I admit the criticism, I will try to correct the mistakesFirst of all thank you Sifax for sharing this story and the artwork!
I know, we have absolutely no right to complain, as we got it for free, but the longer this story gets, the more it diverts from the original style and concept.
The main interest of members on this site is roman crucifixion. Now I feel like 90% of this story is just random BDSM dungeon torture. There are millions of sites out there with such content, but the reason why we visit Cruxforums is because this is the only site that concentrates on discussions, artwork, photography and stories of authentic roman crucifixion.
Also in the most recent images there are more and more details that really ruin the atmosphere. Such as modern high heels, jeans, collared shirts, wellies…
And there are many other images, that would not be necessary in terms of the story but their details are very inconsistent with the rest of the pictures. (E.g.: No 356 – this is the only picture where Valeria’s wrists are nailed to the wooden rack; No 209- No 220 – Valentina`s hairstyle is changed to something from the 18th century…)
Sorry to say that, but it feels forced now...
I have already addressed this issue #114 of this thread: I totally agree with you Várhelyi András!First of all thank you Sifax for sharing this story and the artwork!
I know, we have absolutely no right to complain, as we got it for free, but the longer this story gets, the more it diverts from the original style and concept.
The main interest of members on this site is roman crucifixion. Now I feel like 90% of this story is just random BDSM dungeon torture. There are millions of sites out there with such content, but the reason why we visit Cruxforums is because this is the only site that concentrates on discussions, artwork, photography and stories of authentic roman crucifixion.
Also in the most recent images there are more and more details that really ruin the atmosphere. Such as modern high heels, jeans, collared shirts, wellies…
And there are many other images, that would not be necessary in terms of the story but their details are very inconsistent with the rest of the pictures. (E.g.: No 356 – this is the only picture where Valeria’s wrists are nailed to the wooden rack; No 209- No 220 – Valentina`s hairstyle is changed to something from the 18th century…)
Sorry to say that, but it feels forced now...
what a horny thought , volunteer for the cross
Well, that thought inspired me to a story that in the end became too long and complicated...https://www.cruxforums.com/xf/threads/volunteer-girls-to-the-cross.7721/what a horny thought , volunteer for the cross
yes it would be nicer in several stories that endWell, that thought inspired me to a story that in the end became too long and complicated...https://www.cruxforums.com/xf/threads/volunteer-girls-to-the-cross.7721/
Wonderful foreplay leading to the real thing...
How soon does their horny excitement give way to the reality of the cross?!?!?!
You are impatinent. This his story and not yours . If you think this storyline is way to long, then wait till the end or ignoreist completly.How soon does their horny excitement give way to the reality of the cross?!?!?!