Balti
Executioner
you`re the master of the story ! dont mind us ! it is all about what your story reveals and release in all of ussorry it is just a whipping procedure
you`re the master of the story ! dont mind us ! it is all about what your story reveals and release in all of ussorry it is just a whipping procedure
I am loving the faithful adaptation of the story,The lictor begins to heat up by whipping the air and then the trunk of a young tree. The wicks with its stones, shards of glass and pieces of shells fall on the bark making all three of us startle. I can see the whip tearing pieces of bark from the trunk and I tremble at the thought that soon it will fall on my poor body and skin me alive.
Yonatan and I tremble with terror. At first Gidon seems fascinated by the lictor's demonstration, but then he turns his head away. Each in turn we will be in the place of this trunk tied completely naked without protection. The whip will tear off our skin. We remain silent in terror by the ferocity of the torture that will befall us. I'm not sure the lictor really needs to warm up, I think he just wants to terrify us with what he's going to do to us.
The lictor then stands on the side of the condemned man's cross and announces "I am ready commander!" while passing his whip against the skin of poor Gido who is still wriggling on the sedile between his buttocks which crushes his balls. He turns his head to all sides perhaps hoping for a last-minute rescue. Saliva flows from the lips of the tied man and drips down his chin. He has a lost look as if he is going crazy in anticipation of his punishment. I wonder what he is thinking.
People in the crowd of spectators push and jostle each other to get a better view while chatting loudly.
"I bet 10 sesterces that he will beg before the flogging ends," said a hard-eyed man. The one to his left replies, "I don't think so. He is a hardened criminal. He made very little noise as he climbed the hill. The whip didn't make him scream. It is filled with anger and fury. I hold the bet. Other bets are exchanged on us. The show is about to begin.
Longinus inspects the manhole site to make sure everything is in order. So he raises his hand to demand silence. The crowd stops all the conversation and becomes silent.
He turns to her and shouts in a loud voice, "Before a convicted criminal is crucified, he is flogged.
This punishment will now be applied to the person of Gidon Ibrahim, the murderer! »
The commander approached the lictor and said softly. "Hadrianus, I want these dogs to be severely whipped, but I don't want them half-dead while they are nailed to their crosses. I want them to be conscious and squirm on their cross for quite a while before they die. Do you think you can do that? Hadrianus bows his head and adds, "Yes, Commander! I control the force of the blows so that the flogging is painful, impressive but not fatal. Do the same thing to the thief? »
Longinus smiled: "Certainly. Roman justice is the same for everyone and I would love to see him struggling and screaming under your blows. Then he shouts, "Do your duty, Lictor! »
Gidon presses as much as possible against the tree to protect the largest possible area of his body. He lowers his head, tucks it into his shoulders as much as possible and closes his eyes. The lictor launches his first blow and the locks snap loudly towards the top of the back of the young man tries to remain stoic. He instinctively throws himself forward against the trunk and growls a little pain.
Gidon's flogging began. I watch him as the whip falls on my companion in misfortune and I admire him, not only for his courage but also for the strength of his convictions.
I close my eyes for a minute. Even then I cannot escape Gidon's ordeal. I hear the whip hissing in the air, its snapping on the skin and the growl of the young man: swoosh, clac, uugghh, swoosh, clac, uugghh over and over again. This mingles with the sounds of the audience and the jokes of the soldiers. I wonder how long Gidon will hold out before he utters a real piercing scream. I know that when my turn comes, I will scream even before the first lock hits my back.
I think how stupid I was waiting for any deliverance. It was not realistic.
The Romans have no regard for my people and think that we are little more than animals.
I am full of regrets for asking my friend to get involved. I then put him in danger. I don't think he's trying to argue with the prosecutor on my behalf, but you never know. It feels good to think that someone is risking their life for me but I hope they didn't. I now fear that he will arrive not to deliver me but dragged the rope around his neck, naked, his arms tied to a crossbeam to be crucified like me.
And I also hope he won't warn my father. I don't want him to see me completely naked screaming in pain.
I open my eyes and look at poor Gidon. I am amazed and alarmed to see that his back, buttocks and legs are already covered with crimson lines. Blood even drips from some of them. He also has bluish-purple hematomas.
The leather strips on this whip were tied with a stone, a fragment of shell or a piece of glass.
It will be worth the wait, they are excellentsorry but you ll have to wait a few months for next part. i'm working on but it's take time.
It will be worth the wait, they are excellentA superb effort so far, the harrowing description of 'Gidon's whipping and the anguished look in his face. I love how the other two cross their legs, prevent the crowds from a full view of their penis, especially Yonaton. Again, superb erotic buildup, and the first nail has not been struck yet. Great work HB 21, and we all look forward to the continuation.It will be worth the wait, they are excellent
Glad you have returned to this , thanksnext part of death sentence story. thank you very muche to Pyan for translation from french in english
Part six: Crucifixion of Gidon and flagellation of Yonatan.
Two men approach Yonatan and pull him back up to his feet in front of the crowd.
