilla whispers fiercely into Zenovia's ear. "Let’s cum together, one last time. Before the pain... before the end."

Zenovia nods, tears streaming down her face as she buries them in the crook of Camilla’s neck. "Yes, together, always together," she breathes out as their movements become more frantic, chasing the shattering release they both know will be their last shared pleasure.

Their cries fill the clearing, raw and uninhibited, as they climax together, their bodies shuddering in unison. The soldiers, solemn now, turn their backs respectfully, giving the girls a moment of privacy in their shared vulnerability.

"That was... that was something," Gaius says softly, almost reverently.

"Yeah," Marcus agrees, his voice thick. "Time to do our duty, though. Help them up, Gaius. Let's do this as gently as we can."

The girls, spent and momentarily sated, allow themselves to be helped to their feet, their legs weak but their spirits strangely fortified by their final act of defiance—of love.

"Thank you," Camilla says quietly as they are led to the cross, her voice steady despite the tremors that run through her body.

"For what?" Gaius asks, genuinely puzzled as he positions them beneath the patibulum.

"For letting us have that last moment. For being kind, in your way," Zenovia adds, her eyes meeting the soldiers' with a haunting clarity.

"It's the least we could do," Marcus says, his usual brashness subdued. "You deserve that much, at least."

And with that, the soldiers begin the grim task of positioning and nailing their charges to the cross, the forest echoing with the thud of the mallet and the cries of the girls. But even as they scream, their hands search for each other, fingers locking one last time in a final, defiant embrace.

As Marcus and Gaius lift the crossbeam to align it with the upright, Zenovia and Camilla's bodies hang limply for a moment, their limbs bound tightly to the wood. Marcus aligns the first nail, positioning it at Zenovia's wrist. The sharp point glints ominously in the filtered sunlight.

"Ready, sweetheart?" Marcus teases, his tone light but his eyes soft with pity.

Zenovia nods, her eyes squeezing shut. "Just do it," she whispers.

With a swift motion, Marcus drives the nail through her wrist. The sound of the hammer striking metal echoes through the clearing, followed by Zenovia's sharp cry. Beside her, Camilla winces, tears streaming down her face as she watches her friend's agony.

"Oh, Zenovia, your face..." Camilla gasps, trying to inject some levity. "You look like you're enjoying it too much, you death-slut."

Zenovia manages a pained chuckle, her breathing heavy. "Look who's talking. Wait until it's your turn, Cammie."

Gaius moves to Camilla, his hand steady as he places the nail. He winks at her, trying to ease the tension. "Let's see if you can match that scream, eh?"

As the nail pierces Camilla's flesh, her scream melds with the birds' startled cries overhead. Zenovia turns her head, watching through teary eyes, her own pain momentarily forgotten in the face of Camilla's torment.

"Your turn now... Ahh, Camilla! Watching you... it's... it's strangely erotic," Zenovia gasps, her voice shaking.

"And you, watching me suffer... does it turn you on, Zenovia?" Camilla asks, half-moaning, half-laughing through her tears.

Gaius chuckles, shaking his head. "You two are the most bizarrely cheerful pair we've ever crucified."

Marcus, finishing with Zenovia's other wrist, steps back to admire his handiwork. "They're fighters, these two. Even now, they're more alive than most we nail up."

"Alive and kicking... Well, not much kicking soon,"
Gaius adds grimly as he moves to nail their feet.

As he positions the nail at Zenovia's feet, she tries to distract herself by focusing on Camilla. "Look at us, tied up in such a compromising position. We really are a pair of kinky death-sluts, aren't we?"

"The kinkiest,"
Camilla agrees, her voice laced with pain and a dark amusement. "I bet those vultures will get more than they bargained for with us."

The soldiers, now working in unison to raise the cross, occasionally reach out to tweak a nipple or stroke a clit, eliciting gasps and shudders from the crucified girls. Their touches are rough but strangely comforting, a distraction from the overwhelming agony.

"You like that, huh?" Marcus teases as he pinches Camilla’s nipple, a wicked grin on his face.

"It's better than feeling just the pain... Ahh, keep doing that!" Camilla responds, her body twitching against the rough wood.

Zenovia groans as Gaius does the same, his fingers cruelly gentle. "Don't stop... it helps, somehow."

The cross is finally raised, the thud as it sets into the ground sending a jarring shock through their bodies. They hang there, their breathing heavy, each strike of the hammer still echoing in their bones.

"Your slutty nipples... so erect, even now," Camilla notes, a wry smile flickering across her lips despite the agony.

"Yours too. It’s like they’re trying to... ahh... reach out to me," Zenovia replies, her voice a mixture of pain and playful teasing.

"They are. They're saying, ‘Save me, Zenovia, save me from this cruel wood!’" Camilla laughs weakly, the absurdity of the situation pushing them into a dark, gallows humor.

"I’d save you if I could... even if it’s just to feel you one more time, before we snuff it!" Zenovia confesses, her face contorted as Gaius drives the final nail through her feet.

The soldiers step back, their job done, watching the two women writhe against their wooden bonds, their bodies a testament to both their suffering and their darkly erotic bond.

"Look at them, still joking, still teasing each other," Marcus says, wiping sweat from his brow.

"Yeah, to the very end," Gaius agrees, a note of respect in his voice. "Never seen anything like it."

As the sun casts longer and longer shadows over the forest, Zenovia and Camilla continue to exchange looks and words, their bond unbroken even as their bodies begin to fail. Their whispered words, filled with pain and love, are the last sounds they share in the fading light.

The afternoon sun begins to wane, casting long, haunting shadows across the clearing as Zenovia and Camilla, already hours into their crucifixion, engage in a torturous dance. Their bodies writhe against the rough wood, each movement a testament to their agonizing plight. Lucius, the soldier assigned to guard them until nightfall, watches with a mix of fascination and reluctant admiration.

"Quite the show you two are putting on," Lucius comments, leaning against his spear casually, his eyes never straying far from the naked, struggling forms before him.

"Glad you're enjoying the view," Camilla gasps, her voice laced with pain and sarcasm. "It’s not like we have much choice in our choreography."

"Ah, but such passion in your performance,"
Lucius jests, stepping closer. He uses the wooden pole of his lance, gently probing at Camilla's exposed pussy, drawing a shudder and a pained moan from her.

"You call this gentle?" Camilla chokes out, her body tensing around the wooden invader. "Feels like you're spear-fishing."

"Only trying to give you a little distraction from the nails,"
Lucius replies, a smirk playing on his lips as he switches his attention to Zenovia, who watches with a mix of dread and relief.

"And what about me? Don't leave me hanging too long," Zenovia quips, grimacing as the lance finds her. The sensation is as much a torment as it is a temporary reprieve from the pain in her wrists and feet.

"Never, my dear. I aim to please," Lucius assures her, his movements deliberate, calculated to elicit both comfort and discomfort.

The afternoon drags on, and the guard shifts. Titus takes over from Lucius, his demeanor less jovial but equally intrigued by the task of overseeing the crucified slaves.

"Heard you were keeping our guests entertained," Titus remarks dryly as Lucius briefs him.

"They're spirited ones. Even now, they find the strength to banter," Lucius responds, patting Titus on the back before departing.

Titus approaches the cross, his gaze sweeping over the women's exhausted yet defiant faces. "So, the entertainers. Let's see if we can keep your spirits up."

"What's your idea of entertainment, then? More poking and prodding?"
Camilla asks, her tone both weary and wary.

"Something like that," Titus replies, adjusting the grip on his spear. He gently presses the tip against Zenovia’s clit, causing her to gasp sharply.

"Titus, the torturer," Zenovia manages to joke, her laughter tinged with agony. "Got a nice ring to it, don't you think?"

"I prefer 'Titus the Merciful,' actually,"
he quips back, shifting the pole to allow Camilla the same bitter mercy.

"Merciful? Ha! Let’s not mince words. We’re your playthings until we’re not amusing anymore," Camilla retorts, her voice growing fainter with each passing hour.

"True enough," Titus acknowledges, his eyes softening slightly. "But at least I can make your last hours... interesting."

As the sun sets, casting a golden glow that belies the gruesome scene, the girls cannot but continue their painful 'dance'.

Their bodies are marked by the brutality of their execution—the nails, the wood, the unyielding posture of death. Yet, their interaction with the guards, fraught with dark humor and fleeting touches of forced pleasure, offers a stark contrast to the grim reality of their sentence.
 
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"Ever wonder what it’s like, watching us like this?" Zenovia suddenly asks, catching Titus off guard.

"Can't say I have. But it's... different with you two. Can't help but admire your guts," Titus admits, his voice low.

"Admire away," Camilla says, managing a weak smile. "Just remember us, okay? Not just as two slaves on a cross, but as the women who laughed and loved until the end."

