Secret Keeper
Executioner
I shall humor Sis. Dark humor of course.
She was born in 1623. Not 17 anymore.She is now!!!
well written and a unique tale, indeed!!I hope you enjoy part 2. I will be putting part 3 up on Tuesday. Part 3 happens on Tuesday, too.
BY MY MATHS, SHE COULD HAVE BEEN BORN NO LATER THAN 1623, SINCE WE KNOW SHE IS 18 IN 1641.She was born in 1624. Not 17 anymore.
OK. Got it. The next goes up this evening.If you have a story, and you think it is good, post it in your own good time. Likes and comments are good, but most of us write for the sheer enjoyment of doing so.
I would very strongly advise you against attempting to use likes and comments as a "currency" to earn the next section. How genuine is a like given under threat of withholding the story? Also, the advice you've already had about ensuring that your characters are very clearly adult is extremely sound and I recommend that you heed it. But I see that someone has changed Jenna to 18 in your opening passage.
Post if you like it, and then see what the rest think!
Barbaria, Eulalia and Melissa are our good souls.Thank you, Barbara, for straitening this out.
You weave a good story, Secret Keeper!!!Thank you all for your patience until I 'got it.' That won't happen again.
Here in part 4, the horse appears. He won't be weeping, though.
<Part 5>
Day 3 Wednesday
On a farm a few miles away a rooster crowed. Its crow carried well, rousing Cheryll from her stupor.
On that same farm a cow had flopped over in the field that evening, drawing the ravens from Hollye's dead cow on the beach, keeping them away from the sufferers.
“Help! Help!” Cheryll shouted at the road.
“What, What?” Answered Hollye.
“The road, I saw something. Help! Help!” Shouted Cheryll standing on her nails, then she shrieked in pain.
“Cheryll, what is it?” Came Hollye's voice again.
“On the road. I saw something. It's gone,” Cheryll said, her voice dropping.
“If you think it has a chance, try it,” Hollye ordered. “Jenna, you with us?”
“Yes, my lady,” came the familiar voice to her right.
“I am glad you are still with us,” said Hollye.
“Better would be gone to get help,” Cheryll added acidly.
“If that were an option, she would have taken it,” said Hollye between gasps. “Cheryll, report,” she commanded.
Cheryll reported, “I am still on the cross. Bleeding comes and goes, but is only a little. Scabs crusting on nails. I'm exhausted. The shaft in my bum keeps going in and out. It burns. I still have the pole.” After a pause, she added, “No more orgasms.”
“Very good, Cheryll. Jenna, report,” Hollye ordered.
“Yes, my lady. I hurt. I hurt allover,” said Jenna.
“Have you been impaled by the pole?” Hollye asked.
“No, My lady. They pitied me. Perhaps you did not hear, I whispered, 'I could be your sister,” said Jenna.
Hollye and Cheryll made a chorus together. “Jenna! That was brilliant!”
“Class has its privileges, my lady,” said Jenna.
Both ladies tried to laugh but only got pains in their hands and feet instead. Eventually Cheryll added, “Double brilliant, I say.”
Hollye gave her report in the same soldier like tone Hollye had used before. The end seemed telling. “I believe the bones in my left foot are all broken. My hands have turned black. I can't move my fingers,” she reported.
“Thank you, my lady,” said the voice to her right. Cheryll said nothing.
“Jenna, how old are you?” Hollye asked.
“You know, my lady, I have 18 years, just last month. The cake was wonderful,” said the voice to her right.
“I am 45. Did you know that, Jenna,” said Hollye.
“No, my lady,” said Jenna.
“I have 23 years,” said Cheryll.
Hollye said, “Jenna, I want you to say my name.”
“Lady Mainwaring,” said Jenna.
“No, Jenna, I mean my Christian name,” Hollye clarified.
“My lady?” Said the voice to her right.
“I want to hear my Christian name in your voice,” said Hollye.
“My lady, it just wouldn't feel right,” said Jenna.
“I know it wouldn't. You know my name don't you?” Hollye asked.
“Of course my lady,” said Jenna.
“What was your mother's name?” Hollye asked.
“Sarah, my lady,” said the voice on her right.
“You have said your mum's name, now you can say mine,” said Hollye.
“My lady, no. please. It would be like you weren't my mistress anymore,” pleaded the voice to her right.
