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Aslin nee 8ball said:
Yes I am a British sympathizer, a Tory. My father was a Tory when he sent supplies to the British, the colonials hung him. My brother fought for the British, he was a Tory when the colonials shot and killed him. I spied for the British, sent them as mush valuable information as I could. I would have gotten away with it, if that damn maid had not caught me in the generals office going through papers in his desk. She called a guard and I was locked in chains. The military court came to a swift verdict. I was to be an example for any other British Sympathizer.
I am to be whipped naked in the morning in the town square. I do not know the number of lashes, nor do I know if I will survive.

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Aslin nee 8ball -- Your comments and cyberimager's picture have inspired me to create this Short Story Flash card. While I have made some editorial changes to your comments, I still credit you with the story. I hope you like my version.

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Aslin nee 8ball -- Your comments and cyberimager's picture have inspired me to create this Short Story Flash card. While I have made some editorial changes to your comments, I still credit you with the story. I hope you like my version.

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@Aslin nee 8ball
Love this scenario and the girl to be whipped at the hands of her hated enemies. Petite naked body shivering on the whipping post, her soft cleavage and belly pressed tight to the rough wood. Screams of agony as the lash is applied again and again to her increasingly bloodied back.
 
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@Aslin nee 8ball
Love this scenario and the girl to be whipped at the hands of her hated enemies. Petite naked body shivering on the whipping post, her soft cleavage and belly pressed tight to the rough wood. Screams of agony as the lash is applied again and again to her increasingly bloodied back.
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Sounds like a second Flash card, now all I need is an appropriate picture to go with it?!
 
I have worked here for almost two years. I have worked very hard, worked my way to a position of importance. I am good with numbers and I take care of the ledger, all the money that gets spent on merchandise and all the cash that comes in with sales. What they didn’t know was that I skimmed money from the ledger to help support the anti-government group of which I am a member. The group pressured me into supplying more and more money. The amounts were more than I could hide in the ledger. I was arrested. I was tried and found guilty. I am to be branded as a traitor and whipped naked in public at the steps of Norte Dame cathedral.


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Aslin nee 8ball said:
If you don’t mind, I can add a little story to some of your art. There are others that move me.
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Unfortunately, most of my personal art work is limited to pictures I take of vintage vehicles. Most of my Digital Trading/Flash cards utilize pictures from others [and some manip/AI] I find around the internet; which is why I don't charge for anything. I guess I am a parasite working off others expertise. I am very good at editing what others create, just not good enough to be a creator myself.
 
Aslin nee 8ball said:
I have worked here for almost two years. I have worked very hard, worked my way to a position of importance. I am good with numbers and I take care of the ledger, all the money that gets spent on merchandise and all the cash that comes in with sales. What they didn’t know was that I skimmed money from the ledger to help support the anti-government group of which I am a member. The group pressured me into supplying more and more money. The amounts were more than I could hide in the ledger. I was arrested. I was tried and found guilty. I am to be branded as a traitor and whipped naked in public at the steps of Norte Dame cathedral.
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Do you have a short story for one of these?
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As the officer brutally shoves me along, I manage to cast a last look toward my family and husband in the crowd. My parents are weeping and my husband refuses to meet my eyes. I start to call out, but the cry catches in my throat.

They all believe it, I realize. The conviction of treason that the National Police had whipped out of me. I would have no chance to convince them otherwise. I was about to die with everyone I loved thinking me a traitor. Somehow that knowledge alone hurt more than the bruises across my back, more than the bitterly cold pavement beneath my bare feet. Perhaps it would hurt more than the rope around my throat. I would soon know.
 
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As the officer brutally shoves me along, I manage to cast a last look toward my family and husband in the crowd. My parents are weeping and my husband refuses to meet my eyes. I start to call out, but the cry catches in my throat.

They all believe it, I realize. The conviction of treason that the National Police had whipped out of me. I would have no chance to convince them otherwise. I was about to die with everyone I loved thinking me a traitor. Somehow that knowledge alone hurt more than the bruises across my back, more than the bitterly cold pavement beneath my bare feet. Perhaps it would hurt more than the rope around my throat. I would soon know.
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Hope you like my editing just a little on this one.
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Aslin nee 8ball said:
I have worked here for almost two years. I have worked very hard, worked my way to a position of importance. I am good with numbers and I take care of the ledger, all the money that gets spent on merchandise and all the cash that comes in with sales. What they didn’t know was that I skimmed money from the ledger to help support the anti-government group of which I am a member. The group pressured me into supplying more and more money. The amounts were more than I could hide in the ledger. I was arrested. I was tried and found guilty. I am to be branded as a traitor and whipped naked in public at the steps of Norte Dame cathedral, after which I am to be garroted.


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Please,do not use my images with death row scenarios!
 
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