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What is the most cruel story you have read?

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TerriT said:

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thank you for sharing those links, I found good galley slave scenes in a modern setting
 
temporary said:
good recommendations in this thread. extreme cruelty, to the point the victim begs for the release of death, are my favorite. looking for more recommendations.
here's some stories like that I've particularly liked:
Punished by ottomans (Story by gjpain)
https://www.cruxforums.com/xf/threads/punished-by-ottomans-story-by-gjpain.8011/
historical impalement execution, first person. also red hot needles and roasting.

crown of torments by synon55

BDSM Library - Story: Crown of Torments

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fantasy based on xena, captured warrior queen tortured for info and then just for revenge. long story with ever increasingly intense torture, using magic to heal them so they can be tortured again.
"Her mind cleared suddenly just as the device was folded and pushed inside her
rectum, making her arch in a howl of demented pain and twitch in screaming
agony while it was turned left and right mercilessly. She shuddered when it
was slowly pulled out to be heated again, wishing she could die before it was
used again, and more screams followed when the torture was repeated."

TORTURED NUDES FOR THE DEVIL'S CHARNEL HOUSE by Bleumune
a medieval count abducts and torture women for fun.
roasting, wooden horse, flaying with hot knives, red-hot needles, hot metal rods inserted , impalement, molten lead.
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thank you for the brief synopsis. Do you have more recommendations for cruel stories set in modern times?
 
sifax said:
Sorry! So, it's a coincidence
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Probably a coincidence but an insightful comparison. There have been more then a few tales of torture involving boiling of some form. Read story now and indeed it is profoundly sadistic and creatively so. Let me add also that while she might have been alive during the torture I'm pretty sure ,without modern medicines, she would not have much pain or place awareness. Shock is an amazingly deadly response to extreme body damage with one of the effects being a comatose or semi comatose condition often followed by heart,respiratory, or brain arrest. I try to imaginary scenario's in modern settings so that my victims duration and awareness is assisted by modern medicines to get around the problem of shock response. Of course its mostly imaginary.
 
TerriT said:
Cruel and well written stories are
My Kidnapped Hell, Nighbours form Hell and Brutality by Liz from Bdsmlibrary.com

BDSM Library - Stories by Liz

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Here is an nice cover and the three stories in epub formatted.

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Thanks for reminding me about Neighbors from Hell. That was a particularly cruel and particularly well written story that still sticks in my mind years later. Has anyone found any other work from "Liz" since?
 
"Render Unto Caesar" by Mad Lews

BDSM Library - Story: Render Unto Caeser

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Very graphic


Story Codes: M/f+ M+/f+ bestiality modification snuff D/s S/M historical torture nc Extreme violent
Synopsis: A grim and grisly tale of Roman Justice. A Judean village runs afoul of Roman rule. The tenth legion responds with murder, rape, and general mayhem. The ringleaders and their surviving family members are crucified and those few villagers unfortunate enough to survive become the fodder for games in the arena.
 
ocook said:
I know it's been awhile, but do you remember what the story was about?
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Wow, that's one of mine. It involves a young Korean-American girl named Bijou in a compound devoted to torturing beautiful women. She is, of course, eventually crucified.

The forum where I posted it is long-gone. Would you like me to repost it here? I'm afraid it's quite lengthy (67,000 words, 137 pages in my word processor); and you have to have patience if crucifixion is all that interests you; the first crucifixion doesn't begin until chapter 27! (Although there's a lot to keep your attention prior to that.)
 
fauxface said:
Wow, that's one of mine. It involves a young Korean-American girl named Bijou in a compound devoted to torturing beautiful women. She is, of course, eventually crucified.

The forum where I posted it is long-gone. Would you like me to repost it here? I'm afraid it's quite lengthy (67,000 words, 137 pages in my word processor); and you have to have patience if crucifixion is all that interests you; the first crucifixion doesn't begin until chapter 27! (Although there's a lot to keep your attention prior to that.)
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it sounds like its set in modern times?
 
prtn said:
it sounds like its set in modern times?
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Yes; it has a rather cheesy science-fictiony trope whereby a woman can be tortured, restored, and tortured again, repeatedly. A bit lame and requiring quite the willing suspension of disbelief, but it enabled me to subject the same person to repeated ordeals without impairing her beauty along the way.
 
fauxface said:
Yes; it has a rather cheesy science-fictiony trope whereby a woman can be tortured, restored, and tortured again, repeatedly. A bit lame and requiring quite the willing suspension of disbelief, but it enabled me to subject the same person to repeated ordeals without impairing her beauty along the way.
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would you mind changing the main character to a rich Caucasian or incorporate new characters alike?
 
I'm not inclined to revisit it to make significant changes (it's too damn long to be able to do that easily, for one thing), although I have no objection to you or anyone else doing so. You could easily just edit Bijou's initial description, and delete the words "Korean" and "Asian" throughout and it would get you to where you want to go.

That being said, there are a couple supporting characters, Piper and Tracy, who you might very much enjoy just as they are. (For those who have read the story before, Piper was initially "Pelton" as originally posted, but I always thought that was a stupid name, and later revised it.)
 
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fauxface said:
Wow, that's one of mine. It involves a young Korean-American girl named Bijou in a compound devoted to torturing beautiful women. She is, of course, eventually crucified.

The forum where I posted it is long-gone. Would you like me to repost it here? I'm afraid it's quite lengthy (67,000 words, 137 pages in my word processor); and you have to have patience if crucifixion is all that interests you; the first crucifixion doesn't begin until chapter 27! (Although there's a lot to keep your attention prior to that.)
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please do post it.
I'm always hungry for really brutal stories.
 
For an historically plausible crucifixion, An Execution in Arlete is unsurpassed. Gritty, graphic, erotic and horrific in the details surrounding the crucifixion--properly done with nails, not ropes--of a well-to-do, beautiful, Roman-era woman. Excellently written. It left me repelled yet unashamedly excited.
 
SirMGBZ said:
There are a few that I haven’t seen mentioned: Pooch’s Story, A Year of Slavery, and of course anything by Dolor Delectatio.
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Check your links: seems like there's quotation marks around the URLs which are preventing them from working. Also part of the problem is that BDSM Library is down again, and neither seem to be anywhere else in their entirety on the internet.

Really wish the owners of BDSM Library sold to Lois of The Fet Library when she offered, since there is no effort to maintain it and I fear it will one day go the way of ASSTR.
 
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SirMGBZ said:
There are a few that I haven’t seen mentioned: Pooch’s Story, A Year of Slavery, and of course anything by Dolor Delectatio.
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ay42 said:
Check your links: seems like there's quotation marks around the URLs which are preventing them from working. Also part of the problem is that BDSM Library is down again, and Pooch's Story doesn't seem to be anywhere else on the internet.

Really wish the owners of BDSM Library sold to Lois of The Fet Library when she offered, since there is no effort to maintain it and I fear it will one day go the way of ASSTR.
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D'oh! Fixed in the quoted section above. :) Thanks, @ay42 For bringing that to my attention!

Also, of course Pooch's Story is available elsewhere on the internet. Try this google search as an example. That was how I first read it, back in the late '90s. :cool:
 
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