Celticvirgin
Tribune
Well i just feel so lucky to have found this story. But i knew it would wrap me like a warm blanket. All your stories do. Im sure everyone is the same here. ![Smile :) :)](/xf/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/smile.png)
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AngelWell i just feel so lucky to have found this story. But i knew it would wrap me like a warm blanket. All your stories do. Im sure everyone is the same here.![]()
No. Just a romantic girl I hope. But thanks.Angel
I'm quite happy to be part of the minority then, if that's what we are.I have this terrible/beautiful feeling that i am writing for a tiny but perfect minority here,,, I think, weirdly, that makes me quite happy...
No. Angel. Always an Angel I think .....No. Just a romantic girl I hope. But thanks.![]()
I have this terrible/beautiful feeling that i am writing for a tiny but perfect minority here,,, I think, weirdly, that makes me quite happy...
No. Just a romantic girl I hope. But thanks.![]()
With only a dozen or so vignettes and over 1300 views you are writing for a good number of people. I'm sorry I haven't commented before but sometimes Real Life gets in the way. Do not be discouraged PK...I have this terrible/beautiful feeling that i am writing for a tiny but perfect minority here,,, I think, weirdly, that makes me quite happy...
Fair point. I'm pathetic. Poo. Well, just a softie. What more can I say?With only a dozen or so vignettes and over 1300 views you are writing for a good number of people. I'm sorry I haven't commented before but sometimes Real Life gets in the way. Do not be discouraged PK...
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That you're an exceptionally talented writer.
It's nice to get views and likes, nicer still to get positive feedback,
even constructive criticism.
But if I feel content with something I've written,
if I can say confidently to myself,
"eul, that's not bad!",
and I've posted it on the Forums to share with people here
who I know are likely to appreciate it,
whether a lot of people find it
or (at first, at any rate) only a few -
I'm happy.
And you can certainly say to yourself,
"pk, that's not bad - it's bloody good!"
Everything you say is true.That you're an exceptionally talented writer.
It's nice to get views and likes, nicer still to get positive feedback,
even constructive criticism.
But if I feel content with something I've written,
if I can say confidently to myself,
"eul, that's not bad!",
and I've posted it on the Forums to share with people here
who I know are likely to appreciate it,
whether a lot of people find it
or (at first, at any rate) only a few -
I'm happy.
And you can certainly say to yourself,
"pk, that's not bad - it's bloody good!"
He’ll come. I know he will. She told me he will keep his promise to me. She said she wouldn’t come, but I think she will. She’ll come too and sit with me on the bench seat in the car and she’ll put her hand on my leg and she’ll look into my eyes and she’ll whisper something to me. I think that’s what she’ll do. I’ll be glad she’s there with me in the car as we drive along the ocean highway and send the dust spiraling into the sky as we turn down into the valley that he’s told me about. She’ll be there close to me and I’ll feel her breathing and I’ll look at the white cotton of her blouse as it rises over her breasts and I’ll look at the shining red of her lips and the deep green of her eyes and those tiny freckles that dot her nose and cheek bones. And perhaps I’ll touch her too. And then we’ll be there at the old farmstead with the broken wooden posts and the barn with half a roof and the shadows of torn tin corrugations that sit a stained red corpse on the sandy ground.
You're a babe!as always .... a masterpiece of thick description ... the prose just comes alive for me!
It is nice to get comments beyond 'views and likes' but be assured I do enjoy your writing!!!Fair point. I'm pathetic. Poo. Well, just a softie. What more can I say?
Although modesty should make me confess to a tad of shyness about the words "exceptionally talented"... I do try, but I cannot garner yet the wreaths of laurel...Everything you say is true.
I guess I should comment more often but I find often I just don't know what to say. So whether that's exceptionally talented, magic, or, just trying, it's marvelousI do try
You're lovely!I guess I should comment more often but I find often I just don't know what to say. So whether that's exceptionally talented, magic, or, just trying, it's marvelous