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The Midnight Ride Of Barbara Moore

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Naked goddess?
(Phlebas runs out into the rain)
Where? Where?
Strong story, Barb, why does that Wragg have all the luck?
Watch out on your drive, PP, as "the flame trees will blind the weary driver" (Oz music reference)

Pp does love the Chisel:

And there's nothing else could set fire to this town
There's no change, there's no pace
Everything within its place

Don Walker wrote those lyrics from memory. Not one from Mossy.

Pp is surprised you didn't see the smoke on the harbour, fire in the sky - just to slip an oblique music reference in myself. Barb's wrath lit up western Victorian plains and I thought you would see it from Sydney.
 
Pp does love the Chisel:

:D

Pp is surprised you didn't see the smoke on the harbour, fire in the sky - just to slip an oblique music reference in myself. Barb's wrath lit up western Victorian plains and I thought you would see it from Sydney.

ah yes, I see the results of her wrath now (another visual oz music reference)

red-sails-in-the-sunset-5079dbd99ada5.jpg

now off to my dinner
 
:D



ah yes, I see the results of her wrath now (another visual oz music reference)

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now off to my dinner
The Oils! But it was her wrath rather than red sails you saw in the sunset Phlebas. Let's leave Barb's thread now for others to comment on her wonderful poetry.
 
THE MIDNIGHT RIDE OF BARBARA MOORE


(with apologies to H.W. Longfellow
)

Listen my friends to a tale of yore,
of the midnight ride of Barbara Moore,
who on the twenty-sixth of December,
in the revolutionary year of Seventy-six,
rode out on a cold and wintry night,
from Washington’s encampment at Valley Forge,
a message to deliver Congress, in Philadelphia,
of a bold rebel plan to come out and fight.

Riding hard with wild abandon
across a darkened countryside,
slowing to lead her steed on foot,
through blissfully slumbering towns,
only to mount and speed away once more,
body bent forward, knees pressed tight,
nudging frothy and heaving equine sides,
thundering hooves, clumps of dirt flying behind

Another town appears round the bend,
slow, dismount, quietly approach,
but suddenly out of the shadows from either side,
two red-coated grenadiers reach out,
grab the reins of her mount,
bar her path with muskets ready,
“halt, who goes there,”
one of them shouts.

“Tis just I, a local girl,
making my way home,”
she lies,
quickly adding,
flashing her very best smile,
“t’was caring for an elderly friend,
forgot the time,
you know how it goes?”

“What’s going on here?”
demands a new and commanding voice,
“Tis a young un, out after curfew,
Colonel Wragg, m’Lord”
responds the grenadier,
as he straightens up,
and proffers a quick,
and smart salute.

The officer reaches out,
and with one swift motion,
pulls back her hood,
her long brown hair,
tumbles free,
moonlight reflects,
from a youthful,
but fiercely defiant face.

“Has a rebel look,
about her methinks,”
sneers the officer,
as he glares intently at her face,
“Best we retain,
and question her,
something suspicious here,
of that I am sure.”

But before he can make,
another move,
she deftly moves,
her hand to mouth,
stuffs a folded note within,
steps back a pace,
jaws it twice,
and swallows hard.

Enraged, the officer,
bellows to his men,
“I knew it,
she’s a rebel,
a courier it seems,
we must at once,
make her talk,
no time to lose!”

“Tie her hands,
and string her up,
by yonder branch,
of that old tree,
then fetch my whip,
won’t last long once she,
gets a taste of the lash,
sure to sing like a bird.”

The grenadiers take her in hand,
walk her to the tree,
by the side of the road,
remove her cape and hood,
and bind her wrists,
with a stout thick cord,
the end of which is thrown,
over a low-hanging branch.

While one grenadier,
tugs on the end of the rope,
raising her arms above,
her tossled, dark-haired head,
the other tugs and pulls,
at her dress and bodice ‘till,
she is stripped bare to the waist.