"I will,"
Titus promises, a solemn nod accompanying his words as the light fades, leaving the forest in twilight.

"Remember the laughs, not just the screams," Zenovia adds, her voice a mere whisper as she and Camilla cling to their final moments of consciousness, their bodies suspended in a tragic tableau of suffering and sisterhood.

As night falls, the whispering woods grow silent, save for the soft, sporadic cries of the dying, echoing the end of a surreal performance in this dark, ancient theater.

As twilight deepens into night, Titus and the other soldiers light torches, their flames casting eerie shadows and flickering light across the clearing. The light dances off the bodies of Zenovia and Camilla, who hang limply yet still conscious, their voices a soft murmur in the chilling breeze.

"Looks like a horror play, with all these shadows and our bodies up here," Camilla muses, her voice trembling from both the cold and the pain.

"Yeah, and we're the star performers doomed to a tragic end," Zenovia adds, a weak chuckle escaping her lips despite the sharp pain that shoots through her every time she moves.

The crackling of the torches fills the silence between their strained conversations, but another, more ominous sound soon joins—the flapping of wings. Dark shapes circle above, growing bolder as the forest grows darker.

"Ah, look, our audience is growing. Seems we've attracted the local wildlife," Camilla remarks, her gaze lifting to the vultures that circle with increasing interest.

"Do you think they appreciate the show, or are they just waiting for the finale when they can take the stage?" Zenovia asks, her attempt at humor masking the fear in her voice.

"Probably the latter," Camilla responds dryly. "I hear vultures are critics of the worst sort. They only show up when they know it's almost curtain call."

Titus, overhearing their banter, steps closer, his face illuminated by the flickering torchlight. "You two still have your spirits, I see. Not even the vultures can dampen your fire."

"What can we do but joke?"
Zenovia replies, her eyes meeting Titus's with a mixture of resignation and defiance. "At least they could wait until we're not around to pick at our parts."

"Speaking of parts, I hope they go for my nose first. I've always thought it too big,"
Camilla says, a grimace of pain twisting her features as she tries to shift her weight to relieve the pressure on her wounds.

"And I bet they go for my nipples first. Always thought they stood out too much," Zenovia adds, her voice a mixture of jest and dread.

"Nipples and noses, a feast for the birds," Titus quips, his laughter hollow in the encroaching darkness. "But let's hope they prefer the dead to the dying. You might still have some time left."

As the night deepens, the vultures descend lower, their black silhouettes stark against the starry sky. Camilla and Zenovia watch them, their bodies tensing with each circle the birds make.

"Do you think it hurts, being pecked at by those beaks?" Camilla asks, her voice barely above a whisper.

"Can't be worse than being nailed to a cross," Zenovia answers wryly. "But I'd rather not find out."

"Let's hope the morning comes quickly, and the soldiers scare them off,"
Camilla says, her eyes closing briefly as she prays for a swift dawn or a quicker end.

The soldiers, now silent, keep their vigil, the torches burning low as the hours pass. Zenovia and Camilla continue to converse in hushed tones, their voices growing weaker as they discuss everything from memories of better times to their fears of what the vultures might do.

"Remember that time we stole the master's wine and got so drunk we couldn't stand?" Camilla reminisces, a faint smile playing on her lips.

"Yeah, and now we can't stand for a different reason," Zenovia responds, her laughter tinged with pain.

"If we get through this night, let's steal wine in the afterlife," Camilla proposes, her spirit flickering like the torchlight.

"It's a date," Zenovia agrees, her voice soft.

The vultures circle, the soldiers watch, and the torches flicker, casting scary shadows over a scene of surreal suffering and enduring friendship.


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The soldiers gather around the fire, the flames crackling in the quiet of the Whispering Woods. Their faces glow in the orange light, and their eyes occasionally flick to the two crucified girls struggling on their shared cross, silhouetted against the darkness. The distant flap of vulture wings and the girls' strained breathing provide an eerie soundtrack to the soldiers' conversation.

“Hard to believe they’re just eighteen,” remarks Sextus, the youngest of the group. His voice is soft, almost apologetic. “Two kids. Barely women. And now…” He gestures toward the cross with his cup of wine, his words trailing off.

“Barely women?” Gaius scoffs, his grin sharp. “Look at those tits, those hips. They’re women enough for the vultures, I’d say.” He takes a long swig from his flask, shaking his head. “Besides, young or not, they knew the rules. Slaves causing trouble always pay the price.”

Titus, leaning on his spear, watches the girls intently. “Price or not, they’ve got guts,” he says after a pause. “Laughing and joking even while they’re nailed up like that. You don’t see that every day.”

“It’s nerves,”
Sextus says. “They’re scared out of their minds and trying to hide it.”

“Could be. Or maybe they’re just sluts who enjoy the attention,”
Gaius counters with a wicked grin. “Not every girl gets to put on a show for the forest, you know.”

Marcus, sitting cross-legged by the fire, shrugs. “They don’t seem like sluts to me. They seem like… kids. Too young for this.”

Gaius rolls his eyes. “Oh, come on, Marcus. You’ve gone soft. They stole, they disobeyed, they earned the cross. Don’t start weeping for them now.”

“It’s not about weeping,”
Marcus replies sharply. “It’s about justice. And this doesn’t feel just. Look at them! They’re practically babies.”

Titus interrupts, his tone dry. “Babies don’t have nipples so perky like that, Marcus.” He gestures toward the cross with his spear. “And speaking of, those vultures are getting braver. I’ll bet you a month’s wages they go for the soft parts first. Nipples, labia, maybe even the clit.”

Gaius snorts, amused. “The Whispering Woods vultures are connoisseurs, all right. They know the best cuts of meat.”

Sextus visibly pales, his grip tightening on his cup. “That’s disgusting. You’re talking about living women.”

“Living, but not for long,”
Gaius says with a shrug. “And you have to admit, there’s a certain poetry to it. The birds feasting on what made them women in the first place.”

Titus smirks. “I just wonder which one will scream louder when it happens. My money’s on Camilla. She seems feistier.”

“You’re all bastards,”
Marcus mutters, throwing a log onto the fire. It sends a shower of sparks into the air, briefly illuminating the clearing.

From the cross, Zenovia’s strained voice carries over. “Are you… are you talking about us again?”

The soldiers glance at each other, then back at the girls. Gaius grins and stands, walking toward them with deliberate slowness. “Of course we are, sweetheart. You’re the stars of the evening.”

Camilla, her head hanging low, lifts it just enough to glare at him. “Glad we could… entertain you,” she rasps, her voice trembling.

“You’re doing a fine job of it,” Gaius replies, his grin widening. He taps his spear lightly against the wood of their cross. “We were just wondering which of you the vultures will like better. Any guesses?”

Zenovia shivers, her muscles painfully tensing as she struggles to lift herself. “I… I don’t think I want to know.”

Camilla manages a weak smile, despite the tears streaming down her cheeks. “Bet they… they go for you first, Zenovia. Your tits are bigger.”

Zenovia gasps, part laugh, part sob. “You’re… you’re the one who kept saying your ass was so perfect! Maybe they’ll start there.”

The soldiers burst into laughter, even Marcus cracking a reluctant smile. Titus steps forward, his torch casting shadows across the girls’ bodies.

“You two are something else,” he says, his tone almost admiring. “If only every execution were this entertaining.”

“Glad we could… bring some joy to your lives,”
Camilla retorts, her voice dripping with sarcasm.

“It’s the least you could do,” Gaius quips, patting the base of the cross. “Now, keep struggling. Makes the show better for everyone.”

The soldiers retreat to their fire, their laughter echoing through the clearing as Zenovia and Camilla continue their slow, agonized movements. Above them, the vultures circle lower, their beady eyes gleaming in the torchlight, waiting for their moment to feast.

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The solitary soldier, Darius, shifts his weight and leans on his spear, eyes darting between the flickering torchlight and the two crucified girls. He took over guard duty from Titus: he was not so happy ‘bout it, but hey, these two gals are something lese!

The other guards are sprawled around the campfire, fast asleep, their snores blending with the rustling leaves and the low flapping of wings. Overhead, the vultures grow bolder, their dark forms silhouetted against the moonlit sky.

One bird, larger and more menacing than the rest, swoops closer, circling directly above Zenovia. Its beady eyes glint in the firelight, its talons flexing as it considers its next move.

“Well, looks like you’ve got a fan, Zenovia,” Darius remarks with a grin, his voice low but clear in the stillness. “That big one’s got his eye on your tits.”

Zenovia, her head lolling forward, tries to lift it, her face pale and glistening with sweat. “Oh gods,” she whispers hoarsely, her chest heaving as she struggles to breathe. “I can feel its eyes on me.”

Camilla, hanging beside her, forces a weak chuckle despite her own agony. “Well, you always said your breasts were your best feature,” she rasps. “Guess it’s time to prove it.”