The poor young man puts his head in his shoulders and his sobs redouble. He now feels totally humiliated: he has been stripped naked, his arms tied to his patibulum in the shape of the cross forever, unable to hide his penis, which is on full display in front of his parents and the crowd.
The two guards grab the ends of his patibulum and quickly drag Yonatan towards his upright stipe despite his vigorous protests.
The crucifiers who are now about to commence the final act in Gidon’s crucifixion, kick him in the legs and make him fall backwards onto the flat of his back. The rebel, lying flat now with his arms stretched out flat on his patibulum desperately tries to rise back up, racking his back and leaning on his feet but in vain. The only result is to shake his penis and testicles in all directions in front of the crowd.
A soldier takes a tree branch and begins to hammer Gidon’s shins. At the same time, another guard places himself between his legs and kicks him in the groin. Gidon moans in pain and finally stops fighting. Two soldiers kneel on his bloody shins to secure his legs. He no longer has the strength to fight them.
Meanwhile, the soldiers secure Yonatan’s body onto his stipe for his flogging before his crucifixion. He curses them now trying to adjust his muscular hairy ass on the seat but he seems unable to find the right position. He ends up leaving his legs hanging while they are seized and tied on each side of the stipe.
The licteur and the crucifier now take their respective places at the two condemned men, Yonatan and Gideon. The first approaches Yonatan and stands to launch the first whip blow to his secured body while the other crucifier selects the place where he will hammer the nail into Gidon’s wrist.
superb storytelling and imagery as always HB. I loved the pained look in the one crucified.next part of death sentence story. thank you very muche to Pyan for translation from french in english
Part six: Crucifixion of Gidon and flagellation of Yonatan.
Two men approach Yonatan and pull him back up to his feet in front of the crowd.
The poor young man puts his head in his shoulders and his sobs redouble. He now feels totally humiliated: he has been stripped naked, his arms tied to his patibulum in the shape of the cross forever, unable to hide his penis, which is on full display in front of his parents and the crowd.
The two guards grab the ends of his patibulum and quickly drag Yonatan towards his upright stipe despite his vigorous protests.
The crucifiers who are now about to commence the final act in Gidon’s crucifixion, kick him in the legs and make him fall backwards onto the flat of his back. The rebel, lying flat now with his arms stretched out flat on his patibulum desperately tries to rise back up, racking his back and leaning on his feet but in vain. The only result is to shake his penis and testicles in all directions in front of the crowd.
A soldier takes a tree branch and begins to hammer Gidon’s shins. At the same time, another guard places himself between his legs and kicks him in the groin. Gidon moans in pain and finally stops fighting. Two soldiers kneel on his bloody shins to secure his legs. He no longer has the strength to fight them.
Meanwhile, the soldiers secure Yonatan’s body onto his stipe for his flogging before his crucifixion. He curses them now trying to adjust his muscular hairy ass on the seat but he seems unable to find the right position. He ends up leaving his legs hanging while they are seized and tied on each side of the stipe.
The licteur and the crucifier now take their respective places at the two condemned men, Yonatan and Gideon. The first approaches Yonatan and stands to launch the first whip blow to his secured body while the other crucifier selects the place where he will hammer the nail into Gidon’s wrist.
I can't wait to see Yonatan pierced to the cross!Then together, the whip splits the air and hits Yonatan’s back heavily while the hammer hits the head of the nail poised over Gideon’s bound wrist and sinks into his wrist, splitting it.
There is a second of tense silence, then the two men emit piercing screams freezing my blood.
Gidon had remained stoic during the flogging preceding his crucifixion but now, he utters piercing screams while the first nail is hammered through his wrist, hitting the wood of his patibulum beneath, and spiking his arm to the patibulum permanently.
It will be hell for me if the crucifixion provokes this reaction from him.
The whip falls at a fast pace on Yonatan’s naked body, who begins to scream “Aie! I am suffering! Ahh! What a terrible pain! Ouille! Gods! What does it hurt!? No!! Father, help me! Don’t let them do that to me!”
His crucifier now moves to Gideon’s other arm, tied to the patibulum, and swiftly proceeds to nails his other wrist making him scream louder and thrash his naked body wildly. Soldiers have trouble keeping his muscular body motionless against the ground as he tries to arch his body under the effect of pain. His ass and back come up off the rocky ground as he pushes upwards with his legs. His screams, almost bursting his crucifier’s eardrums, continue long after his crucifier has finished his task of spiking his wrists permanently to his patibulum.
Rematkable! Worth to read and to look it. Thank you!Longinus then gives the order to lift up the patibulum and fix the crossbar to the stipe to complete the crucifixion of the rebel, Gideon. The soldiers pull Gidon back to his feet by lifting him up by the patibulum. The muscular young rebel starts screaming with pain again, he is too weak to even stand up on his legs and all his weight pulls on the nails that impale his wrists to his patibulum.
He is thus dragged screaming back to the waiting stipe where he can now briefly support the weight of his body with his ass and back pushing against the stipe, his stipe. The soldiers then hoist his patibulum up into the air to fix it to the top of the stipe.
