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Pia
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Re-reading this from the start - I am so in love with the story and the beautiful pictures of the beautiful girl....
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Cella
Spectator
Marcella, I struggle to find words to adequately express my feelings at this moment. I am carried by your writing as a leaf is carried on a raging torrent.
It is beautiful, dreadful, and utterly, utterly compelling. Amazing work.
Thank you Wragg, and thank all of you for your kind remarks. All I see when I re-read my posts are all the typos and the many grammar and syntax errors.
Also, the writing is very clunky in places. My English composition teachers would give me a D for sure!I wish there was a way to edit my posts later on.
I cannot believe I did not catch these mistakes before I posted! I use spell-checker but it doesn't catch bad writing!
When I'm finished I'll just have to repost this story on a separate thread with all the episodes in the correct order and with the language cleaned up.
Ok Marcella, i interrupt the collect your posts and wait on your own thread with "cleanup" posts.Thank you Wragg, and thank all of you for your kind remarks. All I see when I re-read my posts are all the typos and the many grammar and syntax errors.
I wish there was a way to edit my posts later on.
I cannot believe I did not catch these mistakes before I posted! I use spell-checker but it doesn't catch bad writing!
When I'm finished I'll just have to repost this story on a separate thread with all the episodes in the correct order and with the language cleaned up.
Madiosi
Do not worry about it, Marcella. It is your thoughts and emotions we read.Thank you Wragg, and thank all of you for your kind remarks. All I see when I re-read my posts are all the typos and the many grammar and syntax errors.
I wish there was a way to edit my posts later on.
I cannot believe I did not catch these mistakes before I posted! I use spell-checker but it doesn't catch bad writing!
When I'm finished I'll just have to repost this story on a separate thread with all the episodes in the correct order and with the language cleaned up.
T
Thank you Wragg, and thank all of you for your kind remarks. All I see when I re-read my posts are all the typos and the many grammar and syntax errors.
I wish there was a way to edit my posts later on.
I cannot believe I did not catch these mistakes before I posted! I use spell-checker but it doesn't catch bad writing!
When I'm finished I'll just have to repost this story on a separate thread with all the episodes in the correct order and with the language cleaned up.
Do you honestly think I'm checking grammar as I read this, Marcella? It's so hot that I'd never notice!Do not worry about it, Marcella. It is your thoughts and emotions we read.
T
Those poor girls. One crucified innocent, another abused and crucified for defending her sister. Brutal, and relentless, and no room for pardon or mercy. Now they are sharing the harshest of ordeals. They will struggle and die together, see each other suffer, and know that it is all so public.
Now, the third girl, the actual criminal. Will they grow together in shared pain, or will Thessela maintain her hatred for her?
Harsh, tragic and tender in places, Marcella, and wonderfully illustrated as always by Hasturan. Many thanks.
Now, the third girl, the actual criminal. Will they grow together in shared pain, or will Thessela maintain her hatred for her?
Harsh, tragic and tender in places, Marcella, and wonderfully illustrated as always by Hasturan. Many thanks.
shastar
Tribune
Thank you Wragg, and thank all of you for your kind remarks. All I see when I re-read my posts are all the typos and the many grammar and syntax errors.
I wish there was a way to edit my posts later on.
I cannot believe I did not catch these mistakes before I posted! I use spell-checker but it doesn't catch bad writing!
When I'm finished I'll just have to repost this story on a separate thread with all the episodes in the correct order and with the language cleaned up.
That's a feeling I know very well. But really, no problem about that. When you feel inspired, just write it, it can be edited , or not, whatever ! You make your fantasies 'virtually real' (awkward, yes I know). That's what most of us (writers) do here, but not necessarily with your talent and sense of drama.
And be sure the Decurion will stay with both Thess and you until the end. You deserve it...
Thank you so much , Marcella and Hasturan !
AlexArts
Soul of Cinder
It's reflex...and trying to hide yourself like that will only
attract your Torturers' attention all the more to those parts
She can't avoid this attention anyway...
AlexArts
Soul of Cinder
So many choices...
Never wasted on Cruxforums!
Cella
Spectator
I protest!
There is no good reason to call this "waste." It is a lovely, poignant, sensual image.
AlexArts
Soul of Cinder
-When performing this torture it is essentual to make good preparation... Your vagina must be lubricated by mutton fat... Very carefully... It will allow insert the pear very deep inside you... As deep as possible without any damage... Also pear can be heated by candle flame...
-Aaaahhhhhh...!!!
-Aaaahhhhhh...!!!
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IgnikaMarcus
Governor
Almost correct. The image just needs to be black and white/greyscale.
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