Zenovia groans, her body convulsing as she tries to adjust her weight on the nails. “I don’t want to lose them... not like this.”

“They’re not exactly doing you much good now,”
Camilla replies, her voice faint but laced with gallows humor. “Might as well offer them up to the bird. Maybe it’ll be gentle.”

Darius chuckles, stepping closer to the cross to get a better view. “Gentle? Ha! These vultures don’t know the meaning of the word. That one’s probably deciding whether to start with the left or the right.”

Zenovia lets out a shaky sob, her chest trembling as she fights the urge to cry out. “Camilla, please... don’t joke about it.”

Camilla turns her head, her sweat-drenched curls clinging to her face. “I’m not joking, Zenovia. Look, the longer you flinch and squirm, the longer it’ll circle. Just... just arch your back, stick them out, and get it over with.”

Zenovia stares at her, wide-eyed. “You can’t be serious!”

“I’m always serious,”
Camilla says, a faint smirk tugging at her lips. “Besides, think of it as... embracing the inevitable. Better to have it done quickly than to wait for the damn thing to pick at you all night.”

Darius leans his spear against the cross and crosses his arms, thoroughly entertained. “She’s got a point, you know. You’ve got two lovely targets there. Might as well make it easy for the poor bird.”

Zenovia’s breathing quickens, her chest rising and falling rapidly as she stares at the circling vulture. “You’re all insane,” she mutters, though her voice lacks conviction.

“No, we’re just realistic,” Camilla quips, her grin faltering as she winces in pain. “Come on, Zenovia. Be a brave death-slut and give the bird what it wants.”

Darius chuckles, the sound low and amused. “That’s the spirit, girl. Show some pride in your martyrdom.”

Zenovia closes her eyes tightly, her body struggling as she steels herself. Slowly, agonizingly, she arches her back, pushing her chest forward. Her nipples, erect from the cold and the torment, glisten in the torchlight like tiny beacons.

“There you go,” Camilla murmurs, her voice oddly tender. “Just like that. Make it quick, Zenovia.”

The vulture, sensing its opportunity, swoops lower, its wings stirring the air around them. Zenovia’s breath hitches as the bird hovers for a moment, then lands on the crossbeam with a sharp, menacing screech. Its talons grip the wood firmly, its beady eyes fixed on her exposed chest.

“Oh gods... oh gods...” Zenovia whispers, tears streaming down her face.

Camilla, watching the scene with a mix of horror and morbid fascination, offers a weak smile. “You’re doing great, Zenovia. Really... really making the rest of us look bad.”

Darius smirks, tilting his head as he observes the vulture inch closer to its prize. “Now that’s what I call dedication. You should be proud, girl.”

The bird tilts its head, its sharp beak gleaming in the firelight as it lowers toward Zenovia’s trembling nipple. Her scream pierces the night as the vulture strikes, the sound raw and primal, echoing through the Whispering Woods.

Camilla winces but forces a laugh, her voice shaking. “Well, I guess that answers the question... left first, then right.”

Zenovia sobs, her body convulsing as the vulture continues its grim feast. Darius shakes his head, his grin fading slightly.

“Poor kid,” he mutters, almost to himself. “Didn’t deserve this.”

“None of us do,”
Camilla replies, her voice faint but steady. “But at least she’s... giving the vultures something to remember.”

The night stretches on, the torchlight flickering as the gruesome scene unfolds. Darius remains vigilant, his gaze flicking between the girls and the circling vultures, his thoughts a tangled mix of amusement, pity, and grim acceptance.

As Zenovia's agonized sobs begin to subside, her body trembling with the aftermath of the vulture's attack, the clearing grows quiet once more—save for the unsettling flapping of wings above. The vulture on her crossbeam pecks again, but its interest wanes, and it takes off with a heavy flutter, circling lazily into the night.

"You did it, Zenovia," Camilla whispers, her voice shaky but tinged with admiration. "You actually... faced it."

Zenovia exhales raggedly, her head slumping forward. "Bravery... or stupidity... I don’t know anymore," she croaks. "But it’s done."

From below, Darius claps his hands lightly, his grin wide. "A round of applause for the girl with the guts to offer herself up. I’m impressed."

"Yeah, very noble of you,"
Camilla chimes in, her attempt at humor faltering as her own fear creeps in. "But you set the bar pretty high, Zenovia. Now what am I supposed to do when it’s my turn?"

As if on cue, another vulture descends lower, its wings casting long shadows across the torchlit ground. It hovers closer to Camilla, its sharp eyes fixed intently—not on her breasts, but on the glistening folds of her wet labia, exposed and writhing. Camilla’s breath catches in her throat, her entire body tensing.

"Oh no... oh no, no, no," she stammers, her voice rising in panic. "It’s coming for me... down there."

Darius raises an eyebrow, his interest piqued. "Well, look at that. Looks like it’s got a taste for the finer things," he says with a chuckle, resting his spear against the ground. "Lucky you, Camilla."

"Lucky?!"
Camilla snaps, her voice trembling as tears spring to her eyes. "You think I’m lucky it wants to... to tear my cunt apart?"

Zenovia, still shaking from her ordeal, forces herself to lift her head. Her voice is weak but steady. "Camilla... breathe. You can handle this."

"Handle it?!"
Camilla cries, her body twisting instinctively against the nails. "It’s my... my most precious part, Zenovia! I can’t just—"

Darius interrupts, his grin widening. "Well, it’s not precious to the vultures, apparently. To them, it’s just dinner."

Camilla glares down at him, her face flushed with anger and fear. "You’re not helping!"

"Sorry, sorry,"
Darius says, though the mischievous glint in his eye remains. "But really, you’re making this harder on yourself. Zenovia managed to get through it. Why don’t you just... you know, give the bird what it wants?"

"Oh, shut up!"
Camilla snaps, her voice cracking as the vulture descends further, its talons outstretched to grip the crossbeam near her hips.

Zenovia watches, her expression a mix of pity and encouragement. "Camilla... it’ll be over faster if you don’t fight it. Just... arch your back, like I did. Offer yourself up."

Camilla stares at her friend, horrified. "Are you insane?! You want me to help it eat me?"

"It’s going to happen either way,"
Zenovia replies gently, though her own voice wavers. "At least this way, you’re in control... a little."

Darius nods in agreement, clearly enjoying the grim spectacle. "She’s right, you know. You might as well make it a memorable moment."

The vulture lands on the beam with a heavy thud, its beady eyes locked onto Camilla’s exposed flesh. She lets out a soft whimper, her entire body trembling.

"Oh gods, oh gods, oh gods..." she mutters, her breathing quick and shallow.

"You can do it, Camilla," Zenovia says softly, her voice filled with as much encouragement as she can muster. "Be brave... like a proper death-slut."

Despite herself, Camilla lets out a shaky laugh, tears streaming down her face. "I hate you so much right now."

"No, you don’t,"
Zenovia replies with a faint smile. "You’ll thank me later. Well... maybe not."

Darius steps closer, his torch casting the vulture’s shadow long and grotesque against the cross. "Come on, Camilla. Show us what you’re made of. Literally."
 
Camilla glares at him through her tears but slowly, reluctantly, begins to arch her back. Her hips lift slightly, pushing her labia forward toward the waiting beak. The motion sends a fresh wave of pain through her body, but she grits her teeth and forces herself to hold the position.

The vulture cocks its head, almost as if considering her offering. Then, with a swift, brutal motion, it strikes, its beak tearing into her sensitive flesh.

Camilla screams, the sound raw and guttural, echoing through the clearing. Her body jerks violently against the nails, her sobs mingling with incoherent cries of pain.

Darius winces but can’t hide his fascination. "Damn. That bird doesn’t waste any time, does it?"

Zenovia watches helplessly, her own tears flowing freely as she whispers, "You’re doing so well, Camilla. Just hold on."

"Fuck you, Zenovia!"
Camilla chokes out between screams, her body writhing as the vulture continues its gruesome feast.

"As I said, perhaps, you’ll thank me later, dear," Zenovia murmurs again, her voice breaking as the night grows darker and the whispers of the forest deepen into an unsettling stillness.

As the vulture tears away, leaving a brutal scene of blood and torn flesh, Camilla’s screams pierce the night, each cry sharper than the last. Her body convulses, spasming against the rough wood of the cross, her voice hoarse with agony.

"It's... it's gone... my... oh gods..." Camilla gasps between sobs, her head falling forward limply as the worst of the pain washes over her. Her voice is a whisper of despair, "I'm ruined... utterly ruined..."

Darius, standing watch with a torch in hand, shifts uncomfortably, the light flickering over his conflicted expression. "Well, that was... something. You're still in one piece, mostly."

