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4. I gulp as the meaning of "I want answers ... string Ms. Moore up and beat them out of her if need be!" sinks in.

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They march me, hands still clasped behind my head, bared breasts swaying, over to a place directly below one of the iron ceiling beams ...

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... where they tie my wrists together and string me up under an iron overhead beam, hoisting me high enough so that my feet can no longer reach the floor. I am naked save for my torn open shirt and my kinis.

"Get on with it!" grunts the General impatiently.

The Captain steps up, wielding a heavy baton, circles behind me and deals me a heavy blow straight across the small of my back.

I buck and scream with pain!

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Moments later he lays a second blow with his baton into my aching lower back ...

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... then coming around in front of me, he applies a vicious blow in which he catches me with the butt of the baton handle square in the crotch ... right between my flailing legs ...

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... and follows that with a series of sharp jabs to my tummy. I am reeling now, convulsed with pain, helpless to ward off each attack ... my pitiful screams echoing again and again off the bare masonry walls and ceiling.

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Without pause he continues my beating, returning to deal punishment to my poor backside ... once ...

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... twice ... And then a third time ...

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... my screams and wretched cries for mercy mingle with his grunts as he delivers each blow, while a sheen of perspiration covers my body.

Moving around in front of me he delivers another blow to my tummy ... I howl, pull my knees up ... and lose control of my bladder ... A stream of pee dribbles down my bare legs ...

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I am about to pass out, but suddenly the beating stops. The General has called a halt. I hang from my wrists, panting, eyes half closed.

"Well Ms. Moore, would you care to tell us now who you are really working for and why you are here? Or would you care to find out what else we can do to you to loosen your tongue?"

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I think they mean business Barb:eek: I hope you talk, so they won't try to do more to "loosen your tongue";)
Very descriptive beating scene Barb, they literally knocked the piss out of you:eek:
Great artwork SkatingJesus!
I can't wait for more.
You two make a great team:)
 
But Andaroos Chronicles is now all about rape (I hate, hate that) and a little bit of whipping...

And don't forget that Sofia and Erja both had a long whip scene, and Natasha got a double whipping session, more than 80 pictures about it. Sarah and Ashley will have it too, and the sisters won't be the lasts ones. So I have to disagree with what you said about "a little whipping". There used to be whip in the 4 last Andaroos chapters, and there will be a lot of whip in the future ones.

Whipping is still the "sexiest" punishment ever, and the easiest to render too !
 
I'm glad to hear that you will not restrain too much, SJ. I know that you don't agree with the site owner and that it's impossible to please everyone. It's just that I don't like the way that site is going to.

Don't worry, my friend. Kinky stuff is my kind of stuff, and I would choose to stop everything, instead of Doing something I don't like. Every work I did and Every work I will will always the SJ touch.

But again, feel free to tell me what would be your dream comics, I need your opinion to improve my future works. Someone who enjoyed my firsts works must enjoy the future ones, this is what I want, to know that my readers are never disappointed.
 
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To compensate that loss, I will add more sex scenes. Most of this will be rough, as usual, but I have planned some consensual ones. Sarah is in jail, but she will have a "not that bad" time in her cell (I don't know if it will be in Andaroos 6 or 7)

I said that my main problem is that people wants harder stuff, and some other wants less violent. I try to do what I can do to please everybody, and I think I found a good way to do it

But I rely on you all, my friends, I need you all to tell me what you wish to see in the future comics. I don't want New buyers if I have to lose my actual ones. Tell me, talk to me, because I know that the wishes of everybody are not that incompatible. :)

Very bad news for me, but probably good news for you, SJ. Indeed, you can't please everyone. :(
 
Don't worry, my friend. Kinky stuff is my kind of stuff, and I would choose to stop everything, instead of Doing something I don't like. Every work I did and Every work I will will always the SJ touch.

But again, feel free to tell me what would be your dream comics, I need your opinion to improve my future works. Someone who enjoyed my firsts works must enjoy the future ones, this is what I want, to know that my readers are never disappointed.
Very bad news for me, but probably good news for you, SJ. Indeed, you can't please everyone. :(

Ok, guys. Back to the story? :rolleyes:
 
I need your opinion
(Just one more, Barb)
I enjoyed very much your early work like 'Welcome to Garmhaztan' and 'Unlucky Bounty'. 'Peril in Africa' and 'Andaroos Chronicles' as well but I have Andaroos 2 on a computer that broke down before a had read it and I don't buy the next parts before I can access chapter 2.
I agree when you say that whipping scenes are very sexy. I like to do them too but I haven't posted any on CF yet.
Congratulations on your pictures for this thread. Barb and you are a great team, enhancing each other's work.
 
