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The Bureau for the Re-education of Intractable Girls (B.R.I.G.)

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Level 6 Inmate 416-VI was once a proficient hacker, capable of cracking even the most secure vaults with ease. She scoffed at law enforcement, and successfully eluded capture for years. Her largest project, and the one that got her caught, involved her phishing several thousand elderly citizens out of their private information, before using a botnet to systematically steal their identities and siphon millions into her own accounts.

She did poorly in the BRIG system, and soon found herself at the lowest (publicly known) level of the prison. Her crimes were severe enough for the authorities to deem her utterly irredeemable, and she was quietly processed and shuffled down to Level 6, where she spends day after agonizing day experiencing refined torments from which there is no escape. Her name is forgotten, and she is ironically named 'Toilet' - due to her evident distaste for matters involving excrement of any kind. Needless to say, the guards delight in inflicting this upon her, on top of the normal panoply of misery that is due to every Inmate in Level 6.

See below for some images. In the current storyline I'm working on, she's being set up for her nightly torture - generally involving prolonged torture that persists for a number of hours, such as spices or candles on the crotch. She's taken a deal that allows her to exercise her sadistic side for a bit, at the expense of having a much worse torture for the rest of the night. I've already got a pretty good idea for what I'm going to do to her, but if anyone has any particularly good ideas I'd love to hear them!
 

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a pear of agony anal
Anal pear of anguish is a good idea! I think I'll use it. I'm also going to apply suction to her crotch and nipples, with the flesh being pulled into spiked recesses by the vacuum. I think with suction on her breasts and pussy and an expanding anal pear in her ass, she should be set. I think I'll attach the 'handle' of the pear to the grille above her. Since she's suspended upside down, every time she relaxes her leg stumps, the pear will expand further in her rectum.
 
an idea
Looking at the photo, I found the torture method interesting since the brain does not suffer pain.
I imagine a cruel interrogation cutting off part of his head and manipulating his brain causing spasms, nosebleeds, stuttering. the worry of not feeling the damage but knowing that things you don't know will happen to you in seconds
 

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I like your series. please keep it up!

What about permanent hair removal on head and body?

And what about removal of teeth and lip colagen injections, body mods in general?
 

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an idea
Looking at the photo, I found the torture method interesting since the brain does not suffer pain.
I imagine a cruel interrogation cutting off part of his head and manipulating his brain causing spasms, nosebleeds, stuttering. the worry of not feeling the damage but knowing that things you don't know will happen to you in seconds
Hm hm. Honestly, neural torture is a toughie for me, and honestly it veers a little too close to gore/snuff territory that I think I'll stay away. I do like the idea of scanning brainwaves to determine which tortures Inmates particularly dislike, and then applying said torture liberally. Interesting conceptually, but open-brain surgery is far too likely to lead to death. Might be interesting in the context of an interrogation, though...
I like your series. please keep it up!

What about permanent hair removal on head and body?

And what about removal of teeth and lip colagen injections, body mods in general?
Glad you're liking it! Permanent hair removal on the body is already done (through the use of an agonizing galvanic electrolysis process that kill follicles permanently), but I personally like how they look with hair, haha. Something that might interest you: I'm considering adding a sort of sub-Level 6 area, which would contain Inmate's who are deserving of especially brutal punishment. Certainly some of them would be put through extreme body modification.

I'm currently vacillating on the whole 'teeth' thing. Am considering just saying fuck it, they all have dentures, in order to avoid the hassle that oral hygiene is for amputees. Must consider further.