The moonlight shines upon,
white heaving breasts,
rising high, upturned and perky,
above a frame of protruding ribs,
and a flattened tummy,
sloping down between bared hips,
to plunge beneath folds
of torn and shredded cloth.

Dancing about
toes just touching,
the gravel on the side,
of the road,
she spins slowly,
offering front and back
to the watching officer,
standing hands on hips.

“Tell me your name!”
he commands,
brandishing a long,
leather braided-whip.
“Barbara,
Barbara Moore”
she replies, gasping as
her arms jerk higher.

“Where were you headed,
what did that message,
you swallowed say?”
queries the officer,
his voice hard and cold,
“what message?”
replies the girl,
brown eyes flashing with contempt.

He responds,
with a crack of his whip,
the braided leather,
cutting diagonally across,
her pale bare back,
causing her to jump,
and fill the air with,
a dawn-out high-pitched scream.

Sashes fly up,
all along the street,
startled and curious,
faces appear,
what on earth could be happening,
this ungodly time of night,
in this quiet Loyalist town,
garrisoned by friendly British troops?

“Again,” he shouts,
With red-faced rage,
“answer my questions,
now or else!”
she sobs, convulses,
twists around,
but offers him nothing,
only a spit on the ground.

For the next several minutes,
the lashes fly,
slicing away at tender feminine flesh,
scourging her back,
striping ribs and tummy,
tops of bare hips,
punishing her pair of
bouncing, wobbling breasts.

She faints, her head lolls forward
between her upstretched arms,
tiny rivulets of blood flow
from dozens of cuts and scrapes,
spread over her back and front,
“Revive her”,
he yells at his men,
as a crowd gathers nearby.

Snow is rubbed on her face,
her cheeks are slapped,
she starts and wakes,
“Talk!” yells the officer
his hand gripping her chin,
shaking her head,
to and fro,
then throwing it back hard.

Stepping back,
he barks a command,
“strip her the rest of the way,
my whip is hungry,
for fresh targets!”
Eager hands rush forward,
her remaining clothing,
collects around her ankles

Spinning slowly,
arms pulled higher,
feet no longer in touch,
with the ground,
she shows a tight little white ass,
while narrow hips and well-toned thighs frame,
in the shimmering moonlight,
a perfect triangle of dark curly hair.

The lashes fly once again,
she shrieks and moans,
under the unending assault,
pulls her knees up,
kicks and squirms,
as the whip slices
cuts, slaps, and ultimately
plunders her most private zone.

But then from,
far down the road,
to the south,
the sound of gunfire,
rends the cold dark night,
“It’s Trenton, m’Lord,
the rebels have come
out to fight.”

“Leave her here,
she’s of no use now,
muster the men,
get ready to move.”
shouts the officer,
glancing at the reddish glow,
on the horizon,
of burning Trenton.

Turning to her,
he silently approaches,
“Brave little bitch,
I guess you have won,
pity we didn’t meet,
in a more pleasant way.
farewell for now,
I leave you this.”

With an upward thrust,
handle up,
he forces his whip into her sex,
walks away with a shrug,
leaving the remnants
of the dispersing crowd,
gawking and gaping,
at our heroine, Barbara Moore.


BARBARIA, 2015
Both pic n words are really well done :)flower3flower3
 
THE MIDNIGHT RIDE OF BARBARA MOORE

(with apologies to H.W. Longfellow)

Listen my friends to a tale of yore,
of the midnight ride of Barbara Moore,
who on the twenty-sixth of December,
in the revolutionary year of Seventy-six,
rode out on a cold and wintry night,
from Washington’s encampment at Valley Forge,
with a message to Congress, in Philadelphia,
of a bold rebel plan to come out and fight.

