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Part XI The End of the Adventures
The spectacle was over
The carnival resumed
The band restarted playing
And alcohol consumed.
As Barbaria still suffered
They danced and laughed and sang
And as I stood and watched her
I felt a guilty pang.
Eulalia then entered
With all her Royal Court
And Messaline was with her
(And still her dress was short)
They set up Eulalia’s throne
Before Barbaria’s cross
As a final declaration
Of which of them was boss.
Eulalia was upstanding
With triumph on her face
“There will now be honours
“To demonstrate my grace.”
“But first, my loyal servant
“Lord Phlebas, please step forth
“My Lord, you are promoted
“To Duke of the Far North”
His Fellow executioner:
“For services to me
“I really am delighted
“Arise, Sir Hanging Tree!”
Then, an auburn-haired young woman:
“My dear, you were so brave
“In rescuing dear Messaline
“Arise, Dame Cxslave!”
And then she turned to face me
“Wragg, I want the world to see
“That I really am delighted
“That you brought her to me!
“You really have impressed me
“You’ve risen in my sight
“So come and kneel before me
“And be my loyal Knight!”
The crucified Barbaria
Was watching all this now
I couldn’t help but notice
The frown upon her brow.
“Your Majesty, I’m honoured
“But I fear I have to pass
“Majesty, you are not fit
“To lick her pretty arse!”
In minutes I was naked
Outstretched upon my cross
I gazed up at Barbaria
And thought it worth the cost.
Phlebas and Tree drew near to me
She’d shown how to behave
When I saw those dreadful nails
I couldn’t be that brave.
You know, there is a moment
When the first blow is struck
You think ‘that didn’t hurt at all’
You can’t believe your luck.
The screaming pain then hits you
Like an overwhelming wave
The pain of crucifixion
The terror of the grave.
I hollered like a baby
While both my wrists were nailed
I looked again at her up there
And wondered if I’d failed.
The pain is not consistent –
It’s agony in spurts
I said to them “You’d not do this
“If you knew how much it hurts!”
But Sir Tree grinned back at me
“I truly empathise.”
Then gave the nail an extra strike
While laughing at my cries.
And while they spiked my feet hard down
I screamed, and yelled, and cursed
Believe me when I tell you
The pain is ten times worse.
Barbaria watched this process
As though she could direct
As she observed my nakedness
I knew I’d gone erect.
Erected, too, the cross was now
And as it shuddered into place
I saw as through a ruddy veil
Barbaria’s pain-worn face.
Her face was so contorted
As she struggled up for breath
She took her weight on tortured feet
The victim’s dance of death.
She took some deep, tormented breaths
Then, finally, she spoke:
“I see you’re pleased to see me!”
Despite her pain, a joke!
“Sometimes you do the right thing
“Although it means defeat
“The way you spoke to her just now
“It was just so very neat!”
That said, she fell, exhausted
Upon her outstretched arms
I wished I could protect her
From such tormenting harm.
The carnival was over
The people all went home
The stadium was deserted
Save one, we were alone.
For us, who hung tormented
We had one remaining friend
The quietly caring Dame Cxslave
Stayed with us to the end.
She soothed us when we whimpered
And she had many trips
To fill a sponge with water
And hold it to our lips.
The three of us remained there
That day, and all night long
But we were both near finished
When the birds began their song.
We lasted two more hours
As the sun climbed in the sky
I could no longer get my breath
I knew that I’d soon die.
My last word was ‘Barbaria’
Her eyes then opened wide
I gazed into those hazel eyes
As the light
Within them
Died.
The spectacle was over
The carnival resumed
The band restarted playing
And alcohol consumed.
As Barbaria still suffered
They danced and laughed and sang
And as I stood and watched her
I felt a guilty pang.
Eulalia then entered
With all her Royal Court
And Messaline was with her
(And still her dress was short)
They set up Eulalia’s throne
Before Barbaria’s cross
As a final declaration
Of which of them was boss.
