How thoughtful! Just what we needed. Thanks!!
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I agree with Tree: it's a great description, a very well done writing and it's not too frequent that we can read such a story:
BRAVO LES FILLES !My "like" is for this side of the text....Nonetheless, I'm a little disappointed by the emotional side...I was waiting for more deep feelings from who is telling the scene:she's nailed to her cross, her lover too, and she knows that they never will be together, but none thought, none scream of revolt...I recognize the moment when she makes a kiss to Little with her mouth, but it was what I was more waiting, more signs of love, of mutual supports...Anyway, it's my opinion: dont take it bad, Barbaria and Siss: I was trying to do a construtive critisism...Be sure that I like this story and I repeat:BRAVO LES FILLES !Messa...
Messa is romantic, Barbaria, perhaps because she's French...
I'm more preoccupied with love and passion than with only description of the scenes...
Perhaps it's my main failure....
Most beautiful segment...A most beautifully segment... I dare not compliment the posting bard lest I offend the co-contributor...
This truly is a piece of art. well thought, well written.
Tree
Most beautiful segment...
Cuz written by two beautiful gals...i love..
but most European like those Françaises ....................much just because their romantic ideasMessa is romantic, Barbaria, perhaps because she's French...
I'm more preoccupied with love and passion than with only description of the scenes...
Perhaps it's my main failure....
saw something on the outskirts of the town
made it with a pic from crucificator some parts from mels passion of the christ and a background from la messia
and weeks and much likes goneAs Siss and I prepare the final installment to our "Day in the Arena" story, I am so pleased to note that the thread has reached 11,000 views since the crash of the CF site! Thank you so much everyone for all the support and attention!
Congratulations, so in two thread Barbaria and Co. topped 10,000 views in one month!
T