Riding hard with wild abandon
across a darkened countryside,
slowing to lead her steed on foot,
through blissfully slumbering towns,
only to mount and speed away once more,
body bent forward, knees pressed tight,
nudging frothy and heaving equine sides,
thundering hooves, clumps of dirt flying behind

Another town appears round the bend,
slow, dismount, quietly approach,
but suddenly out of the shadows from either side,
two red-coated grenadiers reach out,
grab the reins of her mount,
bar her path with muskets ready,
“halt, who goes there,”
one of them shouts.

“Tis just I, a local girl,
making my way home,”
she lies,
quickly adding,
flashing her very best smile,
“t’was caring for an elderly friend,
forgot the time,
you know how it goes?”

“What’s going on here?”
demands a new and commanding voice,
“Tis a young un, out after curfew,
Colonel Wragg, m’Lord”
responds the grenadier,
straightening up,
and proffering a quick,
and smart salute.

The officer reaches out,
and with one swift motion,
pulls back her hood,
long brown hair,
tumbles free,
moonlight reflects,
a youthful,
but fiercely defiant face.

“Has a rebel look,
about her methinks,”
sneers the officer,
glaring intently at her face,
“Best we retain,
and question her,
something suspicious here,
of that I am sure.”

But before he can make,
another move,
she deftly moves,
her hand to mouth,
stuffs a folded note within,
steps back a pace,
jaws it twice,
and swallows hard.

Enraged, the officer,
bellows to his men,
“I knew it,
she’s a rebel,
a courier it seems,
we must at once,
make her talk,
no time to lose!”

“Tie her hands,
and string her up,
by yonder branch,
of that old tree,
then fetch my whip,
won’t last long,
once she gets a taste of the lash,
sure to sing like a bird.”

The grenadiers take her in hand,
walk her over to the tree,
by the side of the road,
remove her cape and hood,
and bind her wrists,
with a stout thick cord,
the end of which is thrown,
o'er a low-hanging branch.

While one grenadier,
tugs on the end of the rope,
raising her arms above,
a tossled, dark-haired head,
the other tugs and pulls,
at her dress and bodice
stripping her bare to the waist.

The moonlight shines,
on white heaving breasts,
rising high, upturned and perky,
above a frame of protruding ribs,
a flattened tummy slopes,
down between bared hips,
to plunge beneath folds
of torn and shredded cloth.

Dancing about
toes just touching,
gravel on the side,
of the road,
she spins slowly,
offering front and back
to the officer,
watching hands on hips.

“Tell me your name!”
he commands,
brandishing a long,
leather braided-whip.
“Barbara,
Barbara Moore”
she replies, gasping as
her arms jerk higher.

“Where were you headed,
what did that message
you swallowed say?”
queries the officer,
his voice hard and cold,
“what message?”
replies the girl,
brown eyes flashing contempt.

He responds,
with a crack of his whip,
the braided leather,
cutting diagonally,
across her pale bare back,
causing her to jump,
and fill the air,
with a dawn-out high-pitched scream.

Sashes fly up,
along the street,
startled and curious,
faces appear,
what on earth could be happening,
this ungodly time of night,
in this quiet Loyalist town,
garrisoned by friendly British troops?

“Again,” he shouts,
with red-faced rage,
“answer my questions,
now or else!”
she sobs, convulses,
twists around,
but offers him nothing,
save a spit on the ground.

For several minutes,
the lashes fly,
slicing away at tender feminine flesh,
scourging her back,
striping ribs and tummy,
tops of bare hips,
punishing bouncing,
wobbling breasts.

She faints, her head lolls,
between upstretched arms,
tiny rivulets of blood flow
from dozens of cuts and scrapes,
spread over her back and front,
“Revive her”,
he yells at his men,
as a crowd gathers nearby.

Snow is rubbed on her face,
her cheeks are slapped,
she starts and wakes,
“Talk!” yells the officer
his hand gripping her chin,
shaking her head,
to and fro,
throwing it back hard.

Stepping back,
he barks a command,
“strip her the rest of the way,
my whip is hungry,
for fresh targets!”
Eager hands rush forward,
her remaining clothing,
collects around her ankles

Spinning slowly,
arms pulled higher,
feet no longer,
touching the ground,
she shows a tight little white ass,
narrow hips and well-toned thighs,
framing in the shimmering moonlight,
a perfect triangle of dark curly hair.

