why????????????Down Girl!!! Take it easy, now!
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why????????????Down Girl!!! Take it easy, now!
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To tell the truth, I was not very rapturous by this story: I was thinking that it was yet told, in many another stories...
But, now, I think that you've well done : you've not overdone the description of tortures which would not be credible, driving a normal woman to the death before that she was crucified...
Continue in this way and mostly, insist on the love between these two girls: it's touching and very important, for me, for many women here...
Great story and I thank you both to tell it !
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waiting for IX or have I missing something![]()
if that is a drink I will try one...
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It will be soon Admi. Don't worry.waiting for IX or have I missing something![]()
It will be soon Admi. Don't worry.
Sometime tomorrow, if all goes well.
that's XX not IX
"To fade from the light..
rare that nice orchid but great and you hid that one so long for us......................that means punishing with a crucifying
yes, this goes on being very good - you're succeeding very well in conveying the sensory experience of being crucified - what the victims see, hear, smell, and feel against their naked skin, helping us share your emotional responses to those traumatic sensations - a good balance of 'external' description and 'internal' feeling, without dwelling too much on either. Definitely heading for Archive status!