"Mostly?!"
Camilla spits, her laughter bitter and pained. "My cunt's been eaten by a bird, and you say 'mostly'?"

"Look on the bright side, Camilla,"
Zenovia interjects, her voice strained with her own pain but trying to inject some of her usual humor. "You still got your clit. Could be worse, right?"

"Worse?! How could it be worse?!"
Camilla's voice breaks as she struggles against the tears and the unbearable pain.

"You could still feel it all," Darius says, almost apologetically. "At least now, what’s left won’t hurt much longer."

Camilla's breath hitches, her sobs mingling with hollow laughter. "Great, I'm less of a woman but at least I won’t feel much as I die. You’re a real comfort, Darius."

"Hey, I’m trying here,"
Darius replies, scratching his head awkwardly. "Look, you were brave. Braver than most men I’ve seen. That counts for something."

"Yeah, it counts for a quick death instead of a slow one,"
Camilla retorts, her eyes fiery even in her battered state.

Zenovia, trying to console her friend, adds, "You faced it like a champ, Camilla. I’m so proud of you... really. You’re the toughest woman I know."

"Toughest woman with no pussy left,"
Camilla corrects her, a dark chuckle escaping her lips. "Might as well laugh, right? What else can I do?"

Darius nods, his tone more respectful now. "Exactly. Laugh in the face of death. That's the spirit."

A silence falls over the group, the only sounds being the crackling of the fire and the distant rustle of leaves. The vulture, having had its fill, perches ominously on a nearby branch, its gaze still fixed on the tragic scene below.

"Think it’ll come back for more?" Darius asks after a moment, his voice low.

"What's left to take?" Camilla asks bitterly, her voice steadying as she regains some composure.

"Your spirit, for one," Zenovia replies softly, her voice filled with admiration and sorrow. "But it won’t get that, will it? We won’t let it."

Camilla turns her head slightly, meeting Zenovia’s gaze. "No, we won’t," she agrees, her voice firmer. "We’ll keep laughing, right until the end."

"That’s the spirit,"
Darius says with a nod. "Laugh at death, and you rob it of its power. Maybe. Not sure, actually, but it’s a good sentence to tell to two crucified girls like you."

As the night deepens, the two women find a semblance of peace in their shared fate, their whispers a mixture of pain, courage, and dark humor.

Darius keeps watch, his eyes occasionally scanning the trees for more vultures, his torch casting long shadows over a scene marked by both tragedy and an unyielding defiance of fate.

As the night wears on, a chilling stillness falls over the Whispering Woods, broken only by the occasional rustle of leaves and the distant crackle of the dying campfire. The second vulture, emboldened by the silence and the scent of blood, swoops lower towards Zenovia, its greedy eyes fixed on her struggling form.

"Camilla, look... it's coming for me now," Zenovia whispers, her voice a mix of fear and resignation as she catches sight of the bird’s sharp descent towards her exposed, throbbing clit.

"Seems like it’s your turn to steal the show," Camilla responds, her tone laced with a dark humor, despite the pain etched deep within her eyes. "You got excited watching me, didn’t you? Your little friend there gave itself away."

Zenovia groans, her body tensing as the vulture lands awkwardly on her crossbeam, its talons scraping against the wood. "I didn’t mean to... It just happened. Camilla, I don’t want to lose it like this!"

"Well, in a way, your clit deserves its grand exit, right? It’s been nothing but trouble,"
Camilla jokes weakly, trying to lighten the heart-stopping terror with a wry smile.

Zenovia doesn’t have the heart to laugh. "Please, Darius, can’t you do something? Drive it away?" she begs, turning her head towards the soldier who stands watching, his face impassive in the flickering torchlight.

Darius shakes his head, his expression unmoved. "Orders are orders, ladies. I’m to let nature take its course. And besides..." he pauses, his gaze darkening, "I find it... educational, watching how you two handle this."

"Educational?! You're sick!"
Zenovia cries out, her fear spiking as the vulture adjusts its stance, its beak inching closer to her swollen clit.

"All part of life and death, Zenovia. You're just on the fast track now," Darius replies coldly.

The vulture pecks tentatively at first, its movements cautious as if testing the resistance it might face. Zenovia gasps sharply, a strangled sound of pure dread escaping her as the beak finds its mark.

"Oh gods, it’s touching me... Camilla, it’s so cold, so sharp!" Zenovia moans, her voice breaking.

"Just... try to think of something else. Remember the good times," Camilla suggests, her own voice trembling as she watches her friend’s torment.

"Good times? I’m being mutilated on a cross, and you want me to reminisce?" Zenovia snaps, panic rising.

"Better than focusing on that beak," Camilla retorts, her attempt at toughness undermined by her visible shudder.

The vulture tugs suddenly, its beak clamped tightly around Zenovia’s clit. Zenovia screams, the sound echoing hauntingly through the trees, her body writhing desperately against the wood.

"It’s pulling... Camilla, it’s pulling it out!" Zenovia shrieks, her eyes wide with terror.

"Fight it, Zenovia! You’re a fighter!" Camilla yells back, her voice laced with desperation and fierce encouragement.

Darius, now merely a shadow against the flickering light of the remaining torch, watches silently, his face unreadable. The vulture gives one final, vicious tug, and Zenovia’s scream cuts through the night, a visceral sound of agony.

"It’s gone... it’s gone..." Zenovia sobs, her body slumping as the initial wave of pain gives way to a numb, throbbing ache.

"You’re still here though, Zenovia. You’re still here," Camilla whispers, her eyes wet with tears as she reaches out, straining to touch her friend.

"Not much left to take now," Zenovia whispers back, a bitter laugh escaping her lips.

Darius finally moves, stepping closer to the cross, his eyes now reflecting a hint of something softer, perhaps regret. "You two are the bravest souls I've seen," he admits quietly. "In another life, you would have been legends."

"Guess we’ll have to settle for being legends of the forest,"
Camilla says, managing a weak smile.

"Legends of bravery and pain," Zenovia adds, her voice faint.

Their suffering, witnessed only by the uncaring stars and the indifferent vultures, becomes proof of their enduring strength and tragic fate…

As the first pale light of dawn begins to filter through the Whispering Woods, the clearing is shrouded in a tense silence, broken only by the sound of wings flapping and the low groans of Zenovia and Camilla. Their bodies hang limply from the cross, bloodied and mutilated, yet still alive—if only barely. The vultures, emboldened by their feast thus far, grow bolder, their eyes gleaming with a cold, predatory hunger.

Darius stands nearby, leaning on his spear, his face a mask of detached interest as he watches the two crucified girls. "You two never stopped surprising me," he says, almost to himself. "Still alive after all this. Tougher than most."

"Still together,"
Camilla whispers, her voice weak but filled with a flicker of pride. "That’s what matters... right, Zenovia?"

Zenovia lifts her head slowly, her breath ragged. "Right... together. Even through this nightmare."

The vultures descend again, their talons scratching against the wood as they land on the crossbeam and the upright post. One bird perches near Camilla’s stomach, cocking its head as it studies her toned, sweat-slick abs. Another hovers close to Zenovia, its beady eyes fixed on the quivering muscles of her midsection.

"I think... they’re going for our bellies now," Zenovia says faintly, her lips trembling. "Camilla... are you ready?"

Camilla lets out a weak laugh, though tears streak her bloodied face. "Ready as I’ll ever be. Let’s... let’s give them what they want."

Zenovia nods slowly, and with what little strength they have left, both girls arch their backs in unison, pushing their toned stomachs outward, presenting themselves to the vultures as if offering a final sacrifice. Their bodies, broken and bleeding, move as one, a testament to their shared resolve.

"For you, my lovely vultures," Camilla mutters bitterly, her voice cracking.

Darius, watching with a grim fascination, shakes his head. "You two are something else. Offering yourselves like that... even now."

"It’s not like we have... much of a choice,"
Zenovia whispers, her voice barely audible. "Might as well... make it quick."

The first vulture strikes, its sharp beak slicing into Camilla’s abdomen with brutal efficiency. Her scream rips through the clearing, raw and primal, as the bird tears through her flesh, exposing the slick, glistening entrails beneath. Her body jerks violently, the nails in her wrists and feet holding her in place as she writhes in agony.

"It’s... it’s happening... Zenovia, oh gods, it’s happening!" Camilla cries, her voice breaking as the vulture pulls at her intestines, the slippery coils spilling out of her body.

Zenovia watches in horror, tears streaming down her face. "Camilla... I’m here. I’m with you," she whispers, her voice choked with emotion.

The second vulture dives at Zenovia’s stomach, its beak piercing her skin and ripping downward in a swift, cruel motion. Her scream joins Camilla’s, the two voices intertwining in a symphony of pain and despair. The bird pulls at her guts, tearing them free with savage determination.

"It’s so... it’s so much," Zenovia sobs, her body convulsing as the vulture continues its grisly work.

