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A Slave's fate....part 2

Shakily,I now stand before my upright
This will surely be my final destination
The wood is hurting my whipped shoulders
Outstretched arms numbed by the weight
Sweaty breasts heaving with effort....

I'm pushed backwards,now I lie aground
The dreaded time has indeed come
Again,I beg and plead to no avail
I can only stare,as cruel spikes produced
Helplessly I watch my impending doom...

Heavy hammer raised,falls slams down !!
Spike now pierces exposed left wrist....
Inhuman screams,indescribable AGONY !!
Nude body jolts,hips thrust almost sexually
Urine flows between my legs,crowd cheers...

Once again I watch executioner move...
To my right wrist another nail produced
Once more I stare,dumbstruck horror
He looks coldly into my pained eyes
Ignoring my babbling,hammer is raised...

Down the mallet comes,with brute force
Connects squarely against nail,wrist secured
Slices through flesh,blood & bone...
I cry out in yet more shock and pain
Once more my nude body buckles,I pee...

As my head swims with more bitter pain
I hear the crowd,their hostile jeering
(Why DO they HATE me SO much ?!)
I look towards them,my eyes despairing
There's no sympathy,why should there be ??...

Desperately I call out to them,imploring...
"Oh please,by the Gods,won't you spare me ??
I don't deserve to die like this,it HURTS...!!
Why won't you help me,please...WHY ??"
My voice cracking with emotion and fear...

"Oh, do SHUT UP, you stupid fucking BITCH !!
We've come to watch you fucking die...!!"
Obviously,to them I was nothing,worthless
Another enemy of the Roman Empire
To them I deserved to be crucified...

Soon I'm now dragged against the upright
Ropes produced,bound,orders shouted
Jerkily I'm now being raised,agony resumes
"Ahh,fuck,fucking,STOP please it HURTS !!"
My flailing legs leave the ground,forever...

As my whipped body is roughly raised
I hear the hostile crowd baying for blood
My feet are gripped,another nail appears
Hammer swings,drives nail through feet
Oh SHIT,how I screamed and shrieked ...!!

My poor brain was shocked with pain
The AGONY was fucking electrifying !!
To add to my misery, a further insult
My ragged loincloth is pulled away
Naked,I hang in desolation and shame...

The crucifiers,carnifexes,now stand back
Admiring and checking their grisly handiwork
Immediately I try to haul myself up,no use !!
The "dance of death" they call it
I suffer the agonies of the crucified...!!

To be continued...
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To be continued??? But not with my Pics. The federal prosecutor will otherwise continue your story!!!
 
Markus63 said:
Just remove it without comments.
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Baracus cannot remove it. I will replace it with a similar but better pic of mine. I find it odd that you've been here for five years and only posted two messages, one of which is your absurd threat of a federal prosecutor! Little wonder that Baracus thought it was a joke. Now please stop the threats and let me get on with it. OK..it's done. Great writing Baracus! If you would like a different pic I'm sure I could find one..or more. Just PM me.
 
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melissa said:
Baracus cannot remove it. I will replace it with a similar but better pic of mine. I find it odd that you've been here for five years and only posted two messages, one of which is your absurd threat of a federal prosecutor! Little wonder that Baracus thought it was a joke. Now please stop the threats and let me get on with it.
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What would be YOUR reaction if someone posts pics you made without your permission?
 
For the record I selected the picture at random via the internet with no idea of source,I chose it because it,(to me)suited the thread.
I will endeavour to find a suitable replacement via Melissa.
 
Baracus said:
For the record I selected the picture at random via the internet with no idea of source,I chose it because it,(to me)suited the thread.
I will endeavour to find a suitable replacement via Melissa.
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Mel had replaced it already. Find you a better, we replacing it again.
 
A SLAVE'S ORDEAL.......part one :
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Again,and again,they raped me...
Brutally fucked,without compassion
A sexual ordeal,cruel,unceasing
Pained genitals seeping fluids
My arse really,really hurts deep inside
Mouth is full of sticky vile taste....