“I understand. I shouldn't have asked,” Hollye said.
A quiet set in.
Suddenly out of the quiet, Jenna said, “Hollye.”
The quiet set in again. Once again came, “Hollye.”
After the third quiet, Jenna shouted, “Hollye, Hollye, Hollye, Hollye! My Mistress' name is Hollye!”
She continued:
These past four years I have been her loyal servant. I had no idea I was in the presence of true greatness. Born my better, she could have used me as she liked. I testify to the whole world that she never asked me to do anything dishonest or vulgar.
Never did she ask me to keep a secret from her husband. I testify that all can hear, she stayed true to him in his absence. Always! Had she not, I would have known.
She treated me better than my mother, although as my mistress she is my better.
As her gift to me she she has cared for me in this suffering, saying nothing of her own, by coaching me, by correcting me and by scolding me.
Looking at the end of life, she could have left me to hang here in wretchedness, full of shame, despair and agony.
Not thinking of herself, she has rescued me from this, giving orders, making demands, as she has always done, always with my welfare taken in mind.
Now I know. Now I know! Her demands, her scolds, they have all been a comfort to me.
The greatest honor she has given me is that on this day she has let me know that my love is acceptable to her. That when God looks down from his place above he counts as His greatest creation Hollye Mainwaring. Greatest, I tell you, greatest bar none.
That this rain we feel now are his tears shed that such a noble person shall be lost to the world.
When I get to heaven I will see God. With my own eyes I will see God. I will see His face. When I see His face I will know His face well. I will Know His face because I have seen His face reflected in my mistress.
If I cheat death and count years before me, I will devote all of them to making myself as much like Hollye as possible. And if I only make it half way, count myself lucky.
In the after life, I shall kneel before her, MY BETTER, and acknowledge my debt to her in front of all the heavenly hosts.
I testify and crave most of all that these words be in her mind on this day. I crave for her to know that her beauty as a person has been noticed, has been adored, has been honored. I want that on this day this great person shall take as one of her last experiences the knowledge that someone, even one as low as I, knew her, really knew her and understood.
Jenna fell silent. The cold rain continued as a sprinkle stinging their skin. Each continued her dance.
"Why doesn't she answer," asked Jenna.
"Can't you hear?" Cheryll asked.
“Hear what?” Jenna asked.
Cheryll answered, "She is weeping."
"Why?" asked Jenna.
Cheryll answered, "Tears of joy, Jenna. Tears of joy."
-- Next will go up Monday.
Another brilliant chapter.. what took you three years to write?No, they won't last until Monday or Sunday. Perhaps they won't have to.
<Part 6>
Wednesday
Some hours later Cheryll shouted excitedly, “It's Stoney! Robert's here.”
“Stoney?” Asked Jenna.
“I'll know Robert's horse anywhere. Hollye, we are bout to be rescued!” Cheryll shouted.
Cheryll and Jenna watched as the man on a horse marked with large brown blotches of various color rode toward the house.
Cheryll said, “Hollye, Jenna,let's all shout to him together so he knows to come back here. On the count of three, 1, 2, 3.”
Cheryll shouted “Robert!” Jenna shouted, “Stoney!”
“Jenna you twit! Shout to Robert not the horse,” Cheryll scolded. “Hollye, you in? 1, 2, 3”
This time both Cheryll and Jenna shouted, “Robert!”
The man on horse back continued riding past the house.
“I think that's Mr. Harris the cobbler,” said Jenna.
“What's his Christian name?” Asked Cheryll.
“Don't know,” said Jenna.
“You know his first name, Hollye?” Asked Cheryll.
Nothing.
“Hollye! Answer. Do you know Mr. Harris's Christian name?” Cheryll demanded.
They heard nothing. Jenna started to weep.
“Stop it, Jenna,” Cheryll yelled. Then in a calmer tone she added, “We need to pray for her.”
Through her tears Jenna said, “The minister said we aren't supposed to pray for the dead.”
“She isn't dead. You going to join me?” Cheryll insisted.
Cheryll started the prayer. She made it up as she went along, then stopped, changing to a more well worn prayer, one she had heard Jenna recite. Soon Jenna joined in. There they prayed for Hollye on their crosses.
“She may be resting,” Cheryll reasoned.
“Yes, my lady,” Jenna responded.
