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amazing PK how you capture the breathless wonder and excitement with which your character would have spoken in this period....it rings so true....the innocence and optimism of German middle-class outlook and mentality of the times .... masterful writing!!!!

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Awww! You are sooo sweet! flower2
 
This really is the hardest story I have ever written. I know the basis, I've had to flip the storyline a few times, I know the ending, but it is truly hard to write! Never, ever, ever try to base something on a Cornish myth or a Wagnerian opera... Never!!!! I have learned my lesson.... Sometimes structure is a blessing but sometimes it makes you want to turn to opium!
 
The writer has a preference, in the hard spirits world, for Talisker.....
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(you'd think they'd have got a Sgitheanach to do the commentary,
not a b....y Sassenach! :rolleyes:)​
 
It’s a bright, sunny morning. That special light that slants low over the Baltic glints off the thin sheaves of cloud in the cool blue sky and a faint wind whispers in the fluttering leaves that crowd around the villa in Hubertus Allee. The girls wander into the dining room, the windows opening onto the hill of Schützenhöhe, wrapped in its thick clothing of forest. The air is fresh and cool, the girls dressed in their light summer dresses. Breakfast is set on the crisp white linen. There’s fresh fruit, preserves, warm bread straight from the bakers and a jug of steaming coffee. They’re excited and chattering about what they’re going to do, but most of all they are longing to see their friend, Tristana, who’s thinking just the same thoughts as she sits down to eat her breakfast with her brother Markus in their lovely house, just around the corner in Bülow Allee.

“Brangane, hurry up and finish! I want to go out and find Tristana! Come on! It’s a lovely day and there are so many things I want to do now we’re here!”
 
“Alright Gisela... Let me eat! We’ve got all day... really we’ve got all week. She’s going to be there all week Gisela, you know that! And I know there’s lots to do. There’s the beach, and shopping, and swimming and the Casino and cycling and... well, there’s so much! And I’m looking forward to seeing Markus as much as you’re looking forward to seeing Tristana. But I think he might still be carrying a candle for you Gisela... You better remember that... Anyway, that’s me done. Give me five minutes and we can go, alright?”

Can you tell I’m excited? I think you can. It’s such a perfect day. Those little wispy clouds have all burned away and the sky is just the sweetest blue you can imagine. There’s the faintest of breezes, just rustling the leaves. But I really don’t care about the trees or anything... I’m just impatient to be off. Tristana’s place is just around the corner, well, almost. We can go either way and I’m not sure which is shortest, but whichever way we go we get to one end or the other of Bülow Allee. I want Brangane to hurry up! Good, she’s here! Off we go! Ooops, almost forgot my hat. It’s a nice white hat with a few flowers stitched onto it and a lovely bow that goes under my chin, but I think I’ll just carry it. We’re off! We’ll soon be there!

The girls prance up the three steps of the villa and pull on the bell. And moments later they are dancing and bouncing and shouting with happiness as Tristana opens the door. The air tastes so fresh and cool; soft curtains blow gently from the windows as the draught flows through the hallway. As they enter, Markus leans out from the sitting room, relaxed in flannels and a soft open-necked shirt. He smiles and comes to greet them, politely offering his kisses, one to each cheek, but lingering just a little as he pushes a curl back from Gisela’s ear, breathing in her youthful scent.

“So, the ladies have arrived at last. I hope you found the long journey not too disagreeable. Well, you’re here, and I know my cous has been dying to see you both.... and so have I... It’s lovely to see you again Gisela. I hope we can enjoy this week on our own, before the old ones arrive, yes? There’s lots to do... come on, let’s have something to drink and we can plan our day, alright?”

And they settle down in the deep leather chairs and leaf through the various brochures and advertisements for the many little diversions that Zoppot has to offer and talk about their last few weeks and their plans for the days to come, waiting for the maid to bring in the little silver tray carrying the pot of coffee.
 
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Chapter 6

Almost inevitably they decide to head to the sea. Markus suggests they get a carriage but Tristana insists that it isn’t far and that the walk will help the girls find their bearings, and of course Gisela and Brangane agree. After circling back to Hubertus Allee to collect their bathing things they cross the broad, tree-lined avenue of Danziger Straße and passing under the railway find themselves in bustle of carts, and stalls in the Wochenmarkt, the red and grey stone tower of St. George’s casting its shadow over the busy shoppers. They glance at the barrows and displays of fresh vegetables and summer fruits before heading down SeeStraße, sloping in a very gentle curve towards the looming bulk of the Kasino in the distance. The broad pavements on either side, shaded by heavy trees, encourage some window gazing and Gisela disappears into Anna Stoppuhn’s little shop, emerging with a small paper bag containing a handful of postcards. She’ll write those later on, she thinks to herself.

