Dorothy Brown
Brown Sugar
Now that is truly amazing,if i met the man
who invented that i would sleep with him
for a month with no limits
I think my mum's bf is more than capable of building something like thatNow that is truly amazing,if i met the man
who invented that i would sleep with him
for a month with no limits
No Brakes ... Good.
I think my mum's bf is more than capable of building something like that
Sorry to put a wet blanket on this story, but in the fifties a cop in England proved murder when he found stones from the gall bladder where the murderer had dumped the vat of acid he used to get rid of the body of the person he had murder. The stones don't dissolve.(What was I thinking? I must have been drinking to
Come up with something like this.
So I gave it a shot. You will like it or not.
Sometimes my stuff''s so hit and miss.)
Dear Dorothy Brown was from well out of town,
An English lass here in the states.
Her car just broke down, which had caused her to frown.
Now she was due to be late.
Out of the city, it was such a pity none
Came by to give her a lift.
A mile down the road she observed an abode
It looked like she’d gotten a gift.
About half past four she did knock on the door and
A kind gentleman let her in.
He gave her a seat which was pretty damned neat
Before plying the lass with his gin.
He gave her a tour; it was over an hour
When he showed her a rug on the floor.
“It’s just a rug,” she observed with a shrug,
When he moved it to show the trap door.
“Now would you care to see just what’s down there?”
He asked as she started to frown.
“I think you’ll agree it’s a strange sight to see
Which I’ll show if you wish, Mrs. Brown.”
Down steps of stone she felt so all alone,
Was this someone she knew she could trust?
He’d let her right in and had offered her gin.
For now he seemed so generous.
The basement was grotty, no signs of a potty
Inside that dark, dank storage room.
Above was a beam, a quite large one. It seemed
The whole place stood out more like a tomb.
She spoke of the rafter. “Just what are you after
To have such a room much too shoddy?”
“The rafter I need to accomplish the deed
Of uplifting a dangling body.”
With a dubious eye the lass said, “You must lie,
For that beam is not sturdy enough.”
He told her it was and he said it because
He had studied and knew all this stuff.
She gave him a smirk and said it wouldn’t work.
“Why I doubt it has ever seen use!
This room is a mess! I can hardly guess you’ve
Hanged someone down here with a noose!”
“You think not, my sweet lass? You have only to ask.”
And he brought out a rickety stool.
She gave out a grin, a result of the gin, as she said,
“Oh I must be a fool.”
She took a step up as she turned her head up
And stood shakily under the joist.
“I hate to be rude but I should be quite nude.”
She was already feeling quite moist.
“I agree, Mrs. Brown. So your arms should come down
As we get you right out of that dress.”
So he slipped it right off and then said with a cough,
“I would say you are one of my best.”
She stood there aquiver with gin in her liver
While he went and fetched her a rope.
He built her a coil while she watched the man toil,
Feeling anxious, excitement and hope.
“Do you want it?” he asked. And thus nodded the lass
As she took it right out of his hand.
It went round her neck. The poor gal was a wreck
While maintaining her pose on that stand.
Then over the beam she done tossed the damn thing
Til it dangled to be all secured.
He found a wall clamp in that room dark and damp.
Twas so easy for her to be lured.
“To do this thing rightly, I should be bound tightly.”
She said with a smile on her face.
A zip tie worked quick and it did just the trick.
She was ready to hang in this place.
“Wow, what a feeling; I’m gasping and reeling.”
Her pussy was dripping away.
“This is so great; I am feeling quite faint.
Too bad we can’t go all the way.”
“But we can, my dear girl. Take that noose for a whirl.”
And his kick sent the stool all a-flying.
She let out a glurk as she dropped with a jerk.
Now she was hanging and dying.
Her legs went a flyin’ as he began sighin’
She was such an arousing sight.
Her boobs bounced divinely, her pussy so finely engorged.
He knew he’d chosen right.
15 minutes long her legs kicked nice and strong as
Her face went a deep shade of red.
When her bladder released he was much more than pleased to
Observe she was thoroughly dead.
He stepped up to her form; she was still a bit warm as
He groped her and fondled her breasts.
He fingered her pussy, all dripping and gushy.
She’d proved to be one of his best.
He left her to dangle all thoroughly strangled as
He went upstairs for the night.
He had wonderful dreams of such perverted things before
Wakening to dawn’s early light.
Back down to the room with its cold, lethal gloom hung
Miss Brown’s naked body to see.
She looked so fair that he had not a care as he stroked
And then splattered her knee.
He hauled her away on this much busy day with
Her body in back of his van.
He’d done this before, it was not a hard chore as he
Followed his usual plan.
Down to the plant that was owned by an aunt, with
Fine chemicals coming in handy.
Into acid she went, he was fully well spent, now he needed
A full glass of brandy.
As her body dissolved, he then further resolved to keep
Hanging hot chicks day by day.
With the lid clamped down tight, she just vanished from sight
Until all traces melted away.
© 2016 (Inspired by a Dorothy idea and written for her Sep 29 ’16 by Riwa)
Sorry to put a wet blanket on this story, but in the fifties a cop in England proved murder when he found stones from the gall bladder where the murderer had dumped the vat of acid he used to get rid of the body of the person he had murder. The stones don't dissolve.
Sometimes it is good to get an MRI of your victim before you kill her and then try to dispose of her remains or something will remain of her remains.Sorry to put a wet blanket on this story, but in the fifties a cop in England proved murder when he found stones from the gall bladder where the murderer had dumped the vat of acid he used to get rid of the body of the person he had murder. The stones don't dissolve.
Well yes and no for you see most of the time it's not just ash that's left over, but ash and bone bits and if there is any bone bits left you haven't disappeared. Oh look out here come a cop.Ok Then, the man who hanged me has a friend who works in
the local crematorium , so in the dead of night he fired up
one of the ovens and slides my corpse into it.
now have i disappeared
So Dark Princess likes drowning scenarios... I think she would look in a tank...(GIF)Lovely stuff!
Every time I read a story about drowning a girl in a water tank, I'm reminded of the movie The Cell (not to mention some choice stuff from waterbondage.com back in the day )
Now I'm wet and horny (again)
Riwa, your drowning stories really turn me on, thank you
I wonder how long she can hold her breath. Not for long if she keeps losing air like that.So Dark Princess likes drowning scenarios... I think she would look in a tank...(GIF)
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Yeah well I never could keep my mouth shutI wonder how long she can hold her breath. Not for long if she keeps losing air like that.