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Where It All Began...
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WOW, what a thoughtful reply by Messa...
...First let me put on thought to rest: Kay Milton does not survive. The Epiloge will involve other things and will be short.
Second, by my standards, this was a relatively quick story, started November 9, 2012, and the bulk of it done in just over two months.
Third, I have (and mentioned in this thread) not liked the term "Victim" for describing the condemned and even asked for ideas. While I believe many condemned by the IMF (or any other fictional groups) could easily see themselves as victims, those condemning them certainly would not.
I have some ideas for my next stories but will try not to make them drawn out affairs.
The reasons I like this forum is you get both witty banter and thought-out replies. The actual execution to me is more anti-climatic than evens leading to it (although one can assume the one suffering execution could disagree!)
And I learn things here... I had to look up 'supplice' before even starting to reply!
So thanks to Messa and all that tuned in and all that encouraged...
You may have noticed I usually work two stories at a time. I do this to take a breather from each. With "Where it all began..." just about wrapped I will be hunting for new storylines...
Tree
...First let me put on thought to rest: Kay Milton does not survive. The Epiloge will involve other things and will be short.
Second, by my standards, this was a relatively quick story, started November 9, 2012, and the bulk of it done in just over two months.
Third, I have (and mentioned in this thread) not liked the term "Victim" for describing the condemned and even asked for ideas. While I believe many condemned by the IMF (or any other fictional groups) could easily see themselves as victims, those condemning them certainly would not.
I have some ideas for my next stories but will try not to make them drawn out affairs.
The reasons I like this forum is you get both witty banter and thought-out replies. The actual execution to me is more anti-climatic than evens leading to it (although one can assume the one suffering execution could disagree!)
And I learn things here... I had to look up 'supplice' before even starting to reply!
So thanks to Messa and all that tuned in and all that encouraged...
You may have noticed I usually work two stories at a time. I do this to take a breather from each. With "Where it all began..." just about wrapped I will be hunting for new storylines...
Tree
should the line not be read as follows?
"she is a poor lonesome Messa so far from her Cross
it is not about grammatica but the fact that she is not singing...................... but Tree the cowboy.actually no Admi: after "I'm a poor lonesome Messa"she has a choice whether to use "my" or "her",either is acceptably grammatical
…So Kay Milton, known to the official records as Kay 20030607, was Tree’s first crucifixion. She survived hanging from the cross almost 57 hours, succumbing just before 9 PM CDT. According to her thesis her body should have been left on the cross until noon the following day to be displayed as a deterrent. Actually by noon Sunday there were only the hardcore still interested in watching her and by Monday morning, you’d have been hard pressed to find anyone outside the IMF and a batch of scientist and theologians interested in Kay at all by the time she died.
Kay’s body was removed from the cross less than a half hour after she expired. This was not due the lack of interest in the deterrence factor but because she was the first (known) person to be executed by crucifixion in modern times. They had collected a lot of data from the sensors they had implanted in her before she was crucified but the opportunity for an autopsy on a freshly executed cadaver could not be passed up.
The first thing they did was weigh her body. From the 126 lbs. before she was crucified she weighed 99 the night she died. Next they put heavy zip ties through her the wounds in her wrists and hoisted her corpse up. A stainless pan was placed just under her toes then the blood vessels in her ankles were cut open and she was drained of just less than four quarts of blood.
They worked quickly without regard for the shell of the body that had been Kay. Watching from above through a window in the observation deck I poured a drink and lit a cigarette. A security guard came up to me and told smoking wasn’t allowed in the building. Without looking at him I parked the muzzle of my Glock against his forehead and said “Firearms ain’t allowed either I hear. Don’t you need to be elsewhere?”
He left. I watched them gut her body and scrap the maggots from her bowels and wounds. All told they collected five pounds of ‘parasites’ that inhabited her intestines, vagina and womb, and even some from her lungs. About then Professor Johns step up next to me. As he stared down into the pit he asked if he could have a smoke. I told him smoking wasn’t allowed in the building as I handed him my pack and clicked open the Zippo.
“You did well, Tree” he said. “She didn’t have a broken bone in her body. And soon we will be able to determine the cause of death.”
I picked up my bottle and shoved the Marlboros in my pocket. I turned and as I left I said “I could have told you that. It was crucifixion…”
End
Tree
..so thanks for sticking around. Word says that was over 140 pages at 33K words and a bit more than 160 pictures of which about 110 were either Manip’d or originals…
Be careful, Tree has time on his hands…
Kay’s body was removed from the cross less than a half hour after she expired. This was not due the lack of interest in the deterrence factor but because she was the first (known) person to be executed by crucifixion in modern times. They had collected a lot of data from the sensors they had implanted in her before she was crucified but the opportunity for an autopsy on a freshly executed cadaver could not be passed up.
The first thing they did was weigh her body. From the 126 lbs. before she was crucified she weighed 99 the night she died. Next they put heavy zip ties through her the wounds in her wrists and hoisted her corpse up. A stainless pan was placed just under her toes then the blood vessels in her ankles were cut open and she was drained of just less than four quarts of blood.
They worked quickly without regard for the shell of the body that had been Kay. Watching from above through a window in the observation deck I poured a drink and lit a cigarette. A security guard came up to me and told smoking wasn’t allowed in the building. Without looking at him I parked the muzzle of my Glock against his forehead and said “Firearms ain’t allowed either I hear. Don’t you need to be elsewhere?”
He left. I watched them gut her body and scrap the maggots from her bowels and wounds. All told they collected five pounds of ‘parasites’ that inhabited her intestines, vagina and womb, and even some from her lungs. About then Professor Johns step up next to me. As he stared down into the pit he asked if he could have a smoke. I told him smoking wasn’t allowed in the building as I handed him my pack and clicked open the Zippo.
“You did well, Tree” he said. “She didn’t have a broken bone in her body. And soon we will be able to determine the cause of death.”
I picked up my bottle and shoved the Marlboros in my pocket. I turned and as I left I said “I could have told you that. It was crucifixion…”
End
Tree
..so thanks for sticking around. Word says that was over 140 pages at 33K words and a bit more than 160 pictures of which about 110 were either Manip’d or originals…
Be careful, Tree has time on his hands…
Tree in a blonde wig?
you winTree in a blonde wig?
called exchange damned experiences or so?
messaline
Crucified Amazon
messaline
Crucified Amazon
I was speaking in fantasy, Eul...
...and we cant experience, otherwise we'ld be obliged to get out this forum...
because dead!
I dont believe in ghosts...
LittleSiss
Sorceress
but a little one
...couldn't get on the site for a while... server error, they say, I thought perhaps Eul or Ulrika were misbehaving...
-otherwise we'ld be obliged to get out this forum...- Messa
...in the fantasy world there are parallel universes...
'...Let's do the timewrap again...'
t
-otherwise we'ld be obliged to get out this forum...- Messa
...in the fantasy world there are parallel universes...
'...Let's do the timewrap again...'
t
LittleSiss
Sorceress
Ok!
If you are truly as young as you say you are I am really helping pervert another generation...
tree
...Yes, Ulrika, I am only 'helping' pervert...
...would you like a Madame Wu...
tree
...Yes, Ulrika, I am only 'helping' pervert...
...would you like a Madame Wu...