The Kasino and Kurhaus wrap their wings around a beautiful square, a fountain playing in the middle. The girls look this way and that, taking in the great building with its central dome, the crowds wandering around, the groups settled at little tables, some reading the newspapers, others deep in gossip. Small children running around in their sailor suits twirling their hoops. Staff getting the little dance floor ready, the court orchestra unpacking their violins and clarinets. But they are pulled inexorably towards the long wooden pier which leads directly over the already-crowded beach out and over the still blue of the Baltic.

“Come on Tristana! Let’s race to the end! I want to run! It’s so lovely. Come on!”

“Alright, alright, I’m coming! Markus, come on, keep up! And you Brangane! First to the end!”

It’s perfect! It’s better than I ever dreamed of! I’m gasping for breath as I hang over the rail at the end of the pier, leaning backwards and letting my hair fall all down my back. I can smell the salt in the air. I’m stretching my arms out as far as I can and I’m staring up at the sky. There’s not a cloud to be seen. I feel like I’m a saint tied to a cruel cross in some far away country; that feeling of being so alive that I’m sure comes with pain and the nearness of death. Oh! What am I thinking? I can feel my breasts against my dress as my chest heaves to draw breath. I let my head fall even further back, until the water seems to float above the sky. It’s wonderful! And now the others are almost with me. I can hear their feet on the wooden boards, but I won’t look yet. I wonder who is first? I knew! She flings her arms around me and gives me a soft kiss on my lips that no-one sees. Of course it’s Tristana! This is going to be the most wonderful week!
 
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The four of them wander slowly back along the pier towards the Kasino. Markus drops back to stroll with Gisela; Tristana talks to Brangane.

“He really likes her you know. And my father thinks they’d make a good pair. What do you think Brangane?”

“What do you mean, “what do I think”? I think you know what I think Tristana. You love her, don’t you? Just as much as she loves you. How can anyone think it would work, her with him. And besides...”

“Besides...you like him don’t you? I know. It’s all stupid and unfair isn’t it Brangane. Nothing ever works out how it should does it? Anyway, it’s a lovely day and it’s a lovely place and he’s happy and we should be happy too, shouldn’t we?”

They turn right at the end of the pier and head towards the bathing station on the Nordstrand. Markus gives Gisela a little kiss on the cheek and the three girls head off to change in their little pavilion. The sun’s glinting on the calm sea and the bay curls away to the north, the green-clad hillsides sloping gently down to the water’s edge. Gisela’s the first to descend the wooden stairs into the water, dipping her toe in and pulling it back with a squeal, then Tristana and Brangane push past her and plunge in, sending spray flying. From the other side of the station Markus swims around, flicking water at them and laughing. Gisela lies on her back and kicks with her feet, swimming away from the beach, gazing at the rows of wicker huts and the crowds of little children in sailor suits and pretty dresses, straw hats tied on with ribbons paddling upto their knees in the shallow water as their parents watch on.

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The sky above a perfect blue, its stillness punctuated by the squawks of circling gulls.

They take lunch in one of the little cafés in the trees behind the Strandpromenade, looking out towards the sea and the strange little Moorish kiosk with its splaying roofs and knots of small boys queuing to buy bottles of lemonade. Markus is in a good mood, teasing and telling jokes, his gaze leaving Gisela’s face only to drift slowly down her neck to the faint opening of her dress and the hint of a shy décolletage, his fine leather shoe edging towards and occasionally finding her ankle beneath the curtain of the white table-cloth.

“So girls, what are you doing this afternoon? More shopping? Or perhaps Tristana you’ll show them the sights of the town? What do you think Tristana?”

“I thought we might take some bicycles out, not too far, to the hills maybe, for the view, into the Statwald perhaps. Would you like that Gisela? Brangane?”

“Well, I don’t think I’ll join you this time. I’ve booked an appointment for a haircut and a shave in town. Dinner is at our place tonight. I’ve told the maid you’ll be joining us. Come early and we’ll play a hand of cards, girls. Alright? So, let me get the bill and we’ll meet later then. And don’t fall off….Those trails in the hills can be tricky you know.”



