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love 'em nard - thanks​
the starlit sky and mountain backdrop make a great setting for your vivid animation​
bringing my ideas to life -​
I think I see her as my lover Barbara​
 
A bit more color, having been out in the sun all day...

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...am looking forward to doing some work on those 'gargoyles'... :)
In the mini-series below, you get some idea of how greedily she's sucking for air -- but what you can't see so plainly from the stills is a 'leeetle zurprize' in the animation -- which I dare say just may delightfully tickle your sado/maso bone! :D
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13 chapters, God knows how many pages.​
It depends of course on how it's saved,​
the format, the margins, the font size, etc.​
Compared to size of the files I keep,​
it's approximately 250 pages,​
1,700 paragraphs,​
11,000 lines​
and​
134,000 words.​
No mean contribution to the archives.​
 
yes GDO, that's about what I make it -​
still doing a final read-through make a few minor corrections and changes​
so that it's consistent and hangs together from beginning to end​
(like me and the other girls do at the end!)​
 
Eul brings up a good point here. If you watch credits at the end of a movie there is almost always a 'Continuity Director' whose job is to review the whole damn thing and makes sure it is plausible. Writing a long story it becomes easy to get conflicting facts in there.

The one that really earned his pay was the one overseeing the 'Back to the Future' series of movies. I've watched them countless times and can't find a fault.

In the 'StarTrek' series they gave up and said had Spock say the whole 'space time' thing didn't exist, and in the Steve McQueen classic 'Bullitt' the Charger he is chasing loses 7 hub caps off four wheels and they pass the same blue VW Beetle like five times (although that could have happened with Admi driving it...)

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Yes, soaps have to keep even more complicated records of who's done what when and where, some viewers/ listeners will always spot if there's an inconsistency - I've got a doc called 'IPCG girls' where I tried to keep running notes, it avoided the more obvious slips, but there were a few characters (girls and guys) who appeared and disappeared for no obvious reasons and I can make better use of them.
 
me tooooooooooooo:D
 
Almost 135,000 words in 13 chapters. The highest quality, both in linguistic expression, as well as in the best grammar, orthographically nearly flawless! This is good literature!

My congratulations to Eulalia for this work!
 
It's on its way, I've worked through making a few small changes for the sake of consistency and continuity, and now Admi is turning it into pdfs. Thanks for your interest!
 
It's on its way, I've worked through making a few small changes for the sake of consistency and continuity, and now Admi is turning it into pdfs. Thanks for your interest!
this weekend i'll posting the pdf's
 
Slides great for stimulating imagination.
1) night: cold, terrible on the cross 2) woman is tired: the knees are bent. 3) horn comes in the ass: is not pleasant, but it supports. 4) support underfoot: extends the life of agony 5) chest compressed to the body fall: low oxygenation then open mouth, and dryness of the mouth... help wather, impossible drink. 6) eyes wide open: pain, horror, helplessness, sense of impending doom 7) little hands to claw 8) good haircut humiliating, ideal... shaved. 9) absent climax for the horn and spontaneous piss ... next time
 
That was great! Gorgeous!
Insane, tragic and beautiful, a real revelation.
Respect the amount of labor and the sensation, necessary to formulate all this fantasy and to turn it to written word!
Eulalia, You are a real melodist of the Dark Side! I love You!
 
What a shame ! see i just check my stupid 3D stuff and i was losing this anamazing story
Congratulations !!

Yours
Jack
 
What a shame ! see i just check my stupid 3D stuff and i was losing this anamazing story
Congratulations !!

Yours
Jack
:confused:
 
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