Of course, I don't like beaten women in real life...
In real life, of course...
But i'm not talking about real life. I'm talking about something that I can call "exciting"...
There is a few conditions (this is my vision, of course) that I always looking for. In your arts I always found this conditions. Beauty of nakedness, expression, medium violence, small history...
For example... Nikki's crucifixion... Damn, when I saw this art for the first time I was deeply shocked. She was so real... Of course, someone could say that this art is pinnacle of violence(my psychologist:D). But after that I decided to try to make something like this... Like I want...

And Well, to be honest, nailing a girl to a wooden cross and beat her is finally similar, as long as it's not real, of course !:D
You said like my psychologist when she saw my "arts" :D
 
Yes, but you're a gentleman, the General isn't....:(

Fear not, our "courageous" Barb won't be giving him what he wants:(. (For "courageous" read "unwise") :rolleyes:

Time also to thank Skating Jesus for the superb illustrations! :)

Hasturan is the gentlest of all ;)

No, Barb has no intention of giving him what he wants ... at least not yet :rolleyes:

Episode 5 coming soon ....
 
I don't literally agree with them, they asked me to do less torture, more sex.

But as I said,I will still do quite violent stuff, but not more brutal than I already do (this is my own limits).

In Andaroos 6, there will be a long crux scene, as long and as good as the one you saw in the chapter 2. You will see too some action in a labour camp, where slaves girls have to work and of course, will be whipped if they don't. In simple words, if you enjoyed all the previous Andaroos chapters, you will enjoy chapter 6 and the future others, I can promise that. Chapter 6 will focus on Ashley, Sarah's Sister, but you will see more girls in it.

I already made a less brutal comics, as my last one "Falling Star" doesn't have a single blood drop in it. And guess what ? The sales are a real disaster, as renderotica admins didn't help me as much as usual for advertising (and probably because of the holidays !).

So, if you enjoy girls in peril with torture scenes, don't worry, it will still be the case in my future works. Whipping, electro stuff, but not more (no amputation, no truly gore stuff, nothing more than Andaroos 1 and 5). If you like girls being captured /abducted /enslaved, you have to know that it will be the case too. That's what will happen in Andaroos 6.

Rape scenes will still exists, as it is part of the story, but I will low the beating part, and the visible wounds on the body. Realistic, but I still have to keep it sexy, I can't draw bruises everywhere. The beating, seen in Andaroos 5, is what renderotica admins disliked in my lasts works, and this is the main thing I will decrease, as it is now a bit too much.

To compensate that loss, I will add more sex scenes. Most of this will be rough, as usual, but I have planned some consensual ones. Sarah is in jail, but she will have a "not that bad" time in her cell (I don't know if it will be in Andaroos 6 or 7)

I said that my main problem is that people wants harder stuff, and some other wants less violent. I try to do what I can do to please everybody, and I think I found a good way to do it

But I rely on you all, my friends, I need you all to tell me what you wish to see in the future comics. I don't want New buyers if I have to lose my actual ones. Tell me, talk to me, because I know that the wishes of everybody are not that incompatible. :)

Hardcore sex is everywhere. Personally, I appreciate the realism in your art. I want to think about what would really happen to a woman (and, of course, I put myself in the images I see) in that situation. Barb is getting brutally beaten. (And, along with Tree, I'm surprised she is still wearing her bikini briefs. :rolleyes:) That's what would no doubt really happen to a woman in this situation. Quite frankly, much, much worse too. Reality is really, really bad sometimes. A real woman held like this would be repeatedly gang-raped. That's much different than a lot of straight-up sex.

I'm not being racist here. She could just as easily be beaten by Nazis (I think you have, haven't you Barb?) as by Africans, backwoods types, Asians, or just about any other group you want to think about.

Bravo for the realism! Yes to gratuitous violence! Yay for bruises, whippings, blood and wounds! :D

Trust me -- in real life I'm not a viscous person!
 
4. I gulp as the meaning of "I want answers ... string Ms. Moore up and beat them out of her if need be!" sinks in.

View attachment 409610

They march me, hands still clasped behind my head, bared breasts swaying, over to a place directly below one of the iron ceiling beams ...

View attachment 409611

... where they tie my wrists together and string me up under an iron overhead beam, hoisting me high enough so that my feet can no longer reach the floor. I am naked save for my torn open shirt and my kinis.

"Get on with it!" grunts the General impatiently.

The Captain steps up, wielding a heavy baton, circles behind me and deals me a heavy blow straight across the small of my back.

I buck and scream with pain!

View attachment 409612

Moments later he lays a second blow with his baton into my aching lower back ...