Gidon’s feet now permanently leave the ground and he feels all of his muscular body weight hanging by his nailed wrists. The intensity of his piercing cries is still increasing. His sweat-glistened chest heaves up and down quickly, his legs flail in the air trying to find support against the stipe.
The crucifiers, having correctly positioned the patibulum, drop it onto the notch on the top of the stipe. The sedile slaps Gidon’s ass and genitals. Despite the atrocious pain, he manages to swing his feet backwards on either side of the stipe. They briefly support his body weight as he pushes them firmly against the rough timber of the stipe and Gideon manage to lift his body by projecting his pelvis forward in an obscene manner. This allows him to reduce traction on his nailed wrists. I can hear a sigh of audible relief from the young rebel. His relief does not last very long, however.
One of the soldiers pulls Gideon’s right leg and places his ankle flat against the stipe with his knee slightly bent so that he cannot rise his body up fully. The other crucifier then lines the nail up to his ankle bone and in five hammer blows Gideon’s ankle is nailed to the stipe. The similar lifting of his left leg and the nailing of his ankle follows quickly with brutal effectiveness. You can hear the superposition of the metallic noise of the hammer hitting the nail, Gidon’s screams and the awful sound of the cracking of his heel and ankle bones. Gidon screams constantly and projects his body in all directions without finding a less painful position.
His crucifiers are finished with him now.
They have crucified him.
He has been crucified.
HB your writing keeps getting better and better. I love how this prisoner is made t watch the torture and crucifixion of Yonathan and Gidon, knowing he will suffer next. I am sure the crowd is excited watching.Exhausted, Gideon finally slumps down and falls back on the sedile, panting, his head dropping down onto his heaving chest. It is a strangely very erotic sight to behold. Gideon is very handsome with his beautiful naked muscular body now crucified, drenched and shiny with sweat, stinking and pungent. A trickle of blood flows slowly along his arms from his wrists. His hairy chest rises and lowers with a steady pace. His bent legs tremble with his knees pointing outwards, giving a clear view of the sedile that splits his muscular buttocks and points forward and towards the testicles hanging to the right while the penis hangs to the left. He raises his head and I look him in the eyes. I see surprise, terror and horror and then he begins to delirious: “Here I am crucified as you have been, father! You have suffered like me now! Come and free me from this cross! Where is my father, Yonatan? Why doesn’t he answer me, Reuven? Father! Come and get me! Detach me from this cursed wood!”
Finally Gidon collapses, dropping his head onto his chest and he begins to cry quietly. He enters a world of torture and torture. He has been crucified.
Once Gideon’s crucifixion has been completed, I turn my attention to Yonatan. His back, buttocks and thighs are already zebras-crossed, red and the blood begins to drip from his wounds. He twists and turns his sweat-drenched, pungent and stinking body in all directions as if he were trying to reject the pain in the distance. He screams “Roman bastards! I should have killed this cursed prosecutor! One day, one day we will succeed and it is you who will be exposed, humiliated, flogged and crucified! Dirty pigs!”
His words are punctuated by whistles, gasps, piercing cries or moans depending on where the strokes of the whip strike his naked body.
Yonathan’s pre-crucifixion flogging is well advanced and Gidon has already been flogged and crucified. My turn to be flogged and then crucified will soon come. Panic grips me, but I know I can’t do anything to stop the course of events. I look at the damned merchant who put me in this situation. Demetrius complains that I am the last to be crucified. He is very eager to see me suffer naked on my cross.
I look at the tree on which I will soon be nailed. It is old and gnarled. The dead branches have been sawn off but there are still stumps, the largest of which sticks out forward and will serve as a perfectly crude sedile. It seems to be sticky and slippery. This tree trunk was used for the previous crucifixions. I am to be crucified where other condemned have been crucified before me.
It’s horrible to hear the screams of pain of Gidon and Yonatan. The latter faints for the third time. His flogging will soon end, which means that my flogging will soon begin.
They revive Yonatan with cold salt water thrown over his lash-marked body and the liciter resumes the torture. Gidon rises his body up to relieve his wrists and then falls back on his sedile. He tries in vain to find a less painful position by pushing his buttocks back against the stipe and projecting his chest forward, his arms back. Then he tries the opposite and projects his crotch forward before collapsing exhausted on his sedile. His gestures seem obscene but with the pain his crucified body is enduring he no longer feels the shame and humiliation of being crucified naked. His thick penis and hairy scrotum swing in all directions slapping against his muscular thighs.
Yonatan’s once-beautiful body is now completely lashed-striped and bloody, stinking and pungent. The whip has fulfilled its purpose. He has been flogged in preparation for his crucifixion. No part of his thighs, buttocks and back is unscathed. The lictor stops and inspects his work. He tilts his head: “I’m done, he’s ready to be crucified,” he tells Longinus. The commander answers “Get him down and place him in front of the crowd for the reading out of his death sentence.”
I know that the guards will not get me up and drag me to the stipe for my flogging before Longinus has read Yonathan’s death sentence out. I still have a little time. I want to get ready to be flogged but I don’t know how. I will never be able to endure the torture I had just seen inflicted on both Gidon and Yonatan!