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Here I add another story of mine from San Monique, Residuals. A young woman tells herself how her day with the Military Police was...
Yes, another text nobody asked for! ;) But they come as they come...
Just finished reading. Great work.
 
It's a very good story, I really liked it! You were able to perfectly convey the girl's fear and her feelings. I was surprised that they let her go. I thought she would be tortured for a very long time until she died, but then I realized your intention. In the final, you wrote deep philosophical reflections, and it was powerful. I'm really looking forward to hearing more about San Monica from you, don't stop! To read how these girls suffer, it's amazing, the descriptions of the electro tortures are great. And I hope Mia will come back. I really like to read how women torture other women. Good luck with your creative work!
 
Here a story I wrote some years ago and it is quite similar to Didymos last.
It is a short one, but pretty intense. I hope you guys will all enjoy it .

Code

I start to hear sounds around me. My eyes barely open, but I close them again against the bright light shining on my face. A lamp hangs directly above me. I turn my head to the side and begin to realize that I am tied. Perhaps on a wide wooden table, since my legs are painfully spread, my dress is lifted to my waist and I feel that I am completely naked underneath. My arms are also tied apart above my head. The ropes that immobilize me are tight and painfully rub my skin. I am wearing my favorite black strapless dress and from the cool air I feel on my chest I understand that the top of it has been pulled down below my breasts, and my bra is missing. I am still wearing shoes… But that does not matter. A mixed feeling of anger and embarrassment rises inside me. I do not remember anything. In fact, the last image in my memory is how I get into the car in the underground garage of the bank, and then darkness falls.

Footsteps around. I think they are of several people, Someone lights a cigarette and leans over me. Because of the abundant and bright light, I can only see the contours of his face and hear his deep monotonous and emotionless voice, which says:

- Code.

I don’t know what they want from me. I’m just an ordinary manager of a bank branch. Yes, it may be the biggest, but still…

- I want to know the code, Eva. – the voice finally sounds again and this time it seems to me that it is close to my right ear.

No, it can’t be. Is it all because of the damned code of the vault?? Is it…

A strong slap turns my head to the other side, and my hair scatters across my face. I cry out in pain and surprise. Someone's hand gropes me down below and I feel rough fingers penetrating my vagina. I groan and grit my teeth after that.

- Get away from me, you bastard! - I hiss and a second slap knocks my head back again.

Other hands, warm and large, embrace my breasts and start to knead them. For a second I think it's pleasant, but immediately after that these same hands cause me sharp pain, pinching my nipples and starting to twist them cruelly in different directions. I start to squirm on the table and moans come out of my mouth. The other fingers have entered even deeper into me and have painfully stretched my vagina. I feel like the whole palm of the scumbag is inside me, and his fingers are touching my cervix. A mixture of pain and... pleasure is spreading through my body! Damn it! It can't be! Is all this turning me on!?! The hand inside me starts to rotate slowly. The fingers inside deftly and skilfully feel my G-spot. The other one continues to squeeze my nipples…. My face is burning! Excitement, shame, fear… Crazy combination, I think to myself and suddenly I start to feel an uncontrollable wave starting to rise in me! Oh, God! I’m going to cum! No, I don’t want to… No… cummm...
I don’t know where this nonsense comes from, but I say the insane “Fuck you!”

The guy laughs and I feel his cigarette breath very close to me. Again the dark outline of his body and his arms reaching out to me. He’s holding something. A bandage. In a second it’s over my eyes, fastened tightly behind the back of my head.
- Here are the rules: I’m asking you a question and if you don’t answer it will hurt for fifteen minutes. After I’m done, you’ll have the chance to talk again. And so on, until you tell me the code, Eva.

They were going to torture me! The truth hits me with its harsh mercilessness. I try to scream, but strong, rough hands force something into my mouth. I think it’s a rubber band wound around several feet. What the hell is it for…

- Aaahhhh…! – I manage to scream out in my throat when something sharp and metallic digs into my clitoris and interrupts my thoughts about the thing between my teeth.

The pain is intense and seems to be stabbing straight into my brain. My body twists. I barely register the other bite – this time on my right nipple.
My heart starts racing when I hear the characteristic buzzing sound of an electrical device at the bottom of the table I’m tied to. Electric shock! Are they going to torture me with electric shocks ?!? I start to thrash around in panic, my breathing panting and racing.

