I'll make an offer you can't refuse!
If anyone purchases the video and provides me constructive feedback on how to improve it, I'll send a link to some BTS footage I made last night of Anna Luna on the cross, waiting for Alex to call "Kamera! Auto!". It's 35 seconds of her being her natural self in crucifixion. How's that for bonus content? Such a beauty. Waiting patiently as her muscles begin to fatigue from the strain. Her body spread and vulnerable. The sun's rays slowly burning her soft pale skin.
Order now. There's no telling how much longer she can last up there. Minutes? Hours? Days? Her body is young and strong, but even she has her limits.
I did.
I liked it a lot, but since you requested, here is my criticism:
1) some takes are a bit blurred, and unfortunately some frontal takes among them.
Example: 02:30 - 03:57
2) The focus on Anna Luna's torso at 5:48 - 06:35 is VERY blurred! Like, it's out of focus or the lens is somewhat dirty.
3) Personally, I would like the executee from time to time focus on the camera/viewer: this would allow for a number of different interpretation, like, pretending that there's a crowd watching her punishment.
She could also talk to the "crowd", creating some interaction (albeit one-way, obviously).
4) Another personal preference of mine: Anna Luna smiles a lot during her crucifixion.
That's perfectly okay, but I would prefer a greater variation of expressions, including pain, fear, puzzlement and so on...
I like to imagine that being crucified arouses a lot of different, conflict emotions.
5) This is the first video I saw with the executee pissing on the cross.
I think it's not rare, but really...
unique.
I'm not a fan un bodily functions but that's okay, I appreciate this being a one of its kind.
Je dis bravo!
6) It would have been intriguing (for me) to see Anna Luna first fully clothed, then stripping into a topless + loincloth, then put on the cross, bound to it, and finally raised with it.
In other words: I like the...
preliminaries a lot, even in a crucifixion.
I like to fantasize about the thoughts of an executee's mind as she is prepared for her execution.
7) Personally I also like to fantasize that the execution is, well... up to the (fictional, obviously) "death" of the executee.
So I personally didn't like too much the fact that she is saved in the end, but I understand it is a matter of very personal tastes and I respect that.
8) Related to point (7), I like the idea of nailing an executee permanently to the cross.
Alex Bald has sometimes depicted crucifixion with nails, it would have been wonderful watching Anna Luna forever merged with the wood...
9) Finally, I like the notion of the executees being... well, entertained on the cross, like interacting with their executioners and so on.
Also, why not, being masturbated on the cross.
I think a pretty and brave girl "dying" on the cross deserves a good cum before snuffing it...
Some of these points are actually present in the movie that I sponsored about one year ago, called "affectionate executioner" (masturbation on the cross included).
That movie also has some unique features, like for instance being the only one (to the best of my knowledge) containing the binding on the cross, the raising, AND the nailing, all in a single movie.
But I admit that Anna Luna is even more beautiful as a model, and she struggles and moves more on her cross.
Also, the solid black background of your movie is better, as it is less distracting and allows for easier background removal.