"We’re almost there... almost done," Camilla whispers through clenched teeth, her eyes meeting Zenovia’s despite the unbearable pain.

Darius, standing silently, feels a strange pang of respect for the two girls. "You’ve done well," he says quietly, his tone unusually solemn. "You stayed together, even through this."

As the vultures finish their gruesome feast, the girls’ bodies slump, their strength finally giving out. Their heads fall forward, their breath slowing to a faint, ragged rhythm. Zenovia’s lips move, forming a final, whispered phrase.

"Together... always... Thank you for being my friend."

Tears glisten in Camilla's eyes. "And you mine... I couldn't have faced this horror alone."

Zenovia manages a faint smile. "We'll find each other in the next life."

"I will look… for you, even in… Hades, always…"
Camilla agrees.

Camilla manages a faint smile, her voice a mere whisper now. "Always..."

Their bodies eventually fall still, the life leaving them as the first rays of sunlight break through the trees. The clearing falls silent once more, save for the rustling of the vultures as they take flight, their feast complete.

Darius watches them go, his expression inscrutable. "Rest well, girls," he murmurs, his voice barely audible over the sound of wings. "You earned it."

And so, Zenovia and Camilla, who endured unimaginable pain and horror, find peace at last. Though their journey ended in blood and agony, they remained side by side, united until their final breath.


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As the sun climbs above the horizon, the Whispering Woods is bathed in golden light, casting a serene contrast against the brutal scene in the clearing. The silhouettes of Zenovia and Camilla, now lifeless, hang from their shared cross, their bodies marked by the night's horrors. The vultures, having had their fill, perch in the nearby trees, their sharp beaks stained red, waiting to see if there's more to scavenge.

Darius stands at the edge of the clearing, leaning on his spear, his face a mixture of exhaustion and grim satisfaction. The sound of boots crunching on the forest floor draws his attention as the relief shift arrives—three soldiers led by a burly centurion named Septimus.

"Morning, Darius," Septimus calls out, his booming voice breaking the stillness. "How were the night’s festivities?"

Darius sighs, gesturing to the cross with a weary hand. "Festive might be the wrong word, sir. But those two... they put on a hell of a show."

The soldiers approach, their eyes immediately drawn to the mutilated bodies of Zenovia and Camilla. Their bloodied torsos, torn open and hollowed out, bear the unmistakable marks of the vultures’ feast.

"By the gods," one of the new arrivals, a wiry soldier named Quintus, mutters, his eyes wide. "Looks like the birds had themselves a banquet."

"A banquet indeed,"
Darius replies, his tone oddly casual. "They started with the soft bits, as usual. First the nipples, then one went for the clit, and finally... well, you can see the aftermath."
 
Septimus steps closer, inspecting the scene with a soldier’s detached curiosity. "Actual vulturing, eh? None of that modern city nonsense where people tear each other down with words on social networks. These birds know their business. Nature's clean-up crew."


- - -
Professor Balkan cannot but chuckle reading this clearly spurious passage. He wonders if his gen-Z students can notice: somehow he doubts it: being a digital native means you risk taking too many things for granted sometimes. Anyway, incredible as somethin' so silly rings so true however...
- - -


The third soldier, a younger man named Lucan, wrinkles his nose. "Doesn’t make it any less gruesome. They’re barely recognizable now."

"Recognizable or not, they held out longer than most,"
Darius says, a note of respect creeping into his voice. "Even as the vultures tore into them, they stuck together. Zenovia even arched her back to offer herself up when it was her turn."

Quintus lets out a low whistle, shaking his head. "Brave girl. Can’t say I’d do the same in her place."

"Brave or foolish,"
Septimus interjects, his tone more pragmatic. "Doesn’t matter much now. The birds got what they came for."

Lucan steps closer to the cross, his gaze lingering on the hollowed-out midsections of the girls. "Look at that. You can see straight through. The vultures really know how to work their way inside, don’t they?"

"Efficient creatures,"
Darius remarks, his voice tinged with dark humor. "Start with the soft stuff, then move to the guts. They left nothing to waste."

Septimus chuckles, clapping Darius on the back. "You’ve got a strong stomach, Darius. Most men would’ve lost their breakfast watching this."

"Comes with the job,"
Darius replies with a shrug. "And these two made it easier. They joked, they fought, they suffered, but they faced it all. Hard not to admire them for that."

Quintus nods thoughtfully, his expression softening. "Even in death, they stayed side by side. That’s something, isn’t it?"

Lucan glances uneasily at the cross, the remnants of the girls’ mangled bodies stark against the morning light. "Yeah, it’s something. Still... I wouldn’t wish this on anyone."

"Nor would they,"
Septimus says with a wry smile. "But that’s life for slaves who cross the line. At least they’ve found their peace now."

The group falls silent for a moment, the weight of the scene settling over them. The only sounds are the rustling leaves and the occasional caw of a distant crow. Darius finally breaks the silence, gesturing to the cross.

"Well, that’s my watch done. They’re your responsibility now."

Septimus nods, his expression thoughtful as he surveys the clearing. "We’ll take it from here. Go get some rest, Darius. You’ve earned it."

As Darius trudges away, the new guards settle into their positions, their eyes flicking between the cross and the vultures still perched nearby. The day stretches on, the gruesome tableau standing as a stark reminder of the harshness of the world, even in the tranquil beauty of the Whispering Woods.


- - -​

Professor Balkan adjusts his thick-rimmed glasses and leans heavily on his cane as he paces the front of the classroom. His slight paunch stretches the fabric of his dark waistcoat, and a faint glimmer of mischief dances in his eyes. The dimly lit lecture hall buzzes with low murmurs as he clears his throat, tapping the cane against the floor for attention. In his other hand, he holds a large, ancient tome bound in cracked leather: the infamous Annales Historiae Umbarorum.
"Quiet, please," Balkan intones, his voice dripping with theatrical authority. "What we have here is no mere myth, no concoction of imaginative fiction. This is history. Bloody, brutal, and as real as the scars left on time itself."
The room hushes as he flips open the tome with deliberate care, its brittle pages rustling like whispers from the past. He adjusts the book on a wooden podium, his thick fingers tracing the faded ink of the ancient Latin script.
"Today, class, we delve into a passage that has provoked both horror and fascination for centuries: the crucifixion and vulturing of Zenovia and Camilla. Slaves, yes. But also figures of remarkable fortitude in the face of unimaginable pain." His tone is a mixture of admiration and sadistic glee.
One student, a young woman with wide eyes named Jennifer, raises her hand hesitantly. "Professor, do we really have to... discuss this in such detail? It’s... it’s horrible."
Balkan smirks, tilting his head like a predator toying with its prey. "Horrible, yes. But history is often horrible, Miss Jennifer. And yet, here we are, compelled to confront it. Tell me, would you prefer we sanitize the past? Or shall we face it, bloody entrails and all?"
The class shifts uneasily. A few students exchange nervous glances, while others, like the eager-eyed Matt sitting near the front, lean forward with fascination.
"Please, continue, Professor," Matt says, his voice eager. "I want to hear more about the... vulturing. Did they really—"
"Oh, they did," Balkan interrupts with a grin, his hand resting momentarily on his cane as he stands taller. "They were crucified, as was the custom for troublesome slaves. But the spectacle did not end there. The vultures, ever nature's opportunists, descended to feast. Nipples, clitorises, entrails... nothing was off-limits."
A ripple of gasps spreads through the room. Jennifer covers her mouth, while Matt’s eyes widen in morbid curiosity.
"It’s disgusting," mutters Anthony, a lanky boy in the back row, his arms crossed defensively. "How could anyone let that happen?"
Balkan's grin widens, and his hand slips into his pocket, where the outline of the amulet presses faintly against the fabric. "Ah, Anthony, how naïve. This was not merely ‘let to happen.’ This was orchestrated. A deliberate demonstration of power, of the law's reach, and of the precarious position of those who lived beneath its shadow. Fascinating, isn’t it?"
Jennifer’s voice trembles as she asks, "Professor... did they really arch their backs like that? I mean, why would they—?"
Balkan’s chuckle is low and dark. "Because, Miss Jennifer, in their minds, the pain was inevitable. They chose to embrace their fate rather than resist it. Some would call it bravery, others madness. But you must admit, there’s a certain... dignity in their defiance."
Another student, Clarisse, a pale girl with a penchant for dark poetry, raises her hand. "Professor, the vultures... they went for the clit? That’s not something you usually hear about in historical accounts."
Balkan’s expression turns almost jovial. "Indeed, Miss Clarisse! This was true ‘vulturing.’ Not the petty, modern variety of social squabbling and online insults. Oh no. These vultures were the real deal—connoisseurs, if you will, of human flesh. They knew where to strike for maximum reward. Efficient creatures, aren’t they?"
A few students chuckle nervously, unsure if they should be amused or appalled. Matt pipes up again. "So, Professor, are you saying this was... justice? For the times, I mean?"
Balkan leans forward, resting his weight on the cane, his eyes gleaming. "Justice, Matt, is a rather subjective thing. To their masters, Zenovia and Camilla’s deaths were necessary examples. To the vultures, they were merely sustenance. And to history? They are a chilling reminder of humanity's capacity for both cruelty and endurance."
He closes the book with a thud, startling the students. "And yet," he continues, his voice dropping to a near-whisper, "through it all, these girls remained close. Even in their final agonies, they clung to one another—metaphorically, of course. There’s something almost poetic in that, don’t you think?"
The room is silent, the students caught between morbid fascination and a lingering unease. Jennifer, her hands still clasped over her mouth, whispers, "It’s awful. Just... awful."
"Yes, it is," Balkan agrees, his tone suddenly soft but no less unsettling. "Awful, but undeniably human. And that, my dear students, is why we study such things—not to revel in the horror, but to understand it. Now, any final thoughts before we move on?"
Clarisse raises her hand again, her lips curling into a small, dark smile. "I think it’s... strangely beautiful, in a way. They died together. Isn’t that what they wanted?"
Balkan nods approvingly. "Exactly, Miss Clarisse. In their tragedy lies their triumph. And perhaps, in the end, that is all any of us can hope for."
As the students gather their things, Balkan lingers at the podium, his hand brushing against the amulet hidden in his pocket, the gift of Yog, Lord of the Empty Dwellings. The faint whispers from the artifact grow louder, filling his mind with sinister thoughts that make his grin widen further.
"Ah, Zenovia and Camilla," he murmurs to himself. "Your story lives on. And perhaps... inspires more than you could ever imagine."





