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Barbaria1

Barbaria1

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Darkness descends
eternal struggle, eternal pain

loved once, loved twice
near tranquility, distant joy

misfortune, bad luck
crime and condemnation

nailed in place
on splintered wood

freedom lost
all options closed

panting and gasping,
head thrown back, screams unheard

light flickers
hope fades

alone, alone
darkness descends

flower1
 
Barbaria1 said:
Darkness descends
eternal struggle, eternal pain

loved once, loved twice
near tranquility, distant joy

misfortune, bad luck
crime and condemnation

nailed in place
on splintered wood

freedom lost
all options closed

panting and gasping,
head thrown back, screams unheard

light flickers
hope fades

alone, alone
darkness descends

flower1
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Beautiful and evocative
 
Barbaria1 said:
Darkness descends
eternal struggle, eternal pain

loved once, loved twice
near tranquility, distant joy

misfortune, bad luck
crime and condemnation

nailed in place
on splintered wood

freedom lost
all options closed

panting and gasping,
head thrown back, screams unheard

light flickers
hope fades

alone, alone
darkness descends

flower1
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Beautiful!!!!!
 
Beautifully done Barb!

The pace, the rhythm, the imagery and the feeling it conveys !!!

Spring water clear!

:bdsm-heart:
 
Adobe said:
I agree with all the above praise. But wait!! Before that light leaves completely... *lick, lick, lick, lick, lick... : )
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What? Are you mailing a letter??? :confused:
 
LittleSiss said:
What? Are you mailing a letter??? :confused:
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Signed, sealed, and delivered from my lips to her labia baby!

*crack! Ladies and gentlemen he hits a homer! Knocked it out of the park! It's a beautiful sunny spring day here.

...or so I wish. There's a blizzard outside. It took me 2 hours to drive 6 miles this morning. That's an average of 3 mph. I'm getting a bit of cabin fever.
 
messaline said:
You would be welcomed in Anjou, Adobe, to lick Messa on her different crosses....:rolleyes:

Oh, Barb, you're so......rousing us ! Why a Rebellion ? Desires are so simple to accomplish...You do well !flower3
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Ah perfect, a dreamy trip to the Anjou Calvaries to cure some of this cabin fever. Thanks for the invite!

Now why rebel? Without some friction there is no motion. That's physics. Haha
 
Barbaria1 said:
Darkness descends
eternal struggle, eternal pain

loved once, loved twice
near tranquility, distant joy

misfortune, bad luck
crime and condemnation

nailed in place
on splintered wood

freedom lost
all options closed

panting and gasping,
head thrown back, screams unheard

light flickers
hope fades

alone, alone
darkness descends

flower1
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Poetic Barb!
flower3
 
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