Electricity hits me with the most nightmarish pain I’ve ever thought could exist! My entire body is stretched out on the table, every muscle in me vibrates with the frequency of the electric shock that pierces my erogenous zones! I try to scream, but I can’t catch my breath. My chest feels paralyzed. I hear someone whistling merrily. The current flows through me for an eternity. My body relaxes abruptly on the table when it is turned off. Has it been 15 minutes?? I try to catch up with my breath, my chest heaves furiously, thirstily taking in the life-giving oxygen.
I feel the rough hand on my right breast. He caresses it with some perverse tenderness….

The electric current again! Oh, God! I feel like they are inserting red-hot needles into my clitoris and nipple! I throw my head left and right and still can’t scream! And the pain is so monstrous !!!

I shake uncontrollably. The only thing I pray for is for the pain to stop! I can’t! I can’t take anymore!!! The current stops, and I collapse on the table. I sob and again I catch up with the air greedily. I feel like I am sweat bathed . The whistling continues. The cigarette smoke hits my nose again and at that moment my brain explodes from another portion of electricity! This time it is stronger than before, I think, if I can think anything at all. My whole world has turned into agony and pain. I feel my body arching over the table, shaking in a surreal dance to the rhythm of the electricity. I choke on something. My body hits the table again. I cough. The rough hand turns my head to one side to let the foam erupt from my stomach drain. Slaps. One. Two. Three! My head shakes to the left and to the right. They remove the thing from my mouth. I feel my jaws tighten. I cry out in pain as they hit me with terrible force between my legs. Maybe it's a rubber baton or a thick whip. I can't tell, but it hits me right on the clitoris that's been bitten by the clamp and I almost passed out in pain! My body twists convulsively, but I can't retract my hips. I'm tied tight.

- You have the chance to tell me, Eva. Code! – the familiar voice again. And again it wants what I must keep at all costs! At all costs! I can’t say it, no! I can’t!

I turn my head negative and immediately the rubber goes between my teeth. They also remove the biting clip from my nipple. Someone opens my labia and inserts something metal into me. I scream in pain when it hits my cervix. No, it can’t be true! Are they going to put electricity in me! IN ME!?! I start to tremble uncontrollably and cry while my torturers are preparing. Horror takes over and I lose control of myself, releasing a stream of urine that makes my executioners laugh. Another buzzing.

- Fifteen minutes, Eva.

The moment the electricity pierces my uterus and clitoris, the sound of an inhuman scream reaches my ears as if from another universe! At that very second I realize that I am screaming! But I can't think anymore! Everything is paralysis. Everything is burning lava that spills into my body! I thought that there could be no more intense pain than the one I felt during the first session, but this one now makes me realize that I was wrong !
Something is scurrying between my legs and splashing on the table. It doesn't matter! I want to die! God, help me!!! My consciousness seems to be starting to turn off when the current stops and I collapse on the table. I vomit, and the rough hand turns me on my side again so that I don't choke on my own fluids. I breathe furiously. Sweat flows in streams from my body bathed in the light above me. My muscles tremble uncontrollably. Two slaps and again the current strikes me with insane pain and cruelty into the depths of my femininity! Red and yellow suns erupt before my eyes, foam comes out of my lips, from tens of kilometers away I hear a voice in the tunnel saying "The dirty bitch peed on me!" and the current intensifies!! Everything happens as if to another person. I have the feeling that I am watching myself from the side - slender, naked and shining, throwing myself helplessly over the table, shamelessly spread-legged and exposed to an unknown number of men, experiencing unearthly pleasure in watching my young body in hellish pain! The current stops again. I agonize. I almost don't feel when someone puts out their cigarette in my left nipple. I react only with a convulsion. From somewhere I hear fragmentary words: "You'll kill her..." "... stick the needle in the clitoris..." "...more current..." "...ass and...". I can't do it anymore! I try to speak, but the rubber between my teeth stps me to . Someone removes it. I hear myself saying in short bursts as I catch my breath: “two….eight…fifty-six….three..one…one...ze...roooo” ….
The darkness embraces me gently. The last thing that crosses my mind is that there is no pain….
 
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Here a story I wrote some years ago and it is quite similar to Didymos last.
It is a short one, but pretty intense. I hope you guys will all enjoy it .

