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Barbaria1

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BESIDE ME

To die alone,
naked on a cross of wood,
a fate too awful to condone,
no one ever should

Wounded wrists,
and shattered feet,
my weary body lists,
forced to admit defeat

My chin drops to rest,
shocks of long brown hair,
conceal my milky breasts,
only my nipples poking fair

My belly flat and dead,
slopes to and gently joins,
thighs weakly spread,
exposing open loins

I need her there,
together beside me,
to witness as I suffer,
my shocking pain to see

Only then can she,
ever grasp for sure,
how deep our love can be,
eternally strong and pure

I die upon this wretched cross,
aching and yearning,
my poor heart at a loss,
wanting and thirsting

To love her is my apogee,
I want her everywhere,
If she is beside me,
I need not ever care

Barbaria, 2014
 
Barbaria1 said:
BESIDE ME

To die alone,
naked on a cross of wood,
a fate too awful to condone,
no one ever should

Wounded wrists,
and shattered feet,
my weary body lists,
forced to admit defeat

My chin drops to rest,
shocks of long brown hair,
conceal my milky breasts,
only my nipples poking fair

My belly flat and dead,
slopes to and gently joins,
thighs weakly spread,
exposing open loins

I need her there,
together beside me,
to witness as I suffer,
my shocking pain to see

Only then can she,
ever grasp for sure,
how deep our love can be,
eternally strong and pure

I die upon this wretched cross,
aching and yearning,
my poor heart at a loss,
wanting and thirsting

To love her is my apogee,
I want her everywhere,
If she is beside me,
I need not ever care

Barbaria, 2014
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and a new masterwork;)
 
Barbaria1 said:
BESIDE ME

To die alone,
naked on a cross of wood,
a fate too awful to condone,
no one ever should

Wounded wrists,
and shattered feet,
my weary body lists,
forced to admit defeat

My chin drops to rest,
shocks of long brown hair,
conceal my milky breasts,
only my nipples poking fair

My belly flat and dead,
slopes to and gently joins,
thighs weakly spread,
exposing open loins

I need her there,
together beside me,
to witness as I suffer,
my shocking pain to see

Only then can she,
ever grasp for sure,
how deep our love can be,
eternally strong and pure

I die upon this wretched cross,
aching and yearning,
my poor heart at a loss,
wanting and thirsting

To love her is my apogee,
I want her everywhere,
If she is beside me,
I need not ever care

Barbaria, 2014
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Now THAT, ladies and gentlemen, is how to do that!!!

Barbaria is one of the few people that I know who can paint with words, here she does that with the added power of rhyme.

Lovely, Barbaria. Absolutely lovely.

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Barbaria1 said:
BESIDE ME

To die alone,
naked on a cross of wood,
a fate too awful to condone,
no one ever should

Wounded wrists,
and shattered feet,
my weary body lists,
forced to admit defeat

My chin drops to rest,
shocks of long brown hair,
conceal my milky breasts,
only my nipples poking fair

My belly flat and dead,
slopes to and gently joins,
thighs weakly spread,
exposing open loins

I need her there,
together beside me,
to witness as I suffer,
my shocking pain to see

Only then can she,
ever grasp for sure,
how deep our love can be,
eternally strong and pure

I die upon this wretched cross,
aching and yearning,
my poor heart at a loss,
wanting and thirsting

To love her is my apogee,
I want her everywhere,
If she is beside me,
I need not ever care

Barbaria, 2014
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Nice writeing Barbaria, as always! Keep on suffering, to our enjoyment!

PS: 'milky breasts'...........do you have something to tell us Barbaria!?
 
Barbaria1 said:
Referring to their pale color xso.....not what you are thinking:confused::eek:
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But we all want to see those lovely, milky breasts, don't we? C'mon!!!! Let's tell the crux squad if they would please , please, please put a ladder up to her cross and have someone scamper up and pull her hair back. Her nipples are indeed fair and pokey, but those wonderful, full, bobbling boobs deserve their time in the sun. If the squad wants a few denarii for its trouble I'm sure we can pass a hat and come up with the change. Here, let me put in the first coin!