PS: As you can see I decided to embed this story into the narrative universe of evil (?) professor Balkan. Professor Balkan is an old acquaintance of this forum since he appeared in my previous stories "Apocalypta", "Spectators", and "Cruxstrike!" (this latter still work-in-progress). This fine fellow enjoys reading strangely anachronistic execution tales in his classes, and in his pockets he always carries the amulet of Yog, the Lord of the Empty Dwellings, which he retrieved from a dark tomb when he was but a young and inexperienced archeology student. The pendant still continues murmuring unimaginable cruelties to him... or so he thinks at least. Chances are it's all in his cultured yet wicked mind, after all: academics might be crazy, you know.
 
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Most interesting! I'd never heard of vulturing before this story, so thanks for opening up my mind. :)
 
Most interesting! I'd never heard of vulturing before this story, so thanks for opening up my mind. :)
Me neither!

I decided to call it "vulturing", and thought I just invented a word... then, out of skepticism, I tried searching for it on google and... OMG! It has been already invented!
When I noticed this I had to comment it, but since the story was set during the Roman Empire that would become an... anachronism.
So I realized I needed professor Balkan and his modern class...
 
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I like the story, but have never heard of vultures being night birds.
In Whispering Woods (*) they are, in addition to being connoisseurs of female genitals! :sisi1


Joking aside, a fair and useful comment, which in fact, I realize, points out an issue that might undermine the suspension of disbelief a bit, so to speak. :facepalm:
My fault, as an ethologist I am rather poor, I should have informed myself: sorry.
Not that realism is so essential in my stories, they are always on the verge of surrealism.
If that disturbs the readers, my suggestion is mentally replacing “vultures” with giant crows, or omitting the passages that set the 'feast' at night.

I might rewrite the tale in one way or another if there's a numerous demand for it (in case, lemme know).

Thanks again for the clarification and reminding me of something I had forgotten.

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* Name comes from She-Ra, not Games of Thrones.
 
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Thank you for a great story, but I think the nailing scene combines parts from two drafts.

First the soldiers nail the girls to the crossbeam, raise the crossbeam to the upright, nail their wrists again, nail their feet to the upright, and then raise the whole cross. The soldiers should be commended for doing a really thorough job, and the brave girls get crucified twice!

I am also not sure how the girls are arranged on the cross. Are they on opposite sides of the patibulum? Are they one in front of the other facing each other? Are they side by side? The last two leave them plenty of opportunity to rub against each other and comfort each other.
 
Thank you for a great story, but I think the nailing scene combines parts from two drafts.

First the soldiers nail the girls to the crossbeam, raise the crossbeam to the upright, nail their wrists again, nail their feet to the upright, and then raise the whole cross. The soldiers should be commended for doing a really thorough job, and the brave girls get crucified twice!
You're damn right! Thank for pointing it out to me! :doh:

I indeed mixed two drafts, basically repeating the nailing procedure.
My fault, sorry.
That's the problem of assembling a full story on the spur of the moment (it's exciting to me too) and not spending the proper amount of time rereading it.

From now on I will strive, even when I think I have completed a story, not to post it all at once.
Instead I will try to pace my posting, like about 3000 words a day (the maximum length of a post on this forum) or every couple of days.
This way I force myself to calmly reread what I have written, before I post it.

I'm doing this with the PC3 story, btw: I think it has also the added benefit of increasing the readers' engagement.


That said, for this Vulturing tale :buitre: the easiest way to solve the issue is substituting these 3 parts in the original 1st post...
“Almost,” Gaius replies, smirking. “Don’t get soft on me, Marcus. Orders are orders. Besides, they wanted to share a crossbeam. Makes our job easier.”
Gaius laughs, gesturing to the crossbeam laid on the ground beside the upright. “Hope you two are ready to snuggle. You’ll be nice and close when we nail you.”
And with that, the soldiers begin the grim task of positioning and nailing their charges to the cross, the forest echoing with the thud of the mallet and the cries of the girls. But even as they scream, their hands search for each other, fingers locking one last time in a final, defiant embrace.

As Marcus and Gaius lift the crossbeam to align it with the upright, Zenovia and Camilla's bodies hang limply for a moment, their limbs bound tightly to the wood. Marcus aligns the first nail, positioning it at Zenovia's wrist. The sharp point glints ominously in the filtered sunlight.


"Ready, sweetheart?" Marcus teases, his tone light but his eyes soft with pity.

...with the following, shortened versions:

“Almost,” Gaius replies, smirking. “Don’t get soft on me, Marcus. Orders are orders. Besides, they wanted to share a patibulum. Makes our job easier.”
Gaius laughs, gesturing to the patibulum laid on the ground beside the upright. “Hope you two are ready to snuggle. You’ll be nice and close when we nail you.”
And with that, the soldiers begin the grim task of positioning and nailing their charges to the cross, the forest ready to listen the thud of the mallet and the cries of the girls.

"Ready, sweetheart?" Marcus teases, his tone light but his eyes soft with pity.
There should not be other issues, I think (I hope).
In case, please lemme know.
This is probably not the way I would have preferred to write it to begin with, but it's the easiest correction that I think should make the story coherent again, and at this point I go "correction mode" rather than "rewriting mode".
As you can see, I would indeed need a good proofreader and editor :sisi1

Also notice that, unless I forgot something, all the incoherence is given by the red parts.
It's incredible how so little text can easily go unnoticed when I checked it and skew everything!

I'll kindly ask a staff member if they are so gentle to make the corrections for me, or allowing me to edit my own post.

I thank a lot all of you, sorry for the inconvenience. :clap2:

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I am also not sure how the girls are arranged on the cross. Are they on opposite sides of the patibulum? Are they one in front of the other facing each other? Are they side by side? The last two leave them plenty of opportunity to rub against each other and comfort each other.
I have preferred not describing it in detail, but in my mind's eye they are side by side.
One long, common patibulum, and two crossbeams (stipes), with this kind of arrangement:

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I've checked: I'be been a user of this forum since like... 15 years? That's somethin'!
I remember a couple of great stories from the 'old days', including Jeddak's monumental "Serpent's Eyes" saga.
And yet, somehow my snuff fetishes drifted away from crucifixions and long sagas.
What really brought me back here, with a vengeance so-to-speak, where @DjEtla's delicious short, self contained crucifixion stories. That was like the end of 2021 (when I casually noticed his great works here).
One of these stories by DjEtla is about a girl named Melita ("Melita on the cross", you can find it also on pixiv in a slightly expanded version), sentenced to be crucified due to her father's stern resolution, and she's very, very afraid of crows feasting on her body as she hangs crucified (she's very good reason to be so scared by that, indeed).
DjEtla is a rather delicate, refined author, capable of perfectly depicting certain scenes with minimal details: I envy him for that, in fact. I heartily recommend all his snuff/bondage stories.
Alas, I'm not delicate, on the contrary I enjoy mixing dark humor with graphic rawness: I find this contrast 'thrillingly unsettling', in a way more scary than utter horror (what scares you most, a brutal murderer with an hockey mask that calls you names, or some polite and cheerful executioners very determined to inflict you agony and death no matter what?).
So, in my story I wanted to maintain the theme of birds feasting on crucified girls, but scaling the sex and the graphicness up a couple of notches: for that I decided that a single crucifee was not enough, so I opted for two pretty gals, their wrists nailed to the same patibulum.
Hope you like it.
It's a short story born out of a rather simple fantasy.