Code

I start to hear sounds around me. My eyes barely open, but I close them again against the bright light shining on my face. A lamp hangs directly above me. I turn my head to the side and begin to realize that I am tied. Perhaps on a wide wooden table, since my legs are painfully spread, my dress is lifted to my waist and I feel that I am completely naked underneath. My arms are also tied apart above my head. The ropes that immobilize me are tight and painfully rub my skin. I am wearing my favorite black strapless dress and from the cool air I feel on my chest I understand that the top of it has been pulled down below my breasts, and my bra is missing. I am still wearing shoes… But that does not matter. A mixed feeling of anger and embarrassment rises inside me. I do not remember anything. In fact, the last image in my memory is how I get into the car in the underground garage of the bank, and then darkness falls.
Footsteps around. I think they are of several people, Someone lights a cigarette and leans over me. Because of the abundant and bright light, I can only see the contours of his face and hear his deep monotonous and emotionless voice, which says:
- Code.
I don’t know what they want from me. I’m just an ordinary manager of a bank branch. Yes, it may be the biggest, but still…
- I want to know the code, Eva. – the voice finally sounds again and this time it seems to me that it is close to my right ear.
No, it can’t be. Is it all because of the damned code of the vault?? Is it…
A strong slap turns my head to the other side, and my hair scatters across my face. I cry out in pain and surprise. Someone's hand gropes me down below and I feel rough fingers penetrating my vagina. I groan and grit my teeth after that.
- Get away from me, you bastard! - I hiss and a second slap knocks my head back again.
Other hands, warm and large, embrace my breasts and start to knead them. For a second I think it's pleasant, but immediately after that these same hands cause me sharp pain, pinching my nipples and starting to twist them cruelly in different directions. I start to squirm on the table and moans come out of my mouth. The other fingers have entered even deeper into me and have painfully stretched my vagina. I feel like the whole palm of the scumbag is inside me, and his fingers are touching my cervix. A mixture of pain and... pleasure is spreading through my body! Damn it! It can't be! Is all this turning me on!?! The hand inside me starts to rotate slowly. The fingers inside deftly and skillfully feel my G-spot. The other one continues to squeeze my nipples…. My face is burning! Excitement, shame, fear… Crazy combination, I think to myself and suddenly I start to feel an uncontrollable wave starting to rise in me! Oh, God! I’m going to cum! No, I don’t want to… No… cummm...
I don’t know where this nonsense comes from, but I say the insane “Fuck you!”
The guy laughs and I feel his cigarette breath very close to me. Again the dark outline of his body and his arms reaching out to me. He’s holding something. A bandage. In a second it’s over my eyes, fastened tightly behind the back of my head.
- Here are the rules: I’m asking you a question and if you don’t answer it will hurt for fifteen minutes. After I’m done, you’ll have the chance to talk again. And so on, until you tell me the code, Eva.
They were going to torture me! The truth hits me with its harsh mercilessness. I try to scream, but strong, rough hands force something into my mouth. I think it’s a rubber band wound around several feet. What the hell is it for…
- Aaahhhh…! – I manage to scream out in my throat when something sharp and metallic digs into my clitoris and interrupts my thoughts about the thing between my teeth.
The pain is intense and seems to be stabbing straight into my brain. My body twists. I barely register the other bite – this time on my right nipple.
My heart starts racing when I hear the characteristic buzzing sound of an electrical device at the bottom of the table I’m tied to. Electric shock! Are they going to torture me with electric shocks ?!? I start to thrash around in panic, my breathing panting and racing.
Electricity hits me with the most nightmarish pain I’ve ever thought could exist! My entire body is stretched out on the table, every muscle in me vibrates with the frequency of the electric shock that pierces my erogenous zones! I try to scream, but I can’t catch my breath. My chest feels paralyzed. I hear someone whistling merrily. The current flows through me for an eternity. My body relaxes abruptly on the table when it is turned off. Has it been 15 minutes?? I try to catch up with my breath, my chest heaves furiously, thirstily taking in the life-giving oxygen.
I feel the rough hand on my right breast. He caresses it with some perverse tenderness…. The electric current again! Oh, God! I feel like they are inserting red-hot needles into my clitoris and nipple! I throw my head left and right and still can’t scream! And the pain is so monstrous !!!
I shake uncontrollably. The only thing I pray for is for the pain to stop! I can’t! I can’t take anymore!!! The current stops, and I collapse on the table. I sob and again I catch up with the air greedily. I feel like I am sweat bathed . The whistling continues. The cigarette smoke hits my nose again and at that moment my brain explodes from another portion of electricity! This time it is stronger than before, I think, if I can think anything at all. My whole world has turned into agony and pain. I feel my body arching over the table, shaking in a surreal dance to the rhythm of the electricity. I choke on something. My body hits the table again. I cough. The rough hand turns my head to one side to let the foam erupt from my stomach drain. Slaps. One. Two. Three! My head shakes to the left and to the right. They remove the thing from my mouth. I feel my jaws tighten. I cry out in pain as they hit me with terrible force between my legs. Maybe it's a rubber baton or a thick whip. I can't tell, but it hits me right on the clitoris that's been bitten by the clamp and I almost passed out in pain! My body twists convulsively, but I can't retract my hips. I'm tied tight.
- You have the chance to tell me, Eva. Code! – the familiar voice again. And again it wants what I must keep at all costs! At all costs! I can’t say it, no! I can’t!
I turn my head negative and immediately the rubber goes between my teeth. They also remove the biting clip from my nipple. Someone opens my labia and inserts something metal into me. I scream in pain when it hits my cervix. No, it can’t be true! Are they going to put electricity in me! IN ME!?! I start to tremble uncontrollably and cry while my torturers are preparing. Horror takes over and I lose control of myself, releasing a stream of urine that makes my executioners laugh. Another buzzing.
- Fifteen minutes, Eva.
The moment the electricity pierces my uterus and clitoris, the sound of an inhuman scream reaches my ears as if from another universe! At that very second I realize that I am screaming! But I can't think anymore! Everything is paralysis. Everything is burning lava that spills into my body! I thought that there could be no more intense pain than the one I felt during the first session, but this one now makes me realize that I was wrong !
Something is scurrying between my legs and splashing on the table. It doesn't matter! I want to die! God, help me!!! My consciousness seems to be starting to turn off when the current stops and I collapse on the table. I vomit, and the rough hand turns me on my side again so that I don't choke on my own fluids. I breathe furiously. Sweat flows in streams from my body bathed in the light above me. My muscles tremble uncontrollably. Two slaps and again the current strikes me with insane pain and cruelty into the depths of my femininity! Red and yellow suns erupt before my eyes, foam comes out of my lips, from tens of kilometers away I hear a voice in the tunnel saying "The dirty bitch peed on me!" and the current intensifies!! Everything happens as if to another person. I have the feeling that I am watching myself from the side - slender, naked and shining, throwing myself helplessly over the table, shamelessly spread-legged and exposed to an unknown number of men, experiencing unearthly pleasure in watching my young body in hellish pain! The current stops again. I agonize. I almost don't feel when someone puts out their cigarette in my left nipple. I react only with a convulsion. From somewhere I hear fragmentary words: "You'll kill her..." "... stick the needle in the clitoris..." "...more current..." "...ass and...". I can't do it anymore! I try to speak, but the rubber between my teeth stps me to . Someone removes it. I hear myself saying in short bursts as I catch my breath: “two….eight…fifty-six….three..one…one...ze...roooo” ….
The darkness embraces me gently. The last thing that crosses my mind is that there is no pain….
Great this forum contains a lot of good writers
 