Eulalia was upstanding
With triumph on her face
“There will now be honours
“To demonstrate my grace.”
“But first, my loyal servant
“Lord Phlebas, please step forth
“My Lord, you are promoted
“To Duke of the Far North”
His Fellow executioner:
“For services to me
“I really am delighted
“Arise, Sir Hanging Tree!”
Then, an auburn-haired young woman:
“My dear, you were so brave
“In rescuing dear Messaline
“Arise, Dame Cxslave!”
And then she turned to face me
“Wragg, I want the world to see
“That I really am delighted
“That you brought her to me!
“You really have impressed me
“You’ve risen in my sight
“So come and kneel before me
“And be my loyal Knight!”
The crucified Barbaria
Was watching all this now
I couldn’t help but notice
The frown upon her brow.
“Your Majesty, I’m honoured
“But I fear I have to pass
“Majesty, you are not fit
“To lick her pretty arse!”
In minutes I was naked
Outstretched upon my cross
I gazed up at Barbaria
And thought it worth the cost.
Phlebas and Tree drew near to me
She’d shown how to behave
When I saw those dreadful nails
I couldn’t be that brave.
You know, there is a moment
When the first blow is struck
You think ‘that didn’t hurt at all’
You can’t believe your luck.
The screaming pain then hits you
Like an overwhelming wave
The pain of crucifixion
The terror of the grave.
I hollered like a baby
While both my wrists were nailed
I looked again at her up there
And wondered if I’d failed.
The pain is not consistent –
It’s agony in spurts
I said to them “You’d not do this
“If you knew how much it hurts!”
But Sir Tree grinned back at me
“I truly empathise.”
Then gave the nail an extra strike
While laughing at my cries.
And while they spiked my feet hard down
I screamed, and yelled, and cursed
Believe me when I tell you
The pain is ten times worse.
Barbaria watched this process
As though she could direct
As she observed my nakedness
I knew I’d gone erect.
Erected, too, the cross was now
And as it shuddered into place
I saw as through a ruddy veil
Barbaria’s pain-worn face.
Her face was so contorted
As she struggled up for breath
She took her weight on tortured feet
The victim’s dance of death.
She took some deep, tormented breaths
Then, finally, she spoke:
“I see you’re pleased to see me!”
Despite her pain, a joke!
“Sometimes you do the right thing
“Although it means defeat
“The way you spoke to her just now
“It was just so very neat!”
That said, she fell, exhausted
Upon her outstretched arms
I wished I could protect her
From such tormenting harm.
The carnival was over
The people all went home
The stadium was deserted
Save one, we were alone.
For us, who hung tormented
We had one remaining friend
The quietly caring Dame Cxslave
Stayed with us to the end.
She soothed us when we whimpered
And she had many trips
To fill a sponge with water
And hold it to our lips.
The three of us remained there
That day, and all night long
But we were both near finished
When the birds began their song.
We lasted two more hours
As the sun climbed in the sky
I could no longer get my breath
I knew that I’d soon die.
My last word was ‘Barbaria’
Her eyes then opened wide
I gazed into those hazel eyes
As the light
Within them
Died.
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more work than I would do and very well done...
Tree
Tree
rb1956
Lone Wolf
i admire your work very much !!!!! good job. still down with the queen!!!1
Disclaimer: This long and rambling bit of doggerel was created by the author for his own pleasure and any similarities between any persons living, dead, or crucified is entirely coincidental.....etc etc
However, for the benefit of students of cruxforums and any bewildered newbies it might be helpful to point out some of the differences and similarities between the Cruxworld described here and the actual Crux Forums.
Wragg
However, for the benefit of students of cruxforums and any bewildered newbies it might be helpful to point out some of the differences and similarities between the Cruxworld described here and the actual Crux Forums.
- Crux Forums is a much happier place than Cruxworld
- There is no Absolute Ruler of Crux Forums. Neither Eulalia nor Phlebas could remotely be described as tyrants!
