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The Chosen One by Bartnel and Eulalia
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Well, she is a very small looking woman, and they are rather large monsters.
GOOD LUCK.
Praefectus Praetorio
R.I.P. Brother of the Quill
Shit! There was a comet after all? Who'd a thunk it?
Of Course, It's a CF story, girl!
And us, I hope! Good Idea!
Come on. Just a little think?
Sounds like me coming home from work on a typical night.
Old Spice After Shave and some sen-sens can fix that.
This is a truly magical story
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And now … who’s this behind them, above them, watching me?
A figure … a man … a priest? A warrior?
Something he’s holding, behind him, bright, burning with icy blue …
The dark priest starts singing.
First a soft, sad song, then louder, a wild chant, till, almost screaming,
‘Show us your light!’
I keep still and silent. Suddenly, inside me, I know my power, my hidden power, I must not reveal it …
The warm air’s restless, tossing my curls, the creatures are glaring, gloating, goading me with their stares.
But still I kneel, silent, protected …
The air falls still now, my supple limbs glisten with a sheen of silvery sweat …
the altar stands ready, harsh stone ready for me to be laid on,
I sense how its coarse crust will chafe my soft flesh … if I fail …
Black night above me, damp drops touch my breasts ...
The Dark Priest falls silent, those red eyes spit fire …
I hear a deep sighing, far off, soft but clear … girls’ souls who’ve died here …
The Dark Priest creeps closer, his breath feels aflame,
the creatures are dancing, sweat streams with my fear …
But how shall you resist?
And the girl looks so sweetly vulnerable...
Intriguing. Will this girl also fail...or did the girls who died succeed?
I suspect we will soon know...one way or the other.
This is entirely captivating.
Now, that’s an original line that I like very much! Sweat streams with my fear ... nice!
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twonines
LIMERICUS
A feeling your Singapore incarnation is about to experience at first hand, barring some miraculous Act of God.
Sharkman
Governor
Wonderful. Lovely. Witching.
cynthia the inocent
Tribune
I want to be her
Praefectus Praetorio
R.I.P. Brother of the Quill
So many times, Alone but not alone.
"Oh, but you are alone. Who knows what you have spoken to the darkness, alone, in the bitter watches of the night, when all your life seems to shrink, the walls of your bower closing in about you, a hutch to trammel some wild thing in? So fair, yet so cold like a morning of pale Spring still clinging to Winter's chill. "
I would have run faster, having shed a fair amount of mass through enhanced excretion.
So ominous! So frightening! So sexy!
Sharkman
Governor
It would be a pleasure.
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What’s that? Through the Forest, deep rumbles, faint flickers … my bare body quivers …
Brilliant, blinding, the lightning reveals me!
Dread-roar of thunder, word of the Bright Lord!
The beasts flee in fear …the Dark Priest has vanished …
My light now shines clear
THE END
Beautiful image and poetic ending.
I HAVE TO SAY, I THOUGHT THOSE BEASTS WERE RATHER DISAPPOINTING IN THE END. NO STAYING POWER.
Sharkman
Governor
I HAVE TO SAY, I THOUGHT THOSE BEASTS WERE RATHER DISAPPOINTING IN THE END. NO STAYING POWER.
On what can you count these days?
ah, we females have hidden powers beyond those of the beastliest of beasties!Beautiful image and poetic ending.
I HAVE TO SAY, I THOUGHT THOSE BEASTS WERE RATHER DISAPPOINTING IN THE END. NO STAYING POWER.
Now in archive:
and libary too:
and libary too:
Crux-forums E-book Library
No: 299 Laeti-Dazza Productions - Ne me crucifie pas, Messaline L'édition française - narration de Migoz2 - traduction par Messaline
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Don't you just!ah, we females have hidden powers beyond those of the beastliest of beasties!
rowolf
Guard
BartNel has now released his own pdf version
https://www.deviantart.com/bartnel/art/The-Chosen-One-pdf-841744774
https://www.deviantart.com/bartnel/art/The-Chosen-One-pdf-841744774