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VULTURING VIGNETTE


The cart creaks as it trundles through the dense, sun-dappled Whispering Woods. The towering trees form a canopy that shrouds the forest path in shadows, the dappled light dancing over the two slave girls seated on the rough wooden planks of the cart. Zenovia and Camilla, bound but otherwise free to move their hands, giggle nervously, their cheeks flushed with a mixture of fear and a strange, illicit thrill. The two Roman soldiers sitting at the front exchange knowing glances, amused by their prisoners’ peculiar behavior.

Zenovia’s slender fingers brush against Camilla’s bare thigh. “This is insane,” she whispers, her voice trembling as much from terror as excitement. “We’re going to be crucified, naked, in the middle of nowhere.”

Camilla smirks, her dark curls bouncing as the cart jolts over a stone. “Together, though!” she chirps, squeezing Zenovia’s hand. “At least we’ll have company. Better than snuffing it alone, don’t you think?”

Behind them, one of the soldiers, Marcus, chuckles and leans back on the cart rail. “Oh, you two are something else,” he says. “Most slaves we take to the cross are weeping or begging. Not you two—you’re giggling like you’re headed to a festival!”

“We’re terrified, thank you very much!”
Camilla snaps, though her grin betrays her. “But you have to admit, there’s something…” She hesitates, looking to Zenovia for backup.

Zenovia blushes furiously but nods. “…Something exciting about it,” she admits. “The thought of being seen, naked, exposed, and helpless… it’s awful but…”

Camilla finishes the thought, her voice dropping to a teasing whisper. “…but also kind of hot.”

The other soldier, Gaius, nearly drops the reins laughing. “By the gods, Marcus, did you hear that? They’re excited to die on the cross!”

Marcus grins, his broad face ruddy from the midday heat. “Excited might be a stretch, but they’re clearly enjoying the attention. You girls should’ve been performers in the arena.”

Camilla rolls her eyes dramatically. “Oh sure, Gaius, Marcus, rub it in. We’re slaves! Not much career choice. And now? We’ll be nailed up for all the forest vultures to see. My ‘career’ ends with them pecking my…” She pauses, biting her lip and gesturing vaguely downward. “…you know… my most precious parts.”

The soldiers burst into laughter. “Your precious parts, eh?” Gaius mocks, wiping a tear from his eye. “Don’t worry, sweetheart. Those vultures’ll appreciate the delicacy.”

Zenovia shudders, the imagery vivid in her mind. She clutches at Camilla’s arm. “Do you think they’ll… really go for our…?”

“Pussies?”
Camilla supplies cheerfully, then immediately wrinkles her nose. “Ugh, Zenovia, don’t make me picture that! But yeah, I suppose. They’re vultures, aren’t they? They don’t care about modesty.”

Zenovia groans, her hands covering her face. “Oh gods, I can’t stop thinking about it now. Them tearing into me while I’m still alive…” Her voice quivers, but her thighs press together instinctively.

Gaius, clearly enjoying the girls’ morbid fascination, leans over the back of the cart. “You’ll be too busy screaming from the nails to worry about the birds right away. Trust me, I’ve seen it. The cross does a fine job of tormenting you before they even show up.”

“Thank you for that comforting thought,”
Camilla snaps sarcastically, though there’s a twinkle of humor in her eye. She nudges Zenovia. “See? We’ll be in agony long before they start nibbling on us.”

Zenovia shoots her a glare but can’t help a nervous laugh. “Oh great. That’s supposed to make me feel better?”

Marcus nudges Gaius with his elbow. “They’re funny, these two. Almost makes me feel bad we have to nail them up.”

“Almost,”
Gaius replies, smirking. “Don’t get soft on me, Marcus. Orders are orders. Besides, they wanted to share a crossbeam. Makes our job easier.”

Camilla grins at Zenovia, ignoring the soldiers. “See? We’re helping! They should be grateful.”

Zenovia giggles despite herself, her fear momentarily forgotten. “Oh yes, let’s make sure our executioners have an easy time killing us. We’re such considerate little sluts.”

The cart jolts to a stop. The clearing ahead is bathed in golden light, the trees around it forming a natural amphitheater. A single, prepared upright stands in the center, its shadow long and ominous. The soldiers hop down, stretching and cracking their knuckles.

Gaius turns to the girls, grinning wickedly. “End of the line, ladies. Time to bare it all—for real this time.”

Camilla takes a deep breath, her fingers intertwining with Zenovia’s. “Well,” she whispers, her voice trembling. “I guess this is it.”

Zenovia squeezes her hand tightly, her other hand nervously brushing over her exposed thighs. “Together,” she says softly. “We’ll do this together.”

Gaius laughs, gesturing to the crossbeam laid on the ground beside the upright. “Hope you two are ready to snuggle. You’ll be nice and close when we nail you.”

Marcus smirks as he pulls a bag of nails from the cart. “Close enough to feel each other squirm.”

Camilla raises an eyebrow, a wry smile playing on her lips. “Oh, don’t worry, soldier boy. We’ve squirmed together plenty before.”

Zenovia gasps, swatting at her friend’s shoulder. “Camilla!”

Camilla giggles, leaning her head against Zenovia’s. “Hey, if we’re going out, I’m going out with a smile.”

As the cart comes to a gentle stop, Marcus and Gaius busy themselves with the unenviable task of preparing the cross, the patibulum laid out on the grassy earth, nails glistening in the sun beside a heavy mallet. The air, thick with the musk of the forest, carries the whispers of leaves and the distant calls of unseen birds. Yet, the atmosphere around the cart thrums with a different energy, palpable and charged, as Zenovia and Camilla begin to undress each other with shaky but determined hands.

"Well, if this is our last dance, let's make it a show," Camilla murmurs as she slips Zenovia’s tunic over her head, her fingers lingering on the soft skin beneath. Zenovia, in turn, tugs at Camilla’s clothes, her movements hesitant but driven by a wild, despairing courage.

Bare and unabashed, they press their bodies close, skin slick with sweat from the heat and their fear. With a fragile bravery, they begin to mirror each other’s movements, thighs sliding against each other, their wetness mingling. The scent of their arousal mingles with the earthy air, a raw, primal perfume.

"Look at them, the little death-sluts," Gaius chuckles, not unkindly, as he watches them from the corner of his eye while he measures the patibulum. "They’re putting on a hell of a pre-death show."

"Makes you wish we were just spectators, huh?"
Marcus replies, his voice a mix of amusement and a pang of unexpected regret. "It’s a damn shame to nail such spirited girls."

The girls, lost in their own world of desperate pleasure, cling to each other. Zenovia’s lips find Camilla’s neck, her breath hot against her skin. Camilla responds by grinding harder, their clits brushing with each pass, sending jolts of pleasure through their writhing bodies.

"Do you think the gods watch this kind of show?" Zenovia gasps out, half-laughing, half-crying.

"If they do, they're damn lucky," Camilla answers, her voice breaking with a mix of climax and sobbing. "Oh gods, Zenovia, I can feel you everywhere..."

Marcus and Gaius exchange a look, a mix of professional detachment and human empathy coloring their features.

"They’re braver than most men I've nailed to the cross," Marcus remarks quietly, his hands idly playing with a nail.

"Brave or just mad with fear. Either way, they're magnificent," Gaius admits, his eyes not leaving the intertwined pair. "To die as they live, I suppose, in each other's arms."

As their bodies move in a rhythmic dance of desperation and fleeting ecstasy, Camilla whispers fiercely into Zenovia's ear. "Let’s cum together, one last time. Before the pain... before the end."

Zenovia nods, tears streaming down her face as she buries them in the crook of Camilla’s neck. "Yes, together, always together," she breathes out as their movements become more frantic, chasing the shattering release they both know will be their last shared pleasure.

Their cries fill the clearing, raw and uninhibited, as they climax together, their bodies shuddering in unison. The soldiers, solemn now, turn their backs respectfully, giving the girls a moment of privacy in their shared vulnerability.

"That was... that was something," Gaius says softly, almost reverently.

"Yeah," Marcus agrees, his voice thick. "Time to do our duty, though. Help them up, Gaius. Let's do this as gently as we can."

The girls, spent and momentarily sated, allow themselves to be helped to their feet, their legs weak but their spirits strangely fortified by their final act of defiance—of love.

"Thank you," Camilla says quietly as they are led to the cross, her voice steady despite the tremors that run through her body.

