Laeti-dazza Productions

[Laetitia]

The guards, the director and the executioners watch the poor woman die.

 

[Laetitia]

She still has a little breath of life left for one last orgasm, her bladder is emptying at the same time and her urine is contaminating the soil.

 

[thehangingtree]

She still has a little breath of life left for one last orgasm, her bladder is emptying at the same time and her urine is contaminating the soil.

Laetitia is choked by the noose. The weight of her body has closed her throat. The execution smirks as she says "Oh, look, she is pissing her life away."

 

[Laetitia]

The executioner is sorry to see that Laetitia peed on the floor of the room, someone will have to clean it up.

 

[thehangingtree]

The executioner is sorry to see that Aurélie peed on the floor of the room, someone will have to clean it up.

Leave it for the maintenance crew... They have to fetch the hanged women's bodies anyway...

 

[Dazza]

C'est une erreur, madame. On dirait qu'Aurélie a pissé par terre en anglais.

Remplacer à la place. "The executioner is sorry to see that Laetitia peed on the floor of the room, someone will have to clean it up."

 

[Dazza]

Leave it for the maintenance crew... They have to fetch the hanged women's bodies anyway...

That's right Mr. Tree, it is a problem for the lower orders as I see it.

 

[Laetitia]

The bodies of the two condemned women hang miserably, the executioners take one last look at Laetitia's body before leaving the room, the bodies must remain hanged for some time before a final check.

 

[Dazza]

CH6050 has just gone up on your DA site, madame. It is seriously in breach of their editorial rules.
I would suggest deletion. Is Manon helping you?

 

[Laetitia]

CH5060 has just gone up on your DA site, madame. It is seriously in breach of their editorial rules.
I would suggest deletion. Is Manon helping you?

CH5060 ?

 

[Dazza]

CH5060 ?

CH6050 typo - the piss one. You are not allowed to show pissing. Though the piss puddle on the floor is technically OK (I think)

 

[thehangingtree]

The bodies of the two condemned women hang miserably, the executioners take one last look at Laetitia's body before leaving the room, the bodies must remain hanged for some time before a final check.

Two young women have been hanged as spies. The commissioner is pleased with the executioner's work. She invites her to her private quarters for a drink and whatever else happens after that. Laetitia and Manon are left hanged from their nooses. The men from the night cleaning crew will dispose of their bodies and clean up Laetitia'a mess in a few hours...

Great story, Laetitia and Dazza!!!

 

[Dazza]

The men from the night cleaning crew will dispose of their bodies and clean up Laetitia'a mess in a few hours...

Great story, Laetitia and Dazza!!!

Oh dear Mr. Tree. You might have to consider an edit to that last bit ))
Thanks btw

 

[Laetitia]

The executioner is very conscientious and wants to control that the convicts are dead while one of the guards cleans Laetitia's urine.

 

[thehangingtree]

The executioner is very conscientious and wants to control that the convicts are dead while one of the guards cleans Laetitia's urine.

The guard must be bored... she should have left Laetitia's piss for the custodian crew. I think the executioner just likes feeling up women even when their bodies approach room temperature...

 

[Laetitia]

All that's left is to put the corpses in the coffins.

 

[thehangingtree]

All that's left is to put the corpses in the coffins.

Coffins?!?!?! Through the two bitches in one box if you are going to use one at all...

 

[Laetitia]

Coffins?!?!?! Through the two bitches in one box if you are going to use one at all...

Yes, it's more a box than a coffin, but the dead are entitled to respect and to be buried with dignity and not like dogs. No matter what they've done in their lives.

 

[Laetitia]

The part is clean and ready for other executions.
The coffins are transported to the prison cemetery, they will be buried in an anonymous grave.

 

[Laetitia]

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