Great job, Barbaria! What a wonderfully erotic treat to read after a long day at work.
 
Barbaria1 said:
BESIDE ME

To die alone,
naked on a cross of wood,
a fate too awful to condone,
no one ever should

Wounded wrists,
and shattered feet,
my weary body lists,
forced to admit defeat

My chin drops to rest,
shocks of long brown hair,
conceal my milky breasts,
only my nipples poking fair

My belly flat and dead,
slopes to and gently joins,
thighs weakly spread,
exposing open loins

I need her there,
together beside me,
to witness as I suffer,
my shocking pain to see

Only then can she,
ever grasp for sure,
how deep our love can be,
eternally strong and pure

I die upon this wretched cross,
aching and yearning,
my poor heart at a loss,
wanting and thirsting

To love her is my apogee,
I want her everywhere,
If she is beside me,
I need not ever care

Barbaria, 2014
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beautiful...you have a gift barbaria
 
xso said:
What a pity.....so you need to hang on the cross in a sunny country, to get some colour on them!

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Left myself wide open to that response, didn't I?:confused:
shevak2006 said:
But we all want to see those lovely, milky breasts, don't we? C'mon!!!! Let's tell the crux squad if they would please , please, please put a ladder up to her cross and have someone scamper up and pull her hair back. Her nipples are indeed fair and pokey, but those wonderful, full, bobbling boobs deserve their time in the sun. If the squad wants a few denarii for its trouble I'm sure we can pass a hat and come up with the change. Here, let me put in the first coin!

Great job, Barbaria! What a wonderfully erotic treat to read after a long day at work.
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Thanks shevak, I think;)
 
Barbaria1 said:
BESIDE ME

To die alone,
naked on a cross of wood,
a fate too awful to condone,
no one ever should

Wounded wrists,
and shattered feet,
my weary body lists,
forced to admit defeat

My chin drops to rest,
shocks of long brown hair,
conceal my milky breasts,
only my nipples poking fair

My belly flat and dead,
slopes to and gently joins,
thighs weakly spread,
exposing open loins

I need her there,
together beside me,
to witness as I suffer,
my shocking pain to see

Only then can she,
ever grasp for sure,
how deep our love can be,
eternally strong and pure

I die upon this wretched cross,
aching and yearning,
my poor heart at a loss,
wanting and thirsting

To love her is my apogee,
I want her everywhere,
If she is beside me,
I need not ever care

Barbaria, 2014
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That is so beautiful...and sad.
 
shevak2006 said:
But we all want to see those lovely, milky breasts, don't we? C'mon!!!! Let's tell the crux squad if they would please , please, please put a ladder up to her cross and have someone scamper up and pull her hair back. Her nipples are indeed fair and pokey, but those wonderful, full, bobbling boobs deserve their time in the sun. If the squad wants a few denarii for its trouble I'm sure we can pass a hat and come up with the change. Here, let me put in the first coin!

Great job, Barbaria! What a wonderfully erotic treat to read after a long day at work.
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me a handful for keep them boobs free for my eyes, but especially for the red hot sun on Tree's estate
 
Barbaria1 said:
BESIDE ME

To die alone,
naked on a cross of wood,
a fate too awful to condone,
no one ever should

Wounded wrists,
and shattered feet,
my weary body lists,
forced to admit defeat

My chin drops to rest,
shocks of long brown hair,
conceal my milky breasts,
only my nipples poking fair

My belly flat and dead,
slopes to and gently joins,
thighs weakly spread,
exposing open loins

I need her there,
together beside me,
to witness as I suffer,
my shocking pain to see

Only then can she,
ever grasp for sure,
how deep our love can be,
eternally strong and pure

I die upon this wretched cross,
aching and yearning,
my poor heart at a loss,
wanting and thirsting

To love her is my apogee,
I want her everywhere,
If she is beside me,
I need not ever care

Barbaria, 2014
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Very very good !
flower2
Let me b there n giv u Big hug!
 
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