I'm seriously considering doing at least a short story involving a life-sentence Level6a Inmate who is kept in total sensory deprivation 100% of the time, and has her breasts and labia expanded with large suction cups (her nipples and clit are further expanded with 'nested' suction cups inside the larger cups). All of the cups have rings of rotating/osciallting blunted spikes on the inside, of course. Every day, the suction is removed for one hour and her breasts and crotch are subjected to horrific torture - medium chemical peel to remove a skin layer to start, clamps, electricity, heatplay, weights, needles, spices, insect bites, regular bites, whipping, hot wax, etc. The pain is excruciatingly amplified by the 23 hours of suction, as well as the total darkness she is in. Her head is permanently sealed away in a soundproofed box and she can't even hear her own screams through her earplugs, although a decibel counter on the outside of the box shows the Wardens the effects of their efforts. Once the hour of torture is passed, her bits are immediately placed within slightly larger suction cups, and pumped to fill them - cruelly jamming her excoriated, quailing flesh against the spiked interior. As the years pass, her tits, labia, nipples and clit all swell grotesquely, making themselves larger and more sensitive targets for the regular torture. [African people who practice labia stretching regularly get their labia minora around 3-4 inches extended, so there's no reason to assume this Inmate wouldn't reach that length (I need to look into possible hormone treatments to augment this)]. Honestly, just the clit alone being enlarged would be fertile ground for the inventive minds of the torturous Wardens - the engorged tits and labia are simply the cherry on top. The tortures grow ever more inventive as the available flesh grows more - dipping the clit into ice water then molten wax repeatedly, squeezing the swollen tits as flat as possible then skewering them as many times as possible, skewering the clit/nipples with 'rings' of needles, tying a thread around the clit's base then hanging weights, wrapping nettles around her clit, sliding her nipples and clit into a test tube of army ants, etc. Every year, the Inmate's head is briefly removed from the box, so she can see how much her body has changed in the intervening year, before being returned to darkness for another year of torment.
 

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Are they aroused?:SimpHomer:
If you mean the girl in the pictures, nah that's the product of years of suction, as well as a healthy dose of imagination. Besides, if she WERE aroused, I would almost automatically lose interest in the narrative, as from the purely sadistic perspective there is no point in torturing a masochist (as far as I'm concerned, anyway).

If you mean me, then..well, yes, actually. This stuff gets the engine revving for sure XD.

I suppose if I'm to offer a better defense of my interests and proclivities, I should give a brief sampler. There are numerous manga, artists, and stories that influenced me over the development of my depravity to the current point, where I've been stable for around 4 years:

- Mikoshiro Honnin (the artist featured above) - master of the torture of ludicrously expanded girls. My personal favorite is his maid series (first part here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1388557/a5d4dd59d0/)
- Thndrshrk - author of some of the most delightfully extreme setups I've ever seen. His story "The Box" (https://www.grometsplaza.net/world/buried/storiesad/the_box.html) is probably my favorite, and remains one of the best entombment stories I've read.
- 闇雲/雲月 (Ungetsu?) - Japanese artist who envisioned the Reikyoukan, an eternal torture hell significantly more extreme than mine. (https://novel18.syosetu.com/n6016by/59/)
- Free Cities - Twine text-based game that allows you to do a number of atrocious things to slaves in a simulated arcology.
- Alebeard's "The Chair", which years ago gave me the idea of a torture dungeon where Inmates cycle between one torture and another each day, while kept in immaculate health. Website hosting it is down, but can be found on the Wayback Machine (https://web.archive.org/web/2010052...pstories.com/forum/index.php/topic,284.0.html)

There are countless more, of course, but these are the standouts at the moment.
 