Chapter 7


The Steinweg soon becomes a sandy track, climbing in gentle curves through the forest, tall pines offering scant shade from the afternoon sun. The girls peddle upwards, just the sound of panted breathing breaking the silence. Eventually they come to a halt, leaning the cycles on the slope. Below them the valley opens out towards the sea, calm and still. Here and there a white stone villa punctuates the landscape. Tristana opens a flask of water and passes it around, Gisela throwing back her head as she drinks deeply, wiping her lip with a finger and smiling.

“Let’s take a little walk, there’s a nice clearing in the woods just by here with a little stream, come on.”

“Tristana, can’t we just look at the view? I’m exhausted. We both are, aren’t we Brangane? We’re not used to all this climbing like you are!”

“Really it’s not far. We can leave the bicycles here. Come on, it’s lovely and shady in the forest. We can fill the flask from the stream too. The water is so clear and cold. Come on! You’ll love it, I promise!”

I think Tristana can see me frowning. It’s not that I don’t like exercise, I do. But really, it was so tiring getting all the way up here. Anyway, we’re here now, and Tristana’s leading us up the little path between the firs. She’s right, and as soon as we’re in the trees it becomes suddenly cooler and I love the smell of pine. Our feet are almost silent on the needle-covered track. It is rather lovely here, I think. It’s leveling out now and suddenly Tristana turns and puts her fingers over her mouth as if to say “be quiet”.

“Shhh…. Quick, come here and look. Over there, come on, stay hidden. Look!”

Tristana points into the little clearing, a shallow depression surrounded by the dark of the forest. A girl is dancing. All alone, singing to herself. Her feet skipping over the soft ground, kicking little puffs of sand into the air. Her hands twirl over her head, slip to her hair, parting and lifting her chocolate curls. She pauses, then spins away again, her limbs flowing in time with her song. She is quite, quite naked.
 
The girls sit beside a solitary silver birch on the edge of the hollow, watching intently. Eventually her spinning stops and she stands, still. Then walks, placing her feet with immense care and focus, towards them. She is not looking up. She pauses, bends. The sun reflects off the sweat standing on her back, emphasising the curve of her spine, the lines of her ribs. She picks up her clothes, a blouse, a skirt. Then her eyes rise and settle on the three watchers. They can see her slowly breathing in, her mouth transitioning into a slight smile.

“Did you watch me? I hope you liked my dancing. My name’s Anita. Who are you?”

“I’m Tristana. These are my friends, Gisela and Brangane. I loved your dancing. I hope you didn’t mind us watching?”

“Brangane. That’s a funny name…. I didn’t mind at all. It’s nice when people watch I think. But I always thought I was the only one who knew about this place. Evidently I was wrong. Do you have something to drink? I’m rather thirsty.”

The girls stand and walk down the little slope to the dancing floor.

“Here. Take this. We can fill it from the stream. Are you from here Anita?”

“Thanks. No. I’m not. I’m on holiday with my mother. We live in Weimar. I love dancing, I suppose you can tell? I really love dancing so much. What about you? What are you doing here?”

“We’re on holiday too. I…Well, my parents…have a villa in town. My friends are visiting. We just came out for a bicycle ride. Gisela and Brangane, they are almost your neighbours. They’re from Thuringia too, aren’t you Gisela?”

“Well, I’m not really from Weimar. That’s just where I live for now. I come from Dresden. My father’s a musician but he’s not with my mother anymore. Anyway, it doesn’t matter. I won’t stay in Weimar. I’m going to move to Berlin. That’s where everything happens. I’m going to be famous. You’ll see! Anyway, I have to go now. Maybe I’ll see you around? Watch out for me! Oh, and thanks for the water. Remember my name. Anita. Anita Berber. I’m going to be a great dancer, just wait and see.”
 
The girls are still. They watch as Anita disappears into the woods, following her own trail.

“Did you think she was beautiful Gisela?”

“No… not so much beautiful…maybe…I would say, striking? She was so… different… I don’t think girls from Weimar are usually like that, what would you say Brangane?”

“I don’t think so… not yet anyway… I don’t think that girls so young as her know what they want so clearly as her…I’m sure I don’t”

“Nor do I…well, a part of me knows a part of what I want I suppose. And… well, you know… But I don’t have my whole life planned out like she did. How could you? I care about here and about now and about us! I care about living every day in happiness. That’s my plan. Brangane, Tristana…what’s yours?”

