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Yes, you've good the good translation, mine was just eulish :p
('motionless on her back, her loins still aflame' is great,
but I'd stick up for my 'ventriloquism' rather than just 'substitution',
that doesn't sound quite right to me for the sense in English)
 
except this time, it's puppet speaking through Master,
so 'a strange ventriloquism' ;)

But brooding on this geekishly, if I'd been whipped like O
and my loins were still 'blazing', I wouldn't be lying on my back,
it would be much too sore :eek: So, while my 'bent over' is
probably not right for 'renversée', perhaps 'prone'?
 
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The Whip Hand

Let's return to our regularly scheduled broadcast
where the Whipping is already in progress...


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"O knew very well why Anne-Marie had wanted, above all else, to have her whipped.
That the female of the species was as cruel as, and more implacable than, the male,
O had never doubted for a minute..."

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Ego Stipes Ergo Sum
 
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