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Laeti-dazza Productions
- Thread starter Dazza
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Laetitia was told she would soon be with Manon. Details were not given...
Dazza
Magistrate
I'll be making a downloadable picture file , (from Mediafire), of the entire story, for those that like to view , in slideshow mode or whatever.
As this has proved popular, when we made "Moveable Feast". Though maybe that had something to do with, "censorship issues" on DA.
I'll bang it up at the end of the story.
As this has proved popular, when we made "Moveable Feast". Though maybe that had something to do with, "censorship issues" on DA.
I'll bang it up at the end of the story.
And I'll producing a PDF for the archive. Of course!
Migoz2
Senator
This is one dramatic image! I love the tension, what is to come......
Dazza
Magistrate
Thanks Madiosi, If you take it off the download it might save time.
Thanks Migoz, you are looking at an all night render there. Eight or nine hours.
The trick is you can generally only get 6 or 7 characters, into a render before the computer crashes.
There's ways around this involving Photoshop.
Though it never looks quite right. ( Fortunately I'm sh1t at Photoshop).
I never thought anyone would notice it, as it is what Laetitia and I refer to as a "narrative picture".
Gibbs505
SERVORUM DOMITOR
Oh yes, the sense of anticipation for all involved, in different way!
I want not renouncing on Tree's remarkable text. Both, images and text made it great.
Tree just observes... What do you think could happen to Laetitia at this point???
Your part, to writing that!
Migoz2
Senator
It might be a "narrative picture", but following on from my comment above about the way Laetitia is being portrayed, it is a very strong narrative. And this image builds the tension beautifully
Dazza
Magistrate
C'est à ce point, madame ?
Je ne savais pas, si vous étiez sincère, quand vous avez dit, ce matin, que vous achetiez une nouvelle machine.
Souhaitez-vous que je publie des photos pendant que vous vous occupez de cette situation ?
Migoz2
Senator
Exactly the dramatic image that the previous one was leading up to. Nicely done, Dazza!
Laetitia enters the room and is stunned to see Manon hanged. Her lover's face is contorted by the pain she suffered while she strangled. The two guards have to hold Laetitia to keep her from falling down.
Laetitia cries "You have killed her! How could you?"
Of course she doesn't notice the executioner is holding a noose for her neck!!!
"My god, you have killed Manon" Laetitia cries.
One guard replies "Don't worry, we have another noose just for you!"
The executioner pulls a noose and tightens it around my neck. They can't do this to me! I scream "You were to shoot us! You cannot hang me!"
-Laetitia
"Fuck you, bitch. You have a noose around your neck and your hands are cuffed behind your back" the executioner snarls. "We have the video of what you and Manon did last night. You don't deserve the mercy of bullets through your heart!"
Gibbs505
SERVORUM DOMITOR
Ah computer problems, the more they do, the easier they are to gum up!