god6669182
Condemned
Fantastic story thus far! Looking forward to the rest of it.
Thank you @god6669182 ! Glad you liked it, next chapter coming soon!Fantastic story thus far! Looking forward to the rest of it.
Great illustration and accompaniment to the story. Bravo!!!One more illustration I have been working on.
This one goes with Chapter 8 "Scourged"
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Thank you very much @sebastian!Great illustration and accompaniment to the story. Bravo!!!
a story as I like themChapter 13: Torn
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She kissed him again. She welcomed his body against hers, and the touch of his hardening clock on the sensitive skin between her legs. The burning in her loins and the light in her heart were merging as one, wrapping her insides and twisting her indescribable pain into the highest level of excitement she had ever known. She wanted to give everything to him now, her body and her soul. She was scared of course, and in pain, but deep down her entire being was longing for her King to take her and break her. She was His offering now, bound to the cruelest fate at his hands and that of the Gods.
King Silas kissed her back. With one hand, he guided the tip of his hard cock inside her torn opening. And with the other, he brought the tip of the metal claw against her skin, just below her shoulder. And he pressed both, entering the flesh between her legs and at the same time pushing the metal points through her skin. She let out a wail.
- “Aaaaaaaaah”
The King tilted his hips and slowly pushed his rock hard member inside her, all the while tracing down deep red lines across her upper chest. The sharp points of the claw left clear cuts into her skin following the motion of his hand until they reached the center of her chest, between the top of her breasts. Her wail turned into a moan of pain and pleasure as the blades sliced her skin and blood started to seep out of the four parallel cuts, down towards her breast.
- “Aaaaaoooooohhhhhhhhhh!”
Silas increased the power of his thrusts and led the tips of the blades down in between her bosoms slowly. He pushed to dig ever deeper, leaving deep lacerations on the skin of her chest. He dragged the instrument down until he reached the edge of her ribcage. He then lifted it, turned his hand around, and brought the tips of the claws, the curve up, just beneath the base of her right breast. She felt the points of metal push against her soft, sensitive flesh, which made her gasp, contract her muscles and spiked the pain in her tense joints.
- “Haaah! Uff, uff!”
But he did not push the blades in yet. With two fingers of his left hand, he traced back up the bleeding cut between her breasts, coating them with her blood. He brought the fingers to his mouth and tasted it, like a predator drinking the life of its prey. His eyes were now shining with a bloodlust not seen before on his face. His left hand traveled down to the side of her hip and he used the grip to slam his cock even harder inside of her. He completely disregarded the jerks on her painful joints. In his fervor, the claws had broken the skin of her breast, and a red fluid was slowly dripping along the two middle metallic spikes. Her head was tilted back, her mouth open, her eyelids barely parted and her pupils turned high up. She was drinking up the mix of pleasure and pain, intoxicated by the repeated assaults on her sex, the cuts into her skin and the violent slams that were threatening to tear her distended joints.
“Haaarh! Haaarh! Haaarh! Haaarh!”
She screamed every time the King shoved his basin between her legs and assaulted her. It appeared her first lover had now embraced her nature and was taking a vicious pleasure ramming into her torn sex, and inflicting excruciating pain to her already over stretched limbs. She could feel the heat inside her loins increasing shock after shock, her mind bending the unbearable pain into a twisted, intoxicating, rising sexual pleasure. In a brief moment of lucidity, she locked her eyes onto his. He seized the moment and gave a nod to the warriors standing by at each of her side. He wanted her to know that he personally gave the signal for what was coming next.
She intuitively understood the horror of what would come next. She was for a short instant overrun by fear, but her profound nature prevailed and she let the wave of terror wash over her and whither away. Instead, she found herself closing her eyes and surrendering. She relaxed her muscles and opened herself as much as she could to the incredible ordeal that was about to be unleashed upon her.
Her first sensation was the cold metal of the four blades of the claw advancing inside her left breast. The pain was familiar at first, her last husband Sigur had time and again cut her skin and pushed the tip of his blade inside her in this manner. But soon, the metal rods reached deeper than she had ever been invaded. Silas had bent his wrists so the tip of the blades would dig as deep as possible, she tensed and shrieked as she felt the metal scraping against her pectoral muscle, beneath the lump of her soft flesh.
