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shastar
Tribune
View attachment 409555 Oh no!!!! Not the Rat Pack!!! Now I am doomed!
Can't understand the joke (cultural references, obviously)...
Frank Sinatra, Dean Martin, and Sammy Davis, Jr... (I think that is Peter Lawford on the left. Very big in the late '50s and '60s in Vegas and only three nationwide channels!!!Can't understand the joke (cultural references, obviously)...
Also very controversial as the white guys hung out with a Negro!!!
But Barb should be less worried about the Rat Pack than the fact the Rat Patrol has left her on her own!!!
shastar
Tribune
Frank Sinatra, Dean Martin, and Sammy Davis, Jr... (I think that is Peter Lawford on the left. Very big in the late '50s and '60s in Vegas and only three nationwide channels!!!
Also very controversial as the white guys hung out with a Negro!!!
But Barb should be less worried about the Rat Pack than the fact the Rat Patrol has left her on her own!!!
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OK, thank you, Tree. Sorry for not being a white (I am) dominant (I am) North American (I'm not), but just a Western European. I'm proud, now.
...just some history... forget it and you will repeat it!
shastar
Tribune
This is twice in one week I have been accused of calling some member stupid. I must be related to Donald TrumpCall me stupid, but I've no intention to forget it !
shastar
Tribune
This is twice in one week I have been accused of calling some member stupid. I must be related to Donald Trump
I'll forgive you if you don't... prrffff... no polititics (but you know)
4. I gulp as the meaning of "I want answers ... string Ms. Moore up and beat them out of her if need be!" sinks in.
They march me, hands still clasped behind my head, bared breasts swaying, over to a place directly below one of the iron ceiling beams ...
... where they tie my wrists together and string me up under an iron overhead beam, hoisting me high enough so that my feet can no longer reach the floor. I am naked save for my torn open shirt and my kinis.
"Get on with it!" grunts the General impatiently.
The Captain steps up, wielding a heavy baton, circles behind me and deals me a heavy blow straight across the small of my back.
I buck and scream with pain!
Moments later he lays a second blow with his baton into my aching lower back ...
... then coming around in front of me, he applies a vicious blow in which he catches me with the butt of the baton handle square in the crotch ... right between my flailing legs ...
... and follows that with a series of sharp jabs to my tummy. I am reeling now, convulsed with pain, helpless to ward off each attack ... my pitiful screams echoing again and again off the bare masonry walls and ceiling.
Without pause he continues my beating, returning to deal punishment to my poor backside ... once ...
... twice ... And then a third time ...
... my screams and wretched cries for mercy mingle with his grunts as he delivers each blow, while a sheen of perspiration covers my body.
Moving around in front of me he delivers another blow to my tummy ... I howl, pull my knees up ... and lose control of my bladder ... A stream of pee dribbles down my bare legs ...
I am about to pass out, but suddenly the beating stops. The General has called a halt. I hang from my wrists, panting, eyes half closed.
"Well Ms. Moore, would you care to tell us now who you are really working for and why you are here? Or would you care to find out what else we can do to you to loosen your tongue?"
They march me, hands still clasped behind my head, bared breasts swaying, over to a place directly below one of the iron ceiling beams ...
... where they tie my wrists together and string me up under an iron overhead beam, hoisting me high enough so that my feet can no longer reach the floor. I am naked save for my torn open shirt and my kinis.
"Get on with it!" grunts the General impatiently.
The Captain steps up, wielding a heavy baton, circles behind me and deals me a heavy blow straight across the small of my back.
I buck and scream with pain!
Moments later he lays a second blow with his baton into my aching lower back ...
... then coming around in front of me, he applies a vicious blow in which he catches me with the butt of the baton handle square in the crotch ... right between my flailing legs ...
... and follows that with a series of sharp jabs to my tummy. I am reeling now, convulsed with pain, helpless to ward off each attack ... my pitiful screams echoing again and again off the bare masonry walls and ceiling.
Without pause he continues my beating, returning to deal punishment to my poor backside ... once ...
... twice ... And then a third time ...
... my screams and wretched cries for mercy mingle with his grunts as he delivers each blow, while a sheen of perspiration covers my body.
Moving around in front of me he delivers another blow to my tummy ... I howl, pull my knees up ... and lose control of my bladder ... A stream of pee dribbles down my bare legs ...
I am about to pass out, but suddenly the beating stops. The General has called a halt. I hang from my wrists, panting, eyes half closed.
"Well Ms. Moore, would you care to tell us now who you are really working for and why you are here? Or would you care to find out what else we can do to you to loosen your tongue?"
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The longest I ever saw her keep her 'kinis...
Great writing Barb and the usual exceptional art SJ
Tree
...I can tell I have to get Gunner's cousin a damn Christmas card this year...
AlexArts
Soul of Cinder
Beat a woman...ceiling.
Without pause he continues my beating,
I don't like it...
Yes, but you're a gentleman, the General isn't....
Fear not, our "courageous" Barb won't be giving him what he wants
. (For "courageous" read "unwise") 
Time also to thank Skating Jesus for the superb illustrations!
shastar
Tribune
I'll second that...
shastar
Tribune
View attachment 409624 Quel cul, Bon Dieu ! QUEL CUL !!!
Comme tu dis... Her 'tight little' is Barb's pride...
shastar
Tribune
I hate that, too. But if you want to be 'realistic', that's the way it should begin. I suspect (I'm sure) that Barbara Moore will get over it and attract more... refined tortures to herself.