View attachment 409613

... then coming around in front of me, he applies a vicious blow in which he catches me with the butt of the baton handle square in the crotch ... right between my flailing legs ...

View attachment 409614

... and follows that with a series of sharp jabs to my tummy. I am reeling now, convulsed with pain, helpless to ward off each attack ... my pitiful screams echoing again and again off the bare masonry walls and ceiling.

View attachment 409615

Without pause he continues my beating, returning to deal punishment to my poor backside ... once ...

View attachment 409616

... twice ... And then a third time ...

View attachment 409617

... my screams and wretched cries for mercy mingle with his grunts as he delivers each blow, while a sheen of perspiration covers my body.

Moving around in front of me he delivers another blow to my tummy ... I howl, pull my knees up ... and lose control of my bladder ... A stream of pee dribbles down my bare legs ...

View attachment 409618

I am about to pass out, but suddenly the beating stops. The General has called a halt. I hang from my wrists, panting, eyes half closed.

"Well Ms. Moore, would you care to tell us now who you are really working for and why you are here? Or would you care to find out what else we can do to you to loosen your tongue?"

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"Well Ms. Moore, would you care to tell us now who you are really working for and why you are here? Or would you care to find out what else we can do to you to loosen your tongue?"

Yeah, I'm guessing the panties come down next. :eek:;):D
 
Don't worry, my friend. Kinky stuff is my kind of stuff, and I would choose to stop everything, instead of Doing something I don't like. Every work I did and Every work I will will always the SJ touch.

But again, feel free to tell me what would be your dream comics, I need your opinion to improve my future works. Someone who enjoyed my firsts works must enjoy the future ones, this is what I want, to know that my readers are never disappointed.
Those images for Barb's story #4 hit the target in every sense SJ!
They offer a fresh angle - again in several senses - on the familiar theme of a savage beating,
as ever you've thought a lot about how a girl in that situation would
(be compelled to) react - in her facial expressions, in her kicking and twisting.
I'm not squeamish, I wouldn't want you to 'tone down' your imagery,
but for me images of rape, forced oral sex, or of mutilation or massive bleeding,
aren't arousing or aesthetically pleasing, but a girl 'dancing' on the cross or to the whip
is a beautiful as well as a terrible image, and conveys the strange fascination I have
for experiencing such 'dancing' myself. And, since you ask for our opinions,
that - along with the facial expressions - is what I think you do best SJ -
and I think we're very fortunate that you show a good deal of your work
on this free site. Thankyou! :)
 
Of course, I don't like beaten women in real life...

But you know my work, I like to be realistic stuff, and again, this is Just a fantasy story, like all my other ones. This is why I always do the disclaimer page, showing it's Just fiction, and I don't want anybody to do the same IRL.

And Well, to be honest, nailing a girl to a wooden cross and beat her is finally similar, as long as it's not real, of course !:D

I think everybody on cruxforums get the idea and think the same way, this is why I enjoy a lot your stuff too !

But as I told it before, I May do less violent stories in the future. Some will still be hardcore (Vacation time for me, but I will get back to work soon, on Andaroos 6 first, and then, I will work on a total new project: imagine Ninja warrior, or Takeshi's castle with hot girls, where a defeat /élimination means the girls will lose everything :the money earned in the game, first, but everything too... Including her freedom... :p)

So, Well, a white girl captured in an hostile country can't only be jailed in full confort for a few days...
I thank you for the grandios illustrations!
 
"Well Ms. Moore, would you care to tell us now who you are really working for and why you are here? Or would you care to find out what else we can do to you to loosen your tongue?"

Yeah, I'm guessing the panties come down next. :eek:;):D

I should be taking bets on which episode I will lose my kinis :D

Las Vegas and RR enterprises is already laying odds.;)

Will it be episode 5? Or maybe 6? Perhaps 7?:rolleyes:

Come on folks, step right up and place those bets! :p
 
Those images for Barb's story #4 hit the target in every sense SJ!
They offer a fresh angle - again in several senses - on the familiar theme of a savage beating,
as ever you've thought a lot about how a girl in that situation would
(be compelled to) react - in her facial expressions, in her kicking and twisting.
I'm not squeamish, I wouldn't want you to 'tone down' your imagery,
but for me images of rape, forced oral sex, or of mutilation or massive bleeding,
aren't arousing or aesthetically pleasing, but a girl 'dancing' on the cross or to the whip
is a beautiful as well as a terrible image, and conveys the strange fascination I have
for experiencing such 'dancing' myself. And, since you ask for our opinions,
that - along with the facial expressions - is what I think you do best SJ -
and I think we're very fortunate that you show a good deal of your work
on this free site. Thankyou! :)

:very_hot: :doh:
 
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