- “Eeeeiiiiiiiihhhhhhhrk”
She was shaking but it did nothing to prevent his assault. Soon, her cruel lover was pushing with all his strength, tearing her bosom up from the inside. The deep butchering of her flesh started to trigger a deep fear and against all reason even heightened her arousal. She raised her head and looked down on her flesh to see four white points poking under her skin, pushing up until to her horror, all four broke the skin and the reddened metal points emerged from her tortured breast. Even for her, this sight was overwhelming and it broke something in her.
- “Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!”
King Silas saw the panic in her eyes, and felt at the same time a series of contractions against his shaft, between her legs. He couldn’t know if she was shaking with pleasure or with pain. And as he understood her, she might not be able to understand the difference anymore. But even this extreme torture could not have prepared her for what was coming next. Soon she tensed and froze, then stiffened like she had been turned to stone by a creature of terror. The Royal Guards had sprung into action.
On each side her sides, between the two successive rings bolted to the rock floor, the warriors had slid their wooden poles under the tensed rope, up to a notch about a foot off the tip, and two strong men on each side had started to lift. At first there was a startled look on Aeva’s face and then a scream that seemed to come from the underworld itself.
This was beyond anything she could have imagined, even with her lifelong history of being the willing torture victim of her sadistic husband. The ropes were constricting her ankles so tightly it felt like they would strip her skin raw, and crush her bones like a handful of nuts inside an iron press. Her elbows and shoulders were simply stretched apart by an insurmountable force, as were her knees and hips. Caught between opposing forces, her crotch was being torn like a half split log pulled apart by an enraged lumberjack.
- “Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!!!!!!!!!”
The scream was horrific and interminable. Strange, deep cracking and snapping noises were coming from her articulations. Inside her, Silas could feel a chaos of contractions, convulsions of panics, and sharp shocks he imagined from joints being pulled apart. Aeva was a fury of screams and shakes, and yet, he continued to push his cock into her thrust after thrust.
He, too, was drinking the pain she was receiving like a demonic elixir. If she was a martyr to the Gods, it was his role to be their hand, make her suffer and revel in the pain of the woman he loved. It was truly a revelation for him, that love and horror could coexist in such a way. All his life he had thought himself as King of peace and kindness, better than his violent forefathers. He would not give in to the violent urges of old, and the massacres and bloodshed that inevitably follow would be the distant memories of a barbaric past.
This dream world of his was no more. He was violently ramming his hungry cock inside a woman he had loved and revered all his life, all the while she was being torn apart by the most horrific ordeal there could be. She was screaming and suffering right there against him, he could feel every tremor of her pain against his skin, her shrieks were deafeningly loud and close. He had even tasted her blood. And yet, all he wanted to do was ravage her further, he wanted to push himself harder into her, he wanted to take even more of her pain and turn it into his pleasure. It was love and assault, care and destruction all at once. But nothing inside him was cowering at the sight of the monstrous spectacle. He was feasting on her, in an orgy of pleasure taken and pain inflicted.
Well written and very intense.Very intensely and atmospherically impressively written, keep it up this way
Now even the pendant with the green stone fits - a coincidence?
Really happy you like the story @ERIN the Brave. Hope you will enjoy the following chapters as well!Well written and very intense.
I'm sure I will.Really happy you like the story @ERIN the Brave. Hope you will enjoy the following chapters as well!
Thanks @god6669182. Aeva's journey dealing with her desires as she goes through this extreme experience is the backbone of this story. I'm glad to hear some of those moments connected with you.Well done describing this transformative moment in the sacrifice. I really enjoy how you've twisted the roles of the characters in this story.
I particularly enjoyed these passages...
"She wanted to give everything to him now, her body and her soul. She was scared of course, and in pain, but deep down her entire being was longing for her King to take her and break her. She was His offering now, bound to the cruelest fate at his hands and that of the Gods."
"Her head was tilted back, her mouth open, her eyelids barely parted and her pupils turned high up. She was drinking up the mix of pleasure and pain, intoxicated by the repeated assaults on her sex, the cuts into her skin and the violent slams that were threatening to tear her distended joints."
"She intuitively understood the horror of what would come next. She was for a short instant overrun by fear, but her profound nature prevailed and she let the wave of terror wash over her and whither away. Instead, she found herself closing her eyes and surrendering. She relaxed her muscles and opened herself as much as she could to the incredible ordeal that was about to be unleashed upon her."
And not just Aeva - King Silas also has been on a journey transforming from the role of gentle lover to the role of Master/Sadist.Thanks @god6669182. Aeva's journey dealing with her desires as she goes through this extreme experience is the backbone of this story. I'm glad to hear some of those moments connected with you.