“Don't start the 'my lady' thing with me, please,” said Cheryll, “Hollye is still your mistress.”
“Yes, yes, ma-Cheryll,” Jenna said.
Cheryll let out a sigh, as close at this point she could get to a chuckle. “Jenna, you are completely delightful. You are exactly who you claim to be.”
Not knowing what to make of the comment, Jenna answered, “Thank you, ma-Cheryll.”
Cheryll issued another sigh.
Jenna now got daring, asking a question, “Cheryll, what is it like to be married?”
Cheryll stood on her nailed feet and gave her answer. Throughout the day they talked while the pain wore on them. Every word seemed so important to the other, as they hung there.
The pain for both had long gone past unbearable. “I understand child birth is like this. You can't control it. You can't turn it off and rest.” said Cheryll.
“You gave birth, didn't you?” asked Jenna.
“That was a miscarriage. It's more like crucifixion. After all the pain all you have to show for it is a dead body,” she replied, curtly.
Cheryll noticed the curtness of her response.
Quickly Cheryll said, “It's OK. I'm sorry. You may ask me anything.”
Inside her Jenna could feel something different. Shame was gone, hunger, pain and thirst, however, were vivid. In among the pain and thirst now stood something different, like a butterfly flitting beneath her heart. She imagined herself caressing and kissing her companion. Cheryll had been the first crucified. Hollye and she were being been raped in the house while Cheryll's cross was being raised.
Jenna had seen Cheryll on her cross while she was being taken to hers. She had heard Cheryll's screams from the outside, but not known what they were about.
On the cross Cheryll had looked both beautiful and horrible at the same time. Beautiful as the lean healthy body Cheryll was, displayed in the nude. Horrid in that her condition was agony and foretold Jenna's own.
Letting her thoughts escape her mouth, Jenna said, “You're beautiful, Cheryll. Even your name is beautiful.”
Cheryll smiled broadly, but Jenna of course could not see it. Cheryll said, “Oh, my, Jenna, coming from you that means something.”
“I mean you seem confident, like my mistress and well um physically, can I say healthy,” Jenna stammered.
Cheryll answered, “Of course you can, dear. When I close my eyes I can still see them nailing you. Your slender body formed flawlessly. Looking at your lips and the slimness of your hips, I should have guessed you were a virgin.”
“Am I ruined?” Jenna asked.
“No! Jenna you are beautiful. You would have a lot of suitors if you got off this farm. I can't imagine any would be worth you,” Cheryll said.
Jenna said, “I have this fluttery feeling inside. I don't understand.”
“I feel it, too, sweet. I recognize it,” said Cheryll.
“I.. I.. All I want to do is caress you. Can I say that?” Asked Jenna.
“Of course you can say that, dear,” Cheryll answered. “On caress is that every time I close my eyes I see you, your exquisite breasts, small and cute. I love the way your ribs show ever so slightly beneath them. I want to kiss those bright red lips of yours. Then the pain hits again.”
Jenna said, “I want to caress you, too, and take all your pain away. I want to make it all well.”
“You are caressing me, Jenna. Your being here caresses me,” Cheryll said then paused. “Oh!” The pain hit her hard again, but the new feeling over came it. “Hollye set us free of our shame. I can tell you what it is. I am falling in love with you, Jenna.”
“That's the feeling?” Jenna asked.
“You don't know? You sweet girl.” Cheryll gasped. “We are falling in love,” she explained.
“Isn't that supposed to happen with a man?” Jenna asked.
On down stroke of hr dance, Cheryll explained, “Yes, it is. I have always felt it with women, though. It's the queerest thing.”
As the sun went down Cheryll said, “I have a favor to ask.”
“Anything,” said Jenna.
“May maiden name is Warren. I want you to remember that when the time comes. Warren,” said Cheryll.
Jenna answered, “I will remember it. Warren.”
That night the rains came hard, stealing the warmth from the sufferer's bodies. In her stupor half sleep Jenna dreamed of kissing and caressing Cheryll's body. She dreamed herself a fairy flitting about Cheryll on the cross, sprinkling her beloved with fairy dust, healing her wounds.
---Final part, tomorrow.
I keep thinking of the things I left out. Before the horse started biting the nail, he tried to cunnilingus on Hollye. She had taught him how to do this. However, she was too high up and Mannie's tongue couldn't reach.Another brilliant chapter.. what took you three years to write?