well told, Barb!!!
They should nail the first one and then throw the cross around on the other side (like in Mel Gibson's film "Passion") and nail the other one, both will writhe and cry when this cross will be raised afterwards.They should call Repertor to solve their practical problem.
Good writing, Barb.
Despite the grim fate you and your mysterious companion are about to experience. That part was genuinely cute and got a giggle out me. Nice to see are lovely young heroines share a sweet moment of happiness together, even if it is only for just a moment.I look at the girl sitting next to me, who appears to be stifling a smirk. She has spirit, I conclude and roll my eyes in return. We are in this together!
As horrific as such a sight would be to see someone so lovely beaten and crucified, it's like a mix of watching any other catastrophe and watching a work of art be created- try as you might you just can't look away. Especially in this case since this other woman is about to be mercilessly crucified as well. As for right now I can only imagine how the soilders intended on doing this. Brace yourself my dear. The suffering will only magnify and intense from here, you it is not just yours to endure alone.But then I catch sight of her. She still sits in the same place, watching. There is something calming about her gaze ... almost as though we are soulmates ... known one another forever.
Bravo, a beautiful continuation!!4.
The Optio's veiled reference to decimation has its desired affect. I can tell by the wide-eyed, open-mouth way that Lucretius and Markus look at one another. Moments later they spring into action.
"Hurry!" shouts Markus, pointing at me. "Let's start by getting this one nailed to the wood!"
"Righto!" enthuses Lucretius as he gathers up rope and hammer. He rushes toward me, but momentarily distracted by a shrieking young woman being raised on the cross next to ours, he trips over his own feet and takes an inglorious tumble that lands him in the muddy ditch bottom.
"Damn fools!" groans the Optio from the roadside.
I look at the girl sitting next to me, who appears to be stifling a smirk. She has spirit, I conclude and roll my eyes in return. We are in this together!
Lucretius, however, recovers faster than I might have anticipated. I gasp as a muddy paw firmly grips my arm from behind and drags me to my feet.
"Let's go," he hisses, propelling me towards Markus and the waiting cross.
Markus catches me as I stumble forward, deftly spins me about and uses a knife to sever the cord that binds my wrists behind my back.
A fist in the stomach follows, bringing me to my knees gasping for air. Then they have me lying flat on my back against the hard timbered shank of the cross.
Kneeling on either side of me they forcibly extend my arms out along the crossbeam. Two more legionaries appear overhead, ready to assist. Ropes are woven with practiced efficiency through my fingers and thumbs, around my hands and then around the crossbeam wood ... and tightly knotted there so as to hold my hands and wrists in place.
I curse them. Lucretius laughs and straddles me, using his knees to hold my shoulders in place. His foul breath assaults my flared nostrils. Panic stricken, I shake my head from side to side. Mud drips from his forehead as he holds me down, spattering on my chin, neck and mounded breasts.
Rushing around, Markus pushes one of the helping legionaries aside and squats near my right hand. He grips a rusty iron spike in one hand and a hammer in the other. With a look of intense concentration, he moves the point of the spike about on my wrist, searching for the right spot.
I continue to curse. I kick ineffectually with my my legs and feet.
But then I catch sight of her. She still sits in the same place, watching. There is something calming about her gaze ... almost as though we are soulmates ... known one another forever.
I lock eyes with hers and stop my struggling.
The point of the spike is pressed home, pricking my skin.
"This is it," I think, taking a deep breath and maintaining the mesmerizing lock of my eyes on hers.
I sense movement ... and then ...
TO BE CONTINUED
He looks amazingly like Tree...View attachment 513584 Let's skip the planning. First we'll act, then we'll see how we have done it.
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That is a classic!Bravo, a beautiful continuation!!
A pity however that you did not find your soulmate earlier in life............but better late than never!
Have a pleasant and painful time on your cross!
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Unlikely that it would in any way be comfortable!View attachment 513669 I have always stared at this one and wondered what it would be like to have that thing poking in my back.
Perhaps she is a sorceress of some sort and the sight of those Roman bastards violating your flesh with rusted metal, has stirred such emotion from her, it's causing her great heartbreak and sympathy. That little nudge with your foot and that little smile you shared with her, must have made a kind impression. She's probably trying to have you focus on her hypnotic eyes, in order to distract you from the horrendous pain. Whether it's some type of actual power she has or not, it unfortunately only does so much. I have a feeling the fear that's also clutching her mind from the sight that's happening right in front of her is forcing the nightmarish realization that she'll very soon be experiencing the same torment soon. All of this is clearly effecting her concentration. All she can do is quickly brace herself for the physical pain and psychological trauma, and mourn for you and her both.There is something about her ... something about the beauty and brightness of her eyes, and the seriousness of her expression that attracts me so powerfully. It is as though she is some kind of sorceress who wields the power to reach out ... assist me ... guide me ... calm me through my ordeal.