Violated in the cold darkness
I'm chained,by the neck,securely.
Wrists pinioned apart,above me
Naked,save for a scrap of cloth
I stink,of sweat,piss,and more
Thighs cum-smeared,insulted....

Nerves trembling,I shudder,scared
Fearfully awaiting the next one
I'm so helplessly spread apart
My exposed sex on lewd display
An open invitation to be abused
Just like a basic dirty little Whore...

I HATE those disgusting bastards
Of course,they don't bloody care
(And why should they,even....??)
I'm not really that important
Only fit to be raped,ad infinitum
At their pleasure,certainly not mine !!

Screaming,pleading pathetically tearful
But,of course,yeah they ignored me !!
I'm just a simple female "fuck-toy"
No longer a young woman,a person
Just a lowly degraded sex-slave
At their brutal,obscene "service".....

Constantly they rutted,and pumped
The cell reeked of sexual depravation
Macho grunts reaching crescendo
A groan and jerk they've ejaculated
Deep into my vaginal orifice,or bumhole
To add insult some wanked-off,even.....

This is part of my cruel punishment
It was my own stupid mistake....
I,Helena shouldn't've listened,agreed
I joined the oncoming Slave-rebellion
It was futile,doomed savagely crushed
I became a victim,of Rome's justice....

Captured,stripped,beaten,and put on trial
A sham court,indeed,followed suit
They needed an example made of....
As a mere House Slave,I sufficed
They imposed a heavy punishment,
Crucifixion,is my sentence,as I screamed !!

To be continued....
 
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A SLAVE'S ORDEAL.....part two :

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Sentenced,I'm led away,flogging awaits
Crudely stripped topless,I hear jeering
My ample breasts,bared,now bouncing
A prime target,for the whip indeed
Wrists swiftly chained above my head
Fearfully,I await the cruel lashing....

The Whip-master was cruelly efficient
A true master of the sadistic trade
My nude exposed torso,soon reddened
Wounds criss-crossed bloodily,I wailed
How many MORE...?? (I'd lost count...)
Fifty strokes administered,I soon fainted

But my ordeal is NOT yet over,oh no....!!
Before Crucifixion,there's another torment
It's decreed,I've to be raped,violated at will
For as long as it's deemed necessary
A truly savage,sadistic,sexual reminder
Rome was in charge,not myself....!!

Again,and again as I cry in pain,anguish
Disgusting males,entered me repeatedly
My mouth,arse and vagina,all abused
Yes I loathe them all without a doubt
But there's nothing I can do...at all
No amount of pleading will discourage...

Eventually the savage fornication stops....
They've sated their dirty lust,I'm broken
I curse them,the filthy,filthy beasts !!
Soon the dreaded jailer comes for me....
My chains are un-shackled,a brief respite
The time has come....my Crucifixion awaits !!

Dirty,naked,paraded before a hostile public
I hear their vitriolic abuse..."CRUCIFY HER !!"
Upon my shoulders I bear the heavy beam
A further insult,a crude dildo is inserted...
Also a vile wooden butt-plug,"shit,that hurts !!"
Fresh humiliation and agony imposed,I sob.

My dangling Titulus simply reads,"SLUT"...
I endure yet more gestures, and obscenities
They didn't care about my own suffering
Silently I endured total utter shame,pain.
Impatienty driven on by the whip,I stagger
I'm struggling,weighed down by the wood...

Onwards I miserably trudged,sweating too
The Crossbeam chafes my lacerated arms
Suffering intolerable now,my insides hurt...
Numbly I've lost all hope of reprieve
There's NO going back for me now....
A horrible one way journey,to my death...

Screaming,I'm nailed and raised upon cross
Crucified,along with others,defeated also....
Umpteen naked,pathetic wretches,victims
All moaning pitifully,just like myself,in agony
So many different languages,all imploring
Everyone a victim,of Rome's severe justice.
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THE END......
 
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Okay....I'm doing a new short story,(again in prose.)
Hope you enjoy it ??
Without further ado,I give you :
"An unfair choice....."
( just got to find a suitable picture that doesn't upset anyone....(!!) ;) )
 
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