SkatingJesus
King of the Crux Hill
Of course, I don't like beaten women in real life...
But you know my work, I like to be realistic stuff, and again, this is Just a fantasy story, like all my other ones. This is why I always do the disclaimer page, showing it's Just fiction, and I don't want anybody to do the same IRL.
And Well, to be honest, nailing a girl to a wooden cross and beat her is finally similar, as long as it's not real, of course !
I think everybody on cruxforums get the idea and think the same way, this is why I enjoy a lot your stuff too !
But as I told it before, I May do less violent stories in the future. Some will still be hardcore (Vacation time for me, but I will get back to work soon, on Andaroos 6 first, and then, I will work on a total new project: imagine Ninja warrior, or Takeshi's castle with hot girls, where a defeat /élimination means the girls will lose everything :the money earned in the game, first, but everything too... Including her freedom...
)So, Well, a white girl captured in an hostile country can't only be jailed in full confort for a few days...
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shastar
Tribune
You mentioned somewhere on the forum that your 'employers' didn't like heavy torture and asked you to turn to 'rape'... I'm sad to come to the conclusion that you agreed with them. I bought all the 5 episode so far... But Andaroos Chronicles is now all about rape (I hate, hate that) and a little bit of whipping...
Don't take it personnaly, please, SJ. I'm admirative about your creations. I just think you should move to another business model...
Repertor
Artifex Imaginum
So do I.
SkatingJesus
King of the Crux Hill
I don't literally agree with them, they asked me to do less torture, more sex.
But as I said,I will still do quite violent stuff, but not more brutal than I already do (this is my own limits).
In Andaroos 6, there will be a long crux scene, as long and as good as the one you saw in the chapter 2. You will see too some action in a labour camp, where slaves girls have to work and of course, will be whipped if they don't. In simple words, if you enjoyed all the previous Andaroos chapters, you will enjoy chapter 6 and the future others, I can promise that. Chapter 6 will focus on Ashley, Sarah's Sister, but you will see more girls in it.
I already made a less brutal comics, as my last one "Falling Star" doesn't have a single blood drop in it. And guess what ? The sales are a real disaster, as renderotica admins didn't help me as much as usual for advertising (and probably because of the holidays !).
So, if you enjoy girls in peril with torture scenes, don't worry, it will still be the case in my future works. Whipping, electro stuff, but not more (no amputation, no truly gore stuff, nothing more than Andaroos 1 and 5). If you like girls being captured /abducted /enslaved, you have to know that it will be the case too. That's what will happen in Andaroos 6.
Rape scenes will still exists, as it is part of the story, but I will low the beating part, and the visible wounds on the body. Realistic, but I still have to keep it sexy, I can't draw bruises everywhere. The beating, seen in Andaroos 5, is what renderotica admins disliked in my lasts works, and this is the main thing I will decrease, as it is now a bit too much.
To compensate that loss, I will add more sex scenes. Most of this will be rough, as usual, but I have planned some consensual ones. Sarah is in jail, but she will have a "not that bad" time in her cell (I don't know if it will be in Andaroos 6 or 7)
I said that my main problem is that people wants harder stuff, and some other wants less violent. I try to do what I can do to please everybody, and I think I found a good way to do it
But I rely on you all, my friends, I need you all to tell me what you wish to see in the future comics. I don't want New buyers if I have to lose my actual ones. Tell me, talk to me, because I know that the wishes of everybody are not that incompatible.
But as I said,I will still do quite violent stuff, but not more brutal than I already do (this is my own limits).
In Andaroos 6, there will be a long crux scene, as long and as good as the one you saw in the chapter 2. You will see too some action in a labour camp, where slaves girls have to work and of course, will be whipped if they don't. In simple words, if you enjoyed all the previous Andaroos chapters, you will enjoy chapter 6 and the future others, I can promise that. Chapter 6 will focus on Ashley, Sarah's Sister, but you will see more girls in it.
I already made a less brutal comics, as my last one "Falling Star" doesn't have a single blood drop in it. And guess what ? The sales are a real disaster, as renderotica admins didn't help me as much as usual for advertising (and probably because of the holidays !).
So, if you enjoy girls in peril with torture scenes, don't worry, it will still be the case in my future works. Whipping, electro stuff, but not more (no amputation, no truly gore stuff, nothing more than Andaroos 1 and 5). If you like girls being captured /abducted /enslaved, you have to know that it will be the case too. That's what will happen in Andaroos 6.
Rape scenes will still exists, as it is part of the story, but I will low the beating part, and the visible wounds on the body. Realistic, but I still have to keep it sexy, I can't draw bruises everywhere. The beating, seen in Andaroos 5, is what renderotica admins disliked in my lasts works, and this is the main thing I will decrease, as it is now a bit too much.
To compensate that loss, I will add more sex scenes. Most of this will be rough, as usual, but I have planned some consensual ones. Sarah is in jail, but she will have a "not that bad" time in her cell (I don't know if it will be in Andaroos 6 or 7)
I said that my main problem is that people wants harder stuff, and some other wants less violent. I try to do what I can do to please everybody, and I think I found a good way to do it
But I rely on you all, my friends, I need you all to tell me what you wish to see in the future comics. I don't want New buyers if I have to lose my actual ones. Tell me, talk to me, because I know that the wishes of everybody are not that incompatible.