The lashes fly once again,
she shrieks and moans,
under unending assault,
pulls her knees up,
kicks and squirms,
as the whip slices
cuts, slaps, and ultimately
plunders her most private zone.

But then from,
far down the road,
to the south,
the sound of gunfire,
rends the cold dark night,
“It’s Trenton, m’Lord,
the rebels have come
out to fight.”

“Leave her here,
she’s of no use now,
muster the men,
get ready to move.”
shouts the officer,
glancing at the reddish glow,
on the horizon,
of burning Trenton.

Turning to her,
he silently approaches,
“Brave little bitch,
I guess you have won,
pity we didn’t meet,
a more pleasant way.
farewell for now,
I leave you this.”

With an upward thrust,
handle up,
he forces his whip into her sex,
walks away with a shrug,
leaving the remnants
of the dispersing crowd,
gawking and gaping,
at our heroine, Barbara Moore.

BARBARIA, 2015
That is absolutely, incredibly, fantastic, Barb!!!

flower3

(As if a British officer would behave that way :rolleyes:)
 
That's some really nice writing Barb!

Cleverly composed and beautiful as always!
Both pic n words are really well done :)flower3flower3
Just echo all the other praise! A "ripping yarn" and an exciting scene - well told!!!! I'll be dreaming this one all night!!!!
That is absolutely, incredibly, fantastic, Barb!!!

flower3

(As if a British officer would behave that way :rolleyes:)

Thank you all!!! :)

Pleasant dreams PK and hey, Wragg, just another one from Cruxton Abbey's ancestral rogue's gallery...seriously, he was just doing his job.
 
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well if i was there after the soldiers left Barb would be removed to a nice bed tied spread eagle an slowly ravished an if she became hostile more lashes on her body. then near morning she would be freed!!! whats a dirty old man too do with such a lovely young lady??

I don't know how much I would like more lashes, but I do like the idea of being freed :) Thanks rb!
 
Wragg's Wremorse?

And then that devilish Lord Wragg
O’ercome with deep remorse was he
That lovely woman on her tree
No more to love (no more to shag).
Outside his tent, ‘twas bitter cold
How long would Barb’ra last in this?
Her raven hair would start to frizz!
Her lovely bones would not grow old!


And so he called Pp, his man
He woke him from his slumber, deep -
“Oi! What about my beauty sleep?”
“Shut up! I have a cunning plan!
“For during these colonial treks
“A woman’s touch I’ve hardly felt
“I’ve hardly loosed my trouser belt!
“In short, I need a bit of sex!”

“You randy bugger, what d’you mean?
“”You scored last night in that old town
“With whatshername, yes! Dotty Brown!
“I heard you pant, I heard her scream!
“I know she was a lovely sight
“Her tits were much to be admired
“But that is why I’m very tired!
“I didn’t sleep a wink last night!”

“The racket that your Lordship made
“You bonked and shagged the whole night long!
“The sound of her orgasmic song
“The whole street knew that she’d got laid!
“So piss off, mate, and go to bed
“Let Barb’ra stay right where she hangs
“Zip up your fly and curb your pangs
“I reckon she’s already dead!”

His master followed this advice
And went and found his sleeping bag
For he was quite a tired Wragg
His bed was warm, and it was nice!
And Barb’ra’s plight he just ignored
Forgot that she was hanging there
All naked in the cold night air.
He rolled upon his back, and snored.

But Barb’ra, hanging all alone
She heard a rustle near at hand
Felt someone cut her binding bands
She uttered just one grateful groan.
Her saviour? Twas too dark to see
‘Not Wragg,’ she hoped, ‘a dreadful choice!’
But then she heard a friendly voice
“Don’t worry, Barb! It’s me, Pp!”
 