"For what?" Gaius asks, genuinely puzzled as he positions them beneath the patibulum.

"For letting us have that last moment. For being kind, in your way," Zenovia adds, her eyes meeting the soldiers' with a haunting clarity.

"It's the least we could do," Marcus says, his usual brashness subdued. "You deserve that much, at least."

And with that, the soldiers begin the grim task of positioning and nailing their charges to the cross, the forest echoing with the thud of the mallet and the cries of the girls. But even as they scream, their hands search for each other, fingers locking one last time in a final, defiant embrace.

As Marcus and Gaius lift the crossbeam to align it with the upright, Zenovia and Camilla's bodies hang limply for a moment, their limbs bound tightly to the wood. Marcus aligns the first nail, positioning it at Zenovia's wrist. The sharp point glints ominously in the filtered sunlight.

"Ready, sweetheart?" Marcus teases, his tone light but his eyes soft with pity.

Zenovia nods, her eyes squeezing shut. "Just do it," she whispers.

With a swift motion, Marcus drives the nail through her wrist. The sound of the hammer striking metal echoes through the clearing, followed by Zenovia's sharp cry. Beside her, Camilla winces, tears streaming down her face as she watches her friend's agony.

"Oh, Zenovia, your face..." Camilla gasps, trying to inject some levity. "You look like you're enjoying it too much, you death-slut."

Zenovia manages a pained chuckle, her breathing heavy. "Look who's talking. Wait until it's your turn, Cammie."

Gaius moves to Camilla, his hand steady as he places the nail. He winks at her, trying to ease the tension. "Let's see if you can match that scream, eh?"

As the nail pierces Camilla's flesh, her scream melds with the birds' startled cries overhead. Zenovia turns her head, watching through teary eyes, her own pain momentarily forgotten in the face of Camilla's torment.

"Your turn now... Ahh, Camilla! Watching you... it's... it's strangely erotic," Zenovia gasps, her voice shaking.

"And you, watching me suffer... does it turn you on, Zenovia?" Camilla asks, half-moaning, half-laughing through her tears.

Gaius chuckles, shaking his head. "You two are the most bizarrely cheerful pair we've ever crucified."

Marcus, finishing with Zenovia's other wrist, steps back to admire his handiwork. "They're fighters, these two. Even now, they're more alive than most we nail up."

"Alive and kicking... Well, not much kicking soon,"
Gaius adds grimly as he moves to nail their feet.

As he positions the nail at Zenovia's feet, she tries to distract herself by focusing on Camilla. "Look at us, tied up in such a compromising position. We really are a pair of kinky death-sluts, aren't we?"

"The kinkiest,"
Camilla agrees, her voice laced with pain and a dark amusement. "I bet those vultures will get more than they bargained for with us."

The soldiers, now working in unison to raise the cross, occasionally reach out to tweak a nipple or stroke a clit, eliciting gasps and shudders from the crucified girls. Their touches are rough but strangely comforting, a distraction from the overwhelming agony.

"You like that, huh?" Marcus teases as he pinches Camilla’s nipple, a wicked grin on his face.

"It's better than feeling just the pain... Ahh, keep doing that!" Camilla responds, her body twitching against the rough wood.

Zenovia groans as Gaius does the same, his fingers cruelly gentle. "Don't stop... it helps, somehow."

The cross is finally raised, the thud as it sets into the ground sending a jarring shock through their bodies. They hang there, their breathing heavy, each strike of the hammer still echoing in their bones.

"Your slutty nipples... so erect, even now," Camilla notes, a wry smile flickering across her lips despite the agony.

"Yours too. It’s like they’re trying to... ahh... reach out to me," Zenovia replies, her voice a mixture of pain and playful teasing.

"They are. They're saying, ‘Save me, Zenovia, save me from this cruel wood!’" Camilla laughs weakly, the absurdity of the situation pushing them into a dark, gallows humor.

"I’d save you if I could... even if it’s just to feel you one more time, before we snuff it!" Zenovia confesses, her face contorted as Gaius drives the final nail through her feet.

The soldiers step back, their job done, watching the two women writhe against their wooden bonds, their bodies a testament to both their suffering and their darkly erotic bond.

"Look at them, still joking, still teasing each other," Marcus says, wiping sweat from his brow.

"Yeah, to the very end," Gaius agrees, a note of respect in his voice. "Never seen anything like it."

As the sun casts longer and longer shadows over the forest, Zenovia and Camilla continue to exchange looks and words, their bond unbroken even as their bodies begin to fail. Their whispered words, filled with pain and love, are the last sounds they share in the fading light.

The afternoon sun begins to wane, casting long, haunting shadows across the clearing as Zenovia and Camilla, already hours into their crucifixion, engage in a torturous dance. Their bodies writhe against the rough wood, each movement a testament to their agonizing plight. Lucius, the soldier assigned to guard them until nightfall, watches with a mix of fascination and reluctant admiration.

"Quite the show you two are putting on," Lucius comments, leaning against his spear casually, his eyes never straying far from the naked, struggling forms before him.

"Glad you're enjoying the view," Camilla gasps, her voice laced with pain and sarcasm. "It’s not like we have much choice in our choreography."

"Ah, but such passion in your performance,"
Lucius jests, stepping closer. He uses the wooden pole of his lance, gently probing at Camilla's exposed pussy, drawing a shudder and a pained moan from her.

"You call this gentle?" Camilla chokes out, her body tensing around the wooden invader. "Feels like you're spear-fishing."

"Only trying to give you a little distraction from the nails,"
Lucius replies, a smirk playing on his lips as he switches his attention to Zenovia, who watches with a mix of dread and relief.

"And what about me? Don't leave me hanging too long," Zenovia quips, grimacing as the lance finds her. The sensation is as much a torment as it is a temporary reprieve from the pain in her wrists and feet.

"Never, my dear. I aim to please," Lucius assures her, his movements deliberate, calculated to elicit both comfort and discomfort.

The afternoon drags on, and the guard shifts. Titus takes over from Lucius, his demeanor less jovial but equally intrigued by the task of overseeing the crucified slaves.

"Heard you were keeping our guests entertained," Titus remarks dryly as Lucius briefs him.

"They're spirited ones. Even now, they find the strength to banter," Lucius responds, patting Titus on the back before departing.

Titus approaches the cross, his gaze sweeping over the women's exhausted yet defiant faces. "So, the entertainers. Let's see if we can keep your spirits up."

"What's your idea of entertainment, then? More poking and prodding?"
Camilla asks, her tone both weary and wary.

"Something like that," Titus replies, adjusting the grip on his spear. He gently presses the tip against Zenovia’s clit, causing her to gasp sharply.

"Titus, the torturer," Zenovia manages to joke, her laughter tinged with agony. "Got a nice ring to it, don't you think?"

"I prefer 'Titus the Merciful,' actually,"
he quips back, shifting the pole to allow Camilla the same bitter mercy.

"Merciful? Ha! Let’s not mince words. We’re your playthings until we’re not amusing anymore," Camilla retorts, her voice growing fainter with each passing hour.

"True enough," Titus acknowledges, his eyes softening slightly. "But at least I can make your last hours... interesting."

As the sun sets, casting a golden glow that belies the gruesome scene, the girls cannot but continue their painful 'dance'.

Their bodies are marked by the brutality of their execution—the nails, the wood, the unyielding posture of death. Yet, their interaction) with the guards, fraught with dark humor and fleeting touches of forced pleasure
 
I just discovered the story and I am enjoying it a lot!
Happy to hear you like it dear!


One question: How are they nailed? A single crossbeam and just one upright? Where are their hands and feet nailed?
I have preferred not describing it in detail, but in my mind's eye they are side by side.
One long, common patibulum, and two crossbeams (stipes), with this kind of arrangement:
TT


Consider that there're a couple of mistakes in the 1st post:
“Almost,” Gaius replies, smirking. “Don’t get soft on me, Marcus. Orders are orders. Besides, they wanted to share a patibulum crossbeam. Makes our job easier.”
Gaius laughs, gesturing to the patibulum crossbeam laid on the ground beside the upright. “Hope you two are ready to snuggle. You’ll be nice and close when we nail you.”
And with that, the soldiers begin the grim task of positioning and nailing their charges to the cross, the forest ready to listen echoing with the thud of the mallet and the cries of the girls. But even as they scream, their hands search for each other, fingers locking one last time in a final, defiant embrace.

As Marcus and Gaius lift the crossbeam to align it with the upright, Zenovia and Camilla's bodies hang limply for a moment, their limbs bound tightly to the wood. Marcus aligns the first nail, positioning it at Zenovia's wrist. The sharp point glints ominously in the filtered sunlight.


"Ready, sweetheart?" Marcus teases, his tone light but his eyes soft with pity.
 
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