It's a very good story, I really liked it! You were able to perfectly convey the girl's fear and her feelings. I was surprised that they let her go. I thought she would be tortured for a very long time until she died,
I'm a bit hesitant to write very long torture sessions - I find it always difficult to keep up the momentum. So I'd rather wrap it up quickly. But who knows, maybe Alba's first encounter with the Military Police wasn't her last one... :D

but then I realized your intention. In the final, you wrote deep philosophical reflections, and it was powerful.
I guess Alba was too desperate to give some meaning to what had no meaning for her. Being tortured in some basement is bad enough. But if you're tortured because they want some information or confession from you, you can at least understand why such horrible things are being done to you. If you know what they want from you, you can try to fight it. But like this, being abducted apparently arbitrarily, being tortured arbitrarily, being released again arbitrarily, this must be devastating. It should be suitable to shatter all believes and feelings of security in the world. This is how the Military Police keeps the people of San Monique in submission. It probably was a strong survival move of Alba to seek some philosophical meaning in her apparently pointless ordeal.

I'm really looking forward to hearing more about San Monica from you, don't stop! To read how these girls suffer, it's amazing, the descriptions of the electro tortures are great. And I hope Mia will come back. I really like to read how women torture other women. Good luck with your creative work!
Mia will come back for sure. Still a lot of work for her around! :devil:
 
Here a story I wrote some years ago and it is quite similar to Didymos last.
It is a short one, but pretty intense. I hope you guys will all enjoy it .

Code

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Thanks for sharing! I certainly enjoyed it a lot! It's short, but intense and vivid indeed. And I like the final sentence very much...! :)
 
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