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Pleasure In Suffering
- Thread starter markus
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From the post one before...
One more to translate!!!
Eul is going to have catch up!!!
it's a sadistic trick of Markus - his stories start with just a few speech bubbles, mostly groans and howls -
as they go on, the girls get more and more vocal, and the narrative turns into a long essay!
okay, going to fix myself a drink, then I'll get back to these,
but the Tree-translations look pretty convincing to me
as they go on, the girls get more and more vocal, and the narrative turns into a long essay!
okay, going to fix myself a drink, then I'll get back to these,
but the Tree-translations look pretty convincing to me
Just the narrative on the left to start with:
For a long time now, the three girls have hung from their crosses, writhing in pain ...
moaning or crying softly, slowly dancing the dance of the crucifix,
up and down, more and more wearily ...
mocked with insults and spitting by the cruel crowd,
delighted by this extraordinary spectacle.
From time to time their thirst is quenched with little dirty water
offered them on a sponge on the tip of a cane...
but there's no mercy for them, they just want to watch them dying -
but slowly, no hurry, for the pleasure of looking at their heavy breasts
dangling on their chests, gleaming with sweat ... is PRICELESS!!
Even the girls are in orgasm with that feeling,
being models they can see themselves through the eyes of the crowd...
and what a show ... dishevelled, dirty, suffering,
driving them on to repeated orgasms of exquisite pleasure!
Eul is obviously jealous!!!
Now the thought bubbles:
OOH My god what a pain! Oh ... I'm destroyed!
Here... this is the scene I dreamed of!
Me ... naked... crucifixed, condemned by the law...
to die slowly ... in front of everyone ... under a hot sun ...
without any possibility ... of salvation ...
with the only relief of squirting out.... many orgasms before the end!
We girls who dream of this ... we are beloved ... by the gods!
We are ... we are ... at the end! And what an end!
I am so ... thirsty....
Mamma ... can you see ... how she's dying... your daughter ...
Kate the model?
Oh, Livia! One of us had to end upon the cross
and you ... you offered yourself ... to save me!
They're just going to herd me off to a salt mine!
Goodbye, my love! May your agony be brief!
Oh NO, Drusa!
I hope this ... torture ... lasts ... the longest ... p-possible!
I'm in such... ecstasy!
I ... I've never ... cum ... like this ... in all my life!
When ... you ... you're tired ... of your life ... as a slave ...
then rebel ... and ... get yourself crucified!
EmeritusBoris
Onlooker
The beautiful faces of these crucified girls look so innocent and free of sin, like the glorious martyrs in the old Catholic book with illustrations, "Lives of the Saints." I suggest a story of brave young nuns who are arrested and crucified, their spotless habits diminishing to ever shrinking rags, revealing their glorious bodies until finally stripped bare for the whole world to see.
markus
Tribune
Did you leave off a picture???
markus
Tribune
No, only some word in the translation....Here... this is the scene I dreamed of --even when in Milan I was walking the catwalk"---
Oh silly me - I remember translating that in my notebook, must have failed to copy it in...
Tree is most confused...
markus
Tribune
No. Those are only a few words missing after this----Is this news?
"OOH My god what a pain! Oh ... I'm destroyed!
Here... this is the scene I dreamed of! "