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I'm seriously considering doing at least a short story involving a life-sentence Level6a Inmate who is kept in total sensory deprivation 100% of the time, and has her breasts and labia expanded with large suction cups (her nipples and clit are further expanded with 'nested' suction cups inside the larger cups). All of the cups have rings of rotating/osciallting blunted spikes on the inside, of course. Every day, the suction is removed for one hour and her breasts and crotch are subjected to horrific torture - medium chemical peel to remove a skin layer to start, clamps, electricity, heatplay, weights, needles, spices, insect bites, regular bites, whipping, hot wax, etc. The pain is excruciatingly amplified by the 23 hours of suction, as well as the total darkness she is in. Her head is permanently sealed away in a soundproofed box and she can't even hear her own screams through her earplugs, although a decibel counter on the outside of the box shows the Wardens the effects of their efforts. Once the hour of torture is passed, her bits are immediately placed within slightly larger suction cups, and pumped to fill them - cruelly jamming her excoriated, quailing flesh against the spiked interior. As the years pass, her tits, labia, nipples and clit all swell grotesquely, making themselves larger and more sensitive targets for the regular torture. [African people who practice labia stretching regularly get their labia minora around 3-4 inches extended, so there's no reason to assume this Inmate wouldn't reach that length (I need to look into possible hormone treatments to augment this)]. Honestly, just the clit alone being enlarged would be fertile ground for the inventive minds of the torturous Wardens - the engorged tits and labia are simply the cherry on top. The tortures grow ever more inventive as the available flesh grows more - dipping the clit into ice water then molten wax repeatedly, squeezing the swollen tits as flat as possible then skewering them as many times as possible, skewering the clit/nipples with 'rings' of needles, tying a thread around the clit's base then hanging weights, wrapping nettles around her clit, sliding her nipples and clit into a test tube of army ants, etc. Every year, the Inmate's head is briefly removed from the box, so she can see how much her body has changed in the intervening year, before being returned to darkness for another year of torment.
Sounds good. They could also potentially be shown to other inmates as an example, if that fits with your idea of how Level6a would work.

One question is what do you intend to happen to the other parts of the body during this?

About the box and sound detection, you could instead/also use some form of (low light) camera, which would show more information to any wardens or others. Another option, possibly used together with a box, would be some form of mask or blackout goggles (or contact lenses, which do exist irl). These would allow easier access to the head as well.

Also, even if they only see themselves rarely, also photos of progress being shown to them would perhaps be more shocking than just the comparison of the current visual vs their fainter memory.


More generally:

You mention no gore and also use of flaying. When does flaying cross the line for you? For me, virtually any form of "proper" flaying with removal of a sheet of skin would be gore. (The chemical peel you mention for Level6a is probably fine for me given how versions are available for things like skincare.)

Something that hasn't been suggested is some form of orgasm torture (e.g. repeated forced or repeated denial), e.g. with some form of machine. This could be done in a way to not be "arousing" in the normal sense, but more exhausting or sensitizing. I understand it still might not fit your preference. A related thing is to use electricity to stimulate muscle contractions (as opposed to what I assume is more surface level stuff, like the tazer you used before).

Another thing is sounding of some sort, although you might consider that to be covered by catheters.
 
One question is what do you intend to happen to the other parts of the body during this?
Honestly, for this particular instance, I don't really think anything should happen to the rest of her body. Better for her to be forced to focus on the sensations in her bloated flesh, than be allowed the generous 'distraction' of various pain sensations running through the rest of her. In my mind, this Inmate is reduced to the ultimate object - a pair of massive tits and an engorged crotch. No other part of her is worth considering, symbolically speaking. Possibly I'm reading too much into it in my mind, but I like the idea of her being sublimated to only her sexual organs, and even then only for the purpose of causing pain.
Cameras are fine, but I wanted a cheap and easy method for the guards to know the effect they were having.

Regarding flaying, I should have been more specific. I was referring specifically to the removal of the top layer of skin (the epiderrmis) through a meticulous process using either a blade or a steel brush/abrasive material. The lower blood vessels would not be exposed. Indeed, it's pretty much a manual chemical peel. I don't particularly hate gore (unless its excessive), it just doesn't fit with the tone of the setting. Also, I feel obligated to draw a line beyond which I will not cross, if only for my own peace of mind XD.