Wragg's Wremorse?

And then that devilish Lord Wragg
O’ercome with deep remorse was he
That lovely woman on her tree
No more to love (no more to shag).
Outside his tent, ‘twas bitter cold
How long would Barb’ra last in this?
Her raven hair would start to frizz!
Her lovely bones would not grow old!


And so he called Pp, his man
He woke him from his slumber, deep -
“Oi! What about my beauty sleep?”
“Shut up! I have a cunning plan!
“For during these colonial treks
“A woman’s touch I’ve hardly felt
“I’ve hardly loosed my trouser belt!
“In short, I need a bit of sex!”

“You randy bugger, what d’you mean?
“”You scored last night in that old town
“With whatshername, yes! Dotty Brown!
“I heard you pant, I heard her scream!
“I know she was a lovely sight
“Her tits were much to be admired
“But that is why I’m very tired!
“I didn’t sleep a wink last night!”

“The racket that your Lordship made
“You bonked and shagged the whole night long!
“The sound of her orgasmic song
“The whole street knew that she’d got laid!
“So piss off, mate, and go to bed
“Let Barb’ra stay right where she hangs
“Zip up your fly and curb your pangs
“I reckon she’s already dead!”

His master followed this advice
And went and found his sleeping bag
For he was quite a tired Wragg
His bed was warm, and it was nice!
And Barb’ra’s plight he just ignored
Forgot that she was hanging there
All naked in the cold night air.
He rolled upon his back, and snored.

But Barb’ra, hanging all alone
She heard a rustle near at hand
Felt someone cut her binding bands
She uttered just one grateful groan.
Her saviour? Twas too dark to see
‘Not Wragg,’ she hoped, ‘a dreadful choice!’
But then she heard a friendly voice
“Don’t worry, Barb! It’s me, Pp!”

Ohhh Gawwwwwwwd :rolleyes:

brcc-dee.jpg Second fiddle to Dorothy, and now left in the hands of a whip-happy ancestor of a breed largely shipped off a generation later to some god-forsaken penal colony on the other side of the world.
:confused:
 
Ohhh Gawwwwwwwd :rolleyes:

View attachment 187925 Second fiddle to Dorothy, and now left in the hands of a whip-happy ancestor of a breed largely shipped off a generation later to some god-forsaken penal colony on the other side of the world.
:confused:
Pp has but one convict ancestor. That one became a successful businessman before falling to old ways and being caught with a horse suspected of being stolen. The balance were either English farmers and merchants or English and Irish soldiers and sailors. There is a little Wales from about the 14th century but he was believed to be rather mercenary.
Whip-happy Pp will remember the slight on the majority of his ancestry as he takes you somewhere to warm your poor, almost frozen, body.
 
Pp has but one convict ancestor. That one became a successful businessman before falling to old ways and being caught with a horse suspected of being stolen. The balance were either English farmers and merchants or English and Irish soldiers and sailors. There is a little Wales from about the 14th century but he was believed to be rather mercenary.
Whip-happy Pp will remember the slight on the majority of his ancestry as he takes you somewhere to warm your poor, almost frozen, body.

Have begun constructing a genealogical chart, labeled at the top...."Whip-Happy Aussie" :rolleyes:
 
Have begun constructing a genealogical chart, labeled at the top...."Whip-Happy Aussie" :rolleyes:
As long as Barb understands that, in Australian English, "bastard" has a multitude of meanings that all comes down to the way it is pronounced and the situation. Pp has only one bastard ancestor (in the word's more established meaning) and that was in, he recalls, the 17th century where the mother's occupation is cheerfully described in parish records as a "bad woman". Pp suspects she has other progeny here.
 
Barbara Moore's Morning Rescue

He watches, sees her hanging there,
Whipped and ravished, her brunette hair,
Hanging soft across her back,
Slashed and marked by an artless hack......

To be continued when Pp can find some quiet time in a busy home though it might not end as safely as Barbara might wish.
 
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