Well, no-one answers that question, as you’d expect. We just look at each other, sort of knowing the answer but not saying it. Me and Tristana thinking our thoughts; Brangane thinking of Markus and…Well, we’re not even thinking beyond tonight I think! It really has been an odd afternoon. Anyway, we get on our bikes and the journey down the hill is so much easier and very quickly those tiny ants on the beach below turn into real people! Soon we are back in the shady streets of Zoppot and just in time to get home and change for supper. I’m looking forward to supper. It will be nice to really see Tristana’s villa. I hope Markus isn’t too annoying. Surely he can tell that I’m not really interested in him at all and that Brangane’s madly in love with him? Surely? But maybe not. He’s just a boy after all.
 
The girls are still. They watch as Anita disappears into the woods, following her own trail.

“Did you think she was beautiful Gisela?”

“No… not so much beautiful…maybe…I would say, striking? She was so… different… I don’t think girls from Weimar are usually like that, what would you say Brangane?”

“I don’t think so… not yet anyway… I don’t think that girls so young as her know what they want so clearly as her…I’m sure I don’t”

“Nor do I…well, a part of me knows a part of what I want I suppose. And… well, you know… But I don’t have my whole life planned out like she did. How could you? I care about here and about now and about us! I care about living every day in happiness. That’s my plan. Brangane, Tristana…what’s yours?”

Well, no-one answers that question, as you’d expect. We just look at each other, sort of knowing the answer but not saying it. Me and Tristana thinking our thoughts; Brangane thinking of Markus and…Well, we’re not even thinking beyond tonight I think! It really has been an odd afternoon. Anyway, we get on our bikes and the journey down the hill is so much easier and very quickly those tiny ants on the beach below turn into real people! Soon we are back in the shady streets of Zoppot and just in time to get home and change for supper. I’m looking forward to supper. It will be nice to really see Tristana’s villa. I hope Markus isn’t too annoying. Surely he can tell that I’m not really interested in him at all and that Brangane’s madly in love with him? Surely? But maybe not. He’s just a boy after all.

it's like a little dance...no one is saying quite what they are thinking.
 
So....as I am allowed to break up my own story a bit I will.... I am sure that you probably haven't heard of Anita... But she was real... she did come from Dresden and did live in Weimar, but indeed girls weren't like that in Weimar... at least not until after the fall of the Wilhemine Empire... and then they were...oh yes, they were... but by then Anita was in Berlin and was becoming quite famous, very famous. A "priestess of depravity" some said of her...
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She died on the 10th November 1928, aged 29... but how she lived!!!!
 
So....as I am allowed to break up my own story a bit I will.... I am sure that you probably haven't heard of Anita... But she was real... she did come from Dresden and did live in Weimar, but indeed girls weren't like that in Weimar... at least not until after the fall of the Wilhemine Empire... and then they were...oh yes, they were... but by then Anita was in Berlin and was becoming quite famous, very famous. A "priestess of depravity" some said of her...
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She died on the 10th November 1928, aged 29... but how she lived!!!!

Berlin .... Before the Deluge ....

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Adorable, Barbs..... It must have been an amazing time, tilting on the edge of oblivion...... A few more of Anita....
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Otto Dix, Portrait der Tänzerin Anita Berber, 1925, Kunstmuseum Stuttgart
...and how Karl Lagerfeld imagined her for a collection in 2009....
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....she lives on.... amazing isn't it? To find out more, read "The Seven Addictions and Five Professions of Anita Berber"by Mel Gordon... an interesting read.... (but not that well written, sadly...)
 
Adorable, Barbs..... It must have been an amazing time, tilting on the edge of oblivion...... A few more of Anita....
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Anita-Berber5.jpg
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611821_1_detail_50a35c6ef0913_Kunstmuseum_Stuttgart_zeigt_Ausstellung_bdquo_Das_Auge_der_Welt_ldquo_mit_Werken_von_Otto_Dix.jpg

Otto Dix, Portrait der Tänzerin Anita Berber, 1925, Kunstmuseum Stuttgart
...and how Karl Lagerfeld imagined her for a collection in 2009....
dl-21.jpg
....she lives on.... amazing isn't it? To find out more, read "The Seven Addictions and Five Professions of Anita Berber"by Mel Gordon... an interesting read.... (but not that well written, sadly...)

I think I like the fourth one the best ....It's the eyes and that sideways look :)
 
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