I enjoy orgasm torture, the only issue is that it's frankly visually boring, making it not challenging to draw. I absolutely love the concept though, especially repeated denial. Of course, no BRIG Inmate is allowed to orgasm, but it certainly would be fun to tease them to the limit and break them down. I have ideas for Level 6 routines involving a full day of denial torture. Basically, without getting too into detail, the Inmate is monitored using an EEG headpiece to track their closeness to orgasm. A Warden stimulates them using a vibe/other, and as the Inmate reaches 95% closeness to orgasm, a 5-minute punishment session is triggered, usually focusing on the crotch. After the punishment, the Inmate must then be worked back up by the Warden, and the cycle repeats. To keep things interesting, Inmates earn demerits and the Warden receives a monetary bonus every time there is a 'close call'. There are other aspects to the routine, but this suffices for a broad overview.

For my recent art, I elaborated on some of the Inmates' sufferings in Level 6 (https://e-hentai.org/g/3124186/98d2891725/). The odd picture out is part of a separate commission I'm doing (for Body Suit Hell by WLotus), but I'm pleased with how this image turned out. I'm currently working on the final part, but it looks like I'll have to break it up into sections, as Maso's torture was taking way too long.

Actually, this seems like a good place to poll - if you'd like a sneak peek at my latest work, check it out here: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/14wEGW1J0-ZCmHyhHioox2L0Rj_hlH5DK. Not sure if this is allowed by site rule, tbh - seems uncomfortably close to shilling for my taste.
 

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Honestly, for this particular instance, I don't really think anything should happen to the rest of her body. Better for her to be forced to focus on the sensations in her bloated flesh, than be allowed the generous 'distraction' of various pain sensations running through the rest of her. In my mind, this Inmate is reduced to the ultimate object - a pair of massive tits and an engorged crotch. No other part of her is worth considering, symbolically speaking. Possibly I'm reading too much into it in my mind, but I like the idea of her being sublimated to only her sexual organs, and even then only for the purpose of causing pain.
Cameras are fine, but I wanted a cheap and easy method for the guards to know the effect they were having.
I see and understand the thinking behind the focus on particular body parts. I thought the cameras would be more interesting visually (and for the guards). The idea you presented for this inmate is very cool.

With regards to suction in general, there are also options using machines, e.g. something machines for milking (that suck and squeeze) and also vacuum motors (that just suck). There are examples of the former in places like Insex and the latter in the shoot Curious Elise Part 2 on Infernalrestraints, where a tube is attached between the motor and her clitoris during the shoot. There is also the option to have electrodes inside the suction cups (possibly electrifying the spikes you mentioned before if you choose to use either).

The electrical muscle stimulation I mention before could be used to maintain fitness of muscles or for forced orgasm contractions with less associated pleasure.

I think you've already mentioned nettles in terms of stinging things. Other options might include jellyfish and cacti for stings. I don't know about the practicalities or how interesting they would be.

Maybe (high pressure) water or air hoses could be used, but may end up breaking the skin. They could also be used for hygiene/health together with (internal and external) scrubbing.
 
The odd picture out is part of a separate commission I'm doing (for Body Suit Hell by WLotus), but I'm pleased with how this image turned out.
Your image does look good. You reminded me of that series by WLotus. I've seen this image by them: https://e-hentai.org/s/8f35efb2cb/2405471-23

Do you happen to know if it's from that series or just a separate thing?
I haven't been able to find another source for it
 
Your image does look good. You reminded me of that series by WLotus. I've seen this image by them: https://e-hentai.org/s/8f35efb2cb/2405471-23

Do you happen to know if it's from that series or just a separate thing?
I haven't been able to find another source for it
I have never found another work by WLotus other than Body Suit Hell, so I'd imagine that picture is a reference to such. Their Hentai-Foundry account (https://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/WLotusArtist/profile) has some more art, but I've only ever seen that picture as part of the E-hentai archive you linked. I assume it was scavenged from their tumblr before the account was deleted, and was part of the BSH Universe (probably when Sarah is having an electric scalpel applied to her clit, thanks to Jayna). Some comments they made on their Literotica account (https://www.literotica.com/authors/WLotus/works/stories) suggest that they're planning to release Body Suit Hell 2 at some point, but there have been no updates in around 2 years.