- Admi is nobody's puppet, he's a hardworking, honest, patient man who's attempts to keep order here are increasingly frustrated by people who completely fail to give him the respect he deserves, and who frequently collude together in doing so. But he does have a blue nose.
- Eulalia is completely fit and competent to interact with any part of Barbaria's anatomy that both consider appropriate.
- Tree will, as suggested here, very happily crucify anyone whether directed to do so by Admi or not. So behave yourselves.
- My desire to get Barbaria securely fastened to a decent bit of timber properly mounted in solid earth is one that is shared entirely with Admi, Tree, and others. This is not for any reasons of cruelty or eroticism, but because it is the only practical method that anyone has ever come up with of keeping the woman still for any length of time! There is some suggestion that she lives on rocket fuel, whatever, she seems entirely capable of doing six things at once! No wonder Admi gets a headache!
- The girls on here are very loyal to each other. Elfgirl Connie would never have betrayed Barbaria as described here! She'd rather cut her arm off!
- There really is a racing Rodent. He's nearly as bad as Barbaria at popping up on multiple threads at once!
Wragg
Only that the creator and author of this thread is a gentleman poet of quite considerable imagination, talent and flair, who has cleverly managed to include and delight nearly all of us at CruxForums with this wildly erotic Mad Hatter's escapade through that mythical but magically intriguing place called Cruxworld, which as Wragg himself claims in his disclaimer is entirely a figment of his fevered imagination and therefore bears no relation to reality....hah!
This just shows that Barbaria can write lines that actually exceed three or four words when she so desires.
Thank you for your kind word's sir,you are right,I would rather die to protect Barbaria!!!
Loyal to a fault .... sometimes you have to save yourself and live to fight another battle
This just shows that Barbaria can write lines that actually exceed three or four words when she so desires.
[/QUOTE]Can't put it better than you would -
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
W
Thank you, Cxslave, especially for the water-filled sponges, Barbaria and I wouldn't have seen another sunrise without you!
W
And we shall all look forward to seeing some of your own work posted here. Go for it cxslave!
This just shows that Barbaria can write lines that actually exceed three or four words when she so desires.
Can't put it better than you would - W.
It was a rather long sentence, wasn't it?
Oh, yes indeed, make it soon, Cxslave!
Even the way you write posts suggests there's an author in there!
W
W
Even the way you write posts suggests there's an author in there!
W
It's not the length, it's the quality, my dear BarbariaAnd we shall all look forward to seeing some of your own work posted here. Go for it cxslave!
It was a rather long sentence, wasn't it?
W
cxslave
Chain Slave
Thank you and Barbaria too! Im not sure my skills are up to par with some of the great writers here yet but I will give it a shot! The fantasies are there in my head and they are very...erm...creative ( ok very sick lol). Hopefully I can convey them properly. But hey I have a dirty mind behind my sweet behavior Im not going to make excuses about it! That combined with having a job where you have lots of time to just think is a deadly combination for me.Oh, yes indeed, make it soon, Cxslave!
Even the way you write posts suggests there's an author in there!
W
It's not the length, it's the quality, my dear Barbaria
W
Ahh, the "too-much-time-to think" occupational curse (or blessing). I can relate to that. Get those fantasies out there!
cxslave
Chain Slave
Oh it's a blessing make no mistake! I have a job the vast majority of people around the world desire to do. Im blessed with natural talent for something and surrounded by hugely supportive people that allow me to live the dream! Every moment I have nothing to do but think up my nasty fantasies means Im doing my job lol, how awesome is that???!!!
Aha! Well done Cxslave! You've spotted another difference!
You might be thought sick in Cruxland, but NEVER on Cruxforums!
W
cxslave
Chain Slave
Crux land? Cant say i have ever visited. But if it's not as twisted as the things on this site I'm not interested lol! I am very comfortable with the sickness of the content here lol.
