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Magister's Crucifixion Work & Stories

Which character is the your favorite?

  • A) Naesala

    Votes: 15 16.7%

  • B) Lyra

    Votes: 14 15.6%

  • C) Vaeri

    Votes: 15 16.7%

  • D) Allisa

    Votes: 37 41.1%

  • E) Marie

    Votes: 8 8.9%

  • F) One of the guards (feel free to comment which)

    Votes: 1 1.1%
  • Total voters
    90
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You wouldn't hemorrhage to death from ankle and wrist nail wounds. The biggest threat their is infection, which is easily treatable. The danger coming from shock can only be mediated by getting the girls intoxicated before removal. Other than that I am sure they would be willing to risk it given the situation.
The plan would be either men holding them in place by the torso to take the strain off the wrists, then doing the same for the feet. Or wrapping ropes around the shoulders and the cross in a make shift harness. Even if rescuers can't get nails out on scene, they can be removed more safely later, as long as they are freed from the wood of the crosses. That is the biggest thing. But given the fact that this is taking place in the middle of nowhere and their are only a couple of guards time is on the side of the rescuers, for now anyway.
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All right. But getting the nails off the cross seems to me to be the biggest problem. They are sunk so deep into the wood. How to get them without mutilating the girls?
 
oycrsr said:
All right. But getting the nails off the cross seems to me to be the biggest problem. They are sunk so deep into the wood. How to get them without mutilating the girls?
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Well, they are already mutilated, but I get what your asking.
Honestly, their isn't a way without causing the girls some kind of pain. But like I said before, the odds of them or most of anyone else not willing to put up with it for the sake of freedom is slim to none.
The best thing to do is lowering the crosses first. It takes the gravitational strain off the girls and makes the work of pulling the nails out less strenuous. From there you can better leverage the tool used against the wood of the stipe and patibulum. Something that I personally did once to pull a large nail out of a 6x6 board was to tie a rope around the head and pull straight up using my legs. I'm not even that strong, but 160lbs pulling against a nail made it come free on the second pull.
A second method, once on the ground is to use chisels on the wood around the nail. If you free up a couple of inches deep and wide around the point the nail enters the wood it makes pulling them out easier. This is also something else I've done IRL before.
 
Well, they are already mutilated, but I get what your asking.
Honestly, their isn't a way without causing the girls some kind of pain. But like I said before, the odds of them or most of anyone else not willing to put up with it for the sake of freedom is slim to none.
The best thing to do is lowering the crosses first. It takes the gravitational strain off the girls and makes the work of pulling the nails out less strenuous. From there you can better leverage the tool used against the wood of the stipe and patibulum. Something that I personally did once to pull a large nail out of a 6x6 board was to tie a rope around the head and pull straight up using my legs. I'm not even that strong, but 160lbs pulling against a nail made it come free on the second pull.
A second method, once on the ground is to use chisels on the wood around the nail. If you free up a couple of inches deep and wide around the point the nail enters the wood it makes pulling them out easier. This is also something else I've done IRL before.
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I think the second method you propose is the best... In any case, as long as these poor girls survive!
 
oycrsr said:
I think the second method you propose is the best... In any case, as long as these poor girls survive!
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It's a shame that they aren't going to, at least I doubt it. But hey, this IS a forum dedicated to the fetishization of a form of execution. lol
I'm just pontificating here. :p
 
I had a vision emerge through a smoky cloud. The four crucified elves appeared with their tormenters approaching to do them more harm. They were stopped when a mixed detachment of horsemen came racing up. The troop was of equal numbers of elves and humans commanded by a human. These calvary bands had been scouring both the human kingdom and the elven lands since the treaty looking for patrols that may not have known the war was over. When the patrols were found, they were brought to compounds and protected until they could be returned to their homelands.

A wine merchant had notified a troop that the four elven girls were suffering crucifixion right down the road The girls were carefully and gently decrucified and sent home immediately for medical attention. When they were healed, they told their story to a tribunal consisting of three humans and three elves to account for the killing of the human soldiers. The young elf was returned to her village and the officer who abducted and crucified her was sentenced to death by crucifixion.

The elves were absolved of the deaths they caused but when queried as to why they didn't investigate the what the mixed troops of horse were doing when they had seen them since obvious elven nobles were among them. The girls replied that they had all agreed that they thought the nobles were betraying their own kind and continued their war patrol. Doubting the loyalty of elven nobility was treason and since they had all felt the same disparagement the remaining three warrior women were sentenced to Elven Crucifixion and its even more attendant horrors then they had already suffered at the hands of the humans. Poor things.
 
It is quite entertaining to view the naked elf girls lined up on their crosses, their shapely, curvaceous breasts jutting out so erotically, as their tormentors go down the line torturing them each in different ways.
 
The man who hit Nae is as sadistic as he is stupid. As a soldier, he should have known that blows of such force in the abdomen of a woman could kill her. Nae is dead, she's done suffering that poor girl. She avoided unnecessary suffering. I think Vaeri and Lyra will both die quickly as well, and maybe Allissa will survive, hopefully.
 
Wragg said:
Poor Nae :(

If you get an emotional response from your readers, MM - you're writing well! :)
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I sometimes wish I'd written this story in a full text format as well. Nae's thoughts as she was dying would have further fleshed out her character. Her mental state was completely mixed up. She was afraid Vaeri's psychosis permanently changed her and what she would say when she woke up. And while she knew she'd die on the cross (in a day or so), she didn't want to die before Allisa just because there'd be no one to talk to the young girl and try to distract her from the agony.

The ending, in particular, is set in stone and I think the readers will especially enjoy the two separate epilogues. Seeing as Marie quickly became popular, she might get her own spinoff as well.
 
Magister_militum said:
Allisa is shown a rare kindness while Vaeri, completely resigned to her miserable fate, processes Naesala's death.

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Very descriptive and realistic dialog between the elves... what does go through one's mind when crucified and the only escape is your death???
 
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