Honestly, I'm under-utilizing electricity as a torture method. Part of the reason I'm shying away from it is because it's too versatile - there is literally no torture that could not be made worse through the addition of electricity. As such, when I'm trying to construct predicaments/tortures in my head, I avoid electricity, since otherwise it would be part of everything lol. I should try to find a balance, though, since it is pretty nifty as a tool.

Nettles are great, as are poison ivy/oak and the various other stinging plants. I have a list of 'irritating plants' that will be making an appearance, ranging from the benign (nettles and poison ivy), to the moderate (Dieffenbachia - causes swelling and irritation in mucous membranes), to the extreme (giant hogweed - the sap, when exposed to sunlight, causes intensely itchy rashes and blisters. The sensation increases with more UV radiation), to the ludicrous (Gympie-gympie - unimaginable, unfathomable pain for hours when applied. Apocryphally so nasty that when a forest ranger wiped his ass with it, he shot himself in the head to escape the pain. Less anecdotally, horses exposed to it sometimes have to be put down).

Thanks for the feedback and the ideas! When I get around to drawing the suction cup predicament, I will for sure implement some of your suggestions XD.

Attached, see a few pictures from a work I'm very close to publishing on pixiv, once I'm satisfied with the narrative.
 

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Attached, see a few pictures from a work I'm very close to publishing on pixiv, once I'm satisfied with the narrative.
I saw you uploaded the third part of Lvl6's Nightly Routine and thought it was excellent. Do you intend on doing other follow up interludes like Part 2.5 of the same series or was that a one-off?

Nettles are great, as are poison ivy/oak and the various other stinging plants. I have a list of 'irritating plants' that will be making an appearance, ranging from the benign (nettles and poison ivy), to the moderate (Dieffenbachia - causes swelling and irritation in mucous membranes), to the extreme (giant hogweed - the sap, when exposed to sunlight, causes intensely itchy rashes and blisters. The sensation increases with more UV radiation), to the ludicrous (Gympie-gympie - unimaginable, unfathomable pain for hours when applied. Apocryphally so nasty that when a forest ranger wiped his ass with it, he shot himself in the head to escape the pain. Less anecdotally, horses exposed to it sometimes have to be put down).
Just have to say this is impressively comprehensive on that front.

Also, I came across an aphrodisiac called bremelanotide which may or may not interest you. (Credit due to Ted Owens; the comic can be found here: https://www.erofus.com/pic/832673/ted-owen-comics/artwork/20) It would be in keeping with the realism you've maintained, although you may view it not to be thematically relevant to the series.
 
I might do some more interludes of that series, but I'm currently working on Part 4 quite diligently (check here for my latest progress: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1kiFBj2VcUHvfo23ZJbBuDW71d1djj-sY?usp=sharing). I have a lot of plans for future works, and I want to close this one out neatly. Sort of the point of the 'Night Routines' as a concept is the near-infinite variability of every girls' night, since there are so many options available for 'purchase'. As such, I'm more likely to do 'new' scenarios as they occur to me.

Hmm, I'll make a note of bremalanotide. I do try to maintain realism in my work, if only for the sake of my own sensibilities. I think the only way the reader can appreciate the suffering is if it's related to something in reality - it would be difficult for me to gauge the sensation of having my orgasm magically denied for 1200 years, for example (https://e-hentai.org/g/1841226/9c779e21ba/), but I can safely imagine what an electric shock to the crotch would feel like. Also, I'm a massive Ted Owens fan, haha. The only context in which an aphrodisiac would be administered in BRIG would be for the purposes of orgasm denial, which would be... interesting. Definitely something to remember, thanks.